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作文一：Volunteerworkisnecessary

郭昕硕

河北省衡水市衡水中学高三3班

ThereisnodoubtthatvolunteerworkinChinahasbeenbroughtintofocusthroughouttheworld.Wepresentedsomuchlastyear,whichindeedgavetheworldabigsurprise.Ourspirits,ourmerits,everythingweshowedduringthegrandgatheringandthedisasterprovedthatvolunteerworkisnecessary.

AsfarasIamconcerned.Theworkofhelpingotherswithoutpaymentcanbeofgreatbenefitforindividuals.Apartfromtheexperience,theprogresswemakeduringtheprocessisenough.Timepermitting,wecantakemoreresponsibilityoutsidetheschoolandgainthepleasure.

Everyonebuildsoursociety.Withtheeconomicaldevelopment,wearenolongerworryaboutouressentialneedsinourlife.Therefore,tosparemoretimeandtogiveothersahelpinghandcanjustbetherightchoice.Onlybythismeanscanwegettoknoweachotherbetterandmakecontributionstooursociety.

Moreover,itiscertainthattherearestillsomanydevelopingcountriesallovertheworld.FromEthiopiatoDPRK,toomanypeopleareinbadlydemandofhelp.Ourgerosityandwarthmeansalot.Furthermore,organizationofallkindsaboutvolunteerworkwillsurelyacceleratetheprocess.

Takingtheabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration.Raisingourowarenessandbehelpfulcandefinitelybesonecessary.Theconnectionbetweenusmustbepermanentwithoureffortsofvolunteerwork.Thereforevolunteerworkisnotonlyapoliticalworld,butalivelyworkrelatedtoyouandme.Soitstandstoreasonthatvolunteerworkisnecessary.

专家建议：

建议作者多阅读整篇的英语文章，增强自己的“篇章感”,因为在该篇文章中存在的问题主要是段落见缺乏紧密联系，所以造成各段之间的孤立感的形成，建议作者以后写作时注意段落间的合理过渡。

专家点评：

整体结构很好，尤其第一段开门见山的明确了文章的主题，给读者非常好的第一印象。唯一不足的是第三段与上文的衔接很生硬，并且没有段落主题句，会影响文章整体的逻辑感。另外，有个别句子出现表意不明的现象，单词拼写也存在问题，所以希望以后写作时注意细节。

作文二：Volunteerwork:anuniquelesson

刁文卿

辽宁省大连市大连市第十二中学高二9班

Withtherapiddevelopmentoftechndogy（technology）andcommunicationinoursociety,thesenseofcompetitivenessandcooperationfilledourmindsteadily.Atthesametime,theowarness（awareness）ofhelpingothersinpeople'smindalsobecamestrongerandstronger.Thissituationledtothestartofanew“job”―volunteer.

Wejustfoundfromthepassagethattheincreasingnumberofthevdunteer（volunteer）touchedallthepeoplehomeandabroad.AndIarguethepointthatvolunteerworkplaysanintegralpartinourdailylifeespeciallyfortheyouthinChina.

Firstandforemest（foremost），nowadays,parentscanonlyhaveonechildandheorshemaybegiventhebestcareoftheothermembersinthefamily.Asaconsequence,theonlyclild（child）maybecomeselfishandself-centeredunconciously（unconsciously）。

Thevolunteerwork,asaspeciallessonscanhelptheyoungsterputtheotherpeople'sfeelingbeforetheirsandaskfortheiropinionbeforetakingactions.Secondvolunreer（volunteer）workisnotonlyatrainingofdoothersafavourbutaprocessofimprovingyourcooperationabilityaswell.

Lastbutnotleast,volunteerworkisanuniquelessonthatwecant（cannot）getinourschool.FormerleaderJiangzeminsaid:themaingoalineducationismakingstudentsmorecreativeandhelpingthemreachtheirfullpotential.Andinmypoirt（point）view,itisvolunteerworkwhichcanhelpthemreachtheirfullpotentialbutnotourschoollessons.Thiskindofpraticalpractisecanmakeusknowmoreaboutwhatisgoingoninoursocietyandintheworld,forinstance,theMay12earthquakeinwenchuanandthewonderful20XXBeijingOlympicGameandsoon.

Alltheevidencediscussedintheaboveawalysisthepointstomyconclusionthatvolunteerworkisanuniquelessonforourteenagersasitmakeusknowmore.domoreandthinkmore.AndIbelievethattheaccumulationofvolunteerwillrisingrapilyanditwillleadourcountrytoabrighterfuture.

专家建议：

写完作文后，自己通读一遍，这样会减少些不必要的拼写和语法错误，建议多学过的词组造句，这样表达会更丰富，也可以多看些优秀范文。

专家点评：

文章表达清楚，语言较好，但结构有些不清晰，第二点在文章中没有展开说。时态用的有些混乱。总体不错。

作文三：VolunteerLife

代昱丞

辽宁省本溪市高级中学高二15班

Asweknow,“volunteer”isakindof“work”thatyouoffertodoit,andalso,itisforfree.

Fromschoolstoshops,fromOlympicstoworldwars,volunteersareeverywhere.AndtoChinesepeople,lastyearisanimpresive（impressive）yearbecauseofvolunteers.InMay12earthquakeandthe20XXBeijingOlympicGams,volunteersplayedareallyimportantrole.TheytouchedeveryChinese'sheart,includingme.

Idon'tusuallyhavechancestodovolunteer'swork,butIhavesomecreativeideasaboutit.Inmyopinion,helpingothersisakindofvolunteeranditisimportanttoourlives.Wecan'tbecomeavolunteerinpoorruralarea,butwecanhelpclassmatessowe（solve）amathproblem;wecan'tjointheOlympics,butwecantakepartinasportsmeetinginschoolanddevelopethespiritof“higher,faster,stronger”inotherways;wecan'tgotoWenchuan,butwecansendour“gifts”there.Infact,wearevolunteeringeverydayandeverywhere,butweignoreitsometimes.

Volunteerisnotasimplematteraboutyourself,italsohasgreatinfluencetoyourlife,yourfamily,eventheworld.Iftherearenotvolunteersanymore,everyoneisselfishandvain,theworldwillbealonelyplace.Volunteercanbringpeoplewarmandkindfeelingsandhelpimproveyourpersonality.Whenyouarevolunteering,you'llfindthebeautyoftheworldandlifeandyoureallyfeelandtouchsomehardexperience,itisabletoleadyoutotreatyourfamily,yourlife,yourfridends（friends）morepreviously.Mydadoncetoldmeastory:atthetimeofBeijingOlympicGamesoneyear'sflashback,somevolunteerssaidthat