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ContinuationWritingYourstoryshouldbelogical,reasonable,creativeandpowerful.读后续写Lackinnerthoughtsandfeelings①Hedecidedtovisitthefamily.②Buttheshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.①Hedecidedtovisitthefamily.___________________________________,hedecidedtovisitthefamily.___________________________________,hedecidedtovisitthefamily.feeling?curiousregretfulguiltyFeelingregretful/guilty

/curiousDrivenbyasenseofregret/guilt/curiosityOutof/Consumedwith/Overwhelmedbyregret/guilt/curiosity②Buttheshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.But,_______________________________,thepoorfamilywasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.tohisgreatsurprise/astonishmentDrivenbyasenseofregret,hedecidedtovisitthefamily.But,tohisgreatsurprise,theshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.feeling?surprisedastonishedconfusedButtheshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse,____________________________.whichmadehimconfusedHethoughtthefamilymightdie.Suddenly,amancameout.TheMonkrecognizedhim.Itwasthefatherofthefamily.Soheasked,“Haveyoulivedhere?”LackdetailedplotsThinkingtheymighthavestarvedtodeathforhisfault,hesighedwithguilt.Suddenly,amancameoutofthesplendidhouse.TheMonkrecognizedhim.Itwasthefatherofthefamily.Hecameuptohimandasked,“Haveyoulivedhere?”TheMonkrecognizedhim__________________________.__________________,hecameuptohimandasked____________________,“Haveyoulivedhere?”LackadverbsoradverbialphrasesThinkingtheymighthavestarvedtodeathforhisfault,hesighedwithguilt.Suddenly,amancameoutofthesplendidhouse.TheMonkrecognizedhim.Itwasthefatherofthefamily.Hecameuptohimandasked,“Haveyoulivedhere?”Withouthesitationimmediately/directly/instantlyeagerly/curiouslyLuckily,we________________________gotridofpoverty.finally/eventually/ultimately

Amazedatitsgooddecoration,theMonksaid,“Howcouldithappen?”Themanhearditandsaid,“Weusedtoliveoffacow,whokeptusalive.Butonedaythecowfelldownthecliffanddied.Sowehadtostruggletosurvive.Luckily,wegotridofpoverty.”LackaccurateanddiverseverbsBrainstorming:words/phrasesrelatedto“say”tellspeakwhisperexplaintalkannouncereplyrespondshoutscreamstatedeclareroarmurmurmutterAmazedatitsgooddecoration,theMonk____________,“Howcouldithappen?”Hearingit,theman__________,“Weusedto…….”explainedmurmuredOneday,theBrother,whohadbecomeaMonk,foundhimselfonthesameroadwherehefoundaccommodationyearsago.Drivenbyasenseofregret,hedecidedtovisitthefamily.But,tohisgreatsurprise,theshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.Thinkingtheymighthavestarvedtodeathforhisfault,hesighedwithguilt.Suddenly,amancameoutofthesplendidhouse.TheMonkrecognizedhimimmediately.Itwasthefatherofthefamily.Withouthesitation,hecameuptohimandaskedcuriously,“Haveyoulivedhere?”

“Wehavealwayslivedhere.”themanansweredandthenheinvitedtheMonkintotheirsplendidhouse.

Amazedatitsgooddecoration,theMonkmurmured,“Howcouldithappen?”Hearingit,themanexplained,“Weusedtoliveoffacow,whokeptusalive.Butonedaythecowfelldownthecliffanddied.Sowehadtostruggletosurvive.Luckily,weultimatelygotridofpoverty.”Lackimpliedmorals①Hearingthat,theMonkeventuallyunderstoodwhythewiseMonkorderedhimtopushthecowoffthecliff.②Miserymakespeoplechange.③Indeed,desperationsometimescaninspirepeopletobebetter.④Itdawnedonhim,theformerBrother,thatwhatthewiseMonkdidservedasanencouragementtohelpthemsurviveandseekafterabetterlife.⑤OnlythendidtheMonkunderstandtheintentionofthewiseMonk.Oneinhiscomfortzonewouldneverpreparefortomorrow,whileoneindesperationwouldspareallhiseffortstopullthroughit.Oneday,theBrother,whohadbecomeaMonk,foundhimselfonthesameroadwherehefoundaccommodationyearsago.Drivenbyasenseofregret,hedecidedtovisitthefamily.But,tohisgreatsurprise,theshabbycottage

wasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.Thinkingtheymighthavestarvedtodeathforhisfault,hesighedwithguilt.Suddenly,amancameoutofthesplendidhouse.TheMonkrecognizedhimimmediately.Itwasthefatherofthefamily.Withouthesitation,hecameuptohimandaskedcuriously,“Haveyoulivedhere?”

“Wehavealwayslivedhere.”themanansweredandthenheinvitedtheMonkintotheirsplendidhouse.

Amazedatitsgooddecoration,theMonkmurmured,“Howcouldithappen?”Hearingit,themanexplained,“Weusedtoliveoffacow,whokeptusalive.Butonedaythecowfelldownthecliffanddied.Sowehadtostruggletosurvive.Luckily,weultimatelygotridofpoverty.”OnlythendidtheMonkunderstandtheintentionofthewiseMonk.Oneinhiscomfortzonewouldneverpreparefortomorrow,whileoneindesperationwouldspareallhiseffortstopu