2024届高三英语一轮复习读后续写技巧点拨课件

读后续写技巧阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2023·鞍山高一检测)A

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MondayMondaystartedoutgreat.Iwokeupontime,atebreakfastanddidsomelastminutestudyingformymathtestthatday.IwasconfidentthatIwouldgetahighmark.Ileftmyhouse,andminuteslater,Iwassittingwithmyfriendsontheschoolbus.Wewerebusytalkingabouthowwespentourweekend.Atonestop,aboynamedRyangotonhurriedly.Hetripped(绊倒)oversomeone’sfootandTHUMP!Hefellflatontothefloor.Everyoneofusonthebuslookedonandlaughedcrazily.Ryanpickedhimselfup,dustedhisjacketandmadehiswaytoanemptyseat.Hetriedtolaughwithus,buthisfacewasburningwithembarrassment(尴尬).Therestofthemorningflewby.Ididwellinmymathtest.Itwasn’tlongbeforethelunchbellrang.Imetmyfriendsfromthecheerleadingteaminthedininghall.Whenwefinishedeating,weheadedouttothecourtyardtopracticeacheerwewoulddoatthatnight’sfootballgame.Aftermuchpractice,wefinallymanagedtodothecheerperfectly.Wedecidedtopracticeitagainonelasttime.Again,justliketherestofmydaysofar,thecheerwasgoinggreat.Iraisedmylegforonelasttoetouch.RIIPPP!Ifeltmyjeanswastorndowninthemiddleofmybackside.Ifroze(僵住了).Ihadnoideawhattodobutstandstill.ThenIheardpeopleburstoutlaughingandIsawthempointingatmybrokenjeans.Tryingtocovermyselfwithmyhands,Itriedtolaughtoo,butIfelttearsbegintowellupinmyeyes.注意:续写词数应为150左右。ThenIsawRyanrunningtowardsme._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thatnight,afterthecheeratthefootballgame,IfoundRyan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】1.读什么?——读文章、理脉络(1)体裁:记叙文(2)事件:在公交车上见到同学Ryan被绊倒,作者和同学嘲笑他,使他很尴尬。然而作者牛仔裤撕开时,Ryan却跑过来,帮助作者摆脱尴尬处境。2.想什么?——品首句、猜情节(1)由续写第一段首句内容“然后我看到Ryan朝我跑过来。”→Ryan帮助作者摆脱尴尬处境。(2)由续写第二段首句内容“那天晚上,在足球比赛的欢呼过后,我找到了Ryan。”→作者找到Ryan,为自己的不礼貌而道歉,为Ryan的帮助而表示感谢。3.如何写?——巧衔接、成佳作文章以“Ryan和作者遭遇尴尬”为线索。续写线索:尴尬—走近—帮助—离开—感谢—道歉—感悟【参考范文】ThenIsawRyanrunningtowardsme.SuddenlythescenestruckmewherehefellflatandIlaughedathimcrazily.Ithoughthewouldjoininwiththoselaughingatme.Iloweredmyhead,myfaceburningwithembarrassment.However,Ryandidn’tlaugh.Instead,heapproachedmefrombehind,quicklytookoffhisjacketandofferedittome,signalingtometocovermytornjeans.Strugglingagainstmytears,Ididwanttoexpressmygratitudetohimbutcouragefailedme.Ileftthecourtyardintotalsilence.

Thatnight,afterthecheeratthefootballgame,IfoundRyan.Ithankedhimforgivingmehisjacketandreturnedittohim.Gatheringmycourage,Isincerelyapologizedtohimformymisconductonthebus,andthankedhimforhelpingmeoutofanequallyembarrassingsituation.Ryan,withabroadsmile,pattedmeontheshoulderandtoldmetoforgetaboutit,jokinghefelllikethatalot.Iadmiredhishonestyandsenseofhumor,andrealizedthathewassomeoneIcouldbegreatfriendswith.Honestly,Mondaywasagreatdayindeed!

【高级词汇】1.takeoff

脱下2.expressmygratitudeto 向……表达感激3.intotalsilence

沉默4.gathermyencourage

鼓起勇气5.withabroadsmile

面带微笑【亮点句式】1.Iloweredmyhead,my

face

burning

with

embarrassment.(独立主格)我低下了头,尴尬得脸发烫。2.Instead,heapproachedmefrombehind,quicklytookoffhisjacketandofferedittome,signaling

to

me

to

cover

my

torn

jeans.(现在分词短语作状语)相反,他从后面走近我,迅速脱下夹克递给我,示意我把破牛仔裤盖住。3.Gathering

my

courage,Isincerelyapologizedtohimformymisconductonthebus,andthankedhimforhelpingmeoutofanequallyembarrassingsituation.(现在分词短语作状语)我鼓起勇气