高一英语作文改错有答案

-.z.Twomonthsago,Iwenttoabroadforfurtherstudy.BeforeIleft,Iwasgivenalotpresent.Amongthem，thereweretwopresentswhichwerereallyinterestedme.Mysisterbuysmeabookwithcolorpicturesaboutbodylanguageandwithwordsaboutcustomsofdifferentcountryinthem.Mybrothergavemeanotewhichread,“Mypresenthasputinyourbedroom.〞WhenIhurriedintomybedroom,Ifoundabo*,inthattherewasanelectronicdictionary.Iwasverygladbutafewsurprisedtoreceivethesetwopresents.答案：1.have去掉2.about后的you改为me3.works→work4.learn→learning5.recent→recently6.interesting→interest7.English后的and改为but8.be后加an9.at→in10.where后加there高一英语作文文改错2DearBob,Hello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher,MissFang.I’dliketoyourpenfriend,andgettoknowmoreaboutyourcountry.First,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.IgotoHongqiMiddleSchool.Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasmaths,Chinese,Englishandphysics.Iusetoplayping-pongalotonmysparetime,butnowIaminterestinginfootball.Doyouplayanyballgames"Whatyourfavoritesport"Ilookforwardtohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua答案：1.learn改为learnt或learned。2.to后加be或bee。3.删去more。第一次告诉Bob关于自己的一些事情，此处用more不合逻辑。4.where改为which。在此非限定性定语从句中，关系词在从句中作主语，故用which。5.此行无错。6.subject改为subjects。quitsafew意为“相当多〞，修饰可数名词复数。7.use改为used。据下文butnow可知，此处应用usedtodo表示“过去常常做*事〞。8.interesting改为interested。beinterestedin„为固定短语，“对„„感兴趣〞。9.What后加is。此句无谓语。10.hear改为hearing。lookforwardtodoingsth.为固定短语。高一英语作文文改错3DearRalph,I'maseniorstudent.I'mgettingwellwithaboyinmyclass.ButIhavefalleninlovewithhimforalmosthalfayear.Heisshyboy,soIwrotehimaletterfirsttoe*pressmyfeeling.Hewroteback.Inhisletterhesaid,"Wearestudents.Ourtaskisstudyhard.Letustowaitandseewhetherwehavesomechanceaftergraduation."SoaftergraduationItelephonedtohim,askhimaboutgoingout.Buthesaidhedidn'twantto.HejustwantedtosleepandwatchedTV.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo"DoyouthinkIshouldcontinuetolovehimandgiveup"答案：1.getting后加on或along2.fallen改为been3.shy前加a4.feeling改为feelings当情感讲时feeling常用单数5.study前加to或study改为studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改为watch9正确10.and改为or高一英语作文文改错4Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.Onmywaythecinema,ImetanEnglishwoman,wholostherway.Igaveupthechanceseethefilmandtookhertoherhotel.Whilegothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplaceinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmeanythingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,Istillfeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpractisemyspokenEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldhavebeenabletohelphim.答案：the改为a2.正确3.see前加to4.go改为going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but8.去掉had9.on改为at10.him改为her高一英语作文文改错5Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitorandoneofthee*cellentstudentinourclass.Althoughsheisclever,butsheworksveryhard.Wehavealotonmonandhavealottotalkabout.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.ShewasdoingherhomeworksoneSundaymorningwhenshesmeltsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookoutofthewindowandfindacloudofsmokeingoutofherneighbour’shouse.Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.H