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中文Theboysatonhischair,withhishandabovethekeyboard.小男孩坐在椅子上，手悬在键盘上方。Hethoughtaboutwhattowrite.他在思考该写些什么。He

recalledthat

thecompetition

deadline

wasmerelyaweekaway.他想起比赛的截止日期只有一周了。Buthestillhadnotevenstartedonhispiece.但他甚至还没有开始着手他的作品。Helookedatthebrochureagain.“WRITINGCOMPETITION!”thetitle

read(注意：完形填空喜欢考这个词).他再次查看宣传册，标题写道：“写作大赛！”。Hismomhadencouragedhimtoenterthewritingcompetition,andnowhewastakingitonashispersonaltaskfortheholidays.他的妈妈鼓励他参加写作比赛，现在他把这当作假期的个人任务。Astheboyreflectedonhis

previouswritingefforts,herealizedhow

hopeless

histaskofwinningwas.当小男孩回顾他以前的写作尝试时，他意识到赢得比赛是多么的没有希望。Everystoryheeverwrotewas

basedonother

stories.他写过的每个故事都是基于其他故事。Hehad

little

imagination,and

unfortunately,

imaginationwasthekeytowriting.他的想象力不足，不幸的是，想象力是写作的关键。Suddenly,hehadabrainwave.Thistime,hecameupwithan

original

andimaginativestory.突然间，他灵机一动。这次，他想出了一个原创且富有想象力的故事。Thewordsshottowardshimlikeastormofleaves.（此处可积累例句）词语就像一阵风卷着树叶般向他纷纷袭来。Wordswerecomingeasily,flowingthroughhim,fasterthanhecouldtype.词语轻而易举地流淌出来，比他打字的速度还要快。Hetypedfasterthanheeverhadbefore.他打字的速度比以往任何时候都快。Hecontinuedtotype,amazedathoweasywritingthisstorywas.他不停打字，他惊讶于写这个故事竟是如此容易。Theboycouldnotstopwriting.小男孩无法停止写作。Helookedatthewordcountandsawthenumber“248”staringrightbackathim.他看了看字数计数器，数字“248”清晰地显示在眼前。Hewasnotevenhalfwayyet.他甚至还没有写到一半。Thenheheardthecallofhismothersayingtimeforbed.然后他听到妈妈叫他上床睡觉的声音。Hecontinuedwritingthepiece,ignoringher.他没有理会妈妈，仍然在不停的写作。Hehadto

makeupforthetime

hehadlostthinkingaboutatopictowrite.他必须弥补他在思考写作题目上所浪费的时间。Finally,hefinished.Thewordcountnow

read

“498”.最终，他完成了。字数计数器现在显示“498”。“Perfect,”

hethought,“just

underthewordlimit.”“完美，”他想，“刚好在字数限制之内。”Heknewthiswasthestorythatwouldwin.他知道这篇作文绝对会赢得比赛。HewentontoGoogleandsearchedforthecompetition.他上了谷歌搜索那个比赛。Hefoundthepagebuttherewasno

“Enter”（小思考：虽然没有“进入”比赛按钮，但是小男孩“进入”了写作这件事情“button.他找到了报名提交页面，但没找到“提交作文”按钮。Confused,

hethenre-readthepageagain.他感到困惑，又重新看了看比赛页面。Itread

CompetitionClosed.上面写着“比赛已关闭”。续写第一段：Afterafewseconds,theboyeagerlycheckedthedeadlineoftheCOMPETITIONonthewebsite.几秒钟后，小男孩急切地在网站上检查了比赛的截止日期。续写第二段：Hismothercomeupandcomfortedhim.（妈妈既然来安慰了，那应该确实是错了过提交时间）他的妈妈上前安慰了他。下水文：Afterafewseconds,theboyeagerlycheckedthedeadlineoftheCOMPETITIONonthewebsite.

Hisheartsankasherealizedthathehadmiscalculatedthedates;thedeadlinewasyesterday.Alltheeffortandtherushofcreativityhehadexperiencedwerefornaught.Hesatthere,staringatthescreen,feelingamixoffrustrationanddisappointment.Thehum嗡嗡声

ofthecomputerseemedtomockhismisfortune,andtheblinkingcursor光标onthedocumentseemedlikeanaccusingfinger.Hismothercameupandcomfortedhim."It'sokay,"shewhispered,"Thisisjustasmallsetback,and

every

setback

isasetupfora

comeback.

You'vefoundyourcreativevoicetonight,

and

that'swhattrulymatters."Sheremindedhim

thattherewouldbeothercompetitions,andthen

encouragedhimtosharehisstorywithfamilyandfriends.

Inthatmoment,herealizedthattheprocessofcreating,thejourneyitself,wasasvaluableasanyprizecouldeverbe.官方参考范文范文一：Afterafewseconds,theboyeagerlycheckedthedeadllineoftheCOMPETITIONonthewebsite.

HardlyhadheopenedthewebpagewhenthecapitalizedlettersCOMPETITIONCLOSEDleaptintohiseyesagain.Howcouldthatbe?Thedeadlinewasaweekaway."No!!"silentscreamsexplodedinsidehim.Herubbedhiseyes,gotclosertothescreenandfixedhiseyesontheletters.Thecruelcapitalizedlettersjuststoodoutasifnaughtilywinkingathim.Unwillingthoughhewas,hewasforcedtoaccepttheirreversiblefactthatthecompetitionhadclosed.Noticingmomleaningagainsthisroomdoorgazingathimwithaffection,hecouldn'tfightbacktearsofgrievance,burstingoutcryingloudly.Hismothercameupandcomfortedhim.

"Dear,it'sOK.You'vewrittenanaward-winningstorywhichis

originalandimaginative.

That'sthebiggestgainintheprocess."Momsaidgently,pattinghimontheshoulder.Mom'sheartwarmingcomfortdispersedhisshame,butstillheregretted,"Mom,Ishouldhavestartedearlierandmetthedeadline!Allmyeffortshavegonetowaste."Asherecollectedthestruggleinchoosingthetopicandwritingtheimaginativestory,momwipedhistears,ruffledhishairandaskedhimtogotobed.Tossingandturninginbed,

hewasdrawntothefactthatlessprocrastination拖延症,moresatisfaction.范文二：Afterafewseconds,theboyeagerlycheckedthedeadllineoftheCOMPETITIONonthewebsite.

Thedaybeforeyesterday!Hecouldbarelybelievehiseyes.Greatsorrowoverwhelmedhimsosuddenlythathebentoverthekeyboardwithtearsrollingdownhisfaceandhisheartsinking.Howcouldhemakesuchahugemistake?Reflectingonhispassingsparetimeoftheholidays,hesuddenlyrealizeditwashisprocrastinationandcarelessnessthatledtohisfailureincatchingthedeadline.Nowhehadnochancetoenterthecompetitiondespitehisgreatdesiretowin.Lostindeepregret,hecouldn'thelpburstingintotears.

Hismothercameupandcomfortedhim."Youmissedtheopportunity,butmoreopportunitiesarecominginyourlaterlife.Whatyoushoulddoisdrawalessonfromtheincident.”Theboystraightenedhisbody,staredintohismother'seyes,andsobbedthathewassosorry.Ifonlyhehadstartedearlierandstayedfocused!Ifonlyhehadtakenitmoreseriously!"Mo