Unit 1 Period 4 Writing 同步课件（牛津上海版八年级上册 Unit 1 Penfriends）

第第页Unit1Period4Writing同步课件（牛津上海版八年级上册Unit1Penfriends）(共31张PPT)

U1Penfriends

Writing

Writing

Writingaboutyourself

MrHuaskedhisstudentstowriteaboutthemselves.KittyandPeterhavefinishedwritingtheirprofiles.Readtheprofilescarefullyandfindouthowtointroduceyourselfproperly.

MynameisKitty.Iam12yearsold.IwasborninShanghaiandIliveinShanghaitoo.

Iamnotverytall.Iwearglassesandmyhairislongandblack.

Iamkeenonmusic.IlistentoCDsattheweekend.Ilovereading.IamintheReadingClub.IlikeEnglishandChineseatschool.IamgoodatEnglish.

IhavelotsoffriendsatRoseGardenSchool.Ilikeplayingwithmyfriends.

Hello!IamPeter.Iam12yearsold.IwasborninNanjingbutnowIliveswithparentsinShanghai.

Iamtall.MyhairisshortandIhavedarkbrowneyes.

Iloveallmylessons.Iamnotverygoodatsports.Ilikeplayingcomputergames.

MyfriendssayI’mpoliteandhelpful.Myteachersandclassmatesalllikemeverymuch.

AMrWuaskssomestudentstowritashortcompositionfortheschoolpleteSteven’sandWinnie’scompositions.Usethewordsinthebox.Changetheformsoftheverbswhennecessary.Youmayusesomeoftheverbsmorethanonce.

bedoglasses(not)have

liveloveswimtake

Myname(1)__________Steven.I(2)__________12yearsold.Mybirthdayison1OctoberandIwasborninShanghai.I(3)__________withmyfamilyinBeijingnow.I(4)__________atwinsisterbutI(5)__________anybrothers.I(6)__________slim,andIwear(7)__________.

I(8)__________goodatMaths.Ialsolovecomputergames.

is

am

live

have

don’thave

am

glasses

am

bedoglasses(not)have

liveloveswimtake

Myname(9)__________Winnie.Mybirthday(10)__________on23March.IwasbornHu’nan.I(11)__________withmyfamilyinBeijingnow.I(12)__________anybrothersorsisters.I(13)__________tall.I(14)__________longdarkhair.

I(15)__________goodatEnglish.Ilikeplayingbadminton.Ilove(16)__________too.

is

is

live

don’thave

am

have

am

swimming

bedoglasses(not)have

liveloveswimtake

BCompletethefollowingprofileaboutyourself.

CWriteanintroductionaboutyourself.

(yourname)

______________________________________

______________________________________

______________________________________

______________________________________

______________________________________

______________________________________

______________________________________

______________________________________

Stickyour

photohere.

Writingtheaddress

ReadJon’saddressagain.

2MiddleStreet

Walker

Newcastle

NE64BY

England

UK

Numberandstreet

Town

City

Postcode

Region

Country

small

big

AWhichofthefollowingaddressiswrong

BRewritethenameandaddressontheenvelope.

KayMorrison

BlueSkiesTravel

VictoriaStreet

Brighton

BN62TQ

UK

CImaginethatyouarewritingtoanother

penfriendinCanada.Writehisorheraddressontheenvelope.Usecapitalletterswherenecessary.

billamos

128weststreet

vancouver

britishcolumbia

v6e14h4

canada

BillAmos

128WestStreet

Vancouver

BritishColumbia

V6E14H4

Canada

Formatofaletter

ReadJon’sletterinReadingsectionagain.Thenputthefollowingitemsinthecorrectspace.

Date

Sender’saddress

Body

Greeting

Signature

b

a

d

c

e

Writingtoapenfriend

Youcanwritetonewpenfriendsbyletterore-mail.Sometimesstudentssaythesethings:

Don’tworry!Thinkaboutthesetwothingstohelpyou.

aYourreader:

Thinkaboutyourreader.Imaginethatyouaretalkingtohim/her.Tellhim/herinterestingthingsaboutyourself.

bMakeaplan:

Forexample,youmayplantowritefourparagraphs.Onthefollowingpage,youcanfindaplan.Youcanusethequestionstohelpyou.

Para.1Describeyourself

Howoldyouare

Whatdoyoulooklike

Para.2Yourfamilyandyourhome

Wheredoyoulive

Whatdoesyourfather/motherdo

Para.3Yourschool

Whereisyourschool

Whatisitlike

Whatdoyouwanttobeinthefuture

Para.4Yourhobbies

Whatareyoufavouritehobbies

Whatareyourotherhobbies

NowyouareMay.YouwanttoreplytoJon’sletter.

AWorkinpairstodothefollowing.

Writeyourhomeaddressortheaddressofyourschool.

(First,lookathowJonwriteshisaddress.)

Chooseaorbtostartyourletter.

Thanksalotforyourletter.I’mhappytobeyourpenfriend.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.I’m…yearsoldandinGrade…

I’m…yearsoldandinGrade…

DecideonwordstotellJonaboutyourself:

yourage,heightandhair;

yourhobbies;

somethingaboutyourfamilyandyourhome;

informationaboutyourschool;

yourambition(ifyouhaveone).

Chooseaorbtoendyourletter.

Itwasgreattohearfromyou,Jon.Ihopeyou’llwriteagainsoon.

That’sallIhavetosay,Jon.

BWorkingalone,writethereplytoJon’sletterforMay.

Putyourhomeaddressorschooladdressinthetop-rightcorner.

Putthedateundertheaddress.

DearJon

Paragraph1—yourstartingsentences

—informationaboutyourself(age,height,hair,hobbies,etc.)

Paragraph2—informationaboutyourfamily(parents,brothersandsisters,pets,yourflat,etc.)

Bestwishes

May

Paragraph3—informationaboutyourschool(nameofschool,

yourfavouritesportsatschool,bestsubject,your

ambition,etc.)

Paragraph4—sentencesaboutyourphotos

—yourendingsentences

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1．假设你是Mary，你的好朋友Ann最近体重一直增加并且经常感到疲劳，她非常苦恼，请你根据下面的提示给她写一封80词左右的电子邮件，提出一些好的建议，可适当发挥。

提示：1.看医生，征求医生的建议；

2.注意饮食，多吃蔬菜和水果；

3.多锻炼，进行体育活动；

4.请补充1—2点建议。

写作要求：

1.包含以上所有信息，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

2.字迹工整（占两分），语言简练，表达正确，条理清楚；

3.词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

DearAnn,

I’msorrytohearthatyouaregettingfatterthanbefore,andyoualwaysfeeltired.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Mary

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【答案】例文：

DearAnn,

I’msorrytohearthatyouaregettingfatterthanbefore,andyoualwaysfeeltired.Ithinkyou’dbettergotoseeadoctorforhelpfirst.Trytoeatmorefreshfruitandvegetablesinsteadofjunkfood.It’sgoodforyoutotakeenoughexercise,too.Youcanrunorplaybasketballafterclass.Afterdinner,you’dbettertakeawalk.Finally,makesureyouhaveatleasteighthours’sleepeverynight.

Ifyoukeepondoingso,I’msureyou’llloseweight.Ihopeyou’llgetwellandbecomeabeautifulgirl.

Yours,

Mary

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。以“很遗憾听说你比以前胖了且总是觉得很累”来引出下文；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从“看医生、注意饮食、多锻炼以及保持充足睡眠”四个方面进行描述；

第三步，书写结语。表达“希望对方能好起来并成为一个美丽的女孩”的愿望。

[亮点词汇]

①insteadof而不是

②makesure确保

③atleast至少

[高分句型]

①It’sgoodforyoutotakeenoughexercise,too.（Itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.句型）

②Ifyoukeepondoingso,I’msureyou’llloseweight.（if引导的条件状语从句；省略that的宾语从句）

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2．请你根据下面所给信息，写一篇介绍中国著名画家齐白石的英语短文。

注意：1.字数：80字左右；

2.文章必须包含所有提示信息，并可适当发挥；

3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；

4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；书写规范。

出生1864年出生于湖南省（HunanProvince）

年轻时代很小的时候，展示出超凡的智慧和艺术能力；长大后学会了做很多不同的事情，擅长画蔬菜、花、鸟和昆虫（insect）

1902年至1909年期间周游中国，画了很多风景画（picturesofscenery）

主要成就代表作《白菜》；是中国最伟大的画家之一。

晚年：1.五十七岁后定居北京：2.1957年在北京去世，享年93岁。

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【答案】例文

QiBaishiwasafamousChinesepainter.HewasborninHunanProvincein1864.Fromanearlyage,heshowedgreatintelligenceandartisticability.Ashegrewolder,helearnedtodomanydifferentthings.Hewasgoodatpaintingvegetables,flowers,birdsandinsects.From1902to1909,hetravelledacrossChinaandpaintedmanypicturesofscenery.ThepaintingCabbageisoneofhismostfamousworksofart.HesettledinBeijingattheageoffifty-seven.HediedinBeijingin1957attheageof93.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍齐白石的出生地；

第二步，按照时间顺序来介绍他的一生。

[亮点词汇]

①bebornin出生于

②begoodatdoingsth擅长做某事

③attheageof在……岁时

[高分句型]

①Ashegrewolder,helearnedtodomanydifferentthings.（as引导时间状语从句）

②ThepaintingCabbageisoneofhismostfamousworksofart.（“one+of+the+形容词最高级+复数名词”的结构）

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3．美好生活，健康同行，现在越来越多的人重视健康。作为一名中学生，我们该如何保持健康呢？你校英文校刊EnglishCorner正在征集同学们的建议。请你以“HowtoKeepHealthy”为题，根据表格信息，用英语写一篇小短文向校刊投稿，号召同学们保持健康。

内容要点：

注意：

1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不得透露个人信息；

4.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。

HowtoKeepHealthy

Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplewanttoliveahealthylife.

健康的重要性……保持健康的建议饮食方面不吃快餐；……

睡眠方面早睡早起；……

运动方面每天运动一小时；……

心态方面学会放松；……

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【答案】例文：

HowtoKeepHealthy

Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplewanttoliveahealthylife.Asthesayinggoes,“Healthiswealth.”It’sthemostimportantthingforus.Asmiddleschoolstudents,whatcanwedotokeephealthy

Firstly,itisnecessarytohaveahealthylifestyle.Weshouldkeepawayfromjunkfood.Wehadbettereatmorefruitandvegetableseveryday.Secondly,weshoulddoexerciseonehouradayinordertokeephealthy.Thirdly,weshouldhaveagoodlivinghabit.Gotobedearlyandgetupearlyeveryday.Finally,relaxourselveswhenwearetired.Thinkofnicethingsandstayinagoodmood.

Inaword,healthcomesfirst.Toenjoyourbeautifullife,wemustkeephealthy.

【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇说明文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中关于围绕“健康”的相关要点。

【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题。第一段总述健康的重要性，进而引出保持健康的建议；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“饮食、睡眠、运动、心态”等几个方面给出保持健康的方法；

第三步，书写结语。进一步号召同学们重视健康，保持健康。

【亮点词汇】①keepawayfrom远离于

②hadbetterdosth.最好做某事

③inordertodo为了

④stayinagoodmood保持好心情

【高分句型】①Asthesayinggoes,“Healthiswealth.”.（As引导非限制性定语从句）

②Firstly,itisnecessarytohaveahealthylifestyle.（Itis+形容词+todosth.）

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4．最近你校正组织评选“校园闪耀之星”（ShiningStar），每个学生可以推荐一名候选人。假如你是李华，Mary是你心目中的最佳人选，请根据以下表格中的要点提示，为她写一封英文推荐信。

注意：

1.参考词汇：候选人candidate

2.词数80左右（文章开头已经给出，不计入词数）

3.不得透露学校，姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Dearheadteacher,

MynameisLiHua.RecentlyourschoolisholdinganactivitytochoosetheShiningStararoundus.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

名字Mary

年龄14岁

外貌大眼睛，长头发，开心常微笑

推荐理由1.乐于助人，经常参加志愿活动；2.喜欢传统文化，擅长中国剪纸；3.能使用电脑程序制作有趣的卡通片；4.……（补充一个要点）

愿望希望Mary能够成功

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【答案】例文

Dearheadteacher,

MynameisLiHua.RecentlyourschoolisholdinganactivitytochoosetheShiningStararoundus.IwouldliketorecommendMaryasacandidateforthishonor.Maryisa14-year-oldgirlwithbigeyes,longhair,andacheerfulsmile.

Sheisalwayswillingtohelpothersandoftenparticipatesinvolunteeractivities.ShehasastronginterestintraditionalChinesecultureandisskilledinChinesepaper-cutting.Inaddition,Maryisproficientinusingcomputerprogramstocreateinterestingcartoons.WhatimpressesmemostaboutMaryishercreativity.Shealwayscomesupwithnewandinnovativeideas,whichmakesherstandoutfromothers.Sheisalsoveryhardworkingandnevergivesupeasily.

IbelievethatMaryisanexcellentcandidatefortheShiningStaraward.Thankyouforconsideringmyrecommendation.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，先表明写作意图，要推荐Mary为“校园闪耀之星”候选人；

第二步，具体阐述推荐Mary的理由，可从Mary的个人信息、她的优点等方面来阐述；

第三步，书写结束语，表达Mary是一位非常优秀的候选人，希望Mary能够当选。

[亮点词汇]

①wouldliketodo想要做某事

②recommendsb.as推荐某人为……

③bewillingtodo乐意做某事

④participatein参加

⑤haveinterestinsth.对……感兴趣

⑥beskilledin擅长……

⑦beproficientin精通于

⑧comeupwith想出

⑨standout脱颖而出

[高分句型]

①Shealwayscomesupwithnewandinnovativeideas,whichmakesherstandoutfromothers.（which引导的非限定性定语从句）

②IbelievethatMaryisanexcellentcandidatefortheShiningStaraward.（that引导的宾语从句）

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5．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

友谊，需要用忠诚去播种，用热情去灌溉。请以“Mybestfriend”为题目介绍一下你对“朋友”的看法，并描述你和朋友相同之处和不同之处，以及你对“朋友应该相同还是不同”的看法。

提示词语：bringout,similar,different

提示问题：Whatdoyouthinkagoodfriendislike

WhoisyourbestfriendInwhatwaysareyousimilaranddifferent

DoyouthinkfriendsshouldbethesameordifferentWhy

Afriendinneedisafriendindeed._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________