【牛津版】八年级上册：Unit-1-Friend课件

Unit1Friends

Task2023/7/6Teenagersmagazineisinvitingteenagerstowriteabouttheirbestfriendsforthewritingcompetition.2023/7/6Whatwouldyouliketowriteaboutyourfriend?Futureplans______________Looks__________________Personality__________________...

MyfriendHobbies__________________2023/7/6WhoisDaniel’sbestfriend?WhendidDanielfirstmeether?

Whatdoesshelooklike?Whatwouldsheliketobewhenshegrowsup?What’sshelike?Kate

fiveyearsagobeateacher

friendly,helpful,patient

tallandslim

ReadandanswerKateisDaniel’sbestfriend.Kate’slooksKate’spersonalityKate’sfutureplansIntroduction

MainbodyConclusionStructureofthearticle2023/7/6Kateisbothmyneighbourandmybestfriend.Ifirstmetherfiveyearsago.Paragraph11.IntroductionWhichsentencecanweuse?2023/7/6Kateistallandslim.Shehaslonghair.Shehasaroundfaceandasmallnose.Ilikeherbrightsmilingeyes.Theymakeherlookreallyprettyandkind.Paragraph2Findthedetails(细节)aboutherlooks.

2.Looksdistinguishingfeatures（特征）figure(体型)Whichsentencetellsthemainidea?Detailshelpthereader“see”theperson.2023/7/6Kateisafriendlygirl.Shealwayshasasmileonherfaceandlookshappy.Shelikestohelppeople.Shehelpsmewithmyhomeworkandsheisverypatient.WhenIfeelboredorunhappy,Ioftengotoher.Shewilltalktomeandtellmeinterestingthings.Paragraph3Whatisshelike?

3.Personalityfriendlypatient.helpShealwayshasasmileonherfaceandlookshappy.Shehelpsmewithmyhomeworkunhappy,Ioftengotoher.Shewilltalktomeandtellmeinterestingthings.WhenIfeelboredoratopicsentencesupportingdetails+(helpthereaderunderstandherpersonality)2023/7/6Katewantstoworkwithchildren.Shewouldliketobeateacherwhenshegrowsup.Ithinkshewillmakeanexcellentteacher.Paragraph4Whichsentencecanweuse?4.Futureplans2023/7/6ShareyourwritingWritestep-by-stepChooseatopicCollectdetails(细节)Writeafirstdraft(草稿)：Abeginning+amiddle+anendingImproveyourwriting(改进)CheckforerrorsWriteafinalcopyHowtowrite?2023/7/6Chooseatopic/Collectdetails(细节)1.Chooseonepersontowriteabout.2.Makeadetailchartlikethis.Topic:LooksPersonalityOtherinformationtall,thinasquarefacebigbrighteyesshortstraighthairtellfunnyjokesnevertelllieswanttobeasocialworkerhumoroushonest…Tom……2023/7/6Face

longroundsquaresmall...Eyes

bigsmallroundbrightsmiling...Nose

bigsmalllongshortstraight...Hair

blackdarkbrownlongshortstraight...Looks

beautifulprettygood-lookinghandsomelovelycuteshorttallfatslimsmartstrong...Usewordstohelpreaders“see”whoyouaredescribing.He/Sheis___and___.He/Shehas___.He/Shehas______and_______.Ilikehis/her______.Theymakehim/herlookreally_______.2023/7/6Usesentencestohelpreadersunderstandthepersonalitybetter.cleversmartpolitefriendlykindpatienthard-workinghelpfulhonest...Sometimeshepullsafunnyface(做鬼脸)andmakesmelaughuntilmystomachhurts.Ioftentellheraboutmyschool,myfriendsandmyfamily.Shealwaystellsmeherhonestopinionsaboutthings.Iliketosharemyjoywithher.Sheiswillingtosharethingswithpeopleandreadytohelppeopleinneedanytime.generoushumoroustrueMatchthepersonalitywiththesupportingdetails.2023/7/6Writeafirstdraft(草稿)：Abeginning+amiddle+anendingusethedetailstodescribethepersonshareafinalthoughttellwhothewritingisaboutTomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.Tomistallandslim.Hehaveasquareface.Hehasbigeyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsahat.Tomisahonestboy.Heisahumorousboy.Icanalwaystrusthim.Henevertellslie.He’sreadytohelpothersanytime.Hisfatherteacheshimhowtoplaytennis.hetellsmejokes.Hewouldliketobeasocilworkerwhenhegrowsup,Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.Don’tworryaboutthemistakes!2023/7/6Improveyourwriting—TalkwithapartnerResponseSheet(反馈表)Writer:_______Listener:_______Title___________________________1.WhatIlikeaboutyourwriting:2.QuestionsIhave:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onereads

yourwritingoutloud,theotherteammembers

listencarefullyand

tell

whattheylikeand

askquestions.2023/7/62.Icanalwaystrusthim.Henevertellsalie.3.Heisahumorousboy.Hetellsmejokes.Trytomakethesesentencesbetter.Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellsalie.Hehasagoodsenseofhumour

and

often

tellsme

funnyjokes.usesentencesofdifferentlengths(长度)(short)(long)1.Heoftenwearsahat.Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.(notclear)(clear)Improveyourwriting—Rewritepartsusespecificwords2023/7/6CheckforerrorsTomistallandslim.Hehaveasquareface.Hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.Helookshandsome.Tomisahonestboy.Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellslie.He’sreadytohelpothersanytime.hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.Tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.Hewouldliketobeasocilworkerwhenhegrowsup,Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.anaHe.socialhasPunctuation(标点)

Capitalization(大写)

Grammarerror

SpellingTomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.2023/7/6_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.Tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.

Hewouldliketobeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup,Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.UseyourbesthandwritingTomistallandslim.Hehasasquareface.Hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.Helookshandsome.Tomisanhonestboy.Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellsalie.He’sreadytohelpothersanytime.Hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.MyBestFriendIndentthefirstlineofeachpara