读后续写-情绪描写课件【核心素养提升+备课精讲精研】高考英语复习

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Howishefeeling?

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.

1IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.读后续写情绪描写

(每一篇都能用！)“我开心

”3种

高级句式

2022年全国1卷

为例

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.

2

3

4Readyforrace

1IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.

2s

3au

4BeforetheraceIwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitated(犹豫)andthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4BeforetheraceIquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened."Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"heexplaineduncomfortably."Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide."

3

4BeforetheraceIbitbackmyfrustration(懊恼).Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4Davidhadabraindiseasewhichprevented(阻止)himfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger-that'sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.AsaspecialeducationteacherattheDavidfacedandwasschool,Iwasfamiliarwiththechallengesthechallengesproudofhisstrongdetermination(决心).e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

Paragraph1:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Iwouldpersuade(劝说）Davidtocontinuetherace.Daviddecidednottogiveuptheracee7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

Paragraph2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

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我开心：“Iamhappy.”(换主语)：“开心(的情绪)抓住了我”Delightseizedme.(加介短)：“一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我”Awaveofdelightseizedme.(加并列)：“开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我”Delightandexcitementseizedme.(加副词)：“即刻地，一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我”Instantly,astrongsenseofdelight

seizedme.(加时间状从)：“听到那好消息，一股开心(的情绪)即刻抓住了我”Instantly,astrongsenseofdelightseizedme

asIheardthegoodnews.

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1.无灵主语：

“情绪名词+固定动词+sb”+as/when

sbdosth当某人做某事时，一股xx情绪涌上心头。例句：Uncontrollably,awaveofregretwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.听到这个坏消息时，一股悔恨的情绪无法控制地涌上我心头。（情绪名词）：happiness/joy/delight开心gratitude/appreciation

感激admiration

钦佩/赞赏anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow悲伤fear/terror/fright/panic

害怕guilt/regret/remorse愧疚悔恨astonishment/shock/surprise

震惊nervousness/anxiety/stress不安/焦虑/压力（固定动词）：seize

抓住catch(过去式caught)strike(过去式

struck)surround围绕着takeholdof

控制washover让人感到comeover包围/支配envelop

笼罩overwhelm使难以承受+sb(蓝字为推荐使用词汇)e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

1.无灵主语：

“情绪名词+固定动词+sb”+as/when

sbdosth当某人做某事时，一股xx情绪涌上心头。例句：Uncontrollably,awaveofregret

washedovermeasIheardthebadnews.听到这个坏消息时，一股悔恨的情绪无法控制地涌上我心头。练习

1.当意识到如果没有恰当的鼓励，大卫的情况可能会变得更糟，我感到担忧和焦虑。WorryandanxietyseizedmeasIrealizedDavid'ssituationmightgetworsewithoutproperencouragement.2.当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时，我感到欣慰和开心。ReliefanddelightcameovermewhenDavidfinallybecamedeterminedto(madeuphismindto)continuetherace.e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

(感到xx和xx,某人做某事1，并做某事2)例句：Nervousandscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.

(感到)紧张和害怕，彼得勉力走上舞台，开始发表演讲。练习1：感到坚定和受到鼓舞，David抬起头，感激地看着我。Determinedandinspired(encouraged),Davidraisedhishead,lookingatmewithgratitude.练习2：(感到)放松的和快乐的，大卫在越过终点线后立刻向我挥手，表达他的快乐和感激。Relievedanddelighted,Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,conveying(showing)hishappinessandgratitude.2.非谓语：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sbdosth,doingsth.

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[情绪形容词]非谓语

·扩写叠加

大卫继续跑步：“Davidkeptonrunning.”(前加情绪形容词)：“大卫充满信心和决心，继续奔跑”Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning.(后加非谓语/分动作)：“大卫充满信心和决心，继续奔跑，奋力冲向终点线”Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,strugglingtoreachthefinishline.(managingtoreachthefinishline)(后加独立主格/五官)：“大卫自信而坚定，继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来”Confidentanddetermined,Davirdkeptonunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

尽管某人(感到)xx,某人仍做某事例句：Nervousashewas,Peterpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.尽管很紧张，彼得仍鼓起勇气走上舞台。练习1：尽管还有一丝紧张，David决心完成赛跑。Slightlynervousashewas,Davidbecamedeterminedtofinishtherace.练习2：[2022广州一模]尽管很着急和不情愿，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。Anxiousandreluctant(unwilling)asIwas,IstilldidthedishesatDad’srequest.3.让步状语从句：情绪形容词+assb+be动词,sb(still)dosth.

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Tears

wellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.Tears

streamingdown

hischeeks,Davidthankedmeforthetimelyencouragement.Eyes

filledwith

regretfultears,sbdosth...(眼里满含着...)Eyesglitteringwith

relief/joy,sbdosth...(眼里闪着...)Face

gleamingwith

delight,Peterfailedtoutteraword.(脸上洋溢着喜悦)Heart

beatingwith

happiness,sb...

(某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)其他部位：Arms/legs/muscles

achingandkneesshaking/trembling,Ididsth...(胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛，膝盖发抖/颤抖，我...)(划横线的情绪词，可按需换掉)4.独立主格：身体部位+动词非谓语，sbdosth.

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Tears

wellingupinsb’seyes/streamingdown

sb’scheeks,sbdosthEyesglitteringwith

relief/joy,sbdosth...(眼里闪着...)Face

gleamingwith

delight,Peterfailedtoutteraword.

(脸上洋溢着喜悦)Heart

beatingwith

happiness,sb...

(某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)4.独立主格：身体部位+动词非谓语，sbdosth.

练习1：[2022全国1卷]大卫自信而坚定，继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.练习2：让我们欣喜若狂的是，大卫顺利越过终点线，脸上洋溢着满足的喜悦。Toourecstasy,Davidcrossedthefinishlinesmoothly,hisfaceshiningwithsatisfieddelight.e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

①

无灵主语+时间状语从句：情绪名词+动词+sb+as/whensbdosth.

Uncontrollably,nervousnessoverwhelmedPeterashesteppedontothestage.②非谓语：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sbdosth,doingsth.Nervousandslightlyscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.③

让步状语从句：情绪形容词+assb+be动词,sbdosth.Nervousashewas,Davidpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.加在你的“sbdosth”前加在你的“sbdosth”前

句式总结

每

一

篇

续

写

都

能

用！长句e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

①

无灵主语②非谓语

③

让步状从+④

独立主格

句式杂糅

①+④:NervousnessenvelopingPeter,hewalkedtowardsthestage,hishandsshakingslightly.紧张笼罩在彼得心头，他走向舞台，双手微微颤抖。②+④:Nervousandslightlyscared,Peterwalkedtowardsthestage,hishandsshakingslightly.紧张，有点害怕，彼得勉力走上舞台，手微微颤抖。③+④:Nervousashewas,Peterwalkedtowardsthestage,hishandsshakingslightly.Peter虽然紧张，但还是走上舞台，他的手微微颤抖。一

键叠buff①无②非③让：位于句首④独立主格：位于句末三

段

式

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①

无灵主语+时间状从：(情绪名词+动词+sb)+(as/whensbdosth).

(独立长句)

(重)②

非谓语：情绪形容词1+,情绪形容词2,sbdosth,doingsth.

(加在句首)

(“浅写情绪”)③

让步状语从句：Adj.+as+sb+be动词,sbdosth.(加在句首)

(“浅写情绪”)⭐情绪描写-位置建议：续写首句

心理变化处

情节变化处结尾句(以上建议仅供参考，非绝对)

句式特点+全文位置建议“首尾+变化”e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

Paragraph1:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Paragraph2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Completethetwoparagraphswithwhatyoulearntinthisclass.Thankyouforyourattention!续写微作文（2021.徐州模拟）请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个正在等待与老友重逢以及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。（词数70左右，注意同义词替换，避免重复）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching.________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hint：timecluesWaiting:________________________________________Friendappearing:______________________________Finalmeeting:__________________________________Thankyouforyourattention!续写微作文（2021.徐州模拟）请根据所给情节，尝试续写一个正在等待与老友重逢以及终于等到老友的情节。侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。（词数70左右，注意同义词替换，避免重复）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching.________________

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Goldensunlightdancedinfloatedintheair.Shestaredattheendoftheroad,hopingherclosefriendwouldcomeearlier.Itseemedasifshehadbeenstandingthereforacentury.Suddenlyawaveofhappinessandexcitementseized/sweptoverherwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.Herheartleapedwithjoy,andashiningsmilelitupherface.Sherantoherfriendandthrewherselfintoherfriend'sarms.Tearsof

joy

/happiness

/excitementwelledupintheireyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether.Hint：timecluesWaiting:_________________________________________Friendappearing:______________________________________Finalmeeting:_______________________________________________e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路线)throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeo