湖南省雅礼中学高三月考试卷（一）读后续写天赋VS努力讲义

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中文DuringthesummerbeforePattyenteredfifthgrade,shedecidedtotryanewsport.四年级暑假时，Patty决定尝试一项新的运动。SwimtrainingwasnearlyoverandPattywasthefastestswimmerinheragegroup.Shehadalwaysbeenthebest.游泳训练快要结束了，Patty是她年龄组中最快的游泳者。她一直以来都是成绩最好的那个人。Theneighborhoodwasofferingaoneweektennistrainingcourse.PattyandherfriendDarlagotpermissionfromtheirparentstojoin.社区提供了为期一周的网球训练课程。Patty和她的朋友Darla得到了父母的许可加入网球课程。OnSaturdaymorning,Darla'smomtookthegirlstoastoreandboughtthemeachagood,usedtennisracket.星期六的早上，Darla的妈妈带着女孩们去商店，给她们每个人买了一把好用的二手网球拍。“Ifyougirlssticktotennis,thenwe'lltalkabout

anewracket.Thesewilldofornow,”saidDarla'smom.“如果你们坚持打网球，那我们就会考虑买一把新的球拍。现在这些暂时够用了，”Darla的妈妈说道。Thegirlswereexcitedabouttheirnewpurchases.女孩们非常开心有了属于自己的球拍。OnMondaymorning,at7:00a.m.,Patty'smomwokeherup.“It'stimefortennis!”在星期一的早上，上午7点，Patty的妈妈叫醒了她。“该去训练网球了！”Pattycoveredherface.“Mom,it'stooearly!”She

madegreateffortto

getoutofbedanddowntothebreakfasttable.Patty捂住脸。“妈妈，太早了！”她努力地爬起床，走到早餐桌前。PattyfinishedbreakfastandrantoDarla'shouse,thentheywalkedtothecourt.Patty吃完早餐跑到Darla家，然后她们一起走到球场。Mrs.Cane,thetenniscoach,linedeveryoneupandstartedwiththebasics.网球教练Cane夫人让大家排好队，从基础训练开始。Afterthat,Mrs.Canetirelesslytaughtthemtopracticetheirforehandandbackhand.在那之后，Cane夫人不厌其烦地教她们练习正手和反手击球。Bytheendoftheweek,Pattyhadmadeimpressiveprogress.Mrs.CanementedthatPattyhadlotsofpotential.在那一周结束时，Patty取得了令人巨大的进步。Cane夫人评论说Patty有很大的潜力。Darla,ontheotherhand,wasstruggling.Theotherteenagerswerehavingatoughtimeofit,too.另一方面，Darla和其他的青少年们一样还在苦苦挣扎。Pattywastheonlyonewhoseemedtogetsomewhere.Patty是唯一似乎有所进展的人。Sincethen,DarlahadalwaysbeenoutintheAugustheat,practicingherservesorhittingtheball.从那以后，Darla总是在8月的炎热中练习发球或击球。Pattywasn'treallyinterested.Patty对此并不是真的感兴趣。Bytheendofthesummer,Darlabegantogetthehangofit.Shejoinedaneighborhoodjuniortennisteam.到了夏天结束时，Darla开始掌握了网球的技巧。她加入了一个社区的青少年网球队。TherewouldbematcheseveryThursday.Pattywantedtojoinaswell,butshedidn'twanttomissherfavoriteTVshow.每个星期四都会有比赛。Patty也想加入，但她不想错过她最喜欢的电视节目。Shetoldherselfthatshewouldjoinitwhenshegotsomefreetime.IfDarlahadfun,shewouldjointheteaminthespring.她告诉自己等她有空的时候就会加入。如果Darla觉得加入球队是令人开心的事，那她会在春天加入这个队伍。续写第一段：Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.在开学前的那个星期，Cane夫人又举办了一次训练课程。续写第二段：Pattycouldn'tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.Patty在回家的路上忍不住回想自己糟糕的表现。文本分析：故事大意：Patty和自己的好朋友Darla在暑假参加了一项新的运动，网球。Patty凭借自己的运动天赋，取得一定的进展。而Darla和其他人却在苦苦挣扎，Darla非常勤奋，她总是不惧炎热，勤加练习。Patty开始因为喜欢的电视节目而没有参加练习。在开学的前一个星期，Cane夫人举行了一次训练课程，Patty表现的一塌糊涂。她开始反思天赋是否要比努力重要，最终认识到自己的问题，开始努力训练。有种“龟兔赛跑”的既视感....续写情节：Para1:根据续写第一句，重点写Patty还在为自己的天赋沾沾自喜，并没有认真练习，而好朋友Darla已经取得了飞速的进步，成为了球队的队长。在比赛中，Patty因为疏于练习，表现得不尽如人意。Para2:根据续写第二局，可知Patty开始反思自己得骄傲，认为天赋会超越勤奋是不切实际的白日梦。决定和好朋友一起努力。试水作文Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.

Thistime,thetrainingwascentredonenhancingtheplayers'technicalskills.

Pattyattended,

confidentinhernaturaltalent.

However,itsoonbecameapparentthatherskills

hadstagnated.

Patty,whohadbeenthestarswimmer,wasnowstrugglingtokeeppaceonthetenniscourt.

Incontrast,

Darlawaseffortlesslyserving,andtheotherplayerswhohaddiligentlytrainedoverthesummershowed

impressiveprogress.

Patty

foundherselffallingbehind,hernaturaltalentovershadowedbytheothers'hardworkanddedication.

Pattycouldn'tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.

The

goldenauraof'naturaltalent'seemedtohavefaded,

exposingthe

harshtruthofherlackofeffort.

Sheacknowledgedthattalentalonewasinsufficientandthatsheneededtoinvestrealworkintotennisdrills,conditioning,practicematches.

Thewalkhomewasatimeforreflection.PattyglancedatDarla,hereffortlessservesreplayinginhermind.Shefinallyunderstoodthevalueofhardwork.

Determined,PattyturnedtoDarlaandasked:"Darla,wouldyoubewillingtoassistmewithtennispracticetomorrow?"

Pattymadeamitmentinhermind,notjusttotennis,buttotheeffortrequiredforsuccess.

Herdecisionmarkedasteptowardsdedicationand

theacceptanceofthetransformativejourneyshewasabouttoembarkupon.读后续写：（官方范文）Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.DarlaandPattysignedupimmediately.Mrs.CanewaspleasedwithDarla'sprogress."Well,Icantellwho'sbeenpracticing!"PattywishedthatshehadbeenasdiligentasDarla,butshewasstillproudthatshehadsuch"natural"ability.Darladecidedtojointheneighborhoodjuniortennisteam.MatcheswouldbeeveryThursday.Pattywantedtojoin,butshedidn'twanttomisstheYouthTroopTVshow.Shedaydreamedaboutbeingthenexttennisstar.Shetoldherselfthatshewouldcontinuetohitthetennisballwhenshegotsomefreetime.IfDarlahadfun,shewouldjointheteaminthespring.Severalweekspassed,andPattywenttooneofthematches.Shewasreallyimpressedwiththewaythegirlswerehitting.Shewasalittlebitlost,too."Thirtylove,"criedDarla,beforesheserved."Whatisshetalkingabout?"thoughtPatty.Shewantedtoaskbutshedidn'twanttoappeardumb.Finally,thematchwasover.Darlaandherpartnerlost,buttheyhadawonderfultime.Allthekidswerereallynice.Pattywishedshehadjoined.Itwastoolate,now.Pattycouldn'tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.ThatwastheworstweekofPatty'slife.Shewasveryexcitedforthegirlsandcheeredthemon.Butinsideshewasmiserable."Whydidn'tIgoaheadandjoinwhentheyaskedme?"shethought.Nowitreallywastoolate.Noonewasbegginghertojointheteamanymorebecausetheydidn'tneedher.Thegirlshaddevelop