高考英语建议信课件

五、建议信全国高考英语二轮突破分类写作五、建议信全国高考英语二轮突破分类写作【必备词语】1.给某人提建议 ____________________2.如下 ____________________3.向某人征求意见 ____________________4.听从某人的建议 ____________________5.把……考录在内 ____________________6.有了某人的共同努力 ____________________7.开阔我们的视野 ____________________8.掌握英语 ____________________9.意识到 ____________________10.某事掌握得很好 ____________________11.记住 ____________________12.英语作文 ____________________givesb.someadvice(on)asfollowsasksb.foradvicefollowone’sadvicetakesth.intoaccount/considerationwiththejointeffortsofsb.broadenourhorizonmasterEnglishbeawareofhaveagoodcommandofsth.keepsth.inmindEnglishcomposition【必备词语】1.给某人提建议 _____________13.记忆英语单词 ____________________14.控制某人的脾气 ____________________15.一个有效的方式 ____________________16.保持乐观 ____________________17.振奋某人的精神 ____________________18.提高阅读能力 ____________________19.习惯于这个现象 ____________________20.对……有坏影响 ____________________21.垃圾箱 ____________________22.制定具体的制度 ____________________23.培养好的习惯 ____________________24.涵括各种各样的…… ____________________memorizeEnglishwordscontrolone’stemperaneffectivewayremainoptimisticaboutsth.liftone’sspiritsimproveone’sreadingabilitygetusedtothephenomenonhaveabadeffectondustbinsetupspecificrulesdevelopgoodhabitscoverawidevarietyof13.记忆英语单词 __________________【好句背诵】

开头总起句

1.HerearesomesuggestionswhichIhopewillbeofsomehelptoyou.这里是一些建议，希望会对你有帮助。2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。【好句背诵】开头总起句

说明具体问题

3.Almostperfectasitis,itshouldmakemoreimprovementinsomearea.尽管它近乎完美，它在一些方面仍需要改进。4.Iwonderiftheschoolcouldplacemoredustbinsaround.我想学校是否能够在周围多放些垃圾桶。说明具体问题

结尾询问或希望

5.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,doletmeknow.如果您需要更多的信息，请告知我。6.Ibelievethat,withthejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudents,ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.我相信，有了老师和学生的共同努力，我们学校会在不久的将来成为一个更令人快乐的地方。结尾询问或希望【单句改错】1.I’dliketogiveyousomesuggestionsthatmayhelpyoulearnyourmathgood.good改为well2.Ifyouwillneedtobuyagoodsmartphoneatalowprice,IwillsuggestaHongmiMi3.

删掉第一个will3.Weallknowthatitisalwaysveryhardtostartinginanewschool.starting改为start【单句改错】1.I’dliketogiveyou4.IfounditdifficulttoexpressmyselfinEnglish,andmyEnglishteacheradvisedmethatIpracticedmore.practiced改为practice5.Asforyourfuturemajor,IthinkmostsuitablethingforyouisteachingChineseasaforeignlanguage.most前面加the6.Isorrytolearnthatyouhaven’tadaptedtothenewlifethere.

在I后加am4.Ifounditdifficulttoexp7.Playingfootballnotonlymakeusgrowtallandstrongbutalsogivesusasenseofteamspirit.make改为makes8.IhopeeverythingwillbeOKandyouwillsoonmakesomefriendinthenewcity.friend改为friends7.Playingfootballnotonlym9.Whynotaskhimtogiveaexplanationforhisbeingabsentfromthemeetingyesterday？a改为an10.Ithinkyoushouldgrasptheopportunityandgotoabroadforfurtherstudies.

删掉to9.Whynotaskhimtogiveae【习作改错】DearEditor, Asastudentreader,IamwritetotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishbyyourhouse.Thesebookshavemanyadvantage.Oneofwhichisthattheycoverawidevarietyoftopics,rangingfromhistoryandgeographytothelatestscientificdevelopment,whicharesuretobroadourhorizon.writingpublished____________advantages___them___broaden【习作改错】DearEditor,writingpubliWhat’smore,alongwiththetextstherearemuchbeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.EventhestudentswhoareusedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttointerestedinthesubject.However,sometextscarrytoomanydifficultywordsandexpressions,whichconsequentlyaddtothedifficultyinlearningthetexts.Therefore,I’dliketosuggestchangingthemaseasierones.Bestregards,LiHuamanydifficultinto_______˄beWhat’smore,alongwithth【真题满分佳作赏析】【2011全国Ⅱ卷：读者给报刊建议】

假定你是李华，你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报正值创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1.说明你是该报的忠实读者；2.赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事；3.提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。【真题满分佳作赏析】【2011全国Ⅱ卷：读者给报刊建议】【结构导图】【结构导图】【满分佳作】DearEditor-in-Chief,

Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!I’maregularreaderofyournewspaper.①Ilikeitverymuchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.②First,itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnewssothat,bysimplyturningthepages,Icanlearnallimportantthingsthathavehappenedduringtheweek.③Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.

④Asayoungstudent,IsuggestthatGlobalMirrorcarryarticlestoguideusinourEnglishlearning,andIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【满分佳作】DearEditor-in-Chief,【满分赏析】

①用到…mainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.解释原因的总起句，体现了对写作句型的熟练掌握。

②cover(覆盖……范围、包括……)一词用得地道；还用上了sothat引导的结果状语从句。

③Equallyattractiveare…(同样吸引人的还有……)这是地道、不同于一般模板的连接手段，表示与上面提到的内容并列；本句还有which引导的定语从句和tomaketheworldabetterplace这样地道自然的表达；这样的句子是提分的句子。

④用到suggest加宾语从句，从句动词用do或者shoulddo。【满分赏析】①用到…mainlyforthefol【模仿翻译】【2012四川卷改编：告诉老师学习情况和建议】作文原题假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师MsLi希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识；2.自己目前的英语水平；3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题；4.对英语教学的两点建议。【模仿翻译】【2012四川卷改编：告诉老师学习情况和建议】作文翻译亲爱的李老师，

我非常高兴您当我们的英语老师。随着世界变成了地球村，英语变得越来越重要，因此掌握好英语意味着我们可以通过一扇新的窗户看世界。

虽然我意识到其重要性，但我的英语掌握得不好。我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面，我觉得很难记住英语单词。而且，在写英语作文上我也有困难，写作时甚至犯一些愚蠢的错误。

因此，我希望您能给我们一些如何记忆英语单词的实用的方法。另外，如果您能教我们如何写好的英语作文就更好了。

谢谢您！诚挚的李华作文翻译【模仿翻译】DearMsLi,

IamveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher.Astheworldisbecomingaglobalvillage,Englishisgettingmoreandmoreimportant,somasteringEnglishmeanswecanseetheworldthroughanewwindow.ThoughI’mawareofitsimportance,Idon’thaveagoodcommandofit.AndI’vefoundthatmyproblemlieschieflyintwoaspects.Foronething,IfinditdifficulttokeepEnglishwordsinmind.Foranotherthing,IalsohavedifficultywithmyEnglishcompositionandevenmakesomefoolishmistakeswhenIwrite.

Therefore,it’smyhopethatyoucangiveussomepracticaltipsonhowtomemorizeEnglishwords.Besides,itwouldbebetterifyoucouldinstructusonhowtowritegoodEnglishcompositions.

Thankyou!

Sincerelyyours,LiHua【模仿翻译】【全真考场】①【2008全国Ⅱ卷：建议如何学好中文】

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。June8,2008DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.……Bestwishes,LiHua【全真考场】①【2008全国Ⅱ卷：建议如何学好中文】June8,2008DearPeter,

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

HerearesomesuggestionswhichIhopewillbeofsomehelptoyou.

Tobeginwith,itisagoodideatotakeaChinesecourse,whereyoucanfollowtheteacherandgethelpfromyourclassmates.Next,readingsomeChinesebooksandmagazineswillhelpyoutoimproveyourreadingability.YoucanalsowatchsomeChineseprogramsonTV,whichwillimproveyourlisteningability.TomakesurethatlearningChineseisn’ttoodull,itwouldbeagoodideatolearntosingsomeChinesesongs.Lastbutnotleast,ifpossible,makesomeChinesefriends,sothatyoucanlearnlanguagesfromeachother.LookingforwardtoreceivingyourletterwritteninChinese.Bestwishes,LiHuaJune8,2008【全真考场】②【2011浙江卷改编：建议应对乱涂乱扔】

假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(toscribble)和乱丢垃圾(tolitter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封信。信中应包括以下内容：1.说明写信目的；2.对这些行为进行批评；3.提出建议。

June8,2011DearMr.Headmaster,IamLi