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Howtowritebetter:Inversion读后续写微技能指导3—倒装句在续写中的运用Scoringlevel311~15pointsScoringlevel416~20pointsScoringlevel521~25pointslogicalabundantaccuratecoherentVocabulary&GrammaticalstructuresInversionFightforthesecondchance!thequarrelingcouandJane—20166hejiangGetridofcommonmistaes!NotonlyJanewasehaustedandhungry,butwasalsodeemeantsomuchtoher/\shewasJanehadJaneseenthanwhenJanewasinsuchhelplesssituationNosoonerhadsbdonesththan…Onlyadverbs/adverbialclauseinversion\wasshe/Hardlyhadsbdonesthwhen…Review倒装语序部分倒装完全倒装整个谓语主语Incameourteacher系动词/助动词/情态动词主语动词NeverwillIforgetyou一、完全倒装谓语动词完全放置主语之前的句子，便是完全倒装句。为了强调状语，把表示方位或时空的副词或介词短语，如here，there，now，then，u，onthewall等，置于句首时。1InalecturehallofauniversityinEnglandsitsaallfactory二、部分倒装1．only修饰副词、介词短语或状语从句，且放在句首时。OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell翻译：只有以这种方法，我们才能学好英语。Only状语（介词短语/副词/状语从句），位于句首never,hardly,scarcely几乎不，仅仅，决不seldom,little,barely仅够，几乎没有rarely不常，很少nowhere无处，到处都无bynomeans;innocase;atnotime决不not…until;hardlyscarcely…when,nosooner…than一…就2在否定或半否定词放句首表示强调时，部分倒装。NeverbeforehaveImethimSeldomdidtheboyreadnewsofseeingsuchwonderfulscenery（风景）3Nosooner…than…Hardly/Scarcely…when…一…就（两个动作一前一后发生）他们一走出房间就下雨了。1）Nosoonerhadtheygoneoutoftheroomthanitbegantorain2）Hardlyhadtheygoneoutoftheroomwhenitbegantorain前一个分句用部分倒装，后一个分句不变。Hescouldhearhim4、在so/suchthat句式中，如果so/such引导的部分位于句首时，主句中的主语和谓语需要部分倒装天这么黑，他看不见同伴的脸。Sodarwasitthathecouldn’tseethefacesofhiscompanionsTranslatesentencesJane在之前的人生中从未体会过如此强烈的后悔之情。Never…2Jane太累了，以至于她一躺下就很快睡着了。So…that…Hardly…NeverbeforeinJane’slifehadshebeensoovercomebyregretSotiredwasJanethatshefellfastasleeomentshelaydownHardly/NosoonerhadJanelaiddownwhen/thanshefellfastasleepbecauseofehaustionNotonlywasJaneehaustedandhungry,butshewasalsodeeebyregretNosooner/HardlyhadJaneseentheseberriesthan/whensherealiedhowstarvingshewasSotiredwasJanethatshefellfastasleeomentshelaydownOnlywhenJanewasinsuchhelmeantsomuchtoherLet’sconclude!Inwhichsituationscanweuseinversionincontinuationwritingfeelingsactionsthemehighlightingfeelingsactionsaesperfect!mediately,shetoooffheryellowblouseandwavedatthehelicoaingly,thehelicogotoffthehelico,Janewassoecitedthatshecouldn’thelydearTom!Iwillneverleaveyouagain!”ThecoucouldconquereverydifficultyinlifeWhichsentencescanberewrittenwithinversion①②③④⑤shecouldn’thelpweepingNeverwillIleaveyouagain!”Onlyafterthislife-risingjourneydidtheyrealiethecouldconquereverydifficultyinlifeIsitgoodenoughtoreachscoringlevel4or5OverdoneisworsethanundoneherlungEhaustedas/thoughshewas,shestilleptyellingatthetopofHardlyhadTomgotoffwhenhedashedtohisbelovedwifesoecitedwasJ