Unit+8+Lesson+1+The+Last+Leaf+读后续写课件【高效课堂精讲精研】 高中英语北师大新版（2019）选择性必修第三册

Unit8LiteratureWritingWorkshopAContinuationofaStoryYouaregoingtowriteacontinuationofthestoryTheLastLeaf.WritingTaskTearscametoJohnsy’seyesassheknewwhatMr.Behrmanhaddoneforher.________________________________________Tenyearslater,Johnsybecameafamouspainterduetoherdedicationandhardwork._______________________________WritingTaskTextanalysisLanguageusePlotconstructionPrinciplesofcontinuationwriting1.Consistency

of

the

gist（主旨大意）2.Consistencyoftheplot（情节）3.Consistencyofthelogic（逻辑）4.Consistencyof

the

emotion（情感）5.Consistencyofthestyle（风格）2.Consistencyoftheplot（情节）Plot-relatedmistakes1.Notfollowingthegivenhintswhenorganizingtheplot（情节没有跟着文章提示走）Thenvividmemoriescamefloodingback.

SomeSsfailedtomentionwhatmemoriestheywere.2.Overuseofdialogues（过度使用对话）Toomanydialoguesbetweenthetwomaincharacters,Jennyandhermother.Asaresult,theirstoriesarelonganddull.3.Wronguseofperson（人称使用错误）

WhenIgotupat6o'clock,Ihaveseenmymotherbusycookinginthekitcheneveryweekday.Plot-relatedmistakesMistakesinexpressions1.Spellingmistakes（拼写错误）Clam(calm)Down!…hermotherturely(truly)lovesher..Hermotherpreparedalotofsnakes(snacks)forher.The

seller

smailed(smiled).Don’t

leave

me

along(alone).Jennychocked(choked)2.Wronguseofcollocations（词组搭配介词乱用）Sheshared

happiness

to(with)

her

mother.Jenny

approached

to(/)

her

mother

and

hugged

her.She

thanked

to(/)

the

seller

and

left

quickly.Mistakesinexpressions3.Mistakesinpartofspeech,tenses,voices,etc.（词性、时态、语态）take

a

deep

breathe(breath)Iwanttomake

an

apologize(apology).Whatever

you

had

met,

I

will

always

standing(stand)

behind

you.

I

shouldn’t

shouted(shout)

to

you.Nobody

can

heard(hear).Thedoorwasn’tbeen(/)closed.

Shealwaysrememberedthesmellofthemealwhich(was)cookedbyhermother.MistakesinexpressionsMistakesinexpressions4.Mistakesinsentencestructures（句子结构）Notuntildidshehearwhatthesellertoldhershecametorealizethat…Sothankfulshewasthat…Whenhermotherseeingher,shejumpedtoherfeet.They

hugged

each

other,

understood

other’s

heart.Mistakesinexpressions5.Chinglish（中式英语）But

she

rushed

to

the

kitchen

with

no

words.You

are

OK

just

enough.Thinking

here,

Jenny

made

a

decision

to

apologize

to

her

mum.Mom

is

the

best

person

in

the

world,

a

man

is

like

a

treasure

who

has

mother.WonderfulexpressionsandbeautifulsentencesExpressions:1.Vividwords&variousexpressions（生动的词/多样的表达）2.Verbsinaction（表动作的词）3.Variedsentencepatterns（句式多样）4.Plotscorrespondingtothegivenpassage（情节紧扣）5.Properstatementofthetheme（主题升华恰当）1Readthetextagainanddiscussthequestions.1.Whathappenedinthestory?OldBehrmansavedayoungartistatthecostofhisownlife.2.Whydidthedoctorcall“TheLastLeaf”Behrman'smasterpiece?WithoutBehrman’ssacrifice,Johnsywouldn’thavethechancetorecover.3.Whatwasthemainthread(主线/线索)ofthestory?Thelastleafisthetitle,andalsoservesasthemainthreadofthestory.TextAnalysis2Readthelastparagraphandbrainstormwhatmighthappeninpairs.1.HowwillJohnsyfeelwhensheheardwhatMrBehrmandidforherandthathediedforher?Johnsy’sdeeplymovedandgrateful.2.Howwillthestoryend?WhatwillhappentoJohnsy?Johnsywillbecomeasuccessfulartistanddosomethingtoreturnthefavor.PlotConstructionTearscametoJohnsy’seyesassheknewwhatMr.Behrmanhaddoneforher._______________HowdidJohnsyfeel?

WhatdidJohnsydo?WhatdidJohnsysay?Shefeltmoved,heartbroken,grateful…

ShewenttoseeMr.Behrman.Shegavethanksandwasdeterminedtosucceed.PlotConstructionTenyearslater,Johnsybecameafamouspainterduetoherdedicationandhardwork.____________Howsuccessfulwasshe?WhatdidJohnsydotorememberMrBehrman?Whatdidthepaintingmean?Herworks…ShedrewthesamepaintingasMrBehrmandid.Hope.PlotConstructionVocabularyforcontinuationwriting动作：stareat(注视，盯着看),take…aside(把…叫到一旁),claim(声称),inanattempttodo(尝试做某事),raise/liftone’sspirits(振奋某人的精神),hearof(听说),makeupone’smindtodo(决心做某事),fetch(拿来；请来),longtodo(渴望做某事),slipaway(消亡，死去；溜走),holdon(在困境或危险中坚持住),wonder(好奇，想知道)情绪：betiredof(厌倦),withdisbelief(不可置信地),helplessly(无助地)状态：wetthrough(湿透的),icycold(冰凉的)时序：thenextmorning,thefollowingday,intheafternoon,thenextday时序表达补充：allofasudden突然earlyinthemorning一大早oneSundayafternoon一个星期天的下午theotherday=afewdaysago几天前thenext/followingday第二天justthen=justatthatmoment正在那时afterthat=lateron然后afterawhile一会儿以后intheend/atlast/finally/eventually最后fromthenon从那以后surprisingly令人惊讶的是withouthesitation毫不犹豫地Hearingthis,…听到这个，…Afterwhatseemedages,…在过了似乎几年的时间后，…（夸张）Afterseeminglyalongtime,…在过了似乎很长一段时间后，…VocabularyforcontinuationwritingTearscametoJohnsy’seyesassheknewwhatMr.Behrmanhaddoneforher.Lookingoutofthewindowandstaringatthelastivyleafthatnevermovedaninch,Johnsycouldn’thelpcryingsadly.Althoughshewastooweaktositupandmovearound,shewasdeterminedtoseeMrBehrmanthelasttime.SupportedbySue,Johnsygotoutofbedandwentdownstairs.TherewasMr.Behrmanlying

deadinhisbed.

HoldingMr.Behrman’shandtightly,Johnsywhisperedtothepaleface,“DearMr.Behrman!

It’syouwhogavemeasecondlifeandIpromisethatIwillcontinuemypainting.”普通版Tenyearslater,Jonhsybecameafamouspainterduetoherdedicationandhardwork.

Herpaintingswerewidelyadmiredandonexhibitionatartgalleriesallovertheworld.Oneday,shereturnedtoGreenwichVillage.Whensheopenedthewindowandsawtheleafonthewall,shedecideditwastherighttimeforhertodrawthepaintingthatshehad

longed

to

produce.Inthepainting,aleafheldfirmlyontothedrybranchesintheicywind.Withthelaststrokeonthepaper,Johnsysmiled

broadly.Toher,thelastleaf

isaglimmerofhopethatanoldmangavetoadesperategirlatthecostofhisownlife.普通版TearscametoJohnsy’seyesassheknewwhatMr.Behrmanhaddoneforher.Lookingoutofthewindowandgazingatthelastivyleafthatnevermovedaninch,Johnsycouldnotcontainherselfanylongerandbrokeintotears.Infragilehealthasshewas,shewasdeterminedtoseeMrBehrmanthelasttime.SupportedbySue,Johnsystruggledoutofbedandshuffleddownstairs.TherewasMr.Behrman,thepooroldpainter,lying

deadinhisbed.

HoldingMr.Behrman’shandtightly,Johnsywastoodepressedtoutteraword.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,sheheldbackhertearsand

murmuredtothepaleface,“DearMr.Behrman!

It’syouwhogavemeasecondlife.Ipromisethatfromtodayon,Iwillputallmyheartandsoulintopain