读后续写遇险类泳池中勇救落水小孩讲义高三英语一轮复习

续写原文阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theairwasthickwithhumidity(潮湿)insidetheswimmingpoolhallasElishapacednervouslynearthestartingblocks.Thefainttracesofchlorine(氯气)intheairstung(刺痛)hereyes,buttheseweremildconcernsparedtothematterwhichseemedlargestinhermind:theouteofthestatesemifinals.Theyoung16yearoldhadtrainedhardanddedicatedherentirelifesofartowardswimming.Almostassoonasshecouldwalk,Elishahadtakenlikeafishtothewaterandgaveherwholebody,mindandspirittothesport.Shealwayslovedbeinginthewater,whethertocooloffonahotsummer'sdayortoforgetabouthertroublesatschool–thewavessimplycarrieditallaway.ButforElisha,swimmingwasnotmerely

forrecreation.Herfather，aretiredathleteturnedcoachinhisownright

alwayspushed

Elisha

to

findouttheextentofhertalentsandabilities.Herwholefamily,infact,werefullofamateurandprofessionalathletes,especiallyherolderbrothersandsisterswhohadgoneontoplayintheNCSAatuniversity.Therewasnowayshecouldletthemalldown.Nothere,andnotnow.Finally,thetimehade:the400metermedley(混合泳)relay.Ina

allcamedowntohertobringithome.Atthesoundofthebuzzer,theswimmersalldoveintothewater.

Kayceewiththefreestylestroke,Lizziewiththebreaststroke,andfinallySusanwiththebackstroke.Elisha'sheartpoundedasshereadiedherselffortakeoff.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。JustasSusanwasinginclose,a

small

childfellintothedeependofthepool.Elisha,outofbreath,pulledherself

upoutofthepool.素材分析主要人物：Elisha故事线：Elisha热爱游泳，他的父亲是一名教练，她的家人也都是业余或者专业选手，她希望在这场混合游泳接力比赛中取得好成绩，最后进入全国决赛！在队友即将接棒，轮到她上场的时候，一个小孩掉入了泳池中！主题：生命第一，比赛第二续写方向：第一段可以续写Elisha立刻跳入水中营救落水的小孩。虽然其他队已经远超自己队，但是秉着体育精神她还是坚持完赛！第二段可以续写Elisha精疲力尽上岸后失落内疚，但是队友的支持，观众的呐喊，父亲的信任，最重要的被营救的小孩，让Elisha意识到，这些东西比赢得比赛更有价值！续写范文JustasSusanwasinginclose,asmallchildfellintothedeependof

thepool.

Almostasifbyinstinct,Elishaturnedherattentiontothechild

cryingforhelpinthewater.Truetoherfishlikespeed,inoneswift

motionElishascoopedthechildupandoutofthewater.Turningtoface

herlane,Elishaspedbackthroughthewatertoherstartingpositionand

thenmadeherwaytowardthefinishline.Elisha,outofbreath,pulledherselfupoutofthepool.

Withthelastounceofherenergygivingout,herfatherandher

teammatescamerunningovertohelphertoherfeetandtoher

amazementheardaloudcheereruptfromthecrowd.WhenElisha

heardthenewsthatherteamfinishedlastinthefinalevent,shenearly

brokedownintotears.Butherdadgaveherabighugandtoldherthat

it'sallrightshewillalwaysbeawinnerinhisheart,nomatterwhat.下水文章游泳比赛下水救人JustasSusanwasinginclose,asmallchildfellintothedeependof

thepool.

Almost

asifbyinstinct,

takingadeepbreath,

Elisha

plungedintothewater

inasplitsecond,

quicklylocatingtheboywhowasstrugglingtostayafloat.

Withswiftstrokes,Elisha

managedto

scoop

thechildupin

time

andoutofthewater.

Theotherteamswerealreadyfaraheadnow.Still,

summoningupher

remaining

strength,

Elisha

swiftly

spedback

toherstartingpositionand

swam

herway

towards

thefinishline,

doingherutmost.

Itcameasnosurprisethat

Elisha’steamcamelast.Elisha,outofbreath,pulledherselfupoutofthepool.

Withthelastounceofherenergygivingout,

Elisha

collapsed

ontotheground,

immensedisappointmentandguiltconsumingher.Her

dadand

teammatescamerunningoverto

helphertoherfeet,praisingherforherswiftaction.And

toher

amazement

aloudcheererupted

fromthecrowd.

Noddingatheraffectionately,Dad

gaveherabigthumbup,saying

sh