2023美国留学申请书中英双语版本

Word版本，下载可自由编辑美国留学申请书中英双语版本Countlessdreamershavelookedtothesky,theirthoughtsfixedonTheWrightbrothers’poweredflightinitiatedmenintoarealizationofthatI,too,foundmyselfwithaverypersonalandenthusiasticdreamofflyingasaAsaparticipantinamodelplanetournamentinelementaryschool,IfoundthejoyofmakingamodelplaneandtinkeringwithittofindtheperfectThisboyhoodpastimefosteredmydecisiontomajorinaeronauticalandmechanicalengineeringinoneofthebestengineeringschoolsinKorea,HankukAviation

点评：第一段利用描述小时候制作飞机模型和参与竞赛的经受，体现了他小时候的幻想，和爱好的产生。并引用怀特兄弟说明了自己决心的坚决。从而引出了自己今后的目标，和追求目标考上航空机械工程学院的经受。这个开篇虽然比较大众，但是表述出了自己的爱好和目标，并起到了引出下文的作用。

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点评：其次段是一个过渡段，简洁介绍了在航空学院能够接触到的东西，这些专业的学问使自己的爱好更加浓烈，促使自己更加全身心投入到这个领域的学习。很好的起到承上启下的作用。

MypreparationforyourprogramhasbeenexpansiveandFirst,IhaveasolidbackgroundinaeronauticalandmechanicalAdditionally,duringmyundergraduateyears,IjoinedaclubcalledInformationProcessResearch(IPR)focusedoncomputerOurprojectsdealtwithvisualC++,AutoCAD,andothersoftwareMyworkoutsidetheclassroom,injobplacementsthroughHankukAviationUniversity,grantedmeexcellentopportunitiesforreal-worldThisledtomyassociatemembershipoftheKoreaAeronauticalEngineers’

点评：这段简洁描述了自己在本科期间参与的一个项目，介绍了自己专业的背景。利用这个项目的介绍，反映出了本科期间参与的活动，证明了他由于爱好，开头研发和探究的过程，和为了追求目标所做的努力，同时也反映出了专业力量和背景。

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点评：本段写利用不断学习，确立了自己今后的学习方向和目标，并且把自己的爱好很好的与申请学校相结合，同时反映了自己本学校在这方面的劣势。反映出自己迫切想要到对方学校学习的渴望。

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