高中英语11Module7Revision公开课

Writing

Whatmakesagoodessay?Ⅰ.Discussion感知典型范例感知典型范例——词汇层面1adj.聪明的、脑筋好的clever→wise→smart→

bright→

intelligent感知典型范例——词汇层面2adj.令人惊奇的surprising→amazing→astonishingexactlyusedandadvancedwords准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇

(not…until)→He______comehere______yesterdayafternoon.

2.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.

3.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.感知典型范例——句型层面1advancedsentencepatterns使用高级句型nogrammaticalmistakes

没有语法错误Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.他昨天下午来的。didn’tuntil

感知典型范例——段落层面Ithink,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentsthoughwearebusy.Oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemlivehappily.Wecanbuildaharmonioussocietyonlywhenallofuscarefortheaged.AsfarasIamconcerned,foruschildren,weshouldoftengohomeandstaytogetherwithourparentshoweverbusyweare.What’smore,oursocietyshouldorganizeallkindsofactivitiesfortheseniorstohelpthemliveahappylife.Onlywhenallofuscarefortheagedcanwebuildaharmonioussocietyproperlinkwords使用恰当的连接词

varioussentencepatterns用较丰富的句式感知典型范例——篇章层面1卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得8分感知典型范例——篇章层面2字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。

poor——篇章层面3excellentneatandclean卷面整洁wellorganized结构合理thecontentiscomplet内容要完整Conclusion:

Whatmakesagoodessay?1.neatandclean卷面整洁

2.completecontent内容完整3.wellorganized结构合理4.exactlyusedandadvancedwords

准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇5.properlinkingwor