读写任务之 写好主题句

读写任务---写好主题句Tomanypeopleeventheword“work〞soundsunpleasant,notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice,mayworkhardattheweekend,paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.Whatisthereason,then?Inmostcases,itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy,likemakingupwoodenboxes,butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone,suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay:Ihavemadesomething!Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring〞jobs.

[写作内容]1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括〔1〕描述清洁工工作的艰辛；〔2〕假设没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？〔3〕你对平凡的工作的看法1There

is

no

doubt

that

what

a

cleaner

does

is

harder

compared

with

any

other

jobs

in

the

society.

On

one

hand

,

they

must

get

up

in

the

early

morning

every

day

to

clean

the

street

while

we

are

sill

in

the

sweet

sleeping

dreams

.

On

the

other

hand,

they

also

suffer

from

less

respect

and

lower

pay

,

working

all

day

on

streets

no

matter

it

is

sun

shines

strongly

or

snowheavily.2Nobody

could

imagine

what

an

bad

environment

we

would

live

in

if

there

were

no

cleaners

.

Wherever

we

go

,

there

is

rubbish.

Maybe

we

would

soon

be

drowned

in

the

mountain

of

rubbish.

Even

worse,

if

there

wee

no

change

about

that,

diseases

would

spread

at

a

very

quick

speed.

Is

there

anything

that

can

be

worse

than

this

!

3From

the

above

,

I

can

draw

the

conclusion

safely

that

even

the

smallest

and

the

most

ordinary

job,such

as

cleaning

the

street

is

also

the

necessary

part

to

keep

the

society

going

smoothly.

Consequently,

those

who

do

those

most

insignificant

jobs

should

get

respect

as

much

as

those

being

engineers

or

teachers.Findoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph范文

In

the

passage

,

the

author

mainly

stressed

the

importance

of

small

and

ordinary

work

,

such

as

cleaning

the

street

because

of

their

essentiality

for

the

organization

of

the

society

,and

thinks

those

doing

such

jobs

should

be

respected

greatly.

There

is

no

doubt

that

what

a

cleaner

does

is

harder

compared

with

any

other

jobs

in

the

society.

On

one

hand

,

they

must

get

up

in

the

early

morning

every

day

to

clean

the

street

while

we

are

sill

in

the

sweet

sleeping

dreams

.

On

the

other

hand,

they

also

suffer

from

less

respect

and

lower

pay

,

working

all

day

on

the

street

no

matter

it

is

sun

shines

strongly

or

snow,

wind

heavily.

Nobody

could

imagine

what

an

bad

environment

we

would

live

in

if

there

were

no

cleaners

in

the

city.

Wherever

we

go

,

there

is

rubbish.

Maybe

we

would

soon

be

drowned

in

the

mountain

of

rubbish.

Even

worse,

if

there

wee

no

change

about

that,

diseases

would

spread

at

a

very

quick

speed.

Is

there

anything

that

can

be

worse

than

this

!

From

the

above

,

I

can

draw

the

conclusion

safely

that

even

the

smallest

and

the

most

ordinary

job,such

as

cleaning

the

street

is

also

the

necessary

part

to

keep

the

society

going

smoothly.

Consequently,

those

who

do

those

most

insignificant

jobs

should

get

respect

as

much

as

those

being

engineers

or

teachers.(要点1主题句)(要点2主题句)(要点3主题句)写好主题句的重要性写作（满分20分）分值评分标准18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。写作时，要让压力山大的阅卷老师不用刻意寻找而能一眼就看到文章中的要点。最好是在每段的开头就点题，并且要紧靠主题句加以拓展修饰润色，以到达画龙点睛的效果。Howtowritean

atopicsentence?

.直接答复要点Model:假设你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反响？直接答复：假设我是野生动物园离里的动物，当游客一直与我拍照，我会不开心。〔2021广东高考读写任务要点2〕

IfIwereananimalinthewildlifepark,Iwouldfeelunhappywhenpeoplekeeptakingphotos

withme.(subjunctivemood)

你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？写作要点是询问考生的看法时，对提问直接作出答复。Asforme,theidealcollegelifeiswonderful/relaxing.模式1主题句的7种模式及稳固练习即学即练11.假设没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？〔13年广东高考读写任务要点2〕2.上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师？〔12年广东高考读写任务要点1〕

ThispassageremindsmeofmyChineseteacher,Mr.Li,whohelpedmealot.

Nobodycouldimaginewhatanbadenvironmentwewouldliveiniftherewerenocleaners.(subjunctivemood)说明立场Model:你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(2021年广东高考读写任务要点3)

Ibelievethattakingphotoswithanimalsshouldbebanned.明确表示对某观点支持、或反对；或说明对某事物的看法。模式2.表示支持或赞同：表示反对或不赞同：你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。(2021年广东高考读写任务要点1)Idisagreewiththeideathatpeopleusemoneytoencouragekidstogetgoodmarks.Idon’tliketheideaof

encouragingkidswithcashjustbecausetheyhavegotgoodmarks.Iagreewiththeideaofusingmoneytoencouragekidstogetgoodmarks.

Idisagreewiththeideathat…Iamopposedtotheideaof…Idisapproveoftheideathat…Insomeway,Iagreewith…but…Whatthewritersaidsoundsreasonable,but…

Theexpressionsofsupportingandobjecting

Iagreewiththestatement/ideathat…Iaminfavorof…IappreciatethatIapproveoftheideathat…Ibelievethat…Iagreewithwhatthewritersaid/says.表示支持或赞同的句型：表示反对或不赞同的句型：1.写作要点：对作者写感谢信这种习惯的看法。明示观点：如：我高度赞扬作者写感谢信的习惯。Ithinkhighlyoftheauthor’shabitofwritingthank-youletters.2.写作要点：你怎样看待老师对学生的影响？〔12年广东高考读写任务要点3〕摆明观点：如：我认为，一个好老师在学生的成长中起着重要作用。译成英文：Frommyownexperience,Icansafelydrawaconclusionthatagoodteacherplaysareallyimportantroleinstudents’lives.即学即练2重述要点

Thereisnodoubtthatwhatacleanerdoesishardercomparedwithanyotherjobsinthesociety.不直接答复写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。模式3.例1：描述清洁工工作的艰辛。〔13年广东高考读写任务要点1〕

例2：在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义.Fromthestory,Ilearnthatunderstandingandforgivingothersplaysanimportantroleinourlife.1.要点：建设绿色校园的重要性。2.要点：中学生活和大学生活的差异.即学即练3

Asweallknow,thecollegelifeiswidelydifferentfromthemiddleschoolone.Thereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportanttobuildagreencampus.总述原因

Thereasonsforthisareobvious/various……forthereasonsasfollowsThereasonwhy…isthat…模式4.人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照(2021年广东高考)重述：人们在参观动物园时是喜欢和动物拍照.Whenpeoplearevisitingazoo,theyliketotakephotoswithanimalsforthereasonsasfollow.First,….Secondly,….Thirdly,……的原因显而易见…的原因有多种…的原因如下句型提示2.

这起事故发生的原因有哪些？Therearethreereasonswhy

theaccidenttookplace.

First,….Secondly,….Thirdly,…

1.你支持青少年应该与父母分享秘密的理由是什么？

Ithinkthatteenagers

shouldsharetheirsecretswiththeirparentsforthereasonsasfollows.即学即练4稳固练习:根据给出的写作要点写出主题句。[说明立场][答复要点][总述原因]

[重述要点]

1.你认为是否应该穿校服。2.你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。3.简述你支持拆(teardown)旧图书馆的理由。4.分析学生之间存在竞争的利弊。1.你认为是否应该穿校服上学。

Iagreewiththerequirementthatstudentsshouldwearschooluniformonthecampus.[说明立场]2.你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。

Idisagreewiththeideaofwearingschooluniformsatschool.AsfarasIamconcerned,agoodteachershouldtreathisstudentsfairlyaswellasmakeclasseslivelyandinteresting.3.简述你支持拆旧图书馆的理由。4.分析学生之间存在竞争的利弊。Isupporttearingdowntheoldlibraryforthefollowingreasons.ThereasonswhyIsupporttearingdowntheoldlibraryarevarious.Asweallknow,competitionamongstudentshasadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.直接答复要点段落主题句的模式Conclusion说明立场重述要点总述原因

引出建议、方法、措施、步骤

引出经历说出感受corretnessaccuracyAvoidmitakestensevoicespelling引出经历

常用句型：Itremindsmeofmyownexperiencewhen…Itremindsmeofthetimewhen…Itremindsmeofanaccidentwhichhappenedseveraldaysago.Afterreadingthestoryabove,Irecalltheexperienceofmyfriendwho…Thestoryaboveremindsmeofoneofmyexperiences.用来引出记叙文的具体事例。模式5.要点：讲述一次你〔或你朋友〕想家的经历。(11年高考)Thestoryremindsmeofmysimilarexperienceofbeinghomesick.要点：描述你或你的朋友在此灾难发生时的一次经历。(14年惠二调)Itremindsmeofmyexperienceduringthe

typhoonwhichhitmyhometownseveraldaysago.

1.写作要点：表达一次你宽恕他人或被宽恕的经历；Itremindsmeofmysimilarexperienceofbeingforgivenbyafriend.

即学即练52.写作要点：表达你学英语的经历。TakemypersonalexperienceoflearningEnglishforexample.常用句型：●

Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasurestosolvetheproblem.●

Weshouldtryourbesttoovercomethedifficulties.●

Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatwearefacedwith.●

Itisnecessarythatproperactionshouldbetakentoendthephenomenon.●

Iwouldliketosharesomeadvice/suggestionson.......引出措施、方法、步骤、建议等模式6.如何才能获得快乐？Iwouldliketosharesomeadvice/suggestionsonhowtomakeourselveshappy.2021年读写任务:你的父母〔或其他亲人〕是如何鼓励你学习的；

Myparentsoftenadoptsomeeffectiveways

toencouragemetostudyhard.2021年读写任务:(3)你认为政府怎样才能更好地解决住房问题。说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。

AsfarasIamconcerned,

thegovernmentshouldtakeactiontosolvethehousingproblem.即学即练6

Luckily,peoplearetakingmoreandmoremeasurestoprotecttheenvironment.

说出感受

(07年高考题)以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；模式7.

(08年高考题)以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：

(1)

对中学生活的感受；

IwasdeeplymovedafterIreadyourletter.Asforme,themiddleschoollifeishardbutmeaningfulandcolourfulaswell.relaxed〔放松的〕moved(感动的)happy,pleased,glad,delighted〔快乐的〕angry，annoyed〔生气的〕nervous〔紧张的〕unhappy，sad〔不开心的〕disappointed〔失望的〕grateful,thankful〔感谢的〕worried，anxious〔担忧的，焦虑的〕upset〔烦心的，不安的〕frustrated〔沮丧的〕surprised,amazed，astonished〔惊讶的〕confident〔自信十足的〕proud〔自豪的〕encouraged，inspired〔受鼓舞的〕frightened,scared,afraid〔害怕的〕lonely(孤独的)determined〔下定决心的〕hopeful〔充满希望的〕hopeless〔毫无希望的〕homesick〔想家的〕关于感受的形容词写作要点：你读这篇演讲稿的感受。如：读完这篇讲稿，我为中国人感到自豪。

Afterreadingthisspeech,IfeltreallyproudoftheChinesepeople.写作要点：你读完这个故事的感受。如:这个故事使我深受启发。Iwasdeeplyinspiredbysuchastory.即学即练7直接答复要点段落主题句的模式Conclusion说明立场重述要点总述原因引出建议、方法、措施、步骤引出经历说出感受稳固练习:根据给出的要点写出主题句。1.你认为是否应该穿校服上学。

2.这个故事使我想起了自己一年前参加英语演讲比赛的经历。4.你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。5.简述你支持拆旧图书馆的理由。6.分析学生之间存在竞争的利弊。[说明立场][引出经历]

[引出建议、方法、措施、步骤][答复要点][总述原因]

[重述要点]

1.你认为是否应该穿校服上学。

2.这个故事使我想起了自己一年前参加英语演讲比赛的经历。3.应该采取措施解决医疗问题。4.你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。5.简述你支持拆旧图书馆的理由。6.分析学生之间存在竞争的利弊。

7.读完这篇讲稿，我真的对那个学生的感到羞愧。[说出感受

]

8.如何才能获得幸福？9.交通事故发生的原因有哪些？10.你对用金钱鼓励孩子做家务的看法。11.假设你在事故现场,你会不会帮助那位受伤的老太太？12：对作者用英语写日记这种习惯的看法。13.举例说明在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义.14.说说人们对节约资源所采取的措施。15.你认为家长应该如何对待孩子的错误。1.你认为是否应该穿校服上学。

Iagreewiththerequirementthatstudentsshouldwearschooluniformonthecampus.

2.这个故事使我想起了自己一年前参加英语演讲比赛的经历。ThestoryremindsmeofmyownexperiencewhenItookpartinanEnglishspeakingcompetitiononeyearago.

[说明立场]

[引出经历]

3.应该采取措施解决医疗问题。

Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasurestosolvethemedicalproblem

.4.你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质。Inmyeyes,agoodteachershouldtreathisstudentsfairlyaswellasmaketheclasslivelyandinteresting.[引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等][答复要点]5.简述你支持拆旧图书馆的理由。6.分析学生之间存在竞争的利弊。Isupporttearingdowntheoldlibraryforthefollowingreasons.Asweallknow,competitionamongstudentshasadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.

[总述原因]

[重述要点]

7.读完这篇讲稿，我真的对那个学生的感到羞愧。Afterreadingthisspeech,Ifeltreallysorryforthestudent.[说出感受]

8.Weshouldfindsomeeffectivewaystomakeourselveslivehappily.9.Thereasonswhytrafficaccidentstakeplacearevarious.First,….Next,…Finally,…10.Iagreewiththeideaofusingmoneytoencouragekidstodohousework.Idisagreewiththeideathatpeopleusemoneytoencouragekidstodohousework.8.如何才能获得幸福？9.交通事故发生的原因有哪些？10.你对用金钱鼓励孩子做家务的看法。。11.IfIhadbeenatthespotoftheaccident,Iwouldhavehelpedtheinjuredoldlady.12.Ithinkhighlyoftheauthor’shabitofkeeping