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“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.01原文分析

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

如何快速梳理故事情节线与情感线？Tip1:找时间线索，

时间的变化带

来情节的发展Tip2:找地点线索，

地点的变化带

来情节的发展Tip3:找逻辑关系词，

逻辑的变化带

来情节的发展

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.IfoundmyCatInkSpotcleaninghimselfinMrs.Cleary’ssittingroomInkSpotcomfortedmeduringthelonelytoughtime.Iwasatalosswhattodo.annoyed,sorrowfulLonely,sadAtaloss,angryhappyReadforplotsBackgroundRisingactionClimaxFallingactionEndingSincemybabysister’sbirth,Ifeltlonelyandsad.ButInkspotwasbroughttocomfortedmeIfoundmyCatInkSpotcleaninghimselfinMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom???AnalyzethePlotandEmotionIwasatalosswhattodo.

Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.ReadforCharactersI:Mrs.Cleary:sensitive,lonely,straightforward,cat-loving,Caring,kind-hearted

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.………IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.Readforconflicts1.MyfavoriteseemedtoabandonmeandsettleinMrs.Cleary’shouse.

2.IarguedagainstMrs.Clearyformycat.

Themes故事的主题：误会化解，找回爱猫原文分析原文分析故事概要：看到我的小猫跑到Mrs.Cleary’s家，我很生气也很伤心，有一种被抛弃的感觉。于是我怒气冲冲去她家，准备要回我的猫。

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.………IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.Analyzelanguage少量的对话描写部分心理描写根据语篇协同性原则：续写部分应该有少量对话描写与适当的心理描写03续写扩展WhatdidIsaytoMrs.Cleary?P1:IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.WhatwasMrs.Cleary’sreactionwhensheheardwhatIsaid?AnalysethegivensentencesWhatdidIfeelandwhatdidIdoseeingmybelovedcat.WhatlessondidIlearnfromtheexperience?(THEME)Whatcanyouinferfromthetwosentences?P1:IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Paragraph1IaskedMrs.Clearyangrilywhymycatwasinherhome?Mrs.Clearyledtothesittingroom.Mrs.Clearyexplainedandapologizedtome.P2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.Paragraph2Ifelthappyandhugmycat.IrealizedthatImisunderstoodMrs.Clearyandthankedher.(THEME)03表达积累reply,respond,answer,agree,promise,comfort,state(陈述),claim(声称)interrupt,guess,warn,beg(乞求)，doubt,……各种说的表达---直接说announce（宣布),suggest,……add,repeat,remark（评论说),apologise,admit,complain,explain,ask,wonder,

各种说的表达----间接说yell,scream，……gasp（倒抽一口气），frown（皱眉）,sigh（叹气）,glare,glance,stare,weep(流泪)，sob（呜咽），cheer,grin（咧嘴笑），beam（眉开眼笑）shout，cry,roar（咆哮）,murmur（呐呐地说）,whisper（低声说），groan(哼哼呻吟)，mumble（咕哝）,sniff(嗤之以鼻)，stammer（结巴）例1：“Honey,”Momsaidweakly,“Ihaveaterriblecold.Youcanhavecereal(燕麦)forbreakfastandwatchcartoons.I’mgoingtostayinbed.”套路一:1.said+________：loudly/delightedly/surprisedly……练习："WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup？"Dad____________（困惑地问）,“we'vetriedeverything.”askedconfusedly副词带着情绪“说”套路一例2：Atthesoundofhismomcoughing,Jeremyknockedonherbedroomdoorandaskedwithgreatconcern,“Mom,areyouok?”套路二:2.said+__________________：

ina

pleasant愉悦的/firm坚定的/rude粗鲁的/sad悲伤的

tone语气;ina

high高/low低/sweet甜/loud响亮/soft软/weak弱

voice声音withconcern/wildjoy/abigsmilewitheyesfixedonme,withhisheadlowered练习：Thenmomheldthedressupbeforeherand____________________(赞同地说),“Youknowwhat?Ithinkitlooksnice.”saidinanaprrovingtone介词短语带着情绪“说”套路二带着情绪“说”套路3promised,hiseyestwinkling非谓语例3：“Wherediditcomefrom?”Jeremywondered,reachingintothewashertotakeoutmoreclothes.Theyhuggedherandshouted,“HappyMother’sDay,dearMummy!”Samanthagavemeabighug,saying,"Youaresobraveandclever!Iwouldn'tknowwhattodowithoutyou!“套路三:said，+______________：said,comfortingme……comfortedme,saying……huggedmeandsaid,练习:“Ibetyouaretoobusytofixyourcar,sojustleaveittous!”theoldman______________________________.(向我保证，眼睛闪闪发光）.例4：

Tiredandhungry,Janefinallysaidtoherself,“Tom,Imissyou!Ishouldn’thavequarreledwithyou.”套路四:___________________，+said：练习:_________________________________(越来越羞愧后悔)，hewenttoapologisetohismom,“I’msorryforcheatingintheexam.Ipromisenottodoitanymore.”带着情绪“说”套路四Increasinglyashamedandregretful形容词作状语例5:“Ididit!”shesaidtoherself,hereyesfilledwithpride.套路五:said,+____________________练习:练习5:“AmI

wrong?”___________________(他问道，眼里充满疑虑).hequestioned,eyesfullofconfusion.独立主格带着情绪“说”套路五04续写赏析优秀学生习作情节合理丰富，衔接流畅自然语言丰富多样，大量动作描写优秀学生习作情节合理丰富，衔接流畅自然语言丰富多样，大量动作描写及格版范文IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.

WhenMrs.Clearysopenedthedoor,Iaskedherimmediately,“Whyismycatinyourwindow?“Mrs.Clearyswassoconfusedthatsheanswered,”Ididn’tknowhewasyours.Ithoughthewasabandonedbyhishost.SoIjustwantedtogivehimahome.IamsosorryifwhatIdidhashurtyou.”ThensheledmedirectlytothesittingroomandIsawthecatswereplayinghappily.

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

Excitedandglad,Ipickedhimupquickly,heldhimtightlyinmyarms,andkissedhimsoftly.TherewasasenseofguiltfloodinginmyheartwhenIfoundIhadmisunderstoodmykindneighbor.Nowmyangerdisappeared,tearsofgratitudewelledupinmyeyes.IthankedheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpottomyhome.ThelostandfoundpartnermademefeelIwassomeoneagain.优秀版范文

IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Themomentsheopenedthedoor,IaskedMrs.Clearywithwateryeyes,“Whyismycatinyourwindow?”Withaconfusingexpression,Mrs.Clearyresponded,“HonestlyIhadnoideahewasyours.IhadjustthoughthewasanotherabandonedpatheticcatsoItookhiminjustlikeItookinalltherest.IfwhatIdidhashurtyou,Iamawfully

apologetic.“Withouttheslightesthesitation,sheledmedirectlytothesittingroom,wherecatswereplayinghappily.

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

Afloodofexcitementpassedthroughmybody.Iimmediatelyscoopedhimupinmyarmsandheldhimcloseasherubbedbeneathmychin,purringcontentedly.Seeingmycatwelltakencareof,itdawnedonmethatIhadmisunderstoodmycaringneighbor.Nowmyangergavewaytogratitude.IextendedmyappreciationtoheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpothome,whereIthoughtheshouldbelong.ThelostandfoundcompanionmademefeelIwassomeoneagain.及格版范文默写

IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.__________________(当克利里斯太太打开门时),Iaskedherimmediately,“Whyismycatinyourwindow?“Mrs.Clearyswas__________________(如此的困惑，以至于她回答说),”Ididn’tknowhewasyours.Ithoughthe__________________(被他的主人抛弃了).SoIjustwantedto______________(给他一个家).Iamsosorryif__________________(如果我的行为伤害了你).”ThensheledmedirectlytothesittingroomandIsawthecats_______________(正在快乐地玩耍).

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash._______________(又兴奋又高兴),I_______________(赶紧把他抱起来),___________(紧紧地搂在怀里)inmyarms,and_______________(轻轻地亲吻了他).Therewas__________________(一种负罪感涌上心头)whenIfoundIhadmisunderstoodmykindneighbor.Nowmyangerdisappeared,____________(感激的泪水)welledupinmyeyes.IthankedheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpottomyhome.Thelostandfoundpartner__________________(让我觉得我又成了一个人).优秀版范文默写

IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.__________________(她一打开门),IaskedMrs.Cleary__________________(泪眼汪汪地),“Whyismycatinyourwindow?”__________________(克利里太太带着困惑的表情回答说),“Ididn’tknowhewasyours.Ijustthoughthewas__________________(另一只被遗弃的可怜猫)soItookhiminjustlikeItookinalltherest.__________________(如果我的行为伤害了你),Iam_____(非常抱歉）."Thensheledmedirectlytothesittingroom,__________________(小猫们在那里快乐地玩耍).

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

__________________(一股兴奋的洪流)passedthroughmybody.Iimmediatelypickedhimupandheldhimclose__________________(它在我的下巴下摩擦着，满足地地呜呜叫着).__________________(看到我的猫被照顾得很好),IrealizedIhadmisunderstoodmycaringneighbor.Now__________________(我的愤怒变成了感激).IthankedheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpothome,whereIthoughtheshouldbelong.Thelostandfoundcompanion__________________(让我觉得我又成了一个人).人与自然——人与动物

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