读后续写续写点3讲义 高考英语作文复习专项

采用续写点的思路来训练读后续写，一个好处是，每个点都可以拆分，将繁重的写作任务化为轻量化的小练习。在练习的初期，不用全文写完一篇，还可用很多篇尝试一个续写点。这就是Practice。今天具体讲一下第一个续写点：如何衔接段首句必修3第3单元的Come

and

Eat

HereThe

next

morning,

Wang

Peng

opened

his

restaurant

earlier

and

put

the

above

sign

outdoors.(1)采用流程式的句子：段首句：Thenextmorning,WangPengopenedhisrestaurantearlierandputtheabove

sign

outdoors.①Withadiscountand

thenewsign,hewonsomecustomersbackfromYongHui'sslimmingrestaurant.②Notsurprisingly,withadiscountand

thenewsign,mostpeopleintheimmediatearea

cametohisrestaurant.③Thenewsign

drovemanynewcustomersinside.Becauseof

thenewsign,manypeople

walkedintohisrestaurant.(2)采用矩阵式的句子：段首句：Thenextmorning,

WangPeng

openedhisrestaurantearlierandputtheabove

sign

outdoors.①He

smiledwhenhethoughtofhisrestauranthavingplentyofcustomers.Heeven

imaginedthatcustomersmightpraisehisfoodandpromisethattheywouldcometohisrestaurantnexttime.②He

preparedhismenuofmutton,pork,beefandfriedricehopefullyandconfidently.③WangPeng

sawanumberofcustomersenterhisrestaurant,feelingrelieved.④He

wasconfidentofhavingmorecustomersthanYongHui.(3)采用流程式+矩阵式的句子：段首句：Thenextmorning,WangPeng

openedhisrestaurantearlierandputtheabove

sign

outdoors.Staringat

thisnewsign,

he

picturedthathisrestaurantwasfullofcustomersagain.在和学生的实际操练中，有的段落硬采用以上方式有点怪怪的。我的解释是，即使用不上，能想到这些连接点，就很到位了。再强调一下：1.第一段所给首句，与你紧接着写的一句的连接点；2.你写的第一段最后一句和第二段所给首句之间的连接点；3.第二段所给首句，与你紧接着写的一句的连接点。续写点入手还要强调一件事：关键情节，关键词和点题等，都是在原文中找的！找原文，既是读后续写的根本，也是你的破题口。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonanewtriptotheWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.Wereached

Albuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairport

anddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifecookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.My

dadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsand

water

rollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohave

breakfast.

"Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"

hesaid.Afterbreakfast,Iwenttohelp

AuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepoutto

graze(吃草).

IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreally

cool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslong

asmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydad

andIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthe

mountains."Don'tbelateforsupper,”

UnclePaulcried,

"and

keeptothetracksothatyou

don'tgetlost!"

"OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewere

outofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreen

pipetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautiful

woven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Model：Suddenly

alittlerabbit

jumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

It

wassocute,

likeaspiritintheforest,thatIcannothelpchasingit.Dadfollowedmeclose.Myheartwas

swelledwithexcitementwhenIapproachedtherabbit,

closerandcloser.Butweneglectedthat

we'dalreadyleftawayfromthetrack.What'sworse,therabbitdisappeared,allofasudden.

Whenwerealizedthatwecouldn't

gobacktothefarmhouseforsupper,everythingwastoo

late.We

hadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

I

sobbed,"Dad,whatshall

wedonow?"Hesmiledbitterly,

"UnclePaulwouldtrytofindus."Timepassedlikealeaking

tap.Hungryandtired,Ihadaterrible

desireforasteamingcupofteaandapieceofpizza.

ThenDadsaid,

"Doyouheartherivernearby?Wecangobackalongit."

Luckily,wereached

thefarmhousesafeandsound.Howwisemydadwas!Keepcalmnomatterwhathappened

andthenyouc