大学英语四级写作辅导课件

大学英语四级写作辅导重温四级写作评分中的几个关键点

（参见《710分》第一页）1、内容：紧扣提纲、不能偏题2、结构：布局合理、详略得当3、语言：语句通顺、语义连贯备注项:1、字数不足,酌情扣分2、只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。(总分按照15分计算)四级写作的文体

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议论文非应用文记叙文描写文文体书信体应用文非书信体写作的流程：

以96年1月大学英语四级写作为例Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheTwo-dayWeekend.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionon

theoutline

(giveninChinese)below:1.双休日给大学生带来的好处。2.双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。3.我应当怎样过好双休日。写作的流程一看（看清标题和字数）二圈（在提纲中圈出关键词，即写作重点）三标（在要详写的提纲的关键词旁标注1、2、3，表示这个关键点至少从3个方面阐述。如果该点略写，则不标123）四想（进行构思（全文分几个段？详略如何分布?段落间如何衔接，段落内部如何衔接？），意在笔先）五写（语言组织，想好后下笔，下笔后不改）审题练习一98年1月大学英语四级作文题目Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHarmfulnessofFakeCommodities.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fakecommodities)。2.为什么会有这种现象?（1厂家追逐利益，2政府缺少监管，3群众难以识别）3.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。课堂练习一：审题练习参见《710分》P20，对如下作文4,5,9进行快速审题练习。如何写提纲根据题目和中文提纲利用2-3分钟时间列出写作要点，理清要点间的逻辑关系，组织并列出写作素材，列出关键词，在头脑中形成一个整体的思路。

以“IHaveaDream”为例

outline:1what’syourdream

2howtorealizeyourdreamP1:Mydreamistobeateacher.(astory,asaying,directopening)P2:1)readmorebooksonteaching

2)domorephysicalexercisesinpursuitofgoodhealth

3)workasapart-timetutor/teacheronweekendsorvacationP3:conclusion请你写提纲HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?(2010年12月真题）目前不少父母为孩子包办一切为了让孩子独立，父母应该......（提示：只有两点的提纲，结构应该怎样：二段还是三段？

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent?P1:Parentsarewillingtodoeverythingforchildren(somedamages，reasons）P2:Tohelpchildrenbecomeindepent,parentsshould

1guidechildrentofigureouthowtosolveproblemsontheirown

2.teachchildrenhowtodosomehouseholdsinsteadofdoingitforthemP3:(conclusion)Bydoingso,childrenwillbeabletolearnhowtoadoptthemselvestothecomplicatedsociety.范文赏析TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSword(Topicsentence)Thereisagoodsideandabadsidetoeverything—andthatincludestheInternet.Asthelatestproductofthe“technologicalrevolution,”theInternethasusheredinaneweraofglobalinformation.Nevertheless,alongwithconveniences,ithasbroughtmankindnewproblemstosolve.(Topicsentence)Internetbenefitsusinmanyrespects.

ThereisnodenyingthattheInternetcanvastlyimprovetheefficiencyofscientificresearch;itallowsscientistsswiftaccesstoallthedataandresearchfindingsintheirfieldsavailableworldwide.Moreover,asinformationisasvaluableasanymaterialresource,anyonewhohasaccesstotheInternethasacompetitiveadvantageinbusinessoverthosewhodon’t.Lastbutnotleast,theInternethasmadepersonalcommunicationbothmoreconvenientandmorerapid.

TheInternet—ATwo-EdgedSword

(Topicsentence)WhilethereisagreatdealofenthusiasmnowadaysovertheadvantagesoftheInternet,itsdrawbacksshouldnotbeneglected.

Foronething,longtimesurfingontheInternetdoesalotofharmstoourbody.Foranother,notalltheinformationavailableontheInternetisusefulorharmless.(Topicsentence)But,allinall,Iwouldsaythattheprosoutweighthecons

Astheworldeconomybecomesmoreandmorecloselyintegrated,anycountrywhichfallsbehindinthe“informationrace”willbecomeeconomicallybackward.TheInternet,ifproperlymanaged,holdsthekeytosuccessinthe21stcentury.议论文的过度句Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.Everycoinhastwosides.Weshouldseetheothersideofacoin.议论文写作模板模板一：

观点对立型第一段(引入话题）：Nowadays,thereisanincreasinginterestin某一话题.Therefore,ahotdebatearisesover该话题.第二段（观点A及其原因分析）：Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaof观点A.Theirreasonsareasfollowing:inthefirstplace,原因一;inthesecondplace,原因二;inthethirdplace,原因三.第三段（观点B及其原因分析）：However,otherpeopleholdanoppositeviewpoint.Theyconsiderthat观点B.Theyholdthisviewbecause原因一.Besides,原因二.What’smore,

原因三.第四段（我的看法）：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesof该话题outweighthedisadvantages.Inmyopinion,进一步阐明我的看法及其原因.议论文模板模板二：观点对立型第一段：Nowadays,whereveryougo,youwillhearpeopletalkabout某一话题.Whetheryoulikeitornot,ithasbecomeapartofourlife.第二段：Somepeoplemaintainthat观点A.Intheirview,原因一.Theyalsoarguethat原因二.Finally,原因三.第三段：Somepeople,however,takeadifferentattitude.Theyconsiderthat观点B.Therearetworeasonsforthis.Foronething,原因一.Foranother,原因二.第四段：AsfarasIamconcerned,我的看法.Therefore,结论.

议论文模板模板三：观点对立型第一段：Whenitcomesto某一话题,differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.第二段：Somepeopleholdthat观点A.Theybelievethat原因一.Theyalsoclaimthat原因二.Moreover,原因三.第三段：Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat观点B.Firstly,原因一.Secondly,原因二.Thirdly,原因三.第四段：Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIfavor（/support/backup）theformer（/latter）side.Afterall,补充原因.范文赏析(说明文）HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Nowadays,studentsmustseekjobsbythemselves.Jobinterviewistheonlywaytohaveaccesstothedoomoftheemployers.

So

succeedinginajobinterviewisveryimportant.

Buthowcanonesucceedinajobinterview?

Firstly,youshouldbeverywellprepared.Bringalongasmuchinformationaboutyourselfaspossible:yourdiplomacertification,yourcreditrecords,certificationaboutyourawards,yourpublications,andthemostimportantofall,anexcellently-designedresume,inbothChineseandEnglish.

Secondly,youmustpaymuchattentiontoyourappearance.Inordertoproveyourselfawell-educatedperson,youmustfirstofallbedressedproperly.Whiletalkingwiththeinterviewer,youshouldlookattheoneyouaretalkingtowithunderstandingeyes.Whilestanding,youshouldstandfirm,nevermakingbiggestures.Whilesitting,youshouldneversitcross-legged.Alwaysremembertolistenattentivelytothepersontalking.Aslightnodofyourheadisalwaystimelytoshowyourwillingnesstocommunicate.

Thirdly,youmustbeconfidentaboutyourself.Neverbenervous.Letyoursmilingfaceshowfriendlinessfirst.Whiletalkingaboutyourstrongpoints,behonest,neverbeastoreventellalie.Areyousureyouarewellprepared?Youcangonow,andyouwillsucceed,withoutdoubt.说明文写作：怎样定模板？模板一：现象描述段落模板1、Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety(economy/education/internet…),某个现象hasarousedmuchconcerninChina.描述现象2、Nowadays,withthereformof现象的背景,描述现象.Thisphenomenonhasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.3、Inrecentyears,描述现象.Thisissuehasarousedthegreatestconcern.4、Currently,alongwiththeadvanceofthesociety,animportantissuethat描述现象isbroughttoourattention.Forexample,举例描述各种具体现象.说明文写作：怎样定模板？模板二：原因分析段落模板1、Justaswhathashappenedtoanythingintheworld,manyfactorsleadtothisphenomenon.Foronething,原因一.Foranother,原因二.Ourlistofcontributorscouldgoon,buttheforegoingonesarealreadyenoughtogiveusadeepinsightintothephenomenon．【此模板适合于两个原因的段落】2、Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthephenomenon,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.Firstofall,原因一.Inaddition,原因二.What’smore,原因三【此模板适合于三个原因的段落】3、Forthisphenomenon,thereareplentyofcontributingcausesamongwhich,thefollowingonesareparticularlyworthmentioning.First,原因一.Second,原因二.Andfinally,原因三备注：【为了增加文章字数，也可以在每一种原因后进一步论述该原因】说明文写作：怎样定模板？模板三：影响（问题或者危害）分析段落模板1、Obviously,therearesomeproblemsexistingin某事物或现象.(Thereissomeinfluence/therearesomeharms/damagesfollowing某事物或现象.)Forinstance,列举影响一/问题一/危害一.进一步说明该影响、问题或危害.Inaddition/Besides,影响二/问题二/危害二.What’smore/Moreover,影响三/问题三/危害三.2、Objectivelyspeaking，thisphenomenonwillbringaboutbothpositiveandnegativeeffect.Ontheonehand,描述正面影响.Ontheotherhand,描述负面影响【影响多时，可以加衔接词分几点阐述】3、Thisissuemayleadtoanumberofunfavorableconsequences,withthefollowingtwothemostserious.Foronething,后果一.Foranother,后果二.【如果是三种后果呢？怎么变化句型？】说明文写作：怎样定模板？模板四：解决方案段落模板1、Therearemanysteps(measures/ways)whichcanbetakentosolvethisproblem.Firstofall,解决方法一.I