普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准

普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准

评分总则：

1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。

6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。

评分细则：

优秀（22--25）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。

良好（18--21）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。

一般（15--17）：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确；基本达到预期写作目的。

较差（11--14）：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多，半数句子基本正确。

差（6--10）：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。

极差（0--5）：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章，或只是写出与作文无关的内容。

高考命题组提供的参考范文：

DearPeter,

I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.

The

“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasit’sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?

I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.（95words）

Yours,

LiHua

【点评】该参考范文语言简练，表达准确，但从高考考场作文考虑应提示学生词数再增加一些，句式可再丰富一些，这样才更有利于得高分。

各档次打分参考范文示例：

1.阅卷组确定的24分作文范例

DearPeter,

I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforour

school’sEnglishnewspaper.

Recentlyarefreshingprogramhasbeenestablishedinourschool’sEnglishnewspaperwhichisnamed“TheForeignCulture”.I’minclinedtoinviteyoutowriteanarticle.Theimportanceconcerningthisissueislistedasfollows.

ThisprogramisaimingtointroducethefestivalsandhabitsinAmerica,especiallyincludingthelifeofstudentsinhighschool.Consequently,Iintendtoinquestyoutowritesomematters.Suchaswhattheindividualstendtodowhensignificanteventsareforthcoming.Additionally,it’suniversallyacknowledgedthatAmericanstudentshaveextremelyactivethoughts.Consideringthathowtheystudyinschooliswhatweindeedintendtoattain.

What’smore,itmustbebearedinmindthatthearticlesaresupposedtobearound400words.Meanwhile,Ianticipateyoucanfinishitbefore28th,June.

I’mlookingforwardtoyourconclusivereply.(140words)

2.阅卷组确定的22分作文范例

DearPeter,

I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.

ItwillbeputonthepartofForeignCulture,whichaimstointroducemanyothercountries’culture.ThisarticleneedstobeconcernedwithAmericafestivalcustomandmiddleschoolstudents’life.AsyouareAmericanstudent,it’scertainthatyoucanteachusalargeamountofknowledgeaboutit.Asisknowntoall,onlyifwelearnAmericanCulturewell,canwetrulyunderstandthecountry.Therefore,I’dappreciateitifyouwritearticle.

Therearesomerequirementsbelow.Theessayisaround400words.Besides,ithastobesentbeforeJune,the28th.Ifyouhaveotherquestions,pleasewritetomeassoonaspossible.(112words)

3.

阅卷组确定的18分作文范例

DearPeter,

I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.

Wehaveanareanamed“ForeignCulture”.It’susedtointroduceAmerica’scustomsandstudents’dailylife.Couldyouwriteanessayforme.

Initiallypleasewritesometraditionalfestivalstoenlargeourhorizons.Someinterestingthingsinyourschoollifeisalsofine.Moreover,pleasewritemorethan400words.Sowecanedidateisbetter.Eventually,thedeadlineis6,28becauseourworkmustbefinishedinthesedays.Don’tbelateplease？

Herearemywords.Thanksforattention.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.(92words)

4.阅卷组确定的15分作文范例

DearPeter,

DearSir/Madam,IlearnedfromthenewspaperthatyourcompanyneedsanEnglishsecretary.I’mreallyinterestedinthispositionsoIamwritingtoapplyforit.I’m18yearsoldandwillgraduatefromXinxingForeignLanguagesSchoolIhopeImaybegranted（授予）

aninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualifications（资格，条件）

morefully.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerely/Yours,LiHua4.通知假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。时间：下周五6：00—8：00地点：教学楼101室内容：1．唱中国歌

2．比赛用筷子

3．学习包饺子注意：1．词数不少于50；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【优秀满分范文】Goodafternoon,everyone.MayIhaveyourattention,please?

I’mthechairmanoftheStudents’Union.AstheNewYearis

aroundthecorner（即将到来）,wearegoingtoholdaNewYearpartyforyou,whichisintendedtoenableyoutohaveabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.

Duringtheparty,notonlycanyousingaChinesesong,butyouwillalsocompetewitheachothertoseehowskilledyouareatusingchopsticks.What’smore,you’lllearnatthepartyhowtomakedumplings.Soundsgreat,doesn’tit?Thepartyisscheduled（计划于）

inRoom101oftheTeachingBuildingfrom6:00p.m.to8:00p.m.nextFriday.

Pleasemakesureyouwon’tmissit.Thankyouforyourattention.5.邀请信你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：1.时间：8am—5pm；2.

集合地点：校门口；3.

交通工具：公交车；4.

携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。【优秀满分范文】DearChris，

I’mwritingtotellyouthatweintendtoclimbtheFragrantHillthisSaturdayandIsincerelyinviteyoutogowithusonbehalfofourclass.

Wearesupposedtogatherattheschoolgateandsetoutat8:00amsharp.Thebuswillserveasourtransportation.Wewillclimbtothetopofthehillandenjoyourpicniclunchthere,sopleasetakesomefoodwithyouaslunch.Atabout2:00pm.Wewillgodownthehillalonganotherpathandreturntoourschoolatabout5.00pm.Youmayequipyourselfwithacameratorecordthebeautifulsceneryandanumbrellaoraraincoatisalsonecessaryincaseyouarecaughtinarain.Pleasesparesometimetojoinus.

Yourparticipationcansurelyaddcolortoourtripandwearealllookingforwardtoyourinvolvement.Yours,Joe6.

建议信假定你是李华，你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1．说明你是该报的忠实读者

2．说明该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻

2)介绍名人成功故事

3．提出建议：

刊登指导英语学习的文章【优秀满分范文】DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!I’maregularreaderofyournewspaper.IlikeitsomuchthatIhardlymissanycopy.TherearemanyadvantagesofGlobalMirror.Firstly,GlobalMirror

coversbothnationalandinternationalnews.Bysimplyturningthepages,Icanknowallimportantthingsthathavehappenedbothhomeandabroad.Besides,thesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeoplearealsoattractivetome,whichhelpmelearnalotfromthem.Inaword,thankstoGlobalMirror,wearewell-informedandkeepupwiththechangingworld.Asayoungstudent,IwishthatIcanbeamasterofEnglishlanguage.Therefore,IsuggestthatGlobalMirrorprovidearticlesaboutEnglishlearningforus.Finally,IhopethatGlobalMirror

willbecomemoreandmorepopular.Thankyouforyourtime!Sincerelyyours,LiHua7.

求助信假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。【优秀满分范文】DearTom，Howisitgoingthesedays?IkeepwonderinghowyoufeelaboutyourschoollifeinBeijing.HaveyougotusedtothelifeinChina?Areyouenjoyingyourlife?Ihopeyouare.

Letmetellyouapieceofgoodnews:I’mgoingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestofmiddleschoolstudentsinJulyinthecomingsummervacation.SoI’mbusypreparingforit.ButnowIhavesomedifficultyincollectingusefulinformationandusingproperEnglishwordtoexpressmythoughts.Besides,

IreallywanttoimprovemyspokenEnglish,especiallythepronunciationandintonation（语调）.Ofcourse,asanativeEnglishspeaker,youcangivemesomesuggestions.Inaddition,I’mgoingtovisityouafterthecontest.I’msurewewillhaveawonderfultimetogetherinBeijing!Icanhardlywaittoseeyou!Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.LiHua8.

投诉信你是李华，两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物（BookwormSeries）昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下：1.

介绍购物情况2.

反映存在问题3.

提出解决方案可能用到的生词：投诉complaintn.【优秀满分范文】Towhomitmayconcern,Iamoneofyourcustomers(顾客).Iordered（订购）asetof(一套)BookwormSeriesonyourwebsitetwoweeksago,butIdidn’treceivethemuntilyesterday.Andmuchtomydisappointment,thebooksweresopoorlypackedupthatthecoverofonebookwastorn.Tomakemattersworse,itisnotacompleteset,asIfoundonebookmissing.Iamsorrytohavereceivedsuchpoorservice,andIbelieveIhaveeveryrighttoaskyoutodealwiththisproblem.Ihopethatyoueitherreturnmymoneyordeliveranewsetofbookstome.Besides,I’dliketobeinformedoftheprocessofyourdealingwithmycomplaint.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerely,LiHua9.

祝贺信假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括：1.表达你的愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺；3.请她介绍成功的经验。参考词汇：英语演讲比赛theEnglishSpeechContest【优秀满分范文】DearWeiFang,IhearthatyouhavewonfirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContestofMiddle

SchoolStudents,soI’mwritingtogivemysincerecongratulations.Youdon’tknowhowexcitedIwaswhenIheardthegoodnews.Asyourbestfriend,Iamproudofyou!YourpronunciationandfluentEnglishleftmewithdeepimpression.Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthecontest.CouldyousharewithmehowyouimproveyourspokenEnglish?Yourexperiencewillbeofgreathelptomeinlearning.Iwillbegratefulifyo