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WritingpracticeCommonwritingproblems:主谓宾SVO主系表SVP句子成分残缺不全Wealwaysworkingtilllateatnightbeforetakingexams.（误）

Wearealwaysworking/Wealwaysworktilllateatnightbeforetakingexams（正）

Weshouldreadbooksmaybeusefultous.（误）

Weshouldreadbookswhichmaybeusefultous.（正）

句子成分多余

Thistestisend,butthereisanothertestiswaitingforyou.（误）

Onetestends,butanotheriswaitingforyou.（正）

Thedriveroftheredcarwasdiedonthespot.（误）

Thedriveroftheredcardiedonthespot.（正）

3．主谓不一致

Someone/Somebodythinkthatreadingshouldbeselective.（误）

9．情态动词的误用

Itmaynotgoodtoourhealth.（误）

Itmaybenotgoodtoourhealth.（正）

Theyshouldspentmuchtime.（误）

Theyshouldspendmuchtime.（正）

10.Therebe句型的误用

Thereexistssomenewproblemssuchasbeingdishonest.（误）

Thereexist/arisesomenewproblemssuchasbeingdishonest.（正）

Therearemanywaytosolvethetuitionandfeesofcollegeeducation.（误）

Therearemanywaystoraisethemoneyforthetuitionandfeesforcollegeeducation.（正）

11.动宾搭配不当

Wemustpayattentiontoitandmakesolutionstotheproblem.（误）

Wemustpayattentionandfindasolutiontotheproblem.（正）

Italsomayhelpyoutomakesuccess.（误）

Itmayalsohelpyousucceed/obtainyourgoal.（正）

12.根据中文逐字硬译

Ifsomeone’sfamilysituationisnotwell,hecanapplyforloantobank.（误）

Ifone’sfamilyisnotwelloff,hecanapplytothebankforaloan.（正）Letalonetouchtheoutsideworldofcampus.(误)

Letalonegetintouchwiththeworldoutsideofthecampus。（正）Themostimportantofallistokeepagoodbodyhealth.（误）Themostimportantofallistokeepfit/healthy.（正）结构平衡问题Heenteredtheclassroom,putthebookonhisdeskandstartingtosendtheshortmessage.（误）Heenteredtheclassroom,putthebookonhisdeskandstartedtosendtheshortmessage.（正）Ienjoyplayingbasketball,readingnovelsandsingsongs.（误）Ienjoyplayingbasketball,readingnovelsandsingingsongs.（正）WritingPracticeWarm-upfortheupcomingCETwritingcompositionononDec17thDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinesgivenbelow.CollegeStudentsjobhunting1.近些年来出现大学生就业难问题2.产生这一现象的原因3.解决办法TheIncreasingStressonpeople1.造成人们生活压力较大的原因是什么2.如何减少人们的压力Shouldwefindajobrelatedtoourmajorornot？1.很多大学生毕业后从事的工作与所学专业关系不大，原因是……2.有人认为应该找与专业相关的工作,也有人认为无关紧要3.我的看法……ShouldCollegeGraduatesStartTheirOwnBusiness?1.目前大学毕业生就业竞争非常激烈2.有人认为去找工作不如自己创业3.我的看法……UnhealthyHabitsofCollegeStudents1.部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯，例如：晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏……2.这种不健康生活习惯的危害3.如何纠正CertificateCrazeonCampus1.近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”2.产生这一现象的原因3.你的看法KnowledgeandDiploma目前社会上存在这样一种说法，文凭越高越吃香2.而有人则认为文凭不等于知识3.你的观点HowtoSolveFoodSafetyProblems?1.目前食品安全问题时有发生造成这些问题的原因解决办法WhyDoPeopleLiketoBuyLotteries?1.目前社会上有许多人喜欢买彩票2.分析产生这种现象的原因3.提出你的建议Isgoodappearancemoreimportantthancapability?现在许多漂亮女孩尽管没有很强的能力人仍能找到很好的工作，因此一些人得出结论是外貌比能力更重要。你是否同意？给出你的理由CyberCrimes1.随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪摆在世人面前2.应该如何打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须解决的难题3.最为研究生，你应如何做？Testfornationalcivilservants1.近几年兴起一股报考国家公务员热潮2.分析产生这种现象的原因3.你对此的看法是……SomesamplesShouldwefindajobrelatedtothemajorornotThateverycollegegraduatelandsajobperfectlygearedtohismajordependsonaseriesofprerequisiteconditions—thattherearesufficientjobopportunities,everygraduateloveshismajor,thepayissatisfactory,andthelocationoftheworkplaceisideal,etc.Allthoseconditionsrenderaperfectmatchbetweenone’sspecialtyandone’sjobamerewish.Inreality,suchcorrespondenceispossibleonlyforafewfortunatestudents.Formoststudents,someofwhomcannotevenfindajob,theyshouldbepreparedforjobsonlypartiallyoreventangentiallyrelatedtotheirmajor.Asamatteroffact,collegeeducationdoesnotseektoproducestudentswhoonlyengageincareersbasedontheirmajor.Moreandmoreuniversitiesnowemphasizefoundationalandinterdisciplinaryeducationtodevelopbroad-caliberstudentscapableofcopingwithdiversechallengesinarapidlychangingworld.Animportantfunctionofuniversityeducationisjusttoexpandstudents’intellectualcapacityandenhancetheiremotionalmaturity.Studentsmustrealizethatstudyingaparticularmajordoesnotautomaticallyguaranteeareadycareerinthatmajor.Ofcourse,studentsembarkingongraduatestudiesshouldpursuecareersrelatedtotheirmajor.AstudentpreparedtospendtwoorthreeyearsonaMaster’sprogramandanotherthreeorfiveyearsonaPh.D.programmusthaveanintenseandgenuineinterestinaparticularsubject.Thefailuretoworkinarelatedfieldwouldbeahugewasteofthetimeandenergy,andofthein-depthknowledgeacquired.Inseekingajob,astudentshouldoptforthejobthataccordswithhisinterestandallowshimtobestexploithistalents.One’scareersuccessdependsnotnecessarilyonone’sspecializedknowledge,butonhowoneupdatestheexistingknowledgeandfitsintoanewenvironment.ShouldCollegeGraduatesStartTheirOwnBusiness?Withthecompetitioninthejobmarketbecomingincreasinglyfierceforcollegegraduates,someambitiousstudentshavetriedtheirhandsatlaunchingtheirownbusinesses.Overtheyears,therehavebeenmanysuccessfulcasesofstudententrepreneurshipandsuchattemptsshouldbeencouragedandpromotedbyboththeuniversitiesandthesocietyatlarge.Collegestudentswhostartbusinessesarepioneers,amongwhomwillbebornChina’sfuturebusinessleaders.Facedwithunknownchallenges,theyareaudaciousenoughtoembarkonaperilousjourneywhilemostoftheirpeersenjoystablesalariesbyworkingaswhite-collarsathigh-endofficebuildings.Nevertheless,theyarethemastersoftheirowndestinyand,exposedtomanymoreuncertaintiesandsetbacks,theydevelopperseverance,staminaandtheindomitablespiritthatareindispensibletoallthegreatentrepreneurs.Eveniftheyfail,theyarenotdown;theykeepexploringfornewbusinessopportunitiesandworktirelesslyuntiltheysucceed.Aspeopleofvision,ofindividualinitiative,ofleadership,andofcreativityandinnovation,theyrepresentthefutureandthehopeofanation.Notallcollegegraduatesaresuitableforundertakingentrepreneurialprojects.Tolaunchabusiness,oneneedstohaveasoundbusinessidea,aviablebusinessplan,thecharismatocreateacohesiveteamwheremembersmakeconcertedeffortsforacommonobjective,effectivemanagerialskills,andaboveall,thecouragetocompeteagainstpowerfulrivalsandultimatelytoprevail.Theessentialdifferencebetweenthestudentswhobecomecivicservantsingovernmentorganizationsoremployeesatleadingdomesticormultinationalcompaniesandthosewhocreatetheirownbusinessesisthattheformeraredocilefollowerswhereasthelatterareaggressivetrailblazers.Forthisreason,business-launchingcollegegraduatesaremoreadmirable,andthustheycommandourdeeprespect.UnhealthyHabitsofCollegeStudentsItcanbenoticedthattherearesomeunhealthylivinghabitsamongyoungpeople,especiallycollegestudents.Typicalexamplesincludestayinguplate,beingaddictedtogames,consuminginaninappropriateway.Thus,dueattentionshouldbepaidtostudents’dailyhabits.Apparently,thesebadhabitsmaygeneratenegativeimpacts.Tobeginwith,theymayimpairstudents’physicalhealthandpsychologicalfitness.Inaddition,whatworriesmanyteachersisthattheymayalsoexertnegativeinfluencesonstudents’academicperformance.Toconclude,nevercanweturnablindeyetothesephenomena.Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisissue,itistimethatwetookeffectivemeasure.Firstly,itissuggestedthatuniversitiesorcollegesshouldcultivatestudents’awarenessofhealthyliving.Secondly,studentsthemselvesarewell-advisedtolearntoregulateandcontroltheirownlifeappropriately.Onlybydoingso,canwehopetoseetheidealscenesinwhichstudentsenjoytheircolorfulandhealthylifeinIvoryTower.CertificateCrazeonCampusInrecentyears,gettingacertificatehasbecomeanewcrazeamongcollegestudents.Justrandomlyaskastudentoncampuswhatheorsheisbusydoing;quitepossibly,youmaygettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertifi