读后续写助人类+额外的照片+讲义 高三英语二轮复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Wakeup,Mom!”Ifeltalittlehandonmyfaceandreluctantlyopenedmyeyes.Therewasmyson,readytostarttheday.Ialsoheardmybabiesawakeinthenextroom.Readyornot,thedayhadbegun!Ilovedbeinghomewithmylittleones,butIfelttheweightoftheworldonmyshoulders.MyhusbandandIhadjustboughtahouse,andsomeunexpectedexpensesmadeourbudgettighterthanithadeverbeen.Iwaswearyofspendingmorepennies.Weweren'tfoolishwithourmoney.Weworkedhard.Weweredoingalltherightthings,butwehadonefinancialdisappointmentafteranother.Iwasgoingtopickupmykids’

photoportraitsfromthestudioatthelocalmall.Despiteoursmallbudget,itwasimportanttometohavepicturesofmychildrenastheyweregrowingup.Thepreviousweek,Ihadfoundacoupon(优惠券)andusedsomechangefromthecartobuya$7.99portraitpackage,andtodaywasthedayIwastopickuptheportraits.Sinceweweregoingtothemall.Idecidedtomakeitanoutingandpackedsomesandwichesforustoeatatthefoodcourt(美食区).What'smore,therearemanyride-ontoycarsinthemall’sfoodcourtforfunandforfree.Afterbreakfast,wewentoff.Afterweparked,wewalkedintotheportraitstudioatthemallandIapproachedthecounter.Theyoungwomansmiled.“MayIhelpyou?”“Yes,I'mheretopickupourphotos."Thewomanaskedmynameandopenedherdrawer.”Ah,yes,heretheyare.Aren'ttheyjustsoadorable?”Shetookoutthephotos,andthesmilingfacesofmykidswarmedmyheart.“Yes,theyaregreat.Thankyou,”Isaid.Sheputthephotosintoanenvelope.ThenshespreadoutadditionalphotosofmykidsthatIhadn'tordered.Iknewwhatthatmeant.Theup-sell

pitch(推销)wascoming.“Wouldyouliketopurchasetheseextraportraits?Theyareonlyfifteendollars!”shesmiledsweetly.第一段：Myheartturnedcold.

“Idon'thavefifteendollars.”Itookthephotoenvelopeandwalkedaway,withmycheeksredaftermyreply.

第二段：Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedanenvelopeintomyhand.

【形容财务紧张】Ifelttheweightoftheworldonmyshoulders.someunexpectedexpensesmadeourbudgettighterthanithadeverbeen.Iwaswearyofspendingmorepennies.Weweredoingalltherightthings,butwehadonefinancialdisappointmentafteranother.我感到世界的重量压在我的肩膀上。一些意想不到的费用使我们的预算比以往任何时候都更加紧张。我担心要花更多的钱。我们做了所有正确的事情，但我们有一个接一个的财务麻烦。【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和丈夫刚买了一套房子，一些意料之外的开支使他们的预算比以往任何时候都要紧张，作者带孩子们去当地商场的摄影棚里拿孩子们的肖像照的故事。1.段落续写:①从第一段首句内容“我的心凉了。'我没有

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美元。”可知，第一段可描写作者没有钱买多余的肖像,带着孩子在商场玩耍的过程。2从第二段首句内容“当我们正在吃午饭的时候，那个年轻女人走过来,把什么东西递到我手里。"可知,第二段可描写肖像画室里的年轻女人送给作者一些东西，以此来帮助作者和她的孩子们。2.续写线索:拒绝购买多余的肖像--带着孩子离开--带孩子们在商场玩耍--吃午餐--年轻女人送给作者一些东西-----两人进行简短交流--感悟3.词汇激活(

一个词汇要写出相近的表达)行为类走开:walkaway/goaway玩得开心:enjoyoneself/haveagoodtime改变:change/transform疲倦的:tired/sweatful吃惊的:surprised/amazed/astonished【点睛】[高分句型1]

Mykidsclimbedonthemenjoyingthemselvesverymuch.(现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]

Althoughthemall’sfoodcourtwasnear,Ididn'thaveextramoney.(让步状语从句)[高分句型3]I

managedtosay“thankyou”assheturnedandwalkedaway.(时间状语从句)[高分句型4]

Whatmademeastonishedwasthat...(表语从句)参考范文：Myheartturnedcold.“Idon'thavefifteendollars.”Itookthephotoenvelopeandwalkedaway,withmycheeksredaftermyreply.Next,westoppedattheride

ontoycarsinthemall’sfoodcourt.Thereweren'tanyotherkidsthere.Mykidsclimbedonthemenjoyingthemselvesverymuch.Afterawhile,weweretiredsoweunwrappedourlunchesthatIhadbroughtfromhome.Althoughthemall’sfoodcourtwasnear,Ididn'thaveextramoney.Itwasearlyforlunch,butwewerehungry.Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedanenvelopeintomyhand.Shesaid,”Here.Takeitwithyouandhaveagoodday!”Ifeltextremelyflattered.Imanagedtosay”thankyouforyourextraphotos”

assheturnedandwalkedaway.ButwhenIopenedtheenvelopeshehadgivenme,whatmademeastonishedwasthatthereweresomebillstotaledfiftydollarsattachedtothephotosintheenvelope.TearsrolleddownmycheeksasIquietlyfinishedmy

sandwich.Thedoubtsinmyheartmeltedawayandmyfaithwasrenewed.Kindnesscanchangesomeone'sdarkmomentintoabrightone.我的心一下凉了。

“我没有十五块钱。”

我接过照片信封走开了，回答后脸颊通红。接下来，我们停在商场美食广场的玩具车上。那里没有其他孩子。孩子们爬上去玩得很开心。过了一会儿，累了，就打开了从家里带来的