高考英语作文分析与写作指点

高考英语作文分析与写作指点

篇一：高考英语作文范文集锦

北京各区高三期末英语作文

海淀区

第四部分：书面表达

第一节

假设你是红星中学高三班的班长李华,你们班的外教Lisa已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封邮件。邮件的内容包括：

1.询问她的近况；2.回顾在外教课上的收获；3.表达对她的感谢和祝福。

注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearLisa,

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Yours,

LiHua

Onepossibleversion

DearLisa,

HowhaveyoubeenYoumustbeenjoyingyourlifebackathome.Westillmissthedayswespenttogether.

Inthelastterm,weallbenefitedalotfromyourlessons.WeimprovedouroralEnglishandbecamemoreconfidenttoexpressourselves.Inaddition,welearnedsomuchaboutwesterncultureandtradition.

Onbehalfofmyclass,IwouldliketothankyouforteachingusEnglish!Wewishyoujoyandhappinessinthenewstageoflife!

Yours,

LiHua

第二节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“AvisittotheMuseumoftheAnti-JapaneseWar”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们班同学参观抗日战争纪念馆的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

二、内容要点：

1．到达；2．参观；3．听故事；4．合影。

Onepossibleversion

LastSaturday,ourclassvisitedtheMuseumoftheAnti-JapaneseWar.WhenourschoolbusarrivedattheMuseum,wegotoffandenteredinline.Themomentwewentintotheexhibitionroom,wewereattractedbythepicturesanddescriptionsaboutthewaronthewall.Somestudentstooknoteswhileothershadalittlediscussion.Wewereshockedatthecrueltyofthewar.Thenwegatheredinanotherroomandlistenedtoanoldsoldiertellingthestoriesaboutthewar.Therefore,wehadabetterunderstandingofthehistory.

Beforeweleft,weallcametothefrontofthemuseumandtookapicturewiththeoldsoldierinmemoryofourvisit.Wewereverygladtomeetsuchatruehero.Wehopebyvisitingthemuseummorepeoplecanrememberwhathappenedinthewarandtreasurethepeacefullife.

西城区

第四部分：书面表达(共两节，35分)

第一节

作为交换项目的一部分，学校将于本周五下午两点组织美国交换生到红星小学进行志愿者活动。假设你是校学生会主席，请向他们口头通知此事，内容包括：

1.集合时间、地点；2.活动内容；3.活动意义。注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

MayIhaveyourattention,please

That’sall.Thankyou.

Onepossibleversion:

MayIhaveyourattention,please

ThisFridayyouwillvisitHongXingPrimarySchoolasvolunteers,whichisaveryimportantpartoftheexchangeprogram.Theschoolbuswillpickyouupattheschoolgateat2ThistripaimstogivethekidsthereatasteofAmericanculture.Youmaypreparesomeminilecturesandteachthekidssomesimplebutbeautifulsongs.

Throughsharingyourculturewiththem,youwillknowmoreaboutthiscountryinreturn.Wewishyouallagoodtrip!

That’sall.Thankyou.

第二节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和家人在去年9月3日观看国庆阅兵活动的过程，并以“AnUnforgettableDay”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿。

注意：1.词数不少于60；2.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：阳台balcony朋友圈WeChatMoments

AnUnforgettableDay

OnSeptember3,amilitaryparadewasheldtocelebratethe70thanniversaryofthevictoryofWorldWarII.

二、内容要点：

1．等待观看2．观看阅兵3．阳台拍照4．分享感受

Onepossibleversion:

AnUnforgettableDay

OnSeptember3,amilitaryparadewasheldtocelebratethe70thanniversaryofthevictoryofWorldWarII.Tenminutesbeforethebigevent,weseatedourselvesinfrontoftheTV,eagertowatchthelivebroadcast.

Soontheparadestarted.SeeingthesoldiersandmilitaryequipmentproceedalongChang’anStreet,pastTian’anmenSquare,wecouldn’thelpcheeringandapplaudingforourpowerfulcountry.

Thentheroaringofmilitaryaircraftoverheadcaughtourattention.Werushedtothebalconyandtookphotosoftheplanesflyinginformation.Whatanimpressivescene!

Icouldn’twaittosharemypicturesandfeelingswithfriendsonWeChatMoments.Tomysurprise,WeChatwasalreadyfloodedwithnumerouspicturesandcommentsexpressingloveforourmotherland.Whatanunforgettableday!

东城区

第四部分：书面表达

第一节

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的外教写一封信，邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会活动，邮件的内容包括：

介绍读书活动的相关信息；

说明你发出邀请的原因；询问对方的意向。

注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearMr.Black,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

Onepossibleversion:

DearMr.Black,

I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinthereadingcircleinGrade3.ItwillbeheldinthelibrarynextMondayfrom3:30to5:00.WearegoingtoreadsomepopularEnglishstories.Couldyoucomeandgiveussomeguidance

Wearelookingforwardtoyourcoming.

Yours,

LiHua

篇二：新课标高考英语备考必背英语作文的框架及典型范例

考前必背英语作文的框架

★★★对比观点题型

要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1．有一些人认为……

2．另一些人认为……

3．我的看法……

Thetopicof①-----------------isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-----------------Whatismore,③-------------理由二).

Moreover,④---------------(理由三).

WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.

Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧----------------.Thereasonis

that⑨--------------------(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.

给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Somepeoplebelievethat①----------------.Forexample,they

think②-----------------．Anditwillbringthem③---------------(为他们带来的好处).

Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤---------(反对的理由之二)．

FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．

★★★阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．

１．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．

２．分析并举例使其更充实．

Thegoodoldproverb----------------remindsusthat----------------(释义).Indeed,wecanlearnmanythingsformit.

Firstofall,-----------------(理由一).Forexample,-------------------(举例说

明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Anothercaseisthat---------------(举例说明).Furthermore,------------------(理由三)．

Inmyopinion,----------------(我的观点).Inshort,whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesay------A.Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,you’llnecessarilybenefitalotfromit.

★★★解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

１．问题现状

２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceIproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,----------(举例进一步说明现状)

ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththeonething,---------------(解决方法一).Foranother-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).

Personally,Ibelievethat-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause--------------(带来的好处).

考前必背英语作文的框架

★★★说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度

１．说明事物现状

２．事物本身的优缺点

３．你对现状的看法

NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First----------------(Ａ的优点之一).Besides

-------------------.

Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．Tomakemattersworse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo---------------(我的看法)．

(FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeit

reasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,---------------(对前景的预测)．)

考前必背英语作文的框架

★★★议论文的框架

(1)不同观点列举型

目.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.

People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Some

ntheirpointofview,ontheonehand，isnodoubt二______.

2

3

adilyrising/decreasingfrom______in_______to______in_____.Fromthesharp/markeddecline/riseinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat________.

Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor______.Ontheonehand,________.Ontheotherhand,_______isduetothefactthat________.Inaddition,________isresponsiblefor_______.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow________.Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyconvincing.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat_______.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.

高考英语作文经典范文

一、与报社等讨论稿

middleschoolstudentscangotoschoolwithmobilephones.Ithinktheycandothat.Becausestudentscankeepintouchwiththeirfriendsandfamilywherevertheyare.Besides,themobilephoneisawaytohavefun.

However,everycoinhas2sides.Therearesomeproblemswithusingmobilephones.Theringofphonescandisturbteachersandstudentsintheclassroom.Anotherstudentsisthatsomestudentscanspendtoomuchtimeandmoneyonphonecallsandsendingmessages.

Inconclusion,Isuggeststudentsnotusephonesintheclassroom.Also,asitisexpensive,theownershouldtakegoodcareofit.

二、看对照表格写调查

Asurveyistakenonpublicopinionsofthefactthatmanyparentsspendalargeamountofmoneysendingtheirchildrentostudyabroad,someofwhomaremiddleschoolstudents.

Fromitwecanseethat38percentofthosesurveyedthinkitisworththemoneylettingchildrenstudyabroadtogetabettereducationsothattheycangetpayinreturninthefuture.However,notallareforit/someareagainstit.62%ofthemholdtheviewthatitisdifficultforyoungpeopletoliveandstudyinaforeigncountry.It’seasyforthemtofall/getintosomebadhabitsandthecostofeducationinanothercountryistentimesasmuchasthatathome.

Thesurveyshowsthatthegovernmentshouldsetupdifferentkindsofschoolstomeetthedemandsofdifferentchildren.

三、读柱状图表写调查

Middleschoolstudentshavesomeideasabouttheirfuturejobs.

Themoststrikingcontrastisinteaching:30percentofthegirlswouldliketobecometeacherswhileonly5percentoftheboyswanttodothejob.20percentoftheboyswanttodobusinessandanother20percentwanttobecomelawyers,whilegirlsmakeup15percentinthesetwofields.4

Whatboysliketodomostistobecomemanagersandthesecondlargestgroupwouldliketobescientists.Besidesteaching,thesecondchoiceforgirlsistobescientistsandmanagers.Thenumberisnotsmall.Girlsalsoexpecttoshowtheirabilitiesinthesetwofields.

四、写信

Ioncehadaveryhappyfamily,buteverythinghas

changedbecauseofmyfather.

Heusedtobeaverygooddoctorandwasoftenpraisedbyhispatients.Hetookgoodcareofthefamilyandsharedthe

houseworkwithmymothereveryday.

However,heisnowquiteadifferentperson.Heplaysmahjongallnightandoftenquarrelswithmymother.Ijustcan’tconcentrateonmystudiesandmygradesarecomingdown.I’mverymuchworriedandI’mafraiditwilldestroymyfamilyaswellasmyfather

五、图画+个人想法

Onedayduringthesummerholidays,ImetmyclassmateLiMing,whosenicknameisTaotaopi.Wechattedforawhileaswewalked.Iaskedhimwherehewouldgoduringtheholidays.Herepliedthathehadtostayathomestudying.ThenI’dliketoknowwhyhedidn’tgooutforatour.Muchtomysurprise,hetoldmethatitwasjustbecausehefailedtobeacceptedbykeyuniversities.

Inmyopinion/Personally/Ithink,travelingduringtheholidaysnotonlyincreaseastudent’sknowledgeofhisorhermotherlandbutalsomakeslifemeaningful.What’smore,atthepresenttime,westudentsaresufferingalotbothathomeandschool.Whynotgoouttogetrelaxed.

六、幽默画

Wewantourschoolbagslighter

Thepictureshowsusaschoolboyandabigwoman.Theboyiswearingapairofglassesandcarryingabigheavybag.Thewomanistakingsomeexercise.Theboyissayingtothewomanjokingly:“Mum,ifyoucarrytheschoolbagforme,I’msureyouwilleasilyloseweight….”

It’squitecommonthatChinesestudentsareoverburdenedwiththelessonsandhomework.Whatwedoeverydayistolistentotheteachers’lectures,takenotesanddoourhomeworkwhichseemsendless.

Wedohopeourteacherswillhelpusgetmoreknowledgewithfewerlectures,exercisesandlesshomework.Onlyinthiswaycanwehavetimetodosportseveryday.Thenwewillbementallyandphysicallyhealthy.

七、补全图画

YesterdayafternoonIwenttothepark.ItsohappenedthatIsawatouchingevent.

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篇三：2016高考英语写作考前冲刺卷(答案版)

一、满分范文熟读

好题展示

某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加；请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：1.该谚语的含义；2．体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

①Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.②Wherethere'sawill,there'saway.

注意：

1.词数120--150；

2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇：谚语proverb佳作熟读

①使用定语从句，提升了文章的档次。②but后的分句用了部分否定，使整个句子表达的意思恰到好处。③使用了非常复杂的句式。means后是一个that引导的宾语从句；宾语从句又是一个复合句，其中主句为祈使句nevergiveup，if引导条件状语从句，nomatterhow引导让步状语从句。④使用形容词比较级。⑤这个复合句中使用了几个高级词语：confront，enormous和perseverance，足见作者深厚的语言功底。⑥that引导的宾’语从句中又含有一个aslongas引导的条件状语从句。语言积累

1.beresolvedtodosth.决心做某事

好例：Hewasresolvedtodowellintheexamination.他下定决心要在考试中取得好成绩。

2.sb.isconfrontedwithsth./sthconfrontssb.某人面临某种困难

好例：Thenewsystemwasconfrontedwithgreat

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写作攻略

提示类开放作文只提供一个话题或一段提示语，要求考生就所提供的内容展开想象，并按照要求完成写作任务。所涉及的话题包括日常学习和生活的各方面。近几年有很多地区的高考英语书面表达是提示类的开放作文。此类作文不仅考查考生英语书面表达的基本功，也考查考生的观察力、想象力、判断力和思维能力等。行文方式一般为夹叙夹议，先陈述某一现象，继而展开议论，发表自己的观点。写作的关键是立意明确，选材适当，符合试题要求。满分模板

满分技巧

如果作文是围绕某个谚语警句进行的，则就要求大家联系客观实际来谈谈符合普遍价值观的理解。一般讲来。我们可以从下面三段着手进行写作：①介绍该名言警句②举例说明启示③阐述本人理解。夺人眼球篇首句

1．Iwilltreasuremytime，enjoymylifeandtrymybesttodoeverythingwell.

2．Wewillhavetolearntocopewithanypossibledifficulty.

3．Asmoreandmorepeople...，muchattentionshouldbeplacedon...

随着越来越多的人，应更多关注.....韵味无穷结尾句

1.Ifsuchmeasureswerenottaken,theproblemof...wouldhavebeenmoreserious.

2.Onlyinthiswaycanwehopetohavehealthydevelopmentbothphysicallyandmentally.

3.Inmypointofview,weshouldbefullyawareofourstrengthsandweaknessesandneverblindlyadmireothers,asnooneisperfect.

difficultiesatthebeginning.这项新制度刚开始就遇到了很大的困难。

二、满分模板巧用

三、话题素材积累话题总结与结论必背词汇

提分句型

1．Inshort,itcanbesaidthathealthismoreimportantthanwealth．

2．Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows.

3.Fromwhathasbeenmentioned／saidabove,wecancometotheconclusionthatonlybyworkinghardcanoneachievesuccess．

4.Inconclusion,weshouldliketothankallthosewhohaveworkedsohardtobringaboutthisresult.5．Toconclude／Tosumup,Ithinkhavingaverycloserelationshipwithapetishealthy．

6.Theresultsseemtosuggestthatteenagersaremoreeasilyaddictedtocomputergames．7．Altogether,honestyisthebestpolicy．

8．Nowwecansafelydrawaconclusionthatattitudedetermineseverythingand;detailsmakeadifference．

9．Itissafetosaythatoursuccessdependsinourdeterminationandperseverance．

亮点临摹

1．从以上所说，我们可以肯定地得出结论，失败和成功同样重要。Fromwhathasbeensaidabove,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthatfailureisequallyimportantassuccess.

2．总而言之，每个懈决方法都有其优缺点。Inshort,eachsolutionhasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.3．总的来说，出国留学舶好处远远大于坏处。Tosumup,theadvantagesofstudyingabroadoutweighitsdisadvantagesgreatly.

4．总而言之，旅游是为新的挑战做好准备的最好选择。Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetogetreadyforthenewchallenges.

四、自我提升空间

一、高级表达

1．运用名词性从句升级句子

Heoftencomeslateandthatmakeshisteacherangry．

→Thatheoftencomeslatemakeshisteacherangry．2．运用定语从句升级句子

Theregulationforcedbadly-behavedstudentstoweargreenscarves，anditraisedastormofobjections．

→Theregulationforcedbadly-behavedstudentstoweargreenscarves，whichraisedastormofobjections．

3．运用状语从句升级句子

Iwon'tbelievewhathesays．

→Nomatterwhathesays，Iwon'tbelieve．4，运用倒装句升级句子

ProfessorWhite,ProfessorSmithandmanyotherguestswerepresentatthemeeting．

→PresentatthemeetingwereProfessorWhite,ProfessorSmithandmanyotherguests．二、提分句型

1.Whenitcomesto...当谈到，说到或涉及......

Heisamanoffewwords，butwhenitcomestoplayingcomputergames,hewillbeverytalkative．2．Thereisnoneedforsbtodosth．对某人来说没必要做某事

Thereisnoneedformetopraiseit.Itspeaksforitself.无需我来称赞，那是不言自明的。

3．Thereis(no)difficulty／trouble／point／delay(in)doing...

做某事没困难／没意义／毫无耽搁

Ifwehavefinishedourwork,thereisnopointinstayinganylonger;wemayaswellgohome.三、佳句临摹

佳句1：Butforsomereason,noteveryoneintheteamisequallyacceptedandvalued.

临摹1：由于某种原因，并非他所有的朋友都投票支持他。Forsomereason,notallhisfriendsvotedforhim.

佳句2：Neverdidheshowinterestindiscussionsorafter-classactivities;nordidheeverraisehishandtoaskoranswerquestions.临摹2：他从来都不做作业，也不参加任何考试。

Neverdidhedohishomework,nordidhetakeanyexam.

佳句3：So,nevergetusedtobeingignored.Ifignored,workhardtomakeyourselfstandout.临摹3：任何习惯于被忽视的人都会失去自尊。

Whoevergetsusedtobeingignoredwillloseself-respect.

五、好题作文感悟

请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。Beingignoredinateamisacourseoffrustrating,butwhatreallymattersisnotbeingignoredbyothersbutbeingusedtobeingignored.

注意：1.无需写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；2.除诗歌外，文体不限；3.文中不得透霹个人姓名和学校名称；4.词数为120左右。

六、热门话题猜想

Writing1不试不知道

Direction：WriteanEnglishcompositionaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelow．

Youneverknowwhatyoucantillyoutry.请你根据这句话来记叙生活中发生的一件事；并谈谈你对这句谚语的理解。注意：1.不能写出自己的真实姓名和学校；2.不要写标题；3.词数不少于120。(请参考“话题八学校生活”，“话题九活动与事件”)

Iamashygirl,butIreallylikesingingandamindeedgoodatit,whichofcourseisonlyknownbymyself.

Lastmonth,therewasasingingcompetitioninourschool,aimingtopickoutthebestsingersofthecampus.Ithoughtitmightbeagoodchanceformetoshowmyself.However,IwassoshythatIevendidn'thavethecouragetoapplyforthechancebecauseIwassoafraidtosinginfrontofmyfamiliarschoolmates.MaybetheywouldlaughatmeorlookdownuponmeifIlostthecompetitionorbehavedbadly.Atthattime,mybestfr