人教版高中英语必修一 （Sports and Fitness）Reading for Writing 教学课件

Unit3Sportsandfitness

SectionⅦ

ReadingforWriting—有关身心健康的比较说明文

本单元的写作任务是读一篇关于健康的文章后，写一篇有关身心健康的比较说明文。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowriteafterthemodelGOINGPOSITIVEIalwayswantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTVeventhoughIknewthatitwasimpossible.IworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdietIreadaboutonline.Itriedno-fat，low-fat，5：2，onlybananas，nobananas—Ialmostwentbananas，too.ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat？”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit？”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight，thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”，Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed，Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveaburgernowandthen，butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally，Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead，ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody，Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①___________________adj.健康的②___________________adj.不健康的③___________________绿色食品④___________________健康饮食⑤___________________不健康的饮食习惯

healthy/fitunhealthy/unfitgreenfoodhealthyfood/dietunhealthyeatinghabit⑥________________良好的生活习惯⑦________________adj.肥胖的⑧________________强身健体⑨________________充足的睡眠⑩________________进行运动⑪________________减肥⑫___________________对……有益处⑬________________节食⑭________________养成一个……的饮食习惯

⑮___________________身体健康/不健康⑯____________________________对某人的健康/视力有益/害

goodlivinghabitsoverweight/fatbuildupone’sbodyenoughsleeptakeexerciseloseweightbegoodfor/dogoodtogoonadietforma...eatinghabitbeingood/poorhealthbegood/badforone’shealth/eyesⅡ.While-writing写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的。内容包括：1.以前无法平衡学习和休息；2.现在已经做到二者平衡；3.你的做法。Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：___________________________________________________________Paragraph2：___________________________________________________________Paragraph3：___________________________________________________________Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudybefore.Howtobalancerestandstudy.Icanbalancerestandstudynow.Step2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________adj.劳累的②________________v.认识到；意识到③__________________平衡休息和学习④________________忙于⑤________________休息一下⑥________________结果⑦________________生病⑧________________一直⑨________________打篮球⑩________________落后

tiredrealizebalancerestandstudybebusywithhavearestasaresultfallillallthetimeplaybasketballfallbehind2.Sentences①我经常忙于学习，因此没有时间休息。(so)________________________________________________________________________②不是整天学习，而是我开始抽时间休息。(ratherthan)________________________________________________________________________③我不是整天做作业，而是一天打一个小时篮球。(insteadof)________________________________________________________________________Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Twoyearsago，Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudy.Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Asaresult，Ioftenfelttiredandstressed.AtlastIfellillandhadtostayinhospitalfor3weeks.AfterIrecoveredfromillness，Ibegantothinkaboutmyproblems.Igottorealizetheimportanceofbalancingrestandstudy.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Finally，Igottobalancerestandstudy.Ibecamequitehealthy.Ididn’tfallbehind;instead，Istudiedbetterthanbefore.Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewriterexplainwhyhe/shechanged/wantedtochange?□2.Doesthewritertellhowthechangeshaveimprovedorwillimprovehis/herlife?□3.Isthetextwell-organised?□4.Doesthewriterusewordsandexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences?□5.Arethereanygrammarorspellingerrors?□6.Doesthewriterusecorrectpunctuation?写作要点Thepast：Iworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdiet.Thechanges：Ifocusedonfitnessratherthandietandweight.

Thepresent：IbecamepositiveandIbecamebothhappierandhealthier.常用词汇like，so，too，still，similarly，similarto，thesame(...as...)，incommon(with)，both...and...，instead，than，however/but/though，differentfrom，ratherthan，insteadof，thedifferenceis...亮点表达1.Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.

运动与健康息息相关。2.Weshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoodhours.

我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。3.Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.

抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。4.Accordingtoarecentsurvey，fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromd