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专题04高分副词的使用(4)一、高分副词(有些单词在中文中意思差不多,在英文中还是有差异的,请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)犹豫不决地hesitantly不耐烦地impatiently无怜悯地;残忍地mercilessly/cruelly闷闷不乐地moodily;unhappily虚弱地;微弱地weakly 生气地angrily 害怕地;恐惧地(runaway/scream)fearfully羡慕地;嫉妒地enviously焦虑地、不安地、担忧地anxiously 有力地;坚定地firmly担忧地;着急地worriedly出乎意料地;意外地unexpectedly困惑地confusedly 忠诚地;一心一意地devotedly赞美地;钦佩地admiringly 失望地disappointedly高兴地delightedly 感兴趣地interestedly 满意地contentedly 匆忙地hurriedly疲倦地tiredly/wearily 天真地innocently安全地safely坚定地;坚决地determinedly钟爱地;深情地lovingly 二、高分副词运用Sheglanced____________(害怕地)overhershoulder.【答案】fearfullyHisfriendsteasedhim____________(无情地)whentheyfoundthepoem.【答案】mercilesslyHearingthereply,hesmiled____________(满意地).【答案】contentedly"I'msorry,"shesaid,smiling____________(微弱地).【答案】weaklyHe____________(匆忙地)wenttoschool,runningalltheway.【答案】hurriedlyShewasstaring____________(闷闷不乐地)intothefire.【答案】moodily/unhappilyHesignedhisname____________(犹豫不决地).【答案】hesitantlyWesatwaiting____________(不耐烦地)forthefilmtostart.【答案】impatientlyHeclosedhiseyes____________(疲倦地).【答案】wearily/tiredly“Iwillgiveupsmoking,”hesaid____________(坚定地).【答案】determinedly/firmlyShesmiledathim____________(深情地).【答案】lovinglyHelookedathisfriend'snewcar____________(羡慕地).【答案】enviously/admiringlyShewaited____________(焦急地)bythephone.【答案】anxiously/worriedlySheleftthegamblingtable____________(失望地).【答案】disappointedlyHisfatherdied____________(意外地).【答案】unexpectedlyThetwofriendsshookhands____________(有力地).【答案】firmly____________(高兴地),sheacceptedtheinvitation.【答案】DelightedlyHeservedhismaster____________(忠诚地).【答案】devotedly“Whathashappened?”Heasked____________(困惑地).【答案】confusedly“Whowillwinthegame?”Heasked____________(饶有兴趣地).【答案】interestedly`Iwonderwhattodo,'shesaid____________(担忧地).【答案】worriedly/anxiouslyShesmiledathim_________.(天真地)【答案】innocently三、实战演练(2017年11月浙江高考)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。A
vacationwithmymother
Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyet
absent-minded
and
forgetful.Onestrangefamily
trip
wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.
MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,
David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,
camping
equipment,anda
tent
intothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecks
Mom
hadforgotten.
DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhile
Dadslept:“YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehad
trouble
findingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldas
nice
assheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Onepossibleversion】:Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.
Mom
firmlyinsistedthatwemustmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit.
David
andIlookedat
Dad,hopinghecouldstophercrazyidea.Toourgreatdisappointment,heagreed.Wespentawholeafternoonseekinga
nicecamping
placeandsetupour
tent
beforethenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtmomcouldbewiseasIgazedatourstunningtentadmiringly.“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”Whatamisconception!Despitetheacheofmyneck,wehadsomegreatnights.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.
Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsidermom’sscandalsasakindoffun.IreallylovemyMum.
Toourrelief,thefourofussafelyarrivedatgrandparents’placeandwentbacktoourhome.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain.【点评】:故事情节完整合理,句式结构丰富,能熟练使用倒装句、感叹句等句型。文中firmly强调妈妈一定要使用我们带来的新帐篷。新帐篷非常漂亮,所以作者带着欣赏(admiringly)的目光看着它。safely与文章开头及下文形成呼应,强调我们安全到家。专题05高分介词短语的使用一、高分介词短语determinedly=withdetermination坚定地;毅然决然地;坚忍不拔地interestedly=withinterest饶有兴趣地confidently=withconfidence满怀信心地patiently=withpatience耐心地proudly=withpride骄傲地;自豪地enthusiastically=withenthusiasm热心地;热情地;感兴趣地 sympathetically=withsympathy同情地cautiously=withcaution 小心地;谨慎地enviously=withenvy嫉妒地curiously=withcuriosity好奇地anxiously=withanxiety焦虑地devotedly=withdevotion热爱地;忠诚地;全心全意地sorrowfully=withsorrow悲痛地;非常伤心地withsadness伤心地withfear因为害怕withcourage勇敢地withjoy高兴地embarrassedly=with/inembarrassment难为情地;尴尬地contentedly=with/insatisfaction满意地delightedly=with/indelight高兴地excitedly=with/inexcitement激动地;兴奋地disgustedly=with/indisgust厌恶地with/inrelief如释重负地;松了口气;欣慰地with/insurprise吃惊地amazedly=inamazement吃惊地confusedly=inconfusion困惑地admiringly=inadmiration仰慕地silently=insilence默默地angrily=inanger愤怒地;生气地secretly=insecret秘密地;偷偷地hurriedly=inahurry匆忙地fearfully=infear=in(a)panic=interror=inhorror害怕地inpuzzlement困惑地inshock震惊地二、高分介词短语运用Hefoughttheillness_________________(勇敢地)anddetermination.【答案】withcourageTheywatchedtheexperiment____________________(非常感兴趣地).【答案】withgreatinterest;withgreatenthusiasmHeansweredthequestions_________________(自信地).【答案】withconfidenceHelistenedtoherexplanation________________(耐心地).【答案】withpatienceIwearmypoliceman'suniform________________(自豪地).【答案】withprideHewentintothecave________________(非常好奇地).【答案】withgreatcuriosityWewaitedfornews________________(焦虑地).【答案】withanxietyWeallwatched________________(尴尬地)asMrRogersstartedtocry.【答案】with/inembarrassment'I'vepassedallmyexams',heannounced________________(满意地).【答案】with/insatisfactionGillianandDarrengreetedthespeakers________________(热情地).【答案】withgreatenthusiasmDesmondeyedheranguishedface________________(同情地).【答案】withsympathyInfogyoushoulddrive________________(特别小心地).【答案】withextremecaution;withgreatcareIlook________________(羡慕地)onthoseluckypeoplewithbigfamilies.【答案】withenvyThekidswerescreaming________________(高兴地).【答案】with/indelight;withjoyHelookedatme________________(困惑地)anddidnotanswerthequestion.【答案】inconfusion/puzzlementThewholeceremonytookplace________________(寂静无声地).【答案】incompletesilence'It'salie!'heshouted________________(愤怒地).【答案】inangerTheyacceptedthedecision________________(伤心地).【答案】withsadnessSheclappedherhands________________(激动地).【答案】with/inexcitementHestaredattheanimal________________(吃惊地).【答案】inamazement;with/insurpriseSamthrewhisbooksdown________________(厌恶地)andstormedoutoftheroom.【答案】with/indisgustHewatched________________(如释重负地)asthegirlnodded.【答案】with/inreliefDanielgazedather________________(仰慕地;钦佩地).【答案】with/inadmirationShelookedround________________(震惊地),unwillingtobelievewhatshehadseen.【答案】inshockThemeetingwasheld________________(秘密地).【答案】insecretHehadsomethingtodealwith,sohehadtoleave________________(匆忙地).【答案】inahurryHeranaway________________(害怕地).【答案】infear/panic/terror/horrorHisfacewaswhite________________(因为害怕).【答案】withfearHehadtoleavehishometown________________(非常伤心地).【答案】withsorrow三、实战演练阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasawarmandsunnymorningattheCentralParkZoo.Abigailandherclassmateswereabuzzwithexcitementastheirschoolbusenteredthezooparklot.Today,Abigail’sclasswasgoingonafieldtriptothezootolearnmoreabouttheanimalsandtheirnaturalhabitats.“Beforeyouleavethebus,pleasemakesureyouhaveyourbuddy!”Mrs.Brownannounced.Tomakesurenoonegotlostinthezoo,eachstudenthadabuddy(companion/friend).Abigail’sbuddywasnamedDerrick.Derricklovesanimalsandwasalsoexcitedtogotothezoo.Butsometimes,Derrickdoesnotfollowtherulesandgetsintrouble.Abigailhopedthattoday,Derrickwouldfollowtherulessotheywouldnotgetintrouble.Whiletherestofthestudentsgotoffthebus,AbigailandDerrickquicklyranofftoexplore.Theyfoundtheexhibitsformanydifferentkindsofanimalsandlearnedalotabouttheirnaturalhabitats.Theysawtheelephantsplayingandtheysawgiraffeseating.Theysawthepolarbearssleepingandthemonkeysleaping.AbigailaskedDerrick:“Derrick,whatisyourfavoriteanimal?”“IthinkIlikechimpanzeesbest.Theyhavealotofenergy,justlikeme!Whatanimaldoyoulike,Abigail?”“Ilovepolarbears!IthinktheirlifestyleintheArcticisveryinteresting.”Afewhourslater,AbigailandDerrickstartedtofeelhungry.TheymadetheirwaybacktothezooentrancetoeatlunchattheRainforestCafe.TheRainforestCafeisbothAbigailandDerrick’sfavoriterestaurantbecausethereisanaquariuminside.Therestaurantisalsofamousforitschocolatecake,whichAbigailorderedfordessertaftertheyhadfinishedtheirlunch.AsAbigailwasfinishinghercake,Derrickexcusedhimselftogototherestroom.Abouttenminuteslater,asuddenalarmbegantogooffandavoicecameovertheloudspeaker.“Attention!Someonehasopenedthechimpanzeeexhibit!Somechimpanzeeshaveescaped!”Peoplewerescreamingandstartingtorun.AbigaillookedforDerrick,buthewasnowheretobefound.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Asmoreandmorepeopleranoutofthezoo,Abigailbegantothink__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AsAbigailracedupthepathtotheanimalexhibits,shewasstopped_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【Onepossibleversion】:Paragraph1:Asmoreandmorepeopleranoutofthezoo,Abigailbegantothinkwhereherbuddy,_Derrick,couldbe.Shegotupfromthetablequicklyandcircledbacktotherestrooms,callingDerrick’sname.Therewasnoanswer,soAbigaillefttherestaurant.Asshelookedaroundthezoogrounds,sherememberedthatDerrickhadalotofenergyandhadtoldherthatchimpanzeeswerehisfavoriteanimals.Derrickwouldn’thavelefttherestauranttoreleasethechimpanzees,wouldhe?Ohno!InshockAbigailwassuresheknewwhereDerrickhadgone.Paragraph2:AsAbigailracedupthepathtotheanimalexhibits,shewasstoppedinhertracksbynoneotherthanDerrickhimself,withtwochimpanzeescradledinhisarms.Heofferedasmall,guiltysmile.“Ididn’tmeantoletthemescape,”hebegan.“Ijustwantedtotakethemouttoplayforalittlewhile!Itookthekeyfromazookeeperwhowasn’tlooking.Butthen,thelockbrokeand...”BehindAbigail,Mrs.BrownhadbeguntowalkupthepathandsawDerrickholdingtheanimalswithexcitement.Itwasclearfromhersternexpressionthathewasinbigtroublebecausehedidn’tfollowtherules.【点评】:故事情节完整紧凑合理,叙述流畅,句式结构丰富,介词短语的运用更好地描写了角色的情感。文中inshock体现了Abigail一想到Derrick很可能把chimpanzees放了出来时的震惊之情。withexcitement则体现了Derrick怀抱喜爱动物时的兴奋之情。专题08读后续写句式提升之独立结构的使用独立主格结构是由“名词或代词+现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词短语、名词短语、介词短语或副词短语”构成的一种独立结构。在该结构中,名词或代词与其后的部分构成逻辑上的主谓关系,用来修饰谓语动词或整个句子。在句中作状语,表示
“时间、条件、原因、伴随,方式或结果”等含义,其位置比较灵活,可放于句首、句中或句末。一、请仔细观察下列句子中独立结构的作用1.
名词(代词)+现在分词Theclockstrikingtwelve,Iwenttobed.
(表原因)2.
名词(代词)+过去分词Helaythereonhisback,
histeethset,hisrighthandclenchedonhisbreast.
(表伴随)3.
名词(代词)+
形容词短语Herfacepalewithanger,sherosetogoaway.
(表原因)4.
名词(代词)+
介词短语Then,lastnight,Ifollowedhimhereandclimbedin,
swordinhand.
(表方式)5.
名词(代词)+
副词短语Summerover,
thestudentsreturnedtoschool.
(表原因)二、请使用独立结构改写下列句子Hereyesbrimmedwithtearsandsheleft.【答案】(Her)eyesbrimmingwithtears,sheleft.Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigidwithanger.【答案】Theboystoodthere,hisfacerigidwithanger.IclaspedmyhandsbehindmeandIwastooshockedtosayaword.【答案】Iwastooshockedtosayaword,myhandsclaspedbehindme.Agirlcameinwithabookinherhand.【答案】Agirlcamein,bookinhand.Themanagersatquietlyintheofficeandhiseyeswereclosed.【答案】Themanagersatquietlyintheoffice,(his)eyesclosed.
Theysatintheroomwiththecurtainsdrawn.【答案】Theysatintheroom,thecurtainsdrawn.Oliverjumpedupandhisfacewasbrightredwithanger.【答案】Hisfacebrightredwithanger,Oliverjumpedup.Lindaleapttoherfeetandhereyeswasblazingwithanger.【答案】Lindaleapttoherfeet,hereyesblazingwithanger.AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome.Hertearswasshininginhereyes.【答案】AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome,tearsshininginhereyes.Hecriedandhisblueeyeswasshiningbehindhisglasses.【答案】Hecried,hisblueeyesshiningbehindhisglasses.三、实战演练(2018年6月浙江高考)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfamhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.
Myhorserearedintotheair,letoutafrightenedwhinny,andgallopedoffthe
track.
Iheldonfordearlife,brancheslashingintomyarmsandface.Finallyhesloweddown,thenstopped,butlookingaroundattheendlessseaoftrees,Iknewwe
hadgotten
hopelessly
lost.Icalledandtheonlyanswerwastherustlingofthewindinthetrees.Thehorsemeanderedthroughthelonesomepines,withmecontinuingtocallandscanthehorizonforafamiliarlandmark,earsprickedforthesoundofahorseorahumanvoice.
Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.
AtlastIheardthewelcomesoundofrushingwater--the
river!
Gratefullywewenttothebankanddrankourfill.Wefolloweditinthedirectionthatthesunhadset,andeventuallyheardthefamiliarfrogs,andsawthecomforting
sight
oftheold
farmhouse,my
dad
shiningahugelampfromtheporch,guidingourwayhome.【点评】独立结构是英语语言表达中的一种高级形式,也是高中生英语学习中的一个难点。在这篇文章中,作者熟练地使用独立结构进行辅助描写,使故事的表达更加出彩。专题10读后续写高分技巧综合训练一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。(一)Jim看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中,他想到了那个姑娘。Jim仍然喘着粗气,朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘,他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她,他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了,她安全了。姑娘许久没说话,接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道:“是你吗,爸爸?”【参考范文】Seeingtheattackerflee/disappear/runintothedarkness,Jimthoughtofthegirl.Stillbreathingheavily,Jimwalkedtowardsher.Thegirlwassittingbehindthebushes,sobbing.AlthoughinthedarknessJimcouldhardlyseethegirlclearly,hecouldsensehertremblingalarmwithcertainty.Toavoidfrighteningthegirlfurther,Jimspoketoheratadistance.Inasoftvoice,Jimtoldherthattheattackerhadrunawayandthatshewassafe.Therewasalongsilenceandtheninastonishmentheheardthegirlask,“Dad,isthatyou?”【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语,丰富了表达形式,使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。(二)第二天,Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事,她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs.Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头,她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道,眼里含着泪。见此情景,Mrs.Gilson打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话,Meg如释重负。她开心地笑了,眼里的泪水落了下来。【参考范文】Thenextday,MegwenttotellMrs.Gilsonwhyshecouldn’thandinherhomework.Toavoidbeingknownbyherclassmates,shesecretlyslidintoMrs.Gilson’sofficewithoutbeingnoticed.Herheaddrooped,MegtoldMrs.Gilsonthetruththatshejustcouldnotfindherhomework.“IpromisethatIdidfinishmyhomeworkand…”sheexplained,tearswellingupinhereyes/eyesbrimmingwithtears.Seeingthis,Mrs.Gilsoninterruptedher.Withasmile,shetoldMegthatshehadhandedinherhomeworkwithherpaperthedaybefore.SheknewMegwasnotlyingbecauseoflaziness.Hearingthis,Megfeltasurgeofrelief.Shesmiledbrightly,dropsoftearsrollingdownhercheeks.【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词、介词短语、情绪表达和独立结构,尤其是独立结构。文中三处使用了独立结构,生动细腻地描写了Meg的情感变化。二、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。AFromthefirstdayheenteredmyclassroom,WillardP.Frankexistedinhisownworld,shuttingouthisclassmatesandme.Myattemptsatbuildingafriendlyrelationshipwithhimweremetwithcompleteindifference.Icouldseethathisclassmatesfarednobetter.Willardwasstrictlyalonerwhoseemedtohavenodesireorneedtobreakhissilence.ShortlyaftertheThanksgivingholiday,wereceivedwordoftheannualChristmascollectionofmoneyforthelessfortunatepeopleinourschooldistrict.“Christmasisaseasonofgiving,”Itoldmystudents.“Thereareafewstudentsintheschoolwhomightnothaveahappyholidayseason.BycontributingtoourChristmascollection,youwillhelpbuyfood,clothingandtoysfortheseneedypeople.Wewillstartthecollectiontomorrow.”WhenIcalledforthecontributionsthenextday,IdiscoveredthatalmosteveryonehadforgottenexceptforWillardP.Frank.Theboydugdeepintohispantspocketsashewalkedslowlytomydesk.Carefully,hedroppedtwoquartersintothesmallcontainer.“Idon’tneedmilkforlunch,”hemumbled.Foramoment,justamoment,hesmiled.Thenheturnedandwalkedbacktohisdesk.Thatnight,afterschool,Itookourfewcontributionstotheschoolprincipal.Icouldn’thelpsharingtheincidentthathadtakenplace.“Imaybewrong,butIbelieveWillardmightbegettingreadytobecomeapartoftheworldaroundhim,”Itoldtheprincipal.“Yes.”henodded.“Andwemightdowelltohavehimshareabitofhisworldwithus.IjustreceivedalistofthepoorfamiliesinourschoolwhomostneedhelpthroughtheChristmascollection.Here,takealookatit.”AsIgazeddowntoread,IdiscoveredWillardP.Frankandhisfamilywerethetopnamesonthelist.Seeingthis,Idecidedtodosomethingforhim.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:OnthatSunday,IpaidavisittoWillard’sfamily._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thenextday,IhadaspecialclassforWillard.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Paragraph1:OnthatSunday,IpaidavisittoWillard’sfamily.Onenteringhishouse,Iwassurprisedtofindabarelyemptyroomwithonlyabrokenbedandadirtysecondhandsofa.Willardtoldmethathismotherdiedafewyearsagoandthathisfatherwasmissing,leavinghimtolivewithasickgrandma.Whenaskedwhyhehadgiventhetwoquarters,_Willardmumbled,_“Therearepeoplepoorerthanme,soIjustwanttodosomehelpbycontributingmymilkmoney.”Hearinghiswords,Icouldn’thelpburstingintotears.IthoughtIshouldhelphimbreakhissilence.Paragraph2:Thenextday,IhadaspecialclassforWillard.Isharedhisstorywiththewholeclassandsaid,“Now,onbehalfofthepeopleinneed,IshouldsaythankyouWillard,youaregreat!”Afterasilence,allthestudentsclapped,saying,“Willard,youaregreat!Willard,youaregreat!”andtheywalkedslowlytohimandhuggedhimtightly.AfriendlyrelationshipwasbuiltandWillard’ssilencewasbrokenbyasmileonhisface.【点评】故事内容连贯,情节感人,与所给材料前后呼应,自成一体。表达形式丰富
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