高考英语复习之读后续写打碎了邻居的花瓶勇于承认了错误课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习打碎了邻居的花瓶，勇于承认了错误1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thesoundofglassbreakingisinstantlyrecognizable.I’dbeentellingmybestfriendMissiasillystoryandhadspunaroundinthelivingroomwhenIheardthatsoundandfroze.WhenIlookeddownatthecarpet,itwascoveredwithpiecesofsparklingred,pinkandclearglass.Missisaid."Oh,no,notthevase.''"Why?WhatdidIdo?"Myfacereddened."Abby,thatglassvasewasoneofthefewitemsmyrelativesbroughtwhentheycametoAmerica,Missirepliednervously."Ifyou’dbrokenanythingelseintheapartment,1would'vegladlysaidIdidit.Butyou'regoingtohavetotellmymomthatitwasyourfault,andshe'sgoingtobereallymad.”1wasterrified.I’ddestroyedapricelessfamilyheirloom（传家宝）.WhydidIhavetospinaroundlikethat?Wegathereduptheshatteredpieces.1keptsayingthatmaybeitcouldbefixed,butMissisaidgentlyitdidn'tlookpossible.Iinsistedwekeepthepieces.Theglasswassofragile,likeacolorful,swirlylightbulbhadexploded.Someofitbrokeevenmoreaswetriedtosweepitupcarefully.4续写原文Missisaidhermomwouldbehomebysix.Mystomachwasinknots.Wouldhermomyellatmeorpunishme?WouldshetellmeIcouldn'tstayintheirapartmentfortheweekend?Icouldn'tstopplayingthe”fifteensecondsoverinmymind,mespinningfastandthesoundofglasscrashing.TheonlythingIcouldthinkoftosaywas“I'msorry.”Acoupleofminutesaftersixweheardakeyturninthedoor.Hermomwashome.Rightfromthestart,wecouldseeshewasinagoodmood.Hello!It’shottoday.IwanttotreatyougirlstothatfrozenyogurtIknowyoulike,Let’sgo!”hermomsaid.Shepointedattheopendoor.5段首句Para1：“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething”Isaid.Para2：Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析话题：个人成长主要内容：Abby无意间打碎了Missi家的传家宝---一只玻璃花瓶，为此她非常忐忑不安。她诚实地向Missi的妈妈道歉，她没有责怪Abby,宽慰她不要自责。这件事对Abby影响深远，使她成年后对人更加宽容和包容。9续写思路分析Para1：“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething”Isaid.由第一段首句内容““在那之前，我需要告诉你一些事情，”我说。”可知，第一段应该描写我真诚地道歉，勇于承认了自己的错误。10续写思路分析Para2：Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscreamofjoy.由第二段首句内容“听到我的道歉，Missi的母亲爆发出一声欢呼。”可知，第二段Missi的母亲欢呼的原因以及她接受了我的道歉。11续写素材12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething,”Isaid.“Wecantalkattheyogurtplace,"hermomsmiled.“No.Ineedtotellyounow.It'simportant,”Iinsisted.Icouldfeelmyvoiceshakingandtriednottocry.“Whatisit,dear?"shegentlyasked,closingthedoorandwalkingclosertome.Ourhandsalmosttouched.Withhereyesstudyingme,myheartbeatfaster.“I'msorry,”Iblurtedout.“I...IwastalkingandlaughingwithMissiwhenIspunaroundandaccidentallybrokethevase.”Ifurtherexplainedthatwesavedthepiecesbuttriedinvaintofixit.Itstilllookedlikesmallpiecesofglass.14范文呈现15范文译文16范文译文听到我的道歉，Missi的母亲爆发出一声欢呼。她拥抱mc，亲吻我的双颊。“噢，谢谢！我一直讨厌那个丑陋的花瓶。现在它不见了！你帮了我一个大忙！”她母亲高兴地叫道。虽然道歉让我松了一口气，但我还是很震惊，因为这完全不是我所期望的反应。直到我成年后，我才意识到她母亲慷慨地欢迎我的道歉是一个多么深刻的礼物。现在，当我收到一个真