-2024届高三英语作文复习写作专项读后续写趣事类-真相总会水落石出 讲义

读后续写原题目：Daniellookedattheoldshoescarefully."Ryan,yourlostwalletisprobablynearthemonkeybars.

Your

shoessmelllikeredpine(松树).

And.."

ButDaniel

wasinterruptedbyakidshoutingfromtheplayground,"Ryan!Ifoundyourwallet!Itwasunderthemonkey

bars!"Ryan'seyeswentwide,butDanielonlyshrugged(耸肩)

anddeliveredhistrademarkwords."Thetruth

alwayscomesout."ForDaniel,

thetruthwaslikeburiedtreasurejust

waitingforsomeonetodigup.

AndDanielwasgoodat

digging.

Hehadahard-earnedreputationasthebest

detectiveinfourthgrade.Danielhadbarelymadeitacrosstheplayground

beforesomeoneelsecalledhim.

ItwasJenny."Daniel!

Ihaveanewcaseforyou!

It'saboutCobyGardner,"

Jennysaid.

"Hisparentspickedhimupearlyon

Monday,

andhehasn'tbeeninschoolsince.

Hedidn't

haveacoldandneversaidanythingaboutavacation.

Wheredoyouthinkheis?"Danieltackledthenewcasewithhisusualattention

todetail.

Hemadeobservations,

conductedinterviews,andthenconnectedinformation.

Butthingsweren'tgoing

sosmoothlyevenafteralotofinvestigation.

Someone

hadseenCoby'smomdrivingaroundtownwithballoons

inhercar.

AnotherstudentaccidentallyheardCoby

talkingtoateacheraboutawaitingroom,

butshe

couldn'trememberwhichteacherorwhichwaitingroom.

And

"Haven'tseenhimsinceMondaymorning"

wasall

Coby'sbusdriversaidwheninterviewed.Whatdidballoons,

awaitingroom,

andgetting

pickedupfromschoolallhaveincommon?

Itwasn't

Coby'sbirthday.

Lotsofplaceshadwaitingrooms,

but

onlyafewallowed

balloons.

Heimaginedhimself

diggingdeep,

andsuddenlyhegotanidea.Danielopenedhisnotebook.

Hewrotetheword

hospital

andthencircledit.

Cobyhadgonetoa

hospital.

Butwhy?

Wassomeoneinhisfamilysickor

hurt?

Danielhadthestrangefeelingthathewasnosing

intoCoby'sprivatelife.

Hedecidednottodiganymore.Paragraph1:

Thenextmorning,

JennycametoDaniel'sdeskand

asked,

"So?

Didyousolvethecase?"

Paragraph2:

"Coby!

Wherewereyou?"

someoneshoutedinsurprise.1.题目所给首句，与你紧接着写的一句的连接点；你写的第一段最后一句和第二段题目所给首句之间的连接点；Thenextmorning,

JennycametoDaniel'sdeskand

asked,

"So?

Didyousolvethecase?"下一句：回答Jenny的问题，如何回答？"Coby!

Wherewereyou?"someoneshoutedinsurprise.上一句：Coby出现了下一句：Daniel

的心理活动

/Coby

回答

2.原文中某特定情节，与你续写的某情节的连接点；Balloons,hospital3.原文中的情感，与你续写的段落中的情感的连接点，点明其变化；DigintoNottodiganymore4.原文中出现的高频词/关键词，在你续写的段落中复现/同义呈现；Butthetruthalways

comesout.

/...

hewasnosing

intoCoby'sprivatelife5.你续写的最后一句与原文首尾呼应/点题。detective--nosingintosomeone’sprivatelife/Danielguessedpartofthetruth,butthetruthturnedout

good

anyway.情节的选择：1）Daniel觉得Coby家有坏事发生，不回答Jenny的问题，假装没有调查出任何信息。结果Coby家有新生儿出生，气球庆祝。Daniel松了一口气，自嘲“真相总会出现”。2）Daniel警告Jenny不要刺探同学隐私，可能让人难堪。结果1，并不是坏消息（如，Coby家有人生病，但已痊愈出院，气球庆祝），Daniel松了一口气，但反思自己的侦探行为以后要注意度。结果2，真是坏消息（如，Coby家有人病危，气球祈求好运，鼓劲），Daneil很难过，对之前的事更加后悔。3）Daniel分析了Coby可能在医院，表示担忧。结果Coby真的去了医院（好消息，或坏消息），同学们很佩服Daniel的推理能力，但Daniel心里五味杂陈。情节1）是范文选择的，我们会发现，有些巧妙，且比较好写。其他的选择也说得通，但稍显复杂。平时多读范文，并思考这个问题：最简方式是什么？练习多了，你会找到最简方式。Tip:

接触读后续写时，我们常常用Plotmountain来解释故事的发展，Beginning,Development,Climax,Ending.我们写的是Ending，是Climax之后的事，所以我们写的部分不应该有很大冲突，重要的是按逻辑写下去，总结故事有意思的地方。这也许是有的同学认为范文“比较平淡”的原因吧。其实“平淡”帮助我们更好地发挥语言表达水平。Thenextmorning,

JennycametoDaniel'sdeskand

asked,

"So?

Didyousolvethecase?"

Callingtomindthe

note

bookinhisbackpackandthewordwithabigcircle

aroundit,

Danielsaid,

"Sorry.

Not

reallysureaboutthisone.

IguessI'mstuck.""DetectiveDanielis

stuck?"

Jennywrinkledhernoseindisbelief.

Thentherewere

severalsuspiciouslooksfromnearby.Danielwaswondering

whetherhisdetectivedayswereoverwhentherewasarushof

excitementattheclassroomdoor.

CobyGardnerwaswalking

intotheclassroom."Coby!

Wherewereyou?"someoneshoutedinsurprise.

DanielwatchedCobycarefully,

feelingsorryforhim.

Itwasno

funsharingbadnewswitheveryoneintheclass.

Butthenthestrangestthinghappened.

Coby

smiled."Myauntgavebirthtoababy!"

Cobysaid."Iwentto

thehospital