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1/29BasicWriting2/29时间分配题型题量赋分时间（分钟）基础写作11510基础写作命题特点：考生按所给内容及要求，用5个规范英语句子描述所给信息全部内容，并组成连贯短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文能力。3/29对于书面表示要求：1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆盖全部语言关键点

Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构数量和准确性

3.coherent,tight上下文连贯性

即有效地使用语句间连接成份，使全文结构紧凑。4.usethewordsproperly

语言得体性5.Writeyourarticleclearly.6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.4/29Tomakethearticletight,gracefulandclear.Toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions.

表示时尽可能用一些较高级词汇，防止使用重复词语，使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也能够给文章增添亮点。

（2）Tousesometransitionalwords

恰当选取过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。

(3)Tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder,emphasis,acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial

适当使用各种句型，注意语言丰富性，多样化，以改变多端形式来表现丰富多彩内容。5/29Basicwritingskills

Waysofwritinggoodsentences6/29方法一.一句多译

Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly….

Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…7/29Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosooner

hadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe……Hardly

hadwearrivedatthevillagewhen

we….8/29Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture

方法一.一句多译

一…就受到欢迎9/29AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment/immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…方法一.一句多译10/29Practice

一句多译

这本书花了我300元。

Ispent300yuanonthebook.Ipaid300yuanforthebook.

Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.Thebookcostme300yuan.

11/29Practice

一句多译昨天下午他才来。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.

Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.

Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.

12/29Rewritethesentences

方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简练高档

（1）MostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

MostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

（2）Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy.

Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy.

13/29方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简练高档Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非谓语动词)听到这个消息,他们变很激动._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.尽管被通知许多遍,他依然重复这个错.__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀请讲话,你应该在会议上保持缄默.

Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.Hearing

Havingbeentoldinvited14/29Translatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非谓语动词)1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3，做完作业后，他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.

Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.15/29方法三.丰富句式DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒装句)Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.16/29方法三.丰富句式SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUsefulThedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel.NeartheGreatWallHotelisthesquare.YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish.ItwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish.17/29Ifailedintheexamagain.WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareportsoon.WealllikeJim.WealllikeJim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.

18/291.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice

怎样使用较丰富句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

19/295.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）

6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（用并列句）7．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.

(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.20/29Usedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence.Makesentencesbyusingnon-predicate.3.Sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful

Summaries:

21/29Practice此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历事，由此写一篇文章。要求：1必须使用5个句子表示图画内容。2将5个句子组成连贯短文。22/29步骤一审题narrationpasttensethethirdpersontimeorderwritingstyle:tense:person:order:23/29caughtabirdfixedastringtoitagirllookformotherapolicecomforther步骤二关键点24/29sendherhomelostinthoughtsetthebirdfreefeelhappy步骤二关键点25/29步骤三.扩展成句，连句成篇1.Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.

2.Hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice-mancomforther.3.ThepolicemansentthegirlhomeandLiMingwaslostinthought.4.LiMingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy.26/29步骤四.仔细检验，认真修改①查是否遗漏关键点，信息是否