（2022年）甘肃省金昌市大学英语6级大学英语六级测试卷(含答案)

（2022年）甘肃省金昌市大学英语6级大学英语六级测试卷(含答案)学校:________班级:________姓名:________考号:________

一、1.Writing(10题)1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaycommentingontheevaluationofteachers'performancedonebythestudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1．不少大学让学生参与任课老师教学情况的测评

2．对此改革措施校方、教师、学生的看法不一

3．学生测评教师的益处以及可能产生的问题

2.假设你是李明，假期即将到来，你打算做一次为期三周的旅行，希望找个外国朋友作为游伴(Travel-mate)。拟一个寻游伴的启事，交代清楚日程安排、费用分担情况、对对方的要求等，并说明对方和你一起出游的好处。

Travel-mateWanted

3.1.你是如何得知招生信息的

2.自我推荐并说明选择该校的理由

3.希望得到该校的回复

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledonGraduateMania.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前很多人报考研究生；

2.你认为此现象的原因是什么；

3.你的看法。

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.人类面临的环境问题越来越多，如气候变化、环境污染、生态失衡等问题

2．但许多人仍然不懂得去保护环境

3．我的看法

OntheImportanceofEnvironmentalProtection

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteALetterApplyingforaBankLoan.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.点明写信的目的并且对个人情况作介绍

2.申请助学贷款的原因及数额

3.你的还款打算

7.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:"WhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?"Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.挑战的意义

2.如何迎接挑战

3.我的看法

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessayentitledInternet.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow.

1.上网给人们带来的益处；

2.上网给人们带来的负面影响；

3.我的看法。

Internet

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteapassageofatleast150wordsinthetitleofIsCheckingAttendanceNecessarytoCollegeStudents.Pleasefollowtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.无论是本科教学还是研究生教学，点名都是教师维持纪律常用手段，这是因为

2.但也有人认为，这没有必要。

3.你的观点。

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealettertoyourcousinTom.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourletteronthesituationgivenbelow:

Tom刚刚考上大学，不适应大学的学习和生活，为此，他写信给你（大三学生）向你请教。你回信给他向他讲你的大学学习和生活经验。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)11.

ToprotectChineseretailersagainstthegrowingforeigncompetition,theChinesegovernmentstilltakesmeasurestolimitthenumbersofstoresopenedbyforeignretailersinlargecities.

A.YB.NC.NG

12.

Certaininsects,suchasthemonarchbutterfly,canincorporatepoisonoussubstancesfoundinfoodplantsintotheirowntissuesandusethemas______.

13.

AccordingtoJoelAchenbach,whiledreaming,ourbrainsexperience______.

14.TheScienceofInterruptions

In2000,GloriaMarkwashiredasaprofessorattheUniversityofCalifornia.Shewouldarriveatherdeskinthemorning,fullofenergyandreadytotackleherto-dolist.Nosoonerhadshestartedonetaskthanacolleaguewoulde-mailherwithanurgentrequest;whenshewenttoworkonthat,thephonewouldring.Attheendoftheday,Markhadaccomplishedafractionofwhatshesetouttodo.

Lotsofpeoplecomplainthatofficemultitaskingdrivesthemnuts.ButMarkstudieshowhigh-techdevicesaffectourbehavior,soshewasabletodomorethancomplain,shesetouttomeasurehownutswe'veallbecome.Shewatchedcubicle(办公室隔间)dwellersastheysurfedthechaosofmodernofficelifeandfoundeachemployeespentonlyten-and-a-halfminutesonanygivenprojectbeforebeinginterrupted.Eachshortprojectwasitselffragmentedintothree-minutetasks,likeansweringe-mailmessagesorworkingonasheet.

Mark'sstudyalsorevealedthatinterruptionsareoftencrucialtoofficework.Thehigh-techworkersadmittedthatmanyoftheirdailydistractionswereessentialtotheirjobs.Whensomeoneforwardsyouanurgente-mailmessage,it'softensomethingyoureallydoneedtosee;ifamobilephonecallbreaksthrough,itmightbethecallthatsavesyourhide.

Forsomecomputerengineersandacademics,thisrealizationhasbegunraiseanattractivepossibility:perhapswecanfindanidealmiddleground.Ifhigh-techworkdistractionsareinevitable,maybewecanre-engineerthemsowereceivealloftheirbenefitsbutfewoftheirdownsides.

TheBirthofMultitasking

Thescienceofinterruptionsbeganmorethan100yearsagowiththeemergenceoftelegraphoperators--thefirsthigh-stress,time-sensitiveinformation-technologyjobs.Psychologistsdiscoveredthatifsomeonespoketoatelegraphoperatorwhilehewaskeyingamessage,theoperatorwasmorelikelytomakeerrors.Later,psychologistsdeterminedthatwheneverworkersneededtofocusonajobthatrequiredthemonitoringofdata,presentationwasallimportant.Usingthisknowledge,cockpits(驾驶舱)forfighterpilotswerecarefullydesignedsothateachdialandmetercouldbereadwithjustaglance.

Still,suchissuesseemedremotefromthelivesofeverydayworkers.Then,inthe1990s,computersbegantoexperiencearapidincreaseinspeedandpower."Multitasking"wasborn;insteadofsimplyworkingononeprogramforhoursatatime,acomputeruserworksonseveralsimultaneously.Officeworkersnowstareatcomputerscreensofoverwhelmingcomplexity,astheyjuggle(操纵)messages,textdocuments,PowerPointpresentationsandWebbrowsers.Inthemodernofficeweareallfighterpilots.

EffectofMultitasking:Computer-affectedBehavior

Informationisnolongerascarceresourceattentionis.20yearsago,anofficeworkerhadtwotypesofcommunicationtechnology:aphone,whichrequiredaninstantanswer,andpostalmail,whichtookdays.Nowpeoplehavedozensofpossibilitiesbetweenthesetwopoles.

Theresultissomethinglike"continuouspartialattention",whichmakesussobusykeepinganeyeoneverythingthatweneverfullyfocusonanything.Thiscanactuallybeapositivefeeling,inasmuchastheconstantemaildingingmakesusfeelneededanddesired.Butwhathappenswhenyoutakethattotheextreme?Yougetoverwhelmed.Sanityliesindanger.

In1997,MicrosoftrecruitedMaryCzerwinski,whoonceworkedinNASA'sHuman-computerInteractionLab,toconductbasicresearchtofindouthowcomputeraffecthumanbehavior.Shetook39officeworkersandinstalledsoftwareontheircomputersthatwouldrecordeverymouseclick.Shediscoveredthatcomputeruserswereasrestlessashummingbird.Onaverage,theyjuggledeightwindowsatthesametime.Moreastonishing,

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15.

Accordingto"cost-per-wear"rule,thereasonablepriceofclothingshouldbeunder______ifyouwearit10timesinayear.

16.

Inordertogathermuchmoredata,Wal-Martpreferred______tobarcodes.

17.

Theauthorwasquiteproudof______thatmorningofinterview.

18.

Thedifficultywithelectronicwasteandmanyotherproductsisthat______theproductsand______thecomponentmaterialsisaverydifficultandexpensiveprocess.

19.

Thetraditionalvehiclesexistfornext10to20yearsbecauseof______.

20.

Onereasonthatteacherswoulddrivestudentstosportsfieldliesinthatitwillprobablyhelptoexhaustthechildrensothattheycansitstillinclass.

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三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)21.听力原文：W:Hello,Iboughtthislaptopcomputeralittleoveramonthago,andIamhavingsomedifficultywithit.

M:Whatseemstobetheproblem?

W:Thescreenisflashing.It'sreallyirritating.Iwouldliketoreturnitandgetmymoneyback.

M:I'msorry.Ourstorehasaverystrictreturnpolicy.Al~ermorethanamonth,wearenotabletorefundyourmoney.

W:Well,Ijustboughtitandit'salreadybroken.Ididn'tdoanythingunusualtoit.Ididn'tdropitoranything.Ithinkithassomekindofmanufacturingdefect.

M:Yourcomputerhasaoneyearwarranty.Youcouldshipthecomputerbacktothecompanyandtheywillreplaceit.

W:Can'tIjustexchangethecomputerhere?

M:Iamafraidthat'snotpossibleafteramonth.

W:CanIpleasetalktothemanager?

M:Themanager?Iamafraidhe'snotin.Wereallycan'treturnyourmoney,but...Iwouldgiveyouanotherone,butwenolongercarrythatmodel.Wecan,however,offeryouastorecredit.Youcanuseittobuyanothercomputeroranythingelsewecarryhereinthestore.

W:Thatwouldbefine.Thankyouverymuchforyourhelp.

M:Noproblem.

(20)

A.TheCPUisbroken.

B.Thescreenisflashing.

C.Itdoesn'twork.

D.Itdroppedtothefloor.

22.(38)

23.(28)

A.Wecaninventwaysofincreasingrainfall.

B.Wecandevelopwaysofreusingwaterandutilizingseawater.

C.Wecancutdownourconsumptionofwater.

D.Wecanreducethenumberoffactoriesproducingsteel.

24.(29)

A.Itwillconfineustothefourwalls.

B.Wewillhaveunlimitedfreedom.

C.Therichwillbeevenricher.

D.Educationwillbewidelyspread.

25.(21)

A.He'sstudyingforatest.

B.Helosthisnotes.

C.Hemissedtheclass.

D.He'sdoingresearchonalternative.

26.SectionC

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthepassageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneralidea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillintheblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissinginformation.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhavejustheardorwritedownthe

TheMid-summerDay,ahundred-year-oldtraditioninScandinavia,fallsonJune22ndor23rd,whenthesunwillreachitshighestpointinthesky,tocreatethelongestdayoftheyear.In【B1】______partofScandinavia,onecanseethe【B2】______sunandthenightneverreachescompletedarkness.

ManyplacescelebrateMid-summeronSt.John'sday,June24th,whileinSwedenitishonoredontheFriday【B3】______toJune20.Manycenturiesagothisdaywastopay【B4】______towater,fireandplants.Itwasalsoatimetocleanseone'ssoul.However,overtime,thisholidaylostmuchofits【B5】______meaning.Actually,Mid-summermarksachangeinthefarmingyear,speciallythebreakbetweenthecompletionofspring【B6】______andthehardworkofsummerhay-makinginScandinavia,andinsuchEasternEuropeancountriesasEstoniaandLithuania.

Howdidanddopeoplecelebratethefestival?

Familyandfriendsgettogetherto【B7】______themselveswithsuchwonderfulfoodasherring(鲱鱼),【B8】______potatoes,sourcream,bread,andbeer,followedbystrawberriesorfreshfruit.Afterthemeal,peoplewoulddance.【B9】______.Nowitisjustforfun.【B10】______—remember,thesundoesnotsetatallinScandinaviaatthistimeofyear!【B11】______.

【B1】

27.听力原文：W：Shouldn'tsomeonepickuptheclothesfromthecleaner's?Theyhavebeenthereformorethanfivedays．

M：Don'tlookatme．

Q：Whatdoesthemanimply?

(13)

A.Theclothesdon'tlookcleantohim.

B.Hedoesn'tintendtogettheclothes.

C.Thewomancanpickupherownclothes.

D.Thewomanshouldstopstaringathisclothes.

28.(36)

A.Thewriter'sfamilyisthepoorestoneonthatstreet.

B.Watchingtherichgirleatingcookies,thosehungrychildrencried.

C.Thewriterwantstomoveoutofthatdistrict.

D.Thewriterhopesthatherchildrenwillbecometeachers.

29.(44)

30.(24)

A.Themanislearninghowtouseacomputer.

B.Thewomanisshowingthemanhowtoputpagenumbersonadocument.

C.Themanisprintingadocument.

D.Themanisusinghiscomputertodomathematicalproblems.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)31.

WhatareIcelandandItalypioneeringin?

32.

LayingclaimtoDNAstretchescanbecarelessgeneticsbecause______.

A.thosewhopatentgenefragmentsarenotqualifiedgeneticists

B.thesamegenefragmentsareoftenpatentedbydifferentscientists

C.geneticistshavenoideawhattheyaregoingtodowithpatentedgenes

D.someofthegenefragmentspatentedcontainnorealgeneticinformation

33.

______mainlyleadstothelowlifeexpectancyinAmerica.

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3题)34.

【S10】

35.

【S2】

36.

【S4】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3题)37.

【S8】

38.

【S2】

39.

【S5】

参考答案

1.EvaluationbyStudentsNowadaysagrowingnumberofuniversitieshavelaunchedthe"StudentEvaluationProject"inwhichstudentsareinvitedtoevaluatethejobperformanceoftheirteachers.Inmostcasesstudentsgetevaluationformsattheendofasemesterandareaskedtofillthemoutanonymously.Therearevariedopinionsamongteachersanduniversityauthoritiesaboutthiseducationalreformprogram.Universityadministratorsconsiderstudentevaluationtobeaneffectivemeanstodisciplineteachersandhelpenhancetheteachingquality.Howevermanyteachersfeeluncomfortableevenresentfulaboutitbecausedifferentstudentsmayhavedifferentstandardsbywhichtojudgetheirteachers.Intheiropiniontheevaluationresultsmaybeinfluencedbyindividualstudent'spersonalfeelingsandthereforecan'tbecountedonasanobjectivereflectionoftheteachingperformance.Asforstudentstheirattitudesarealsovaried:someliketobegivenavoicetoexpresstheirviewssomedon'tunderstanditwhilesomesimplydon'tcare.AsawholeStudentEvaluationProjecttookaboldstepintheuniversityeducationreformprocesswhichencouragesstudentstogetmoreactivelyinvolvedintheclassteachingthuspositivelycreatinganinteractiveacademicatmosphere.Neverthelessmanyotherproblemsmayarisecorrespondingly.Forinstancesomestudentsmaybetoocriticalaboutacertainprofessorjustbecausetheprofessorisnotfunorheistoostrictwhichmighthaveanegativeimpactontheimpartialityofevaluationitselfmisleadingthereformorientation.EvaluationbyStudentsNowadays,agrowingnumberofuniversitieshavelaunchedthe"StudentEvaluationProject",inwhichstudentsareinvitedtoevaluatethejobperformanceoftheirteachers.Inmostcases,studentsgetevaluationformsattheendofasemesterandareaskedtofillthemoutanonymously.Tgram.Universityadministratorsconsiderstudentevaluationtobeaneffectivemeanstodisciplineteachersandhelpenhancetheteachingquality.However,manyteachersfeeluncomfortable,evenresentfulaboutit,becausedifferentstudentsmayhavedifferentstandardsbywhichtojudgetheirteachers.Intheiropinion,theevaluationresultsmaybeinfluencedbyindividualstudent'spersonalfeelingsandthereforecan'tbecountedonasanobjectivereflectionoftheteachingperformance.Asforstudents,theirattitudesarealsovaried:someliketobegivenavoicetoexpresstheirviews,somedon'tunderstandit,whilesomesimplydon'tcare.Asawhole,StudentEvaluationPcess,whichencouragesstudentstogetmoreactivelyinvolvedintheclassteaching,thuspositivelycreatinganinteractiveacademicatmosphere.Nevertheless,many,otherproblemsmayarisecorrespondingly.Forinstance,somestudentsmaybetoocriticalaboutacertainprofessorjustbecausetheprofessorisnotfunorheistoostrict,whichmighthaveanegativeimpactontheimpartialityofevaluationitself,misleadingthereform.orientation.

2.Travel-mateWantedI'ma19-year-oldfemalesophomorenamedLiMing.Iherebyearnestlyinviteaforeignyounglady--collegestudentpreferred--tomakeathreeweektouringtripwithme.Myplanistosetoffnextweekendwhenthesummervacationofficiallybegins.ThefirststopisKunmingtheworld-renownedcityforitsbeautyandmildtemperature.We'llgettherebytrainandstayfor2daysandthenwe'llheadforJinggangshanaformerrevolutionarybaseaswellasanaturalbeautyspot.Aftera3-dayvisittherewewilltakealong-distancecoachtoanearbyportcitybytheYangtzeRiverandboardadownstreamshiptoShanghaisothatwecanenjoythegreatsceneryalongsidethethirdlongestriverintheworld.AseverybodyknowsShanghaiisoneofthebusiestandfastestdevelopingcitiesinChina.I'dliketohaveagoodtourinShanghaisothestaytherewillbeabouthalfaweek.AfamousChinesesayinggoes"JustasthereisParadiseinheaventhereareSuzhouandHangzhouonEarth"soa4-dayvisittothesetwocitiesnearShanghaiisamust.Alltogetherourtripwilllastaboutthreeweeks.Ionlyexpectthatmytravel-matecouldhearherownexpensesandtalkwithmeinbeautifulEnglishandIWouldbeanexcellentguideforhersinceImajorintouristguiding.Thoseinterestedpleasecontactmeeitherthroughemail(Liming＠126.com)orPhonecall(12345678).Travel-mateWantedI'ma19-year-oldfemalesophomorenamedLiMing.Iherebyearnestlyinviteaforeignyounglady--collegestudentpreferred--tomakeathreeweektouringtripwithme.Myplanistosetoffnextweekend,whenthesummervacationofficiallybegins.ThefirststopisKunming,theworld-renownedcityforitsbeautyandmildtemperature.We'llgettherebytrainandstayfor2days,andthenwe'llheadforJinggangshan,aformerrevolutionarybaseaswellasanaturalbeautyspot.Aftera3-dayvisitthere,wewilltakealong-distancecoachtoanearbyportcitybytheYangtzeRiverandboardadownstreamshiptoShanghai,sothatwecanenjoythegreatsceneryalongsidethethirdlongestriverintheworld.Aseverybodyknows,ShanghaiisoneofthebusiestandfastestdevelopingcitiesinChina.I'dliketohaveagoodtourinShanghai,sothestaytherewillbeabouthalfaweek.AfamousChinesesayinggoes,"JustasthereisParadiseinheaven,thereareSuzhouandHangzhouonEarth",soa4-dayvisittothesetwocitiesnearShanghaiisamust.Alltogether,ourtripwilllastaboutthreeweeks.Ionlyexpectthatmytravel-matecouldhearherownexpensesandtalkwithmeinbeautifulEnglish,andIWouldbeanexcellentguideforhersinceImajorintouristguiding.Thoseinterestedpleasecontactmeeitherthroughemail(Liming＠126.com)orPhonecall(12345678).

3.ACoverLetterDearSir/Madam①IknowfromyouradvertisementthatyouaregoingtoenrollsomeChinesestudentstopursuefurtherstudyinyouruniversity.②IamveryinterestedinitandIwillappreciateanopportunitytostudyinafamousuniversitylikeyours.③IamaseniorinQinghuaUniversityworkingtowardmybachelor'sdegreeinComputerScience.Forthepast3yearsIhavereceivedcomprehensiveeducationincomputersciencewithapersonalinterestinsoftwareengineering④InadditiontotheacademicknowledgeIhavealsoparticipatedactivelyinvariousfieldpractices.NowIamoneofsixmembersonasoftwaredevelopmentteamwritingacomputeraidedprogramforourschool.⑤FurthermorebeingfullyawareoftileclosecorrelationbetweentheComputerScienceandthelanguageofEnglishIamquiteconfidentthatthelevelofmyEnglishlanguageproficiencywillmakemystudyinyouruniversityeasierandsmoother.Iwillbeveryhappytoprovideyouwithanyotherinformationyoumayneedoransweranyquestionsyoumayhave.⑥Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Thankyouforyourconsideration.SincerelyLiMingACoverLetterDearSir/Madam,①IknowfromyouradvertisementthatyouaregoingtoenrollsomeChinesestudentstopursuefurtherstudyinyouruniversity.②IamveryinterestedinitandIwillappreciateanopportunitytostudyinafamousuniversitylikeyours.③IamaseniorinQinghuaUniversity,workingtowardmybachelor'sdegreeinComputerScience.Forthepast3years,Ihavereceivedcomprehensiveeducationincomputerscience,withapersonalinterestinsoftwareengineering,④Inadditiontotheacademicknowledge,Ihavealsoparticipatedactivelyinvariousfieldpractices.NowIamoneofsixmembersonasoftwaredevelopmentteam,writingacomputeraidedprogramforourschool.⑤Furthermore,beingfullyawareoftileclosecorrelationbetweentheComputerScienceandthelanguageofEnglish,IamquiteconfidentthatthelevelofmyEnglishlanguageproficiencywillmakemystudyinyouruniversityeasierandsmoother.Iwillbeveryhappytoprovideyouwithanyotherinformationyoumayneed,oransweranyquestionsyoumayhave.⑥Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Sincerely,LiMing解析：①审题及布局。虽然不是求职，这篇作文也应该属于典型的自荐信，所以在格式上应该遵循自荐信的整体写作结构，结合题目所给的具体信息进行写作即可。第一段中要阐述你是如何得知该学校招收中国学生入校学习这个信息的。第二段中介绍个人信息，并阐明你对进入这个学校学习感兴趣的主要原因，同时应该尽量说明个人有足够的能力和水平来完成该学校的学习要求。第三段按照题目要求表示真诚地期待该学校的回复信息，同时要表示如果校方需要你更多的额外个人信息，你将非常愿意及时联系。最后对校方能够考虑你的申请表示感谢。②语言。本文是类似求职类的信件，所以语言上尽量要保持正规、准确；同时语言表达要真诚、可信。

4.OnGraduateManiaInrecentyearspeoplewhowouldliketogotograduateschoolbecamemoreandmore.ForonethingthousandsofenterprisingyoungmensitforNationalGraduateEntranceExameachyear.Forexample50thousandcandidatestookpartintheNationalGraduateEntranceExamlastyear.Foranothernotonlytheundergraduatesbutalsotheworkemployeestrytheirbesttobepostgraduates.Thereareseveralreasonswhichleadtothisphenomenon.TobeginwithitisbecauseofemploymentpressurethatlargenumbersofpeopleenrollintheNational'GraduateEntranceExam.Owingtoenhancementofeducationalstandardabachelor'sdegreeisnolongerevaluatedasasufficientqualificationtoensureadecentjob.Secondlysomepeoplethoughhavebeenemployedforseveralyearsfindtheirknowledgeinadequatetomeetthedemandofthisever-changingworld.Finallymanypeopleonlyfollowthesuitwithnospecificpurpose.Inmyopinionwehavetothinkcarefullybeforewedecidetoapplyforgraduateschool.CangraduateschooloffermewhatIwanttolearn?DoIneedpracticalworkexperienceortheoreticalknowledge?Beforewemakethechoicethesequestionsneedtobeanswered.OnGraduateManiaInrecentyears,peoplewhowouldliketogotograduateschoolbecamemoreandmore.Foronething,thousandsofenterprisingyoungmensitforNationalGraduateEntranceExameachyear.Forexample,50thousandcandidatestookpartintheNationalGraduateEntranceExamlastyear.Foranother,notonlytheundergraduatesbutalsotheworkemployeestrytheirbesttobepostgraduates.Thereareseveralreasonswhichleadtothisphenomenon.Tobeginwith,itisbecauseofemploymentpressurethatlargenumbersofpeopleenrollintheNational'GraduateEntranceExam.Owingtoenhancementofeducationalstandard,abachelor'sdegreeisnolongerevaluatedasasufficientqualificationtoensureadecentjob.Secondly,somepeople,thoughhavebeenemployedforseveralyears,findtheirknowledgeinadequatetomeetthedemandofthisever-changingworld.Finally,manypeopleonlyfollowthesuitwithnospecificpurpose.Inmyopinion,wehavetothinkcarefullybeforewedecidetoapplyforgraduateschool.CangraduateschooloffermewhatIwanttolearn?DoIneedpracticalworkexperienceortheoreticalknowledge?Beforewemakethechoicethesequestionsneedtobeanswered.

5.[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadayssuchasclimatechangeenvironmentalpollutionandecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationismanypeople[1]Wearefacedwithmoreandmoreenvironmentalproblemsnowadays,suchasclimatechange,environmentalpollution,andecologicalimbalance.Theseproblemswillultimatelydogreatharmtohumanbeings.Seriousasthesituationis,manypeople解析：本文标题是“沦环境保护的重要性”，所以尽管outline中提到环境恶化、很多人不注意环境保护等内容，但这些内容似乎都不应该作为重点，而只能是不可缺少的“引子”，作文论述的重点应该还是正面阐述“重要性”。

环境保护问题当然是“老生常谈”，但动笔具体写的时候，却让人为难，可能总是转不出“环境保护对人类的生存至关重要”这么一条理由。如何阐述理由，使这些理由相互关联却又截然不同，显得层次分明，是考生写作思路训练的重点。

Analysis

[1]第一段可以把outline中相应内容简要介绍一下。

[2]前一句中的让步结构(seriousasthesituationis)运用巧妙，而这一句就给出主题句。

[3][4]关于环保的重要性，能够给出什么理由呢?这里只列了两条：环保可以拯救地球——我们生存的家园；只有环保才能让我们拥有健康生存所需要的资源。理由只列两条时，可以使用foronething…foranother的套话引出。注意，这里的两条理由之间没有重复交叉。如果举出四五条理由，只不过分别说环保使我们得到干净的水、空气、土壤、粮食等等，虽然不算错，但内容上是重复的，说服力就不够。

[5]结尾段重复一遍主题是必要的，注意语言上要有变化。本文用到important，importance，significant和vital等不同的词表示“重要”，所以语言就富有变化。

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