浙江新高考作文续写公开课课件

Tocontinueastory续写之如何构思Tocontinueastory续写之如何构思1WhatisaSTORY

/WhydowemakeSTORIES?Astoryistoentertian,toamuse,toeducate,toenlighten.Basically,astoryistodeliverapieceofmindtous.So,howtodeliveritwell?WhatisaSTORY

/Whydowemak2Whatmakesastory?Simplyput:WhoWhereWhatWhenHowWhyLiterarilyput:Characters(Main&Minor)

Plot(Beginning,RisingAction,Climax,FallingAction&Resolution)Whatmakesastory?Simplyput3Think

Foragoodstory,whichismoreimportant,

thecharacter,ortheplot?Think

Foragoodstory,which41.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandheisneverseengettingangry,but__________________________________________.2.ShenMengyanisalady-likegirlwhenshe_________________________________,butwhen_______________shewill________________.3.LiJinyingisverygentletoherdeskmateandshe______________________________________________.hewasalittleannoyedwhenhisfoodwastakenbyChengSihan

isintheclassroominthedormbetotallyacrazyonealwaysspeakssoftlytohimCharacterizationPractice(Writing)1.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandhe54.WangChenhaoisaquietboy,he________________.5.ZhaoHanbinconsidershimselfTHEmosthandsomeintheworld,andhe___________________________________________.6.AfterdiscoveringZhangKaihengisafterthesamegirlhelikes,thefearlessZhaoYonghao_____________________________________.cansitsilentlyforadaywithoutawordtohisdeskmate.looksdownuponalltheotherboysintheclasswhohethinksugly.felthemustdosomething4.WangChenhaoisaquietboy,6

Makeitaone-sentencestory!

1.FramtonwantedtoclamhisnervesinMrsSamptons'house,onlyto_____________________________________.2.Matildaputonthenecklaceandlookedfowardtothecomingoftheparty.Herdreamwas______________________________.3.AlthoughLauriewantedtowinverymuch,whenshefoundJinny'stape,______________________________.bemadelosehisnervesbyalittlemischievousgirltobecomethequeenofthepartyoftheupperclassdidn'tletthedesiretowingetthebetterofherandreturnedittoJinny

Makeitaone-sentencestory!74.Larryangrilyopenedthecardoor,tryingtorushawayfromhisterribleboss,buttofind_______________________5.Timwasagoodstudentintheteachers'eyes,yethe__________________.6.Itwasverylate,andHelenwasveryanxiousforherhusbandtoreturn,whenthedoorbellrang,she__________________.aChristmasgiftfromtheboss

neverlikesanyteacher'sclass4.Larryangrilyopenedthecar8Let'sreadandpayattentiontotheredpart.

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

Let'sreadandpayattention9Whatwouldshedoorexperience

next?criedforhelp?regrettedwhatshehaddone?triedtogobackonherown?waitedforherhusband?cameacrosssomebadorgoodguy?...Whatwouldshedoorexperienc10Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.BegantoregretThingsgotworsemissherhusbandandfamilyNoreply.Ifonlyshehadnot11Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.

Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.1.It'sluckyshehadsometingtodrinkandeat,butwouldtheluckcontinue?2.Whyweretheberriesmostdelicioustoher?Janeroseatthebreakofd12Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.

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