高中英语-A Letter For Advice教学课件设计

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Tobeabetterman!-----ALetterforAdviceLearningaims学习目标：复习并运用有关健康生活及吸烟的词汇。掌握建议信的写作特点,灵活运用建议信常用句型，写出结构完整的建议信。强化小组合作写作策略和意识。养成修改作文的习惯。Focusesanddifficulties重难点：积累词汇、功能句，清晰地表达自己的建议。MybestfriendAlice

~~~闺中蜜TommyandhisfamilySchoolisover!Gohome!Tommydesiresforayoungersisterorbrother!!Alice’swords:Myhusband(Edward)hasbeenaddictedtosmokingforalongtime.HeevenofferedmecigarettesandIfeelsoannoyed.TommyandIreallydonotlikeitandItoldhimwhatwethought.SometimesIfeelthatheshowstheintentiontogiveupsmokingbutisn’tabletokeepon.Idon’twanttostartsmoking,andIdon’twanttoquarrelwithmyhusband,either.Alice之烦恼------导出话题Myhusband(Edward)hasbeenaddictedtosmokingforalongtime.HeevenofferedmecigarettesandIfeelsoannoyed.TommyandIreallydonotlikeitandItoldhimwhatwethought.SometimesIfeelthatheshowstheintentiontogiveupsmokingbutisn’tabletokeepon.Idon’twanttostartsmoking,andIdon’twanttoquarrelwithmyhusband,either.Pre-writing分析文本

审题立意Alice’stroubleShedoesn’tlikeitthatherhusbandsmokes.Shedoesn’twanttoquarrelwithherhusband.

Sheisinadilemmaandneedshelp.

Alice之烦恼HowtopersuadehimtoquitsmokingHowtorefuseandimprovetherelationshipwithherhusbandSuggestionsMakeitclearthatyou’llneverbeasmoker.Talkwithhimseriouslyandsincerely.Trytodevelopsomehobbiestogether.AttitudeSomethingincommonTheartoftalkingTellhimmoreharmfuleffects.Encouragemore.Whatharmfuleffectsdoessmokinghaveonus?lookingolderanduglierDogreatharmtoyourlungs.Theharmfuleffectsofsmokingheart&

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pregnancyAffectnon-smokersTerriblesmellYellowfingersNotenjoysportsAsfortherelationshipHewillunderstandandappreciateyourhelpifhereallycaresaboutyou.Usefulsentencepatterns提建议的句型1Inmyopinion,you/’dbetter...2Whynot…3Itwillbeagoodideato…4Itiswiseofyouto…5…isalsoagoodidea.6IfIwereyou,Iwould……7Ithinkitwouldbeusefulifyoucould……谋篇布局，运筹帷幄Howtodeveloptheletter?凤头巧扮豹尾劲甩Beginning凤头开门见山，紧扣题意Body猪肚要点全面，句式词汇丰富Ending豹尾结尾简短，呼应主题谋篇布局，运筹帷幄Beginning凤头巧扮1.问题呈现，表达同情2.简述写信目的I’msorrytohear/knowthat...Youaskedmefortheadviceon……………Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Herearesomesuggestions/tips.I’mwritingto………………Ending豹尾劲甩表达意愿2.寄予希望Hopethatmysuggestionscanbeuseful.Ihopeyouwillfindtheadviceuseful.Isincerelyhopethatmyadvicecanbeofsomehelp..……………I’msureyoucan…Aftertakingtheseactions,Ithinkyoumay……………谋篇布局，运筹帷幄Addsomesaladto

yourhamburger!Makefulluseofthetransitionalwords过渡词first,second,third…besides,what’smore,inaddition,moreover…inaword,inshort,onthewhole,inconclusion,allinall…列举，层层递进2.概括归纳Showtime优秀及格

较差文章结构(structure)结构合理，分段明确5分结构合理，无分段3分结构紊乱，无分段1分内容要点(keypoint)要点齐全7分要点基本齐全3分要点较少1分运用相关话题词汇，句式五处以上7分三处以上3分一处以上1分

语法(grammar)错误两个以内3分错误四个以内2分错误较多1分卷面书写(handwriting)卷面整洁，书写优美3分卷面较整洁，书写较优美2分卷面混乱，书写潦草1分评价量规（满分25分）DearAlice,Iamsorrytohearthatyouareinsuchadifficultsituation.Inmyopinion,thereisnoneedforyoutofeelannoyed.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.OnePossibleVersionFirst,you’dbettertellhimtheharmfuleffectsofsmoking.Forexample,smokingdoesgreatharmtohishealthandmoreimportantly,hemaynotbeabletoenjoysport.Second,whynothelphimquitsmoking?Whenhefeelslikesmokingagain,youcantakehimtogoforawalkordosomerelaxationexercisetogether.

Inotherwords,itisabetterideatodevelopotherhabitswithhimtogether.What’smore,it’swiseofyoutotalktohimandtellhimyoudowanttoimprovetherelationship.

Ihopethesesuggestionscanbeofgreathelp.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yourssincerely,XX优秀及格

较差文章结构(structure)结构合理，分段明确5分结构合理，无分段3分结构紊乱，无分段1分内容要点(keypoint)要点齐全7分要点基本齐全3分要点较少1分运用相关话题词汇，句式五处以上7分三处以上3分一处以上1分

语法(grammar)错误两个以内3分错误四个以内2分错误较多1分卷面书写(handwriting)卷面整洁，书写优美3分卷面较整洁，书写较优美2分卷面混乱，书写潦草1分评价量规（满分25分）Howcanyoumakeyourwritingbetter?

clearstructure清晰明朗的结构