茂名学院专插本综英第三部分Composition课件

CompositionWritingCompositionWriting1AnalysisofModelCompositionTheImportanceofEducationTheprosperityofanationdependsonthedevelopmentofeducation.Anydevelopmentinscienceandtechnologythroughouttheworldisduetothedevelopmentofeducationwhichbringsupscientistsandinventors.Itisdifficulttoemphasizejusthowimportanttheroleofeducationis.Thereisnodoubtthatcountrieswithundevelopededucationwillremainpoor.

Educationisalsovitaltothedevelopmentofanindividual.Ofallelementsofsuccessinourcareersnoneismoreimportantthaneducation.Itisnotgeniusbuttheknowledgethatmakesthedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Infactmostofthefamouspeopleofourtimesspentmanyyearsstudying.Canyounameanygreatmenyouadmirewhoarenotwelleducated?

Somepeople,however,arestillignorantoftheimportanceofeducation.Someparents,especiallythoseinthecountryside,thinkitunnecessarytosendtheirchildrentoschool.Someparentshavetheirchildrenworkformoneyataveryyoungage.Inviewofthis,compulsoryeducationmustbeenforcedtoseetoitthateveryyoungpeoplewillbehavethechancetoreceiveadequateeducation.AnalysisofModelCompositionT2FrameworkoftheStructureoftheAboveEssay1.IntroductionTS:Theprosperityofanationdependsonthedevelopmentofeducation.DS:①Anydevelopmentinscienceandtechnologythroughouttheworldisduetothedevelopmentofeducationwhichbringsup(养育;培养)scientistsandinventors.②Itisdifficulttoemphasizejusthowimportanttheroleofeducationis.③Thereisnodoubtthatcountrieswithundevelopededucationwillremainpoor.

FrameworkoftheStructureof3FrameworkoftheStructureoftheAboveEssay2.BodyTS:Educationisalsovitaltothedevelopmentofanindividual.DS:①Ofallelementsofsuccessinourcareersnoneismoreimportantthaneducation.②Itisnotgeniusbuttheknowledgethatmakesthedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.③Infactmostofthefamouspeopleofourtimesspentmanyyearsstudying.④Canyounameanygreatmenyouadmirewhoarenotwelleducated?FrameworkoftheStructureof4FrameworkoftheStructureoftheAboveEssay3.ConclusionTS:Somepeople,however,arestillignorantoftheimportanceofeducation.DS:①Someparents,especiallythoseinthecountryside,thinkitunnecessarytosendtheirchildrentoschool.②Someparentshavetheirchildrenworkformoneyataveryyoungage.③Inviewofthis,compulsoryeducationmustbeenforcedtoseetoitthateveryyoungpeoplewillbehavethechancetoreceiveadequateeducation.FrameworkoftheStructureof5DevelopingParagraphsI.ConceptAparagraphisagroupofrelatedsentencesdevelopingonecentralidea,orexpressingoneunitofthought.II.Fundamentalfeatures1.UnityUnitymeansoneness,thecombinationofallelementstoformasingleunit.Inawell-organizedorunifiedparagraphthereisacentraltheme,andeverysentencecontributestotheexplanationofthistheme.Thethemeofaparagraphisoftensummarizedinonesentencecalledthetopicsentence.Thisusuallyappearsatthebeginning,butmayalsobefoundinthemiddleorattheendofaparagraph.Sometimesthereisnotopicsentenceinaparagraph,butitisunifiedandhasasinglefocus.2.CoherenceCoherencereferstoconnectionandorganization.Acoherentparagraphisoneinwhichthesentencesarearrangedinaclearlogicalorder,andthetransitionsaresmoothandnatural.Asaresult,thereadersfinditeasytofollowthewriter’strainofthoughtandunderstandwhatheistalkingabout.DevelopingParagraphsI.Conce6DevelopingParagraphs3.TransitionCoherenceisachievedmainlybythelogicalsequenceofideas.Sometimesitisnecessarytousepropertransitions:parallelconstructionsrepetitionofwordsorphrasestherestatementofanideaindifferentwordspronounsthatrefertonouninproceedingsentences.Transitionalwordsandphrases,likefurther,finally,nevertheless,similarly,consequently,ontheotherhand,etc.maybeusedtomaketheconnectionclear.Butthesewordsarenotbeusedtoooften,fortheymaymakeapassagesoundunnatural.4.LengthHowlongaparagraphshouldbedependsonitstopicanditspositionintheessay.Thetopicofaparagraphshouldbeadequatelydevelopedbydetails,explanationsetc,sothatthereadermayhaveaclearideaofwhatthewriterintendstosay.Inotherwords,aparagraphshouldgivethereaderafeelingofcompleteness.Aparagraphthatpresentsoneofthemainfactsorideasofanessaymaybequitelong,whileonethatservesasabeginning,atransition,oraconclusionmaybemuchshorter.DevelopingParagraphs3.Transi71.Forthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofabout120-150wordsonthefollowingtopic.

TheImportanceofConfidence1.Forthispart,youaretow8TheImportanceofConfidence

Whateveronedoes,oneshoulddoitwithconfidence.Ifonehadnoconfidence,thereislittlepossibilitythatonewouldeverachieveanything,especiallywhenoneisfacedwithdrawbacksorhardships.Thistruthseemstobeself-evident.However,inrealitywedoseealotofpeoplewhocomplainthattheylacktheabilitytodosomethingorthattheirdifficultiesaretoogreattoovercome.Forsomethings,thismightbetrue.Butformanyotherthings,thisonlyshowsthattheyhavelostheart.TheImportanceofConfidence

W9Whydopeopleoftenfeelfrustratedeventhoughtheyarecapableofdoingsomething?Thereare,amongothers,twomainreasons.First,thesepeopledonothaveacorrectevaluationofthemselves.Second,theyoverestimatethedifficulties.Itisposssibletobuildupfaithinoneselfbyhavingtherightattitudetowardone’sownabilities.Weshouldneverunderestimateourabilitiesbutshouldbelieveintheproverb:“Whereisawill,thereisaway.”Confidenceisthepremiseforfulfillingatasksuccessfully.Whydopeopleoftenfeelfrust10ComposingEssaysⅠ.Threemainpartsofacomposition

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3.theendComposingEssaysⅠ.Threemainp11HOwtoWritetheBeginningofanEssay文章开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，一下子引起读者的兴趣。作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：1．开门见山，揭示主题文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。下面是题为“Honesty”（谈诚实）一文的开头：Honestyisoneofthebestvirtues．Anhonestmanisalwaystrustedandrespected．Onthecontrary,onewhotellsliesisregardedasa"liar",andislookeddownuponbyhonestpeople．HOwtoWritetheBeginningof12HOwtoWritetheBeginningofanEssay2．概括性的开头即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“TheHappinessofReadingBooks”（读书的快乐）的开头：Peopleoftensaythatgoldandsilverarethemostvaluablethingsintheworld.ButIsaythattoreadbooksismorevaluablethananythingelse,becausebooksgiveusknowledgeandknowledgegivesuspower.3．交待写作目的的开头在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如文章要表扬谁、批评谁或说明一个什么问题等。如“PollutionControl”（控制污染）的开头：InthisarticleIshalldrawyourattentiontothesubjectofpollutioncontrol.HOwtoWritetheBeginningof13HOwtoWritetheBeginningofanEssay4.定义式开头（第129页）5.引文式开头（第126页）HOwtoWritetheBeginningof14开头常用句式Recently，theproblemof…hasarousedpeople’sconcern.最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。Internethasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。Nowadays，(overpopulation)hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。Itiscommonlybelievedthat…/Itisacommonbeliefthat…人们一般认为…Manypeopleinsistthat…很多人坚持认为…Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology，moreandmorepeoplebelievethat…随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…Alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat…很多人似乎认为…开头常用句式Recently，theproblemof15常用句式结尾Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration，wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…Takingintoaccountallthesefactors，wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论…Hence/Therefore，we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此，我们最好得出这样的结论…Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。Allinall，wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.常用句式结尾16HOwtoWritetheClosingofanEssay1．重复中心思想。回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。

(例1)Asenseofhumorisreallyoneofthekeystohappiness.Itgiveszesttolifetomakeitworthliving.

(例2)Withallthesebenefits,itisnowonderthatsportsandgameshavenowbecomemorepopularwithpeoplethanever.HOwtoWritetheClosingofan17

2．作出结论。文章最后用几句话概括全文内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的观点。

(例1)Inconclusion,agoodteacher-studentrelationshipcanbemutualbeneficial.Thestudentsgainknowledgeeagerlyandenjoyably,andtheteachergainssatisfactionfromhisjob.

(例2)OnthewholetherearemoreadvantagesthandisadvantagesintheuseofTV.YetdifferentpeoplemayhavedifferentattitudetowardTV.Butwemustrealizethattelevisioninitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itsvaluetopeopleandsocietydependsonhowwelookatit.

2．作出结论。183．应用引语:用格言、谚语或习语总结全文，既言简意赅又有更强的说服力。

(例1)Ifyouhaveanythingtodo,trytodoityourself,forthatisthesafestwayto

permanentsuccess.Rememberthefamoussaying."Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves."

(例2)Ifwesticktostudiesdayafterday,thereisnothingthatcan'tbeachieved.Asanoldsayinggoes:"Constantdroppingofwaterwearsawayastone."3．应用引语:用格言、谚语或习语总结全文，既言简意赅又有更194．用反问结尾:虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，具有明显的强调作用，引起读者思考。

(例1)Therefore,listeningskillsmustbeconsciouslyimproved.Sinceitissuchanimportantmeansoflearningandcommunication,whyshouldwenotdevelopthisabilityasfaraspossible?

(例2)So，whatcanwebenefitfromwealthifwedonothavehealth?5．提出展望或期望:表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。

(例1)IamsurethatChinesewillbecomeoneofthemostimportantlanguagesintheworldinthenextcentury.AsChinawillopenfurthertotheoutsideworldthelanguageissuretobespreadworldwidely.

(例2)Ifeveryonehasdevelopedgoodmanners,peoplewillformamoreharmoniousrelation.Ifeveryonebehavesconsideratelytowardsothersandsocialethicspeoplewillliveinabetterworld.Withthegeneralmoodofsocietyimproved,therewillbeaprogressofcivilization.4．用反问结尾:虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，具有明显20TheimportanceofhavingagoodCV2.CompositionWriting

Direction:Forthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofabout80wordsonthefollowingtopic.Theimportanceofhavingagoo21Well,inmyopinion,youcanneverunder-estimatetheimportanceofhavingagoodCV.Inthemajorityofcases,yourCVistheemployer’sfirstimpressionofyou,yourfirstchancetoimpressyourpotentialemployer,let’ssay.Itistheessentialillustrationofyoursuitabilityforthejob,showinghowyourskillsandexperiencematchyouremployer’srequirements.Butmorethanthat,itshowsyourabilitytosummarize,prioritize(按重要性排列)andpresentinformationeffectively,essentialskillsintoday’sjobmarket.Italsoshowsyourlinguisticandcommunicativeabilities.Eventhoughemployersuseavarietyofselectiontechniquesthesedays,suchasanalyzingyourhandwriting,agoodCVisstillthesinglemostimportantpartofanyapplication.Well,inmyopinion,youcann22Theimportanceofethics(道德规范

)intoday’sbusinessworld3.CompositionWriting

Direction:Forthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofabout90wordsonthefollowingtopic.Theimportance3.Composition23Well,today’sglobalizationisallowingcompaniestosourcefromevergreaterdistances.Thisenablesacompanytoexploittheeconomicadvantagesoflowlaborcostsinonecountryandhighmarketvalueinanother.Ofcourse,theyhavetobecarefulnottobeseentobeexploitingtheworkers.Consumersarebecomingevermoresensitivetotheexploitationstoriesandindeedenvironmentalissues.ThisisbecauseasconsumersbecomericherandbecomeusedtospendingmoreonaWell,today’sglobalizationis24product,theyalsofeelthattheyshouldbespendingethically.Thisisbackedupbymediastoriesandpressitems,andexploitationstoriesreceiveverygoodpress.Andofcourse,theycancausegreatdamage.Thebiggerthebrand,thehighertheriskofaPRdisaster.AlsocompaniesarenowhavingtoworryaboutPRamongtheirownemployees.Afterall,recentstoriesaboutfatcat(阔佬，大亨)executivesalariescaneasilyaffectmorale(士气)andthusworkers’productivity.product,theyalsofeelthatt254.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofAwardsAprizeoraward,whetheritistheNobelPrize,theAcademyAward,orBestHandwritingPrize,isimportant.Suchprizescanhaveeconomic,personal,andsocialeffectsthatenrichthelifeoftherecipient.

Firstly,prizesliketheNobelPrizecanbeacashaward.Butevenforprizesthatdon'tgivemoneyliketheAcademyAwardcanbeprofitable.AnactresswhowinsBestActresswillbeofferedmorerolesandahigherpaythanactresseswhodon'twintheaward.Evenfortheelementarystudentwhoreceivedtheschool'sBestHandwritingawardmaygetacongratulationsgift.

Secondly,thepersonalbenefitsofreceivinganyawardareevident.Anyawardwinnerispleasedthatheorshehasbeenrecognizedforhisorherwork.WhenpeoplereceivetheAcademyAward,theyoftencrytheyaresohappy.Finally,everyonelikestobewithawinner.Apersonwhogetsaprizeoftenhasmanynew,bestfriends.Awinner'ssociallifeismuchbetterthanaloser'ssociallife.

Awardsserveaveryusefulpurposeinthattheireconomic,personal,andsocialbenefitsaddtotherecognitionthatitismoregoodthanbad.4.SampleComposition

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TheImportanceofPhysicalExercise

Everyonehopestolivehappilyintheworld.Physicalexerciseisindispensabletoahappylife.Thereisafamoussaying:"Lifeliesonexercise."Althoughyouwillnotnecessarilydiewithoutregularphysicalexercises,they'IIcertainlyhelpyoulivelongerandmorehealthily.Exerciseisgoodforustobuildourbodies.Ithelpsco-ordinatethedifferentpartsofourbodieswhenwehavesports.Forexample,wemusttryourbesttoco-ordinatethemovementsofthearmsandlegswhenweplaybasketball,orwewon'tbeabletoshootthebasket.Exercisealsobenefitsourorgans.Itletstheheartbeatfasterthanusual,andthenhelpsenlargethebloodvesselstoprotectusfromheartattacks.Exercisecanalsocontributetothedevelopmentofourabilitytoresponseagilely.Forinstance,whenyouplaytable-tennis,youmusttrytoreflectasquicklyasyoucansothatyoumayfightbackattherightpositionatthefightmoment.4.SampleComposition

TheImpo27Exercisecanalsocontributetoimprovingourmood.Whenyoudoexercise,youmovealot,andyouhavetobemoreactive.Ithelpsyoubecomemoreoptimistic.Exercisewillfillyourlifewithvariouscontentsandmakeitmorecolorful.What'smore,exercisewillhelpyougetridofyourinertia.Ifyoukeepdoingexerciseregularly,youwillneverbealazyperson.Therefore,exercisehasgreateffectonone'scharacter.Inaword,exerciseishelpful,importantandabsolutelynecessary.Exercisecanalsocontributet28Literatureisacknowledgedasthemostpreciousproductofhumancivilizationandwisdom,especiallybyourteachers.Sotheyalwaysasktheirstudentstoreadasmanyliteraryworksaspossible.4.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofReadingLiteratureLiteratureisacknowledgedas29Itisofgreatsignificanceforustoappreciateliteratureduetothefollowingreasons.Firstly,agoodliteraturecangetyoutoknowalifeexperiencethroughtheeyesofsomeoneotherthanyourself.Themoreexperienceyougain,themoreknowledgeableyouare.Secondly,agoodliteratureallowsyoutolearnabouthistoryinapersonalizedway.Thestoriestoldintheworkscanactasmirrorsandhelpyouadjustyourownbehaviors.Lastly,agoodliteratureisaneffectivewayforrelaxation.Thebeautifulandmovingscenesshownintheliteraturearehelpfulforone’smentalhealth.Inshort,literatureisindispensableinourlife.We,students,shouldcatchourtimetoreadmoreliteratures.Itisofgreatsignificancefo304.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofReading

Itiswidelyacknowledgedthatbookswhichpresentthepreciousaccumulationofwisdomandknowledgebeyondthelimitationofspaceoftimeareoneofthefewthingsmencherishdeeply.Readingbooksplaysanimportantpartinthecharacterdevelopmentandpersonalgrowth.Firstofall,readingcanbroadenoureyes.Asweallknow,booksrevealtoamysteriouswonderlandinwhichwewillobtainvariousexperiencewewouldneverdreamofconfrontinginthereallifesuchastravelingaroundtheglobe,interactingwithotherpeople’slife.Welearntolookbeyondourimmediatesurroundingstothehorizonandalandscapefarawayfromhome.4.SampleComposition

TheImpo31Secondly,readingmakesitpossibleforustobeknowledgeable.Chinahasaproverb,knowledgemakesagentleman.Wearestimulatedtouseourbraintoseekoutmanymysticalthingswhilereading.Reflectingontheotherliveswewillmeetoncewebegintoreadhasadeepinfluenceontheformationofcorrectoutlookonlife,value,worldview.Inthemeanwhile,readingprovidesuswiththesuitablewaytocatchotherknowledgeanddealwithproblems.However,moreandmorepeoplebecomesickofreadingwhoalwaysneglecttheimportanceofreading.Wecan’tdenythatreadinghelpsuswithstandstressesandstrains,cleanupthemisconceptions.Secondly,readingmakesitpos324.SampleComposition

TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMoodWiththedevelopmentofmodernscience,technologyandeconomics,ourlivingstandardhasreachedaneverhigherlevel.Butmoreandmorepeoplearelivingundergreaterpressurethaneverbefore.Asaconsequence,peopleareincreasinglysufferingfromvariousdistortions(扭曲)bothphysicallyandmentally.Tohelpout(帮助解决困难),itisimportantthateveryonekeepagoodmoodtoday.

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TheImpo33Thereareseveralreasonsformyargument.First,agoodmoodcancreatehighefficiency.Whenyouworkwithagoodmood,youwillfeelhappyandbewillingtodosomeworkwhichusedtobeboring.Onthecontrary,abadmoodcanmakeyoupassiveanddothingswithreluctance.Second,agoodmoodisbeneficialtoyourhealth.Ifyouf