2023学年完整公开课版TheChangesofMyHometown

TheChangesofMyHometownTenyearsago,houseswereveryshabbyinmyhometown.

Tenyearsago,thereweremanydirtyroadsandmuddyroads.Theywerenarrow.

Atpresent,therearemanybeautifulandbrighthousesinmyhometown.TherearemanyConcretepaths,AsphaltroadsandhighwaysWhichareverywide.

ChangesHousesRoadsWaterEducationMedicaltreatment(医疗）IncomeWorksLivingstandard（生活水平）

GroupworkWhyourhometownhavesomanychanges?

1.Hard-workingoffarmers2.Governmentpolicies(povertyalleviation脱贫攻坚）

假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom想要了解你家乡的变化，请以“TheChangesofMyHometown”为写一封介绍信。内容包括：1.十年前的家乡。2.现在的家乡。3.感受。（政府政策好）

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已你写好。DearTom,

P1.Howareyougoing?Itismygreathonourtointroduce....foryou.(head)

P2.Content(body)

P3.

Iamgladto

....,ButIthink

it’simportantto....,Thanksto....

I‘mlookingforwardtoyourreply.(foot)Yours,LiHua结构（三段式）、内容、语言（词→简单句→复合句、从句）

Frames

DearTom,

Howareyougoing?Itismygreathonourtointroducethechangesofmyhometownforyou.Inthepasttenyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourhometown.Tenyearsago,thereweremanydirtyroadsandmuddyroadswhichwerenarrow.If

youwantedtogosomewhere,youcoulduseyourfeet,bikeormotor.Sellingfarmproductswasadifficultthingforfarmers.Asaresult,

thedevelopmentofthecountrysidewaslimited.

Butnow,therearemanyConcretepaths,Asphaltroads,highways,Whichareverywide.whenpeoplewalkalongtheroads,theycanseePrivateCarshereandthere.Bysellingvegetables,fruits,crops.etc,farmers’incomeisincreasedandfarmers’livingstandardisimprovedtoo.

Iamgladto

seethesegreatchangesinmyhometown.ButIthink

it’simportantto

rememberthepastandcherishthepresentlife.Thankstogoodgovernmentpolicies,myhometownhavechangedandlivingstandardhavebeenimproved.Yours,LiHuaWritingaarticlewiththemethodhavebeenthaught.1.Thechangesofhouse（住房）2.Thechangesofmedicaltreatment(医疗）3.Thechangesofeducation（教育）Evaluatess'worksandmakeasummaryabouthowtowriteagoodcomposition.Enjoyashortfilmabouttargetedpovertyalleviation

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