高考英语应用文求助信学案 高三英语一轮复习

应用文——求助信谋篇布局第一段：自我介绍+写作背景+写信目的自我介绍我是李华，来自红星中学的一名学生。version1:I’mLiHua.I’mastudentfromHongxingSchool.version2:I’mLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyinginHongxingSchool.采用了同位语、非谓语做状语的高级语法句式。写信背景我进入高中已经两个月了，但仍然很难适应这里的新学校生活。version1:Ihavebeeninhighschoolfortwomonths,butitisstillhardformetogetusedtothenewschoollifehere.version2:IthasbeentwomonthssinceIenteredhighschool.Nevertheless,Istillfinditdifficulttoadaptmyselftothenewschoollifehere.采用了Ithasbeen+一段时间+since从句的句式，时态运用恰当，Nevertheless比较高级的衔接词、还用了findit+adj+todosth形式宾语和不定式，体现了对语法的运用自如。最近，我正在为高考紧张复习，遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。version1:Now,IambusyinpreparingfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.AndIhavedifficultiesinfocusingonmystudy.version2:Recently,IhavebeenengaginginmakingpreparationsfortheCollegeEntranceExamination,butIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.采用了engageindoingsth的高级短语采用了makepreparationsfor的动词名词搭配的短语写信目的我写信想请您帮我一个忙。version1:I’mwritingthislettertoaskforyourhelp.version2:I’mwritingtothislettertoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor.采用了givemeahand/domeafavor的动词名词搭配的高级短语第二段：求助内容写具体需要帮助的事项Hopefullyyouwouldbesokindastogivemesomesuggestions/helponthefollowingproblems.Tobeginwith,（困难一）,whichhasannoyedmeforquitealongtime.Moreover,（困难二）,forpersonallyIlacktheverybasicexperienceonthismatter.Lastbutnotleast,whattroublesmemostis…注意高级衔接词，使文章衔接自然紧凑且完整。首先：initially,firstandforemost,tobeginwith其次：additionally,furthermore,moreover,inaddition,what’smore最后：ultimately,eventually,lastbutnotleast必备常用且高级的句式句型：1.Ihavetrouble/difficultyindoingsth.2.Unfortunately,Ifinditextremelyhardformetodosth.3.Doingsthisanotherterribleheadacheforme.4.dosb.afavor/giveab.ahand5.askforhelp/seekforhelp6.encountersomeproblems7.befacedwithdifficulties8.beengagedindoingsth.9.makepreparationsforsth10.overcomethefearof…11.offersomeconstructiveguidance(提供一些有建设性的指导)第三段：重申写信目的+表达感激之情/期待回复面对以上提到的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于如何解决这些问题的建议吗？version1:I’meagertogetyourhelpforthosequestions.Canyougivemesomeadviceonhowtodealwiththeseproblems?version2:Faced/Confrontedwiththeseproblemsmentionedabove,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomesuggestionsonhowtosolvetheseproblems?采用了Faced/Confronted固定搭配非谓语做状语的高级写法，mentionedabove此处为非谓语做后置定语，beanxiousto短语搭配使用希望能得到您善意且及时的帮助。期待您的回复。version1:IhopeIcangetyourkindandimmediatehelp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.version2:Hopefullyyourkindandtimelyhelpwouldbeofferedtome.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.写作演示一假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：作业多，没有时间运动；压力大，难以入睡；希望得到Kate的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可是适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已经写好。第一段：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的我叫李华，是一名高三学生。最近，我忙于复习高考，遇到了一些问题导致我难以集中学习。version1:I’mLiHuaandnowI’maSeniorthreestudent.Thesedays,I’mbusywithGaokao,butIhavesomeproblemswhichmakemeunabletofocusonmystudy.version2:I’mLiHua,aSeniorthreestudentatpresent.Recently,IhavebeenengaginginmakingpreparationsfortheCollegeEntranceExamination,butIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.第二段：简述现状version1:Theseproblemsmakemeunhappy.version2:I’mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.首先，我不得不花大量时间写作业，导致我没时间锻炼。version1:First,Ihavetospendmuchtimetodomyhomework,soIhavenotimetotakeexercises.version2:Firstandforemost,I’mobligedtospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakeexercises.其次，父母和老师对我期望很高，我又不想让他们失望，所以我压力非常大。version1:What’smore,MyparentsandteachersexpectmetodowellinGaokaoandIdon’twantthemfeeldisappointed.So,Ifeelstresful.version2:Moreover,thehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakesmeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon’twanttoletthemdown.最后，最让我烦恼的是每晚都睡不着。version1:Atlast,theworstthingisthatIcant’sleepwelleverynight.version2:Ultimately,whattroublesmemostisthatit’sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.第三段：重申写信目的+期待回复对于以上问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于如何解决这些问题的建议吗？version1:I’meagertogetyourhelpforthosequestions.Canyougivemesomeadviceonhowtodealwiththeseproblems?version2:Facedwiththeseproblemsmentionedabove,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomesuggestionsonhowtosolvetheseproblems?DearProfessorKate,I’mLiHua,aSeniorthreestudentatpresent.Recently,IhavebeenengaginginmakingpreparationsfortheCollegeEntranceExamination,butIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.I’mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Firstandforemost,I’mobligedtospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakeexercises.Moreover,thehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakesmeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon’twanttoletthemdown.Ultimately,whattroublesmemostisthatit’sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Facedwiththeseproblemsmentionedabove,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomesuggestionsonhowtosolvetheseproblems?Yours,LiHua.写作演示二调查显⽰，中国⻓江江豚（finlessporpoise）受⼈类活动影响⽽濒临临灭绝，⽬前总数不⾜1000只。江豚的⽣存环境⼗分糟糕，航运（shipping）、⾮法捕捞、⽓候变化、⽔污染等是导致江豚死亡的主要原因。假设你是李华，现请⽤英⽂给WWF（世界⾃然保护基⾦组织）写⼀封信，请他们关注这⼀状况并提供帮助。内容应包括：(1)说明写信⽬的(2)简述江豚现状(3)希望WWF如何帮助（⽐如：资助江豚保护项⽬等）(4)表⽰感谢并期待回复注意：(1)词数：100词左右；(2)在答题卡上作答；(3)书信格式及开头均已给出（不计⼊总词数）。第一段：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的要点1：我是李华，一名来自中国武汉的高中生。version1:I’mLiHua,ahighschoolstudentfromWuhan,China.version2:I’mLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyinginahighschoolinWuhan,China.要点2：调查显示，中国长江江豚的生存环境十分糟糕，濒临灭绝，我写信是要引起您的注意并希望能缓解局势。version1:Accordingtothesurvey,theFinlessPorpoise'slivingconditionisveryterrible.Theyaredyingout.So,Iamwritingthislettertocatchyourattentionandeasethesituation.version2:LearningfromthesurveythatFinlessPorpoise'slivingconditionissoterriblethattheyaredyingout,Iamwritingthislettertocaptureyourattentionandeasethesituation.第二段：简述现状+如何帮助要点3：由于缺乏人类保护，江豚的数量正变得越来越少，目前仅剩不到1000只。version1:Becauseoflackinghumanprotection,FinlessPorpoiseisbecomingfewerandfewer.Atpresent,thereonlyexistlessthan1000FinlessPorpoises.version2:Duetolackofhumanprotection,thenumberofFinlessPorpoiseisbecomingworryinglysmaller,onlylessthan1000leftcurrently.要点4:因此，现在应该立即采取有效措施来改变这种状况。version1:So,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasuresatoncetochangethissituation.version2:Therefore,it'shightimethatimmediateandeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoimprovethesituation.要点5：我希望世界自然基金会将通过资助一些旨在帮助江豚的计划或就如何防止其灭绝制定一些规则，从而在保护它方面发挥重要作用。version1:IhopethatWWFwillsponsorsomeprogramswhichaimtohelpFinlessPorpoiseormakesomerulesonhowtopreventitfromdyingout.So,WWFcanpalyanimportantroleinprotectingit.version2:IamhopingthatWWFwillplayasignificantroleinprotectingitbyfundingsomeprogramsaimingtohelpingFinlessPorpoiseordrawingupsomerulesonhowtopreventitfromdyingout.第三段：重申写信目的+盼望回复要点6：我呼吁你们认真考虑我的请求。version1:Icallforyourseriousconsiderationonmyrequest.version2:Iappealtoyourseriousconsiderationonmyrequest.要点7：如果您能提供一些帮助，我将不胜感激。version1:Ifyoucanoffersomehelp,Iwillthankyouverymuch.version2:Iwouldappreciateitalotifyoucouldprovidesomeassistance.要点8：期待您的早日答复。version1:I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.version2:I’mexpectingyourpromptreply.DearSirorMadam,【第一段】(自我介绍)I'mastudent