专四写作模板课件

专四写作模板课件第一页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第1页，共46页。一、比较选择类(AorB)

比较两个事物的优缺点并表明倾向TelevisionisaBetterSourceofEntertainment

Abalanceddiet:Abetterwaytostayhealthy

Isabiguniversitysuperiortoasmalluniversity?

Homeeducationoutweighsoverseaeducationforyoungchildren

WillPhoneskillletterwriting?Wheretolive:inthecityorinthecountry?Wheretoeat:inarestaurantorathome?Whethertofurtherstudyortofindajobsoonaftergraduation?Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesoftakingapart-timejobThepositiveandnegativeeffectsofTVadvertisements第二页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第2页，共46页。第一段:(用现象或事实陈述)引出要比较的两个事物,用一句话表达自己的观点.//用现象陈述法、提问法引出比较的事物，主题句指出两个事物存在着明显的差异或不同点。第二段:主题句承接首段观点,限定本段内容.然后比较两事物的优缺点.(Topicsentence+First,second,third,theadvantageofA,butthedisadvantageofB.+supportingdetails)//直接评述A事物的主要特点+扩展句，B事物的主要特点+扩展句。第三段：结论，注意首尾观点一致。//得出倾向性的结论，表明作者的态度。第三页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第3页，共46页。WhichModeofTravelDoyouLike?Withthegeneralstandardoflivingimprovingandtheworkingweekbecomingshorter,moreandmorepeopleareabletomakeaholidaytriptoplacesofinterest.Whilemanyliketojoinpackagetoursforconvenience,Iprefertotravelonmyown.Thefirstpart(fromgeneraltospecific从面到点，从现象到具体讨论的事物，引出自己观点)第四页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第4页，共46页。Iliketravelingonmyownnotonlybecauseitgivesagreatof

independence

and

freedom.

Travelingonmyown,I’mmyownboss,andIcan

decide

whentostartonmyway,wheretolingeralittlelongerandwhichspotcanbeskippedovertosaveenergyandtimeforanotherspot.Icanalwaysadjustmyplan.

Onthe

contrary,inapackagetouryou’redeprivedofasmuch

freedom

asinamilitarybase.Atthesoundofthewhistle,youhavetojumpupfromasoundsleepandhurrytothegatheringplacewhereyouarecollected.Atthesightofthelittleflagwaving,youmustimmediatelytakeyourselfawayfromthescenesyouaremarvelingatandfollowtheguidewhosesoleinterestistocoverallspotsaccordingtohisstrictschedule,regardlessoftheweatheroryourhealthcondition.（阐述理由，对比优缺点）第五页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第5页，共46页。True,youmayencounter

inconveniences

ifyoutravelindividually,forinstance,gettingaccommodationsforthenightandfindingaplaceformeals.Butnothingcanbecomparedwiththe

freedom

whichisvitaltoapersonwhotakesaholidaytripmainlytoescapefromconstrainsofhisroutinelife.（首尾观点一致，得出结论，进一步阐明观点）第六页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第6页，共46页。二、意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文

TheimportanceofextracurricularactivitiesTheimportanceofkeepingagoodmood

Travelbroadensourmind

AmajoradvantageordisadvantageofadvertisingonTVadvertising

MorepressurefromacademicstudiesDOES(orDOESNOTdo)goodtous第七页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第7页，共46页。提示：第一段：大背景(上义背景，自己的态度：重要？有利？有害？)用引言句（概括式，描写，数据，提问）引出要讨论的事物或现象，表明作者对这一事物的基本看法。某种程度上就是再现标题所给的“定论”。第二段，之所以有利、有害、重要、有优势原因有两个，firstly,(topicsentence)+supportingdetails;主题句承上启下,限定本段内容即重要性或危害性主要体现在哪些方面，接下来分述危害性或重要性，注意层次和句式。Secondly,(topicsentence)+supportingdetails第三段：结论.如果阐述重要性，则宜用建议式或展望式。如阐述其危害性，则用警示式结尾。第八页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第8页，共46页。OnToday‘sEducationOneofthemainproblemswithtoday’seducationisthat

toomuchemphasisisplacedonthetestscore.

Ithasbecomethemostimportantcriterionforcollegeenrollment.Astudent,however,creativeandintelligent,willnotbeadmittedintoacollegeifhistotalscoresarejustonepointlessthanrequired.Itisalsooneofthe

crucialfactors

eitherinjobassignmentorinemploymentcompetitions.（由面及点入题）第九页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第9页，共46页。Thecompetitionforhighscoresamongstudentsbecomesintense.Studentsfindthemselvesconcentratingmoreonstrategiestoachievehighscoresthanonacquiringtheknowledge.Theywillplaytruantofsomesubsidiarycourses,skipoverthesubstancewhichwillnotbetestedon,evenpumpteachersforhintsonupcomingexams.（第一个角度：学生）

第十页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第10页，共46页。Teachersareapttogivetheirstudentshighscores.Astheirjobisjudgedmainlybythestudents’performanceintermsofscores,someteacherstendtoseteasypaperstotesttheirstudentsornarrowdownthescopeoftheexam.Someteachersevenleak“accidentally”theexamquestionsorlowertheircriterionofscoring.Asaresult,thetestfailtoachievethedesiredresults.

（第二个角度：教师）第十一页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第11页，共46页。Wemustsearchforanimmediatesolution,becausethecompetitionforhighscoresbecomessointensethatitactuallydefeatstheacademicgoalsofeducation.（警示式结尾）第十二页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第12页，共46页。三、观点论证类（agreeordisagree）

Ismoneyallpowerful?

Isthriftnecessaryinmodernsociety?

SomepeoplethinkthatmachinetranslationcanreplaceourEnglishstudy.Doyouagree?

What’syouropinionaboutreducingchildren’sexcessiveassignment?

第十三页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第13页，共46页。提示：第一段：背景(随着…有些人的观点及他们的理由…),我的观点。引言句（现象陈述法，数据法，提问法，对立法）开头，引出要评论的事物，说明别人的看法，引出自己的观点。第二段，陈述理由并举例证明.段首句承上启下，指出原因或理由，用拓展句分别加以说明或论述。第三段,得出结论，提出建议.第十四页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第14页，共46页。第一段：引言句引出要评论的事物或问题，第二句提出自己的论点。第二段：段首句承上启下，限定论据范围。正面论据之一（具有概括性）：用扩展句加以延伸。正面论据之二（或反面论据）：用扩展句加以延伸。第三段：结论，进一步阐述观点。批驳观点，阐述自己观点，采用正面立论法。第十五页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第15页，共46页。CanSuccessbeMeasuredinTermsofMoney?

Thereisadeep-rootedconceptinthemindsofmanypeoplethatmoneyistheonlyyardstickofsuccess.Whattheydonotrealizeisthattherearemanytypesofsuccess,andsomeareassociatedwithwealthandsomenot.Itishightimethatsuchpeopleopenedtheireyesandtookagoodlookattheworldaroundthem.第十六页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第16页，共46页。Whileitistruethatasuccessfulbusinessmanorinventorwillusuallybecomerich,manyotherpeoplewhoareoutstandingintheirfieldsdonotreapmonetaryrewards.Oneexampleistherocketscientistwhomakesgreatachievementsinthefieldofastronauticswhilegaininggloryforhiscountry,butdrawsamodestsalary.AnotherexampleisLeiFeng,whohasmarkedhisnameinhistorybecausehislifewasdevotedhelpingothers,althoughheownedalmostnopersonalpossessions.第十七页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第17页，共46页。

Measuringsuccessbymoneyaloneleadspeopletostrivetomakemoneybyfairmeansorfoul.Ifone’sonlygoalinlifeistobecomerich,withoutservingothersormakinganyworthwhileachievements,thenonecertainlycannotregardoneselfasasuccess.Furthermore,thosewhospendtheirlivesscramblingformoney,eventhoughtheygainit,arethebiggestlosersofall.第十八页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第18页，共46页。MyViewonMoneyInmodernsocietyitseemsimpossibletolivewithoutmoney.Forinstance,acountryneedsmoneytodevelopitseconomyandtoraisepeople’slivingstandards.Forapersonsufferingfrompovertyoraseriousdisease,hehastogohungryortowaittodie.Moneyisevenregardedasasymbolofwealthandstatus.Asaproverbgoes,“Moneymakesthemarego.”第十九页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第19页，共46页。Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardmoney.Somethinkofmoneyasthemostimportantthingintheworld.Theymaytryallmeans,suchasgamblingandcheating,tomakemoreandmoremoney.Theybelievethatmoneycanbringthemeverythingsuchasfancycars,luxurioushouses,expensivefurnitureandbeautifullovers.Somepeople,however,thinkthattherearethingsmoreimportantthanmoney,suchasgoodhealth,happinessandachievements.Theydevotethemselvestotheircareers.Theyearnmoneybyhardwork.第二十页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第20页，共46页。Itseemstomethatmoneyisveryimportant.Withlotsofmoneywecanlivecomfortably.ButIdon’tthinkitisall-powerful.Therearestillthingslikefriendshipandlovemorevaluablethanmoney.There’realsocertainthingsthatmoneycannotbuy,suchashealth,youthandhappiness.Foramillionairesufferingfromseriouscancer,moneycannotserveitspurpose.Moneyisonlyamediumofexchange,asymbolofourworkorachievement.Therefore,weshouldearnmoneybyhonestmeans.Onlywhenmoneyisobtainedbyhardworkcanitmakeusreallyhappy.第二十一页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第21页，共46页。MoneyIsNotAll-powerfulPeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardmoney.Somebelievethatmoneyisthesourceofhappiness.Withit,theycanbuywhatevertheyneed,whichmakestheirlifecomfortableandcolorful.Othersthinkthatmoneyistherootofallevil.Withmuchmoney,onemaybecomegreedy,selfishandimmoral.Oftenatoostrongdesireforandimproperuseofmoneymaydriveonemadandirrational,leadingtodisasterfinally.Myopinionisthatmoneyisveryimportant,butitcannotbringeverything.第二十二页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第22页，共46页。Thereisnodoubtthatwecanhardlymanagetolivewithoutmoney.Moneyisveryimportant.Withitwecanbuylargehouses,deliciousandnutritiousfoods,fineclothingandfancycars.Andwithallthese,wecansurelylivehappilyandcomfortably.Buttherearestillthingsthatmoneycannotbuy,suchashealthandfriendship.Foranaffluentpersonsufferingfromanincurabledisease,moneycannotmakehimhealthyagain,andthushecannevergainhappiness.Amillionairewithouttruefriendswouldfeellonelyandsad.Besides,moneyobtainedbyillegalmeanssuchasgamblingorcheatingmayencourageonetogoastray.第二十三页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第23页，共46页。Therefore,wecannotexpectmoneytobringuseverything.Onlywhenweearnourmoneybyhonestmeansandspenditforthebenefitofothersaswell,canwefeeltruehappiness.第二十四页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第24页，共46页。四、现象解释类（为什么会有这种现象

Teenagesmokingsoars

Whycollegestudentshavedifficultyinfindingjobs?

Thereasonfortheyoungchildren’scrimes

提示：第一段：背景介绍(有一种现象)+引言(thefollowingtworeasonscanexplaintheproblem)

第二段：firstly,(reason1),secondly(reason2)

第三段：总结第二十五页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第25页，共46页。WhyisWesternFast-foodSoPopular?WithChina’sopeningpolicy,moreandmoreforeignproductsareintroducedtoChina.Amongthemisthewesternfastfood.Wecanfindmanyfastfoodrestaurantsinbigcitiesandsome,suchasMcDonaldandKFC.•第二十六页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第26页，共46页。Whyiswesternfastfoodsopopular?Ithinktherearetwomainreasons.

Onereasonistheirenvironment.Almostallthatkindofrestaurantsareveryclean,andthewaiters’serviceisfairlygood.AnotherreasonisthattheflavorofwesternfastfoodisquitedifferentfromChinesefood,whichattractsmanypeople,especiallyyoungchildren.第二十七页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第27页，共46页。Whatcanwelearnfromthissuccessfulcasesoastohelpourownfoodindustry?Firstly,wemustchangeourrestaurants’environmentandimprovetheservice.Secondly,weshouldsetupourownbrandandmakeitpopularamongpeople.Meanwhile,weshouldcreatemorenewspecialstylesoffoodtosatisfydifferentpeople.Inthisway,China’sfoodindustrywilldefeatthewesternone.第二十八页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第28页，共46页。五、提出建议、解决问题类Onewaytosolvetheproblem(1998)Thebestwaytostayhealthy(2002)

Presentsuggestiontoartsfestival(2005)Onewaytosolvetransportationproblem

提示：第一段：背景介绍(问题很严重+解决办法好几个+最好的一个办法是)

第二段：我的办法好fortworeasons.Firstly,secondly…第三段：总结第二十九页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第29页，共46页。HowtoKeepHealthy•Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheirhealth.Thesepeopleareinterestedinphysicalexercises.Ifyouhappentobeinoneofthecityparksearlyinthemorning,youwillseelotsofpeoplethere.SomearepracticingTaijiquanandswordplayandothersareeitherrunning,walkingorexercisingthroughdance.Researchshowsthatgettingplentyofexercisesmakestheheartandreducingthechanceofheartattack,andhelpingtolowerbloodpressure.•第三十页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第30页，共46页。Medicalresearchershaveprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth.Theyadvisepeopletoeatmorefruitsandvegetablesandlessredmeatlikebeefandporkbecausemeatcontainsmorefatthanpoultryandfish.Fatscanbuildupinthearteries,blocktheflowofblood,andcauseaheartattackorstroke.•第三十一页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第31页，共46页。Gettingridofbadhabitslikesmokinganddrinkingalcoholisalsoanimportantwaytokeephealthy,butitstillfailstodrawenoughpeoplesattention.Ifpeoplepayequalattentiontotheabovementionedthreewaysofkeepingfit,theywillgreatlyimprovetheirhealth.第三十二页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第32页，共46页。MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestivalTheArtsFestivalissupposedtoprovidethestudentsaplatformonwhichtheycanshowtheirstrongsuitstheyarecoveredupwhentheyaresittingintheclassroomandplaytheroleofstudents.ThestudentbodymayorganizetheArtsFestivalintheformofcompetitionandthecompetitioncanbewidelyrangedaccordingtotheinterestsofstudentssuchasspeeches,drawing,dancing,singing,instrumentplaying,chessplayingandsoon.

第三十三页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第33页，共46页。WhyshouldtheArtsFestivalbebetterorganizedintheformofcompetitionbasedonstudents’interests?

First,thestudentsareambitiousgroup.CompetitioncanspicetheFestivalandstimulatethedesiresofthestudentstoshowthemselveswithouthesitationandreservation.Second,aplatformprovidedforstudents’interestsmayindirectlyhelptheiracademicperformance.Supposeastudentwhoperformspoorlyinhisacademiclifewinsacompetitionofhisstrongsuit,heislikelytostarttoholdapositiveattitudetowardhimself:IamnotasinferiorasIhavebelieved.Hisconfidenceisstrengthenedinsomedegreeandthisplaysanactiveroleinhisstudy.Inthisway,theArtsFestivalhelpsthestudentsinhisstudiesindirectly.第三十四页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第34页，共46页。TheArtsFestivalisnotonlyanimportantformingpartoftheextracurricularactivitiesofuniversitystudents’campuslivesbutalsoanecessarycomplementtothecopiedlivesofstudy.Therefore,itisthepurposeofArtsFestivalthatcancolorizethecollegelifeandbenefittheuniversitystudentsspiritually.第三十五页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第35页，共46页。六.观点阐述类第一段：背景介绍引出要讨论的问题或现象（引言句Recently//Itisnew+现象或问题）+不同人们的观点及其理由（可以用cases,facts,analogy,referringtoanauthority）第二段：我的观点及其理由First,second,第三段：结论。

第三十六页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第36页，共46页。MyViewOnCampusMarriageVThereisanewlydissensionputtingforwardthesedays:IsitlegallyallowedforChineseon-campusstudentstogetmarriedbeforetheycompletetheircourses?Somepeopleprefer"yes"whilesomeothersprefer"no".Certainlyalargenumberofpeoplejustcannotdecidewhichsidetheyshouldbestand.

第三十七页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第37页，共46页。Infact,thegovernmentsallowon-campusstudentstogetmarriedbeforetheycompletetheircourse.Thereisn'taregulationproclaimedinwritingtoforbidmarriageofon-campusstudents.Butitmustaffectthosetries.第三十八页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第38页，共46页。Inmyopinion,itisunnecessarytoforbidon-campusstudentstogetmarriedbeforetheyfinishedtheircollege,however,itshouldn'tbeadvocatedorencouraged.Because,foron-campusstudents,theyplaytheroleaslearners.Theirmaintaskistolearn.Iftheymarried,theirschoolworkmustbeaffectedandtheymaynotgraduatefavorablyormaynotbecapableforfutureworks.So,Ibelieve:almostallon-campusstudentswoulddealwiththequestionreasoningly.

第三十九页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第39页，共46页。

MyViewonCompetitionandCooperationCooperationandcompetitionarebothimportant.Theyareattributesthatareequallynecessaryforapersontoachievesuccessinhislife.第四十页，编辑于星期六：十点十八分。第40页，共46页。Ifyouli