四级作文如何短时间提高

15%写作30min快速阅读10%15min听力35%35min精读25%25min完型填空10%15min翻译(汉英)5%5min四级写作总体介绍第一页，共九十页。四级作文评分原则及标准CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。第二页，共九十页。四级作文评分原则及标准本题满分为15分阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。第三页，共九十页。作文评分标准2分-----条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分-----基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分-----基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。11分-----切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分------切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。

第四页，共九十页。评分标准解读两大基本原则1.印象分：书写工整，字迹清晰，卷面整洁2.语言第一位（语法与词汇的基本功）结构第二位（逻辑结构是否清晰）内容第三位（内容是否跑题）第五页，共九十页。Example1.

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay

FreeAdmissiontomuseums.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？2.也会带来一些问题；3.你的看法？第六页，共九十页。2分-----条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

Nowdays,SocialappearedmoreandmorefreeAdmissionstomuseums.It’sinordertopeoplewastedmoney.Inaddition,richinpeople’slifeandincreasemoreknowledges.peoplevisitedthemuseummusthaveleavedsomewaste.Inanotherhand,somevisitorsdidn’tlistenthemuseumsworkers……一塌糊涂第七页，共九十页。5分-----基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

Inordertoenrichthecultureofpeople,moreandmoremuseumswereprovidedfreeadmissions.Somebodythoughtitwouldtakesomeproblemslikethat.Thefirst,becauseoffreeadmissionsofmuseumswereattractedalargenumbersofpeoplewhointerestedinallaroundtheworld.Andthosewhotakepartineffectedthetrafficcrowedaroundthemuseums,eventhoughaffectedpeoplewholiveinnexttomuseumdailylife.Besides,freeadmissionsofmuseumwouldattractedthiefcamein.糊里糊涂第八页，共九十页。8分-----基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误

Thereisaninterestingandinstractivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:Moreandmoremuseumsarefreeforpeople.Theywantmorepeoplegotomuseums.Butsomepeoplearguethatitmakesometroubleforfreeforpeople.Thereasonistheeconomyofthemuseumswouldbeworsethanbefore.Worstofall,itmaytakeamessformorepeoplecometothemuseums.马马虎虎第九页，共九十页。11分-----切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。Nowmoreandmoremuseumsarefreewithoutchargetothepublic.Doesthatmakeanysence?Freeadmissiontomusuemshelpsussavemoney,butitalsoencouragesustogotomuseumstolearnsomethingelseandgetmoreknowledge.Thiscontributestoimprovethelivinglevelofthepublic.Itcancertainlyletusknowmoreaboutourcountryandtheworld,whichhasagoodeffectonourdevelopment.Everycoinhastwosides.Itcanalsobringsomeproblems.Forexample,…清清楚楚第十页，共九十页。14分-----切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。

Nowadays,moreandmoremuseumsareopentothepublicforfree.Freeadmissionstomuseumswillmotivatepeople’sinterestsinhistory,artsandscience.Inthisway,museumscanprovidepeoplewitheasieraccesstoknowledge,whichisofvitalimportanceforthewholenation.漂漂亮亮第十一页，共九十页。14分-----切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。

However,somepeopleholdthatfreeadmissionstomuseumscanbringaboutmanyproblems.Sinceanybodycanenteramuseumwithoutpaying,themuseumcanbeovercrowdedanditwillbeadifficultjobformuseumstomaintaintheircollections.Besides,museumswillfacefinancialproblemssincetheycan’tmakeprofitsfromtheadmissionfee.Duetothedecreaseinprofits,museumshavelessmotivationtoup-datetheircollectionsandout-of-datemuseumscan’tavoidthefatetocloseupinthelongrun.漂漂亮亮第十二页，共九十页。14分-----切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。

Inmyopinion,freeadmissionstomuseumsaregoodforthepublic,butontheotherhandtheymayposeproblemstothemuseummanagement.Governmentsshouldprovidehelptomuseumsandguidethemtoservethepublicbetter.漂漂亮亮第十三页，共九十页。四级作文写作要求1.篇幅：考试要求是120字单词

达不到字数的要酌情扣1-5分

90-99扣1分，80-89扣2分，70-79扣3分，60-69扣5分2.时间：30分钟，

审题（3分钟）：写作（25分钟）：检查（2分钟）：

写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改）1.字母大小写2.符号3.单词拼写4.动词时态5.主谓一致6.名词单复数第十四页，共九十页。作文写什么？开头2-3句中间6-8句结尾2-3句有话可说第十五页，共九十页。作文写什么？（根据采分点）框架表示结构的短语

细节亮点词汇和句型说话漂亮第十六页，共九十页。布局：三段式（有时候根据需要还可写四段）

大学英语四级写作通常采用三段论模式，即：开头段（introduction）、主体段（bodyparagraph）和结尾段（conclusion）。考场作文通常是写成三段（四段当然也可以，不过一般情况下三段比较合适）第十七页，共九十页。应对策略1、篇章：开门见山，直奔主题（紧扣所给提纲写出主题句）。使用合适的方法展开主题句（常用方法如：列举，因果，举例等）2、句子结构：适当使用从句、倒装句、非谓语动词、插入语，从而使文章句子结构稍微复杂而富于变化。3、词汇：尽量使用与主题相关的一些重要词汇，避开用得过于泛滥的词汇。第十八页，共九十页。得高分的关键运用复杂句式书写美观开头结尾很关键词汇的多样使用谚语第十九页，共九十页。开头常用句型：现象式

数据式

引言式

提问式第二十页，共九十页。练习onDualDegrees.1.近年来越来越多的大学生热衷于修“双学位”2.产生这种现象的原因3.我的观点第二十一页，共九十页。练习

PrivateCarsinChina1.是否应该鼓励发展私人轿车2.表明你的观点并说明理由3.鼓励或者限制私人轿车的有效措施第二十二页，共九十页。练习

Say"ThankYou"toParents1.很多的大学生从未跟父母道过谢2.请说明原因3.你的建议第二十三页，共九十页。练习

ShouldCollegeStudentsLiveonCampusa.有些人喜欢住在学校的宿舍，因为...b.有些人喜欢住在校外，因为...c.我的看法第二十四页，共九十页。四级作文-2四级真题作文：DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写。。2.出现这种现象的原因是…3.为了改变这种状况，我认为….back第二十五页，共九十页。写作步骤：列提纲（必不可少的一步-现象类说明文第一段提纲：提出主题第二段提纲：分点阐述出现这种现象的原因是…第三段提纲：阐述为了改变这种状况，我认为….①学生在英语学习中不重视拼写②影响英语写作、英语提高①应试教育②老师教学中没有重视拼写③学生懒惰①将拼写纳入考试中②老师、学生要重视拼写③提高学生对单词拼写的兴趣第二十六页，共九十页。第一段：①Nowadays,studentsattachlessimportancetothespellingofwordsintheprocessofEnglishstudy.②Thisphenomenongreatlyinfluencesstudents’writingandbringsonworriesamongteachers.DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling第二十七页，共九十页。第二段：

Threeleadingfactorsmayhavecausedsuchagraveproblem.

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First,exam-orientededucationmakesthestudentspaylessattentiontospelling.②Second,someteachersshouldalsoberesponsibleforitbecausetheydon’temphasizetheimportanceofspellingduringteaching.

③

Lastbutnotleast,somestudentsaretoolazytorecitewords.

第二十八页，共九十页。

第三段：SincespellingisoneofthemostimportantfactorsinEnglishstudy,dueattentionshouldbegiventoit.

①first,examsshouldbemodifiedtoaddsomefactorsintoit,whichwouldhelpstudentpaymoreattentiontospelling.

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Then,schoolsshouldalsoseteffectivemechanismstohelpteachersaswellasthestudentstorealizetheimportance.

③Finally,forstudentsthemselves,theycan,throughotherways,makethembeinterestedinwordspelling.

④Onlybythesecanwesurlyrealizetheimportanceofspellingandmakeimprovement.

第二十九页，共九十页。主题句的写法1如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写。back(1)Formoststudents,noattentionhasyetbeengiventospellingintheirEnglishlearning.(2)Nowadays,EnglishlearnersinChinadonotattachdueimportancetospellingsintheirlanguagelearning.

Nowadays,alotofstudentsdon’tpayattentiontothespellingintheirEnglishstudy第三十页，共九十页。主题句的写法22.出现这种现象的原因是…Twoprincipalfactorshavebeenidentifiedastheleadingcontributorstotheproblem,namely,AandB.Twoleading/majorfactorsmayhavecausedsuchagraveproblem.Therearethreereasonsaccountingforthisproblem.第三十一页，共九十页。主题句的写法33.为了改变这种状况，我认为….Inordertochangethissituation,Ithink…Inmyopinion(pointofview),twopowerfulmeasuresmustbetakenimmediatelytochangethissituation第三十二页，共九十页。1.现象式(1)Withtherapiddevelopmentofsociety,studentsareattachingmoreandmoreimportancetoDualDegrees(2)hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-todaylife.Privatecars第三十三页，共九十页。1.现象式(3)Associetydevelops,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinPrivatecars(4)过去XX年，发生了什么Thepastdecadehasseen(witnessed,experienced,undergone)…eg.Thepastdecadehaswitnessedthephenomenonthat

agrowingnumberofstudentsarekeenonpursuingdualdegrees.第三十四页，共九十页。万能开头句Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicybeingcarriedout,bringsomeproblemsatthesametime,withthefollowingonebeingtheformost...第三十五页，共九十页。2．

数字式原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。不妨试用下面的句型：According

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下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造Accordingtoarecentsurveyinvolvingover3000undergraduates,35%oftheuniversitystudentsneversaid"ThankYou"totheirparents.78.9%the

college

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名人名言式1.Asanoldsayinggoes,timeismoney.2.Astheproverbgoes,practicemakesperfect.3.Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart,asSocrates,therenowned/distinguished

Greekphilosopher,onceobserved/concluded!

4.Practicemakesperfect,asonerenownedphilosopher,onceobserved!

第三十七页，共九十页。4．

提问式Howcanwesucceedinajobinterviewer?

Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisquestion.Somepeoplebelievethat…ShouldCollegeStudentsLiveonCampus?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisquestion.Somepeoplebelievethat…第三十八页，共九十页。学会遣词造句第三十九页，共九十页。遣词-七大恶心词汇importantverythinkdifferentinmyopinionPeoplegovernment第四十页，共九十页。替换六大恶心词汇important==（significant,essential）verybeautiful==(wonderfullybeautiful)think==(harbortheidea)different==(various)inmyopinion==(frommyownperspective)people==(individuals/folks)government==(authorities)第四十一页，共九十页。举例Thebicyleisimportantforus.Thebicyleisofimportancceforus.Thebicyleplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Thebicycle,environmentalfriendlinessvehicle,playsanimportantroleinourlife.第四十二页，共九十页。举例AsfarasIamconcerned.AsfarasIamfirmlyconcerned.Asfarastheprivatecarsareconcerned,Ifirmlybelievethat…第四十三页，共九十页。举例Iamofferingthankstomyparents.Iam,frommybottomheart,offeringmygratitudetomylovingparents.第四十四页，共九十页。高分必杀句型之一1.过去XX年，发生了什么Thepastdecadehasseen(witnessed,experienced,undergone)…规律：低分：时间状语+主句：高分：时间作主语+has/have+witnessed,seen,experienced+其他第四十五页，共九十页。高分作文必杀句型22.某人（我）觉得，认为。。。低分：

Ibelieve(think)+宾从高分：（2）句子，asIamfirmlyconvinced.(3)Itcanbeargued(assumed,concluded)that+从句第四十六页，共九十页。高分作文必杀句型43.名言警句：我还记得有一为伟人、名人说过。低分：

Istillrememberafamouspersononcesaidthat+宾语从句高分：

原来的宾从改为主句，+as牛人的名字，+同位语+once说过（高级词汇）第四十七页，共九十页。例证低分：

Istillrememberthatafamouspersononcesaidthatimpossibleisnothingforawillingheart!必杀句型提高后：Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart,asSocrates,therenowned/distinguishedGreekphilosopher,onceobserved/concluded!第四十八页，共九十页。微观:高分对策高分词汇替换句子间的衔接短语常见高分表达法：检查：避免明显的语法错误第四十九页，共九十页。Eg.在过去十年中，越来越多的学生出现了不同的拼写问题。

Duringthepasttenyears,moreandmorestudentshavedifferentkindsofspellingproblemsinEnglishlearning.第五十页，共九十页。问题1:句型升级ThelastdecadeinChinahasseen/experienced/witnessedanincreasingnumberofstudentswhoaretroubledbyEnglishspellings.EnglishspellinghasbecomeaseriousproblemforstudentsinChinaoverthepastdecade.第五十一页，共九十页。问题2:词汇升级

Duringthepasttenyears,moreandmorestudentshavedifferentkindsofspellingproblemsinEnglishlearning.第五十二页，共九十页。Overthelastdecade,agrowingnumberof,anincreasingnumberof,asurprisingnumberof,anastronomicalnumberofthevastmajorityof,theoverwhelmingmajorityof,第五十三页，共九十页。不同的DifferentVariousVariedDiverseDiversified第五十四页，共九十页。必杀高分词汇替换1重要的：important,

extremelyimportant,significant,decisive，predominantfundamental,crucial,indispensable第五十五页，共九十页。必杀高分词汇替换2好的，有趣的：good,interestingintriguingunbelievableincrediblefantasticfascinatinggorgeousimpressive第五十六页，共九十页。必杀高分词汇替换3坏的，不好的，糟糕的：

horrifying,horrible,disastrous,disgusting,discouraging,shocking,unbearable,monstrous,

第五十七页，共九十页。必杀高分词汇替换4我想，认为，觉得，思考，。。：thinkharbortheideathat…taketheattitudethat…holdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…第五十八页，共九十页。必杀高分词汇替换5努力/打算做某事：try/wanttodosth.endeavortodosth.doone’sutmosttodosth.sparenoeffortindoingsth.bemotivatedtodosth.beencouragedtodosth.beinspiredtodosth.bewilling(determined)todosth.第五十九页，共九十页。必杀高分词汇替换6一些表示程度的副词：veryextremely,tremendously,substantially,remarkably,reasonably,

第六十页，共九十页。必杀高分词汇替换7:衔接词英语句子的三大逻辑关系：正比：因果反比：转折或者让步平行或者递进

第六十一页，共九十页。高分词:表因果低分：

asaresult;therefore高分：notsurprisinglyconsequentlyquiteexpectedlyeventuallyquitepredictablyultimatelyquiteunderstandably第六十二页，共九十页。高分词：表转折和反比低分：however,高分：asamatteroffact,nonetheless,nevertheless,inactuality,inreality,By/incontrast,

第六十三页，共九十页。高分词：表递进低分：Moreover,高分：additionallyinadditiontothatatthesametimeontheotherhandmoreimportantlymoreinterestinglymoredelightfullywhat’smore第六十四页，共九十页。全文句型定语从句（限定或非限）现在分词作主语的句子状语从句（时间状语较普遍）后置定语（）并列句（…and…,…while…）If引导的条件句（Ifsomeofchancesaregrasped,…）第六十五页，共九十页。全文句型同位语从句（…thefactthat…）比较级句子（comparedwith…）独立主格结构作前置状语（Actuallyobtainedfromthebigfirm,thesecapacitiesandexperiencecouldmakeuschangealot.）Itis+adj./done+that/todo句型倒装句Makeitadj.(句子,makingitpossiblethat…)第六十六页，共九十页。造句第一，插入语，使文章有跳跃感Jinan,theSpringCity,isafamoustouristcity插入语的作用主要有两个，第一个是突出主语，比如说：He,whowouldliketoplaybasketball,isagoodstudent.

第二个作用是解释说明，比如说：People,especiallystudents,shouldworkhard.第六十七页，共九十页。2.Attitude,afterall,isessentialforastudent’sacademicperformance3.Otherpeople,however,standonadifferentground.4.Thismeasure,undoubtedly(inmyopinion),willeliminatethewasteofwater适当插入一些副词或介词短语等第六十八页，共九十页。倒装句——基本上所有学生在卷子里都出现的句型但却单调（only）Notonly…,butalso…Onlyinthisway…Undernocircumstance…无论如何，决不Onnoaccount…

绝不,切莫On

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accountshouldwebreakup.

我们决不应该分裂。Adj.(strange/surprise)asitmayseem,…第六十九页，共九十页。否定词位于句首（hardlywhen;never;notonly---,butalso---;seldom）在我一生中很难遇到这样的人Seldominmylifehaveimetsuchakind-heartedman.地点方位名词位于句首Innootherplaceintheworldcanonefindsuchenthusiasmforapplyingforhostingthe2008OlympicGames第七十页，共九十页。主动句和被动句变换 与汉语相比，英语更注重动作本身，而不是动作的执行者，因此在英语中被动语态的使用相对多一些，但这并不表明要一味地追求被动语态的使用。主动变被动

1）不需要体现动作的执行者【原文】 Weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheelderlywhohaddevotedtheiryouthandenergytoourcountry.【优化】

Moreattentionshouldbepaidtotheelderlywhohaddevotedtheiryouthandenergytoourcountry.第七十一页，共九十页。需注意的问题第七十二页，共九十页。避免一味用Thereis开头。

Therearemoreandmorepeoplewhorealizetherelationbetweenexaminationandteachingmethods.Therelationbetweentheexaminationandteachingmethodsisincreasinglyrecognized.第七十三页，共九十页。避免一味用People,I,We开头Wewillalwaysrememberthesmileonherface.Thesmileonherfacewillbefirmlyrootedinourminds.Wecertainlyshouldoffergoodservice.Goodserviceiscertainlyrequired.第七十四页，共九十页。时态——一般现在时为主体Nowadays,agrowingnumberofpeoplehadprivatecars.have第七十五页，共九十页。一定要用-过渡性关系词思想清晰行文流畅有跳跃感表达地道第七十六页，共九十页。

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last（不推荐，原因：俗）2）firstly,

secondly,

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least（强烈推荐）第七十七页，共九十页。关系词1递进1.首先inthefirstplace,tobeginwith,tostartwith,foronething2.其次inthesecondplace,moreover,further,furthermore,besides,foranother3.最后lastbutnotleast,moreimportantly,aboveall,additionally第七十八页，共九十页。关系词2让步/转折

Inotherwords,despitethat,inspiteof,eventhough,nevertheless,however因果

asaresult,asaconsequence,hence,thus,toconclude,inconclusion,consequently第七十九页，共九十页。关系词3举例说明

forinstance,take…forexample,acaseinpointis…,oneillustrationofthisis…总结

insummary,inthefinalanalysis,basedonalltheargumentsofferedabove,onthebasisoftheabovediscussion,havingconsideredalltheargumentsabove第八十页，共九十页。四级作文中常见错误分析词汇错误——判断词汇量大小，找准主客观系数比语法错误——学生基本功的表露，与作文最终分数直接相关内容错误——跑题或文章中有严重攻击性用语，此种情况一般为零分第八十一页，共九十页。词汇错误1.单词拼写（基础词汇的拼写错误导致失分较大，eg.sociaty,nowday,phenomen,colleage）2.混淆词性（eg.Insocial,withthedevelopmentofeconomic,donotinterestin）3.拼音替代4.情态动词使用