Unit4Writing（problemsandadvice）问题与建议写作课件牛津深圳版英语九年级上册

9AUnit4Problemsandadvice

Writing

LearningobjectivesBytheendoftheclass,Iwillbeableto1.talkaboutteenagers’dailyproblemsgivesuggestionsbyusingdifferentsentencepatternscorrectly,2.writeashortarticleaboutgivingsuggestionstoateenagerwhohassocialmediaadditionproblem,3.reviseyourownwritingbyfollowingteachers’instructions.问题建议用手机时间过长，沉迷游戏和社交媒体认识到目前最重要的事情是学习；让父母代为保管手机；补充1-2点建议；对李华的期望与寄语。Simplepresent3paragraphsStructure?Tense(时态)?problemssuggestionsyourhopehelpfulwords,sentencepatterns,—————————————__________________________helpfulwords,sentencepatterns,—————————————__________________________helpfulwords,sentencepatterns,—————————————__________________________ThestrcutureofthearticletransitionalwordsShe’sanagonyauntwhogivesadvicetopeopleinanonlinenewspaperorinanewspaperormagazine.Whatisshe?Leadin60’’Hello,AuntLinda!Hi,Amy!60’’Hi,AuntLinda!Hello,Patrick!60’’Hello,AuntLinda!Hello,Eric!Amyfindsitdifficultto____________.Patrickthinksit’shardforhimtodeal

with______________________.Erichastrouble_________________

andhesuffersfrom____________loseweighttherelationshipwithhisparentsfinishingallhishomeworktoomuchstress

Thesentencepatternstotalkaboutproblems:sb.finditdifficultto...It’shardforsb.to...sb.havetrouble/difficulty/problemdoing...sufferfrom.../Iamworriedabout...Ifeelstressed(有压力的)because...chatboxWhatproblemsdoyouhaverecently?Writedownyourownproblemsinthechatbox.DearEric, Ilearnthatyouhavetroublefinishingyourhomeworkeverydayandyousufferfromalotofpressure(压力).Ifeelsorryaboutthat.______

Tobeginwith,you’dbetterlistentoyourteachercarefullyintheclass,______What’smore,managingyourtimewell(管理好时间)isofgreatimportance.Forexample,puteasyhomeworkbeforedifficultone.______Moreimportantly,youaresupposedtohaveenoughsleepeveryday.______Stayawayfromyourmobilephonesduringweekdays.Finally,it’sagoodwaytoaskyourproblemswithyourparentsandteacherforhelpwhenyouneed.Remember,theyhavemoreexperiencethanyou,sotheyarealwaysreadytohelpyou. ______Withalittlehardwork,Ibelieveyouwilldealwiththehomeworkproblemandfeelrelaxedinyourstudy.Yours,LindaEDACBA.Inthisway,youcanimproveyourlearningefficiency(学习效率).B.Tosumup,youshouldstaypositiveandtrydifferentwaystosolvetheproblems.C.Ifyoudon’tsleepwell,youwillneverstudywell.D.whichcanhelpyoulowerthedifficultyofyourhomework.E.Hereissomeadviceonhowtodealwithyourprobleminapositiveway.Act.2-EricgotareplyemailfromAuntLindaaboutsomesuggestionsonhowtosolvehisproblem.Pleasehelphimputthesentencesintherightplace.logic(逻辑)DearEric, Ilearnthatyouhavetroublefinishingyourhomeworkeverydayandyousufferfromalotofpressure(压力).Ifeelsorryaboutthat.Hereissomeadviceonhowtodealwithyourprobleminapositiveway.

Tobeginwith,you’dbetterlistentoyourteachercarefullyintheclass,whichcanhelpyoulowerthedifficultyofyourhomework.What’smore,managingyourtimewell(管理好时间)isofgreatimportance.Forexample,puteasyhomeworkbeforedifficultone.Inthisway,youcanimproveyourlearningefficiency(学习效率).Moreimportantly,youaresupposedtohaveenoughsleepeveryday.Ifyoudon’tsleepwell,youwillneverstudywell.Stayawayfromyourmobilephonesduringweekdays.Finally,it’sagoodwaytoaskyourproblemswithyourparentsandteacherforhelpwhenyouneed.Remember,theyhavemoreexperiencethanyou,sotheyarealwaysreadytohelpyou.

Tosumup,youshouldstaypositiveandtrydifferentwaystosolvetheproblems.Withalittlehardwork,Ibelieveyouwilldealwiththehomeworkproblemandfeelrelaxedinyourstudy.Yours,LindaAct.3-Readtheemailagainandfindoutsomesentencepatternstogivesuggestions.

Thesentencepatternstogivesuggestions:hadbetter(not)do.../Iadviseto...Doing...is(agoodchoice)./Ifyou...,youwill...It’sagoodwayto...You’resupposed/expectedto...Isuggestthatyou(should)...Patrickthinksit’shardforhimtodealwiththerelationshipwithhisparents.Tips,staycalmcommunicatechangealittle...WritethreesuggestionsforPatrickproblemssuggestionsyourhopesb.finditdifficultto.../It’shardforsb.to...sb.havetrouble/difficulty/problemdoing...sufferfrom.../Iamworriedabout...Ifeelstressed(有压力的)because...Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Thefollowingadvicemayhelpyou.Thestrcutureofthearticlehadbetter(not)do.../Iadviseto...Doing...isagoodchoice./Ifyou...,youwill...It’sagoodwayto...You’resupposed/expectedto...Isuggestthatyou(should)...Withalittlehardwork,Ibelieveyouwill/can...Ihopeyoucan...First,/Tobeginwith..Second,/Moreimportantly,/Inaddition,..Third,...What'smore,/Besides,...Finally,/Lastbutnotleast,...Inaword,.../Tosumup,.../Allinall,...transitionalwords问题建议用手机时间过长，沉迷游戏和社交媒体认识到目前最重要的事情是学习；让父母代为保管手机；补充1-2点建议；对李华的期望与寄语。WritingtaskChecklistDidIwrite...

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