初中英语 交流与提高

PARTTHREE第三篇写作妙解篇话题(四)

交流与提高典例分析初中三年的学校生活即将结束。在这三年里,你一定在某些方面取得了进步并积累了一些经验。你愿意和初一新生分享吗?某英文网站正在开展以“分享经验、助力成长”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,主要内容包括:你在什么方面取得了进步(如学科学习、体育运动、人际交往等),你是如何取得进步的,你想给初一新生提出什么建议。[提示词语]makefriends,smile,introuble,help[提示问题]·Whatprogresshaveyoumade?·Howdidyoumaketheprogress?·What'syouradvicefor7thgraders?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作架构】【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文是一篇记叙文,主题是交流与提高。根据题目要求,可以提炼出3个要点:(1)描述你哪方面取得了进步(2)说明你是如何取得进步的(3)为新生提建议2.时态:一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时3.人称:第一人称和第二人称【基础写作】Ⅰ.根据所给提示词补全下列各句1.在过去的三年里,我在很多方面都取得了进步。(makegreatprogress)I

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2.我想与你分享我在英语学习上的经历。(share…with…)Iwantto

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3.为了改善我的发音,我开始观看英语电影。(Toimprove…)

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havemadegreatprogressinmanythingssharemyexperienceinstudyingEnglishwithyouToimprovemypronunciation

watchEnglishmovies4.一开始,我不懂演员说的每一句话。(couldn't)Atfirst,I

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5.我发现听一些有趣的东西是学习语言的关键。(Ifoundthat…)____________________________________________________________________________________________________couldn'tunderstandIfoundthatlisteningtosomethinginterestingwasthekeytolearningalanguage.Ⅱ.句子升格按括号中的要求改写句子。6.IbecameinterestedinEnglishafterImetMr.Li.(用not…until…改写句子,意思不变)___________________________________________________________________________________________________7.IrepeatedwhatIheard.Theirbodylanguagehelpedmeguesstheirmeaning.(用ontheonehand…ontheotherhand连接两个句子)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.Listeningtosomethinginterestingisimportanttolearnalanguage.(用bethekeyto…改写句子,意思不变)____________________________________________________________________________________________________Ididn'tbecomeinterestedinEnglishuntilImetMr.Li.Ontheonehand,IrepeatedwhatIheard.Ontheotherhand,theirbodylanguagehelpedmeguesstheirmeaning.Listeningtosomethinginterestingisthekeytolearningalanguage.9.Youcantrymymethodifyouhavethesameproblem.(用Iadviseyouto…改写句子,意思不变)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________10.Workharderandyouwillbecomebetter.(用themore…themore…改写句子,意思不变)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________Iadviseyoutotrymymethodifyouhavethesameproblem.Theharderyouwork,thebetteryouwillbe.【连句成文】Iwillgraduatefrommiddleschool.Inthepastthreeyears,Ihavemadegreatprogressinmanythingsandlearnedalot.I'dliketosharemyexperienceinstudyingEnglishwithyou.MyspokenEnglishusedtobepoor.Iwasafraidtoaskquestionsbecauseofmypoorpronunciation.Inordertoimprovemypronunciation,IbegantowatchEnglishmoviesthatIwasinterestedin.Atfirst,Icouldnotunderstandeverythingthecharacterssaid,buttheirbodylanguageandtheexpressionsontheirfaceshelpedmetogetthemeaning.Later,Icouldgetthemeaningbylisteningforjustthekeywords.MypronunciationimprovedaswellbylisteningtotheconversationsinEnglishmovies.Personally,Ifindthatlisteningtosomethinginterestingisthesecrettolanguagelearning.IfyouhavethesamedifficultyasmeinlearningEnglish,Iadviseyoutotrymymethod.拓展积累【描述取得的进步】1.Ihavemadegreatprogressinthepastthreeyears.2.MyEnglishhasimprovedalotinthepastthreeyears.3.Ihavebeenbetteratgettingonwithothersinthepastthreeyears.【取得进步的方法】1.Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclassandreviewedmynotesfromtimetotimeafterclass.2.IfIhadproblems,Iwouldaskmyteacherorclassmatesforhelp.3.IkeptreadingEnglishtextsaloudeverymorningandlisteningtoEnglishtapes.【提出建议的句子】1.Iadviseyoutotrymymethodsandnottogiveup.2.It'simportantforyoutolistentoteacherscarefullyinclass.3.You'dbetterknowclearlywhatyourweaknessisandfindcorrectwaysforyourproblems.实战演练假如你叫李华,你和远在英国的笔友Peter通过博文交流英语阅读体会。请用英文写一封信告诉他你何时开始英语阅读的,你阅读的内容及方式,以及你的收获。[提示词语]begin,read,text(readingmaterial),story,fast,careful,word,knowledge[提示问题]·WhendidyoubeginEnglishreading?·Whatandhowdoyouusuallyread?·WhatdoyoulearnfromEnglishreading?DearPeter,Howisitgoing?I'mwritingtotalkaboutEnglishreading._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHuaOne

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version:DearPeter,Howisitgoing?I'mwritingtotalkaboutEnglishreading.Istartedreadingattheageof7.Tobeginwith,theEnglishbooksthatIreadwereeasybutinteresting,whichmademefallinlovewithEnglishreading.Fromthenon,Ihavereadl