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分割线61：Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.(所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process整个过程;stage阶段;step步骤)ChocolatecomesfromthecacaotreewhichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,Africaand定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】【流程图特点之三：大量使用语态】Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.【流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】whenthepodsareripetheyareharvestedthebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.(三个句子的并列：“A,句BandC”。)Duringthefermentingprocessthebeansturnbrown.【流程图特点之字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的观点，否则会扣分】Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutersisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.【流程图特点之六：一般不需要写总结】Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.Thenthelumpsofclayarecedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter.Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andaumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200℃-1300℃.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhave ehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage.(215BandThisresponsefullysatisfiestherequirementsofthetask.Allkeyfeaturesofeachstageoftheprocessareappropriayandaccuraypresented.Anexcellentoverviewisgivenatthebeginningoftheresponseandthisskilfullyincorporatespartoftherubric,changingthegr ticalfunction,togiveabriefsummaryofthewholeprocess.Themessageisveryeasytoread,withseamlesscohesionthatattractsnoattention.Paragraphing,linkingandreferencingareallskilfullymanaged.Thelanguageusedisveryfluentandsophisticated.Awiderangeofvocabularyandstructuresareusedwithfullflexibilityandaccuracy.Onlyrareminor‘slips’canbefoundandthesedonotdetractfromthehigh3-8163个星期，大家写的时候可以分别写，不用写这Thefirstdiagramshowsthattherearefourmainstagesinthelifeofthe第一个图显示了，在蚕的生命过程中主要有四步。Firstofall,eggsareproducedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggto easilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves.首先，蛾子产出卵，每个卵用10天的时间变成蚕的幼虫，他们以桑叶为食。Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.这个阶段持续最多到六个星期，直到幼虫周围生产出茧（silkthread）.Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.Thecocoonsaretherawmaterialusedfortheproductionofsilkcloth.丝绸的原材料。Onceselectedtheyareboiledinwaterandthethreadcanbeintheunwindingstage.离出来。Eachthreadisbetween300and900metreslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.300到900，这就意味着，他们能够被缠绕在一起，染色，然后在织布阶段被用于生产布Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.动词使用丰富：producefeedonlastemergeselectboil,separateunwind,twist(多数原词带入)名词比较专业：lifecyclerawin10duringtheperiodof10Theprocesslastsforupto10after1010dayspasseduntilsomething表示然后：thennextinthenextstatefollowingthatafterthat,thenextstepinthestageis....表示过程：processprocedureformation表示步骤：stepstage时间阶段：afteraperiodofmonths/days/minutes顺序连词：firstfirstofall,inthefirststageinitially,tobeginwithsecond,then,next,alsoafterthat,atthesametime,intheme ,meanwhilepriorto,untilthefirststageinvolves…/inthesecondstage/inthethirdstageinthelaststage/Thenextstepinthestageisthat…目的连词：inordertoinorderthatsoastosothat热，expand膨胀，bend弯曲，turnoff关闭，cooldown冷却，disconnect断开连接，spin旋转/纺，strike打击，compress压缩，release释放，expand膨胀，move/flow流动，accelerate加速，form形成，press按压，adjust调整，absorb吸收，form形成，process加工，rotate旋转，chop坎，grind磨(碎)/碾(碎)，light点燃，burn燃烧，ignite点燃，reflect反光，turn转，starts开始，stops结束，records，turnsup调高，turnsdown调低，winds缠绕,unwinds解开，revolves旋转，fold折叠，unfold打开，reverse颠倒/倒转，adapt适应，adjust调整，alter改变，cure治愈，disappear，dissolve溶化/解散，exchange交换，expand扩张/膨胀，fade退色，increase增长，promote促进/升职,reduce减少，renew使更新/使恢复，renovate革新/更新/修复，rece取代，swellheal/cure治愈， eintobeing/takeshape形成，produce生产，gain/get/acquirecollect收集，meet相遇，bemadeupof由...组成,bemadeof由...制成，bemadefrom融化成，flowsinto流入分割线1TEST4。就这些图形，我们来总结地理变迁题的写作要点。12.3认真阅读并尽量记住图中已有的信息12.4.图中的定 估计ThecarparkhasbeenremovedandrecedbyaThenumberofhomesinTownAislikelyto(islikelyto=ispredictedto/isestimatedto/isprojectedto/isexpectedoItislikelythatthenumberofhomesinTownAwill(itislikelythat=itispredicted/estimated/projected/expected下列表达：bepredicted/beexpectedtodo…ItisItiseasytolocate/tofindItcanbeseenfromthegraph 地图题用语AnewhospitalwasestablishedinTownAin2000. 20069ATASKThemapshowsthedevelopmentofthevillageofKelsbeybetween1780and2000.这篇文章大体框架按时间顺序，BODY分三段分别描述：1780年村庄，1860村20001780年村庄，我们要注意按方位顺序来描述， AB的东方/西方/南方/Ais/lies/islocated/issituatedin/ontotheeast/west/south/northofB(inABONAB接壤，TOAB分开) ABAisintheeasternsouthern/western/northernpartofB. AB120千米处Alies120kmtothenorthwestofB. AB…..角落Aisat/inthesouth-easterncornerofBat表示A在B外部，in表A在B部 Onthesouth/southernsideoftheriverOnbothsidesoftheroadOntheother Theareaadjacentto/near/nextto/justoffthe Atthesouthernendoftheriver AB的对面AisontheoppositesideofAisopposite AB东部的边界上（A在B外部Aisontheeasternborderof AB（AB内部Aison/alongtheeasternedgeofB Theoriginal/previous/formergarden Thesizeofthelibraryhasbeenenlarged/extended/halved/reducedby Thenumberofhomeshasincreased/r