抽丝剥茧洞察高考英语写作课件

一、高考写作知多少？

1）高考英语写作的字数要多少？总分是多少？2）高考英语写作考什么类型的文章呢？3）高考英语写作出题的特点是什么？有规律吗？120-150；25分议论文+特殊文体校园生活+自我观点1二、高分作文标准2高考评分

VS 中考评分：加分制原则

VS 减分制原则1.评分原则结构分语言分内容分32.

Content43.

Language（1）语法结构标准

grammar5The

price

of

milk

isexpensivethan

grain.语言分减分The

price

of

milk

is

higher

thanthe

price

of

grain.得到语言分The

price

of

milk

is

higher

thanthat

of

grain.语言分加分（2）用词表达规范

dictionIt

makes

me

studymoreknowledge.It

makes

me

get

moreknowledge.语言分减分得到语言分It

makes

me

acquire/gain/obtain

more

knowledge.语言分加分斩首行动——第一反映词64.

structure句式的多样化，文章结构的紧凑根据内容分和语言分进行综合评分注意：适当运用好的词汇句式少用过难甚至严重超纲的词汇7三、高考写作解题步骤审题：

Topic+时态人称地点框架成文检查8构思框架：9P1 S(1)

topic S(2)

thesisP2 S(3)

transitional

sentenceS(4)

argument

1S(6)

argument

2S(8)

argument

3S(5)

detail

1S(7)

detail

2S(9)

detail

3P3 S(10)

conclusionP1

S(1)

topic

S(2)

thesisP2

S(3)

transitional

sentenceS(4)

argument

1S(5)

detail

1S(6)

detail

2S(7)

argument

2S(8)

detail

1S(9)

detail

2P3

S(10)

conclusion10比如：写自己最喜欢的一部电影的原因。(Forrest

Gump)《阿甘正传》topic：

Forrest

Gumpthesis: be

beneficial

to

me

interms

of knowledge

andpersonality11argument1:add

to

the

knowledgeofAmerican

culturedetail:the

movie

refersallsignificant

issues

in

Americanhistory（小石城事件；越南战争；水门事件；乒乓外交）12argument2:be

inspired

by

the

personalityofForrest（honesty；bravery；purity；diligence；optimism）detail:pursue

his

dream,

cherishhopes

to

the

life,

neverhesitate

to

challenge

himself13写作常犯错误分析：14前后顺接分句和短语非谓语动词与主语代词指代重复表达1.前后顺接15As

we

were

driving

out

in

thecountry,

we

met

a

man

riding

abike,

and

we

passed

atruckloaded

with

fruit

and

vegetables,and

we

stopped

by

a

shop

to

buysome

food

on

our

way

back.正确：As

we

were

driving

out

in

thecountry,

we

met

a

man

riding

abike.

Later

we

passed

a

truckloaded

with

fruit

and

vegetables.Finally，we

stopped

by

a

shop

tobuy

some

food

on

our

way

back.162.

分句和短语17I

love

the

Internet.

Because

ofits

convenience

and

fantasy.正确：I

love

the

Internet

becauseofits

convenience

and

fantasy.3.

非谓语动词与主语18Looking

out

of

the

window,

abeautiful

flower

caught

my

eye.正确：Looking

out

of

the

window,

Isaw

a

beautiful

flower.4.

代词指代19I

tried

to

help

him,

but

herefused

it.正确：I

tried

to

help

him,

but

herefused

my