初中英语 观点建议

PARTTHREE第三篇写作妙解篇话题(二)

观点建议典例分析自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。假如你是李华,请你为校刊《英语园地》“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何才能更加自信。[提示词语]powerful,happy,believein,keepdoing[提示问题]·Whyisitimportanttobeconfident?·Whatexperiencemadeyoumoreconfident?·Howcanwebecomemoreconfident?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作架构】【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文是一篇记叙文,主题是观点建议。根据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点:(1)说明自信的重要性(2)介绍一次让你更自信的经历(3)说明如何变得更自信2.时态:一般过去时和一般现在时3.人称:第一人称【基础写作】Ⅰ.根据所给提示词补全下列各句1.对每一个人来说拥有自信很重要。(It'simportantfor…to…)__________________________________________________________________________________________________2.自信可以给我们勇气去坚持自己想要做的事情。(stickto)Confidencecan

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3.尽管我在家里练习了很多次,但是依然感到紧张。(although)

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It'simportantforeveryonetobeconfident.bringuscourage

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Istillfeltnervous4.我深呼吸并让自己放松。(takeadeepbreath)I

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5.我的老师高度评价了我的表演并且我从同学那里获得了很大的鼓励。(thinkhighlyof)Myteacher

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relaxedmyselfthoughthighlyofmyperformance

gotmuchencouragementⅡ.句子升格按括号中的要求改写句子。6.IwasinGrade7.Myteacheraskedmetogiveaspeechinclass.(用as连接两个句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________________7.Confidenceisimportant.Confidenceisvaluable,too.(用aswell连接两个句子)___________________________________________________________________________________________________8.Beingconfidentisimportant.Confidencecanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwewanttodo.(用for连接两个句子)___________________________________________________________________________________________________AsIwasinGrade7,myteacheraskedmetogiveaspeechinclass.Confidenceisimportantandvaluableaswell.Beingconfidentisimportantforitcanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwewanttodo.9.Weneedtoknowourownadvantages.Wecanbuildconfidence.(用inorderthat连接两个句子)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________10.Putinenoughefforttowhatwedo.(用It'snecessaryto…改写句子)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________Weneedtoknowourownadvantagesinorderthatwecanbuildconfidence.It'snecessarytoputinenoughefforttowhatwedo.【连句成文】It'sveryimportanttobeconfident.Self-confidencecanbringuscouragetosticktowhatwedo.Soit'svaluabletous.WhenIwasinGrade7,oncemyteacheraskedmetomakeaspeechinclass.AlthoughIhadpracticeditformanytimesathome,Istillfeltnervousandforgotthethebeginningofit.Then,Ibreatheddeeplyandrelaxedmyself.Youcan'tbelievehowhappyIwaswhenIrecalledthespeechandfinisheditsuccessfully.MyteacherthoughthighlyofmyperformanceandIgotmuchencouragementfrommyclassmates.Fromthenon,Ihavebecomemoreandmoreconfident.Tobuildconfidence,firstly,weneedtoclearlyknowaboutourownadvantagesandtrytodevelopthem.Themostimportantisthatweshouldputinenoughefforttowhatwedo.Thenwecanfinallymakeitandgainmoreconfidence.拓展积累【导入主题】1.Beingconfidentissoimportantthatitcanbringuscouragetosticktothingsthatwewanttodo.2.Self-confidencecanhelpusovercomefearandfaceanychallengebravely.3.Confidenceissovaluabletousbecauseitcanhelpusfaceanydifficultybravely.【描写经历】1.AlthoughIhadpracticeditmanytimesathome,Istillfeltnervousandforgotthebeginningofit.2.Myclassmatesclappedformeandsmiledatme,whichgavememuchencouragement.【总结感受】1.Inordertobuildconfidence,weneedtoclearlyknowwhatourstrongpointsareandtrytodevelopthem.2.Ontheonehand,it'snecessaryforustoknowouradvantages.Ontheotherhand,weshouldputinenoughefforttowhatwedo.实战演练“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“Weshouldhonorourparents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括:你平时为父母做些什么,你对孝敬父母的看法,以及作为中学生应该怎样孝敬父母。[提示词语]honorourparents(孝敬父母),duty,important,raise,housework,communicate[提示问题]·Whatdoyouoftendoforyourparents?·Whyshouldwehonorourparents?·Howshouldwehonorourparents?WeshouldhonorourparentsAsweknow,honoringourparentsisanexcellenttraditionofChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One

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