高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿5

学必求其心得，业必贵于专精学必求其心得，业必贵于专精学必求其心得，业必贵于专精高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿5请仔细观察以下六幅图,用英语描述其内容，并就图中教师的做法提出你的看法注意:1.第一幅图的内容已给出.2。字数120左右3。签名signatureMaXiaohuwasverycarelessandoftenmademistakesinhishomework，whichmadehisteacherveryangry.OnedayhisteacherhadXiaohuaskhisfather,MaDahua，tosignhisnameinhisexercisebook。第一步：看图提炼要点第一幅图的内容试题中已经给出第二幅图：儿子在回家路上的想法:怕被父亲惩罚/打第三幅图：儿子蒙上眼睛写字第四幅图：父亲也蒙上眼睛写字第五幅图：儿子乘机让父亲签名第六幅图：在父亲取下蒙眼布前，儿子将本子放进书包第二步：简单翻译要点第二幅图：Onhiswayhome，Xiaohuthoughthewouldbebeaten/punishedagainbyhisfather.第三幅图：Xiaohucoveredhiseyeswithapieceofclothandkeptwritingsomething.第四幅图：Hisfatheralsocoveredhiseyeswithapieceofclothandwrotesomething.第五幅图：Xiaohuseizedtheopportunitytoputhisexercisebookunderhisfather'spenandgothisfather’ssignature.第六幅图:Beforehisfathertookoffthecloth,Xiaohuhadalreadyputtheexercisebookbackintohisschoolbag.第三步:增加要点，使文章逻辑上连贯要多问几个什么、为什么、怎么样或怎么办怕被父亲惩罚/打，心情怎么样：比如焦虑、担心、紧张等怎么办：想出好主意;儿子蒙上眼睛不停地写什么字:结合图画内容可以推断是在写自己的名字(为下文得到父亲的签名做铺垫);父亲为什么也蒙上眼睛写他的名字：按常理应该是儿子请他这样做的第四步：柔进这些要点,并注意合并要点Onhiswayhome，thinkinghewouldbebeatenagainbyhisfather，Xiaohufeltworried.Suddenlyagoodideaoccurredtohim。Assoonashegothome,hecoveredhiseyeswithapieceofclothandkeptwritingtheword”MaXiaohu”onapieceofpaper.Heaskedhisfatherwhetherhecoulddoitashewasdoing。Hisfatherdidso.Seeingthis，Xiaohuseizedtheopportunitytoputhisexercisebookunderhisfather’spenandgothisfather’ssignature。Beforehisfathertookoffthecloth，Xiaohuhadalreadyputtheexercisebookbackintohisschoolbag。第五步:简单阐述自己的看法（要一分为二看待这个问题）Idon'tthinktheteacheristoblamebecausehehadwantedtoletXiaohu’sfatherknowsomethingabouthisson’sstudyatschoolinordertogetXiaohu’sparents’supportineducatingtheirchild,butXiaohu’splayingthetrickwasnotwhattheteacherhadexpected。SoIsuggestthattheteachergohometogetherwithXiaohunexttimetocommunicateface-to—facewithhisparents。形成以下书面表达MaXiaohuwasverycarelessandoftenmademistakesinhishomework,whichmadehisteacherveryangry。OnedayhisteacherhadXiaohuaskhisfather，MaDahua,tosignhisnameinhisexercisebook.Onhiswayhome,thinkinghewouldbebeatenagainbyhisfather，Xiaohufeltworried.Suddenlyagoodideaoccurredtohim。Assoonashegothome，hecoveredhiseyeswithapieceofclothandkeptwritingtheword”MaXiaohu”onapieceofpaper.Heaskedhisfatherwhetherhecoulddoitashewasdoing.Hisfatherdidso。Seeingthis，Xiaohuseizedtheopportunitytoputhisexercisebookunderhisfather’spenandgothisfather’ssignature。Beforehisfathertookoffthecloth，Xiaohuhadalreadyputtheexercisebookbackintohisschoolbag。Idon'tthinktheteacheristoblamebecausehehadwantedtoletXiaohu’sfatherknowsomethingabouthisson’sstudyatschoolinordertogetXiaohu'sparents’supportineducatingtheirchild，butXiaohu'splayingthetrickwasnotwhattheteacherhadexpected。SoIsuggestthattheteachergohometogetherwithXiaohunexttimetocommunicateface-to-facewithhisparents。参考答案MaXiaohuwasverycarelessandoftenmademistakesinhishomework,whichmadehisteacherveryangry.OnedayhisteacherhadXiaohuaskhisfather,MaDahua,tosignhisnameinhisexercisebook.Onhiswayhome,thinkinghewouldbebeaten/punishedagainbyhisfather，Xiaohufeltveryworried.Suddenlyagoodideaoccurredtohim.Assoonashegothome,hecoveredhiseyeswithapieceofclothandkeptwritingtheword”MaXiaohu”onapieceofpaper.Heaskedhisfatherwhetherhecoulddoitashewasdoing。Hisfatherdidso.seeingthis，Xiaohuhurriedlyputhisexercisebookunderhisfather'spenandgothissignature。Whenhisfathertookoffthecloth，Xiaohuhadalreadyputtheexercisebookbackintohisschoolbag.Ithink…附学生考场习作一篇（原文）MaXiaohuwasverycarelessandoftenmademistakesinhishomework,whichmadehisteacherveryangry.OnedayhisteacherhadXiaohuaskhisfather，MaDahua，tosignhisnameinhisexercisebook.Xiaohuwasafraidthathisfatherwouldpunishhim。Suddenly,anideaoccurredtohim。Whenhewenthome,hepretendedtopracticewritinghisnamewithhiseyescoveredbyapieceofcloth.Then,heaskedhisfathertodoso。Whenhisfatherhadhiseyescovered，Xiaohutookhisexercisebookoutquicklyandputitinfrontofhisfather。Bydoingso,hegothisfather’ssignatureeasilywithouttellinghisfatherwhathadhappened。Beforehisfathercouldseeagain，hehadalreadyputhisexercisebookbackinhisschoolbag.AsfarasIamconcerned,theteacher’sbehaviourdidn'tworkatall.HeshouldhaveeducatedMaXiaohuinanotherwaywhichhelpsXiaohutoovercomehisshortcomings。（经过修改)MaXiaohuwasverycarelessandoftenmademistakesinhishomework,whichmadehisteacherveryangry。OnedayhisteacherhadXiaohuaskhisfather，MaDahua,tosignhisnameinhisexercisebook.Onhiswayhome,thinkingthathisfatherwouldpunishhimagain，Xiaohufeltnervous.Suddenly，agoodideaoccurredtohim。Whenhegothome,hekeptwritinghisnamewithhiseyescoveredwithapieceofcloth.Then，heaskedhisfathertodoso.Whenhisfatherhadhiseyescovered,Xiaohutookhisexercisebookoutquicklyandputitinfrontofhisfather。Bydoingso,hegothisfather’ssignatureeasilywithouttellinghisfatherwhath