高考英语应用文写作之投稿介绍志愿劳动讲义（精修版）

高中英语应用文写作之投稿:介绍志愿劳动上周三，你和全校同学参加了学校在光明社区组织的以“劳动最光荣”为主题的志愿劳动。现请你为校英文报写一篇短文，介绍具体情况。要点如下：1.目的；2.过程；3.意义。【审题指导】1.要点顺序：①首段：简要概括事件，主要包括时间、地点、人物和事件，往往还包括目的或对活动的总体评价。

②中段：介绍义务劳动的具体内容，可先按时间顺序略写整个过程，再详写某个亮点。

③尾段：表达感受和收获，对从事志愿服务劳动的意义进行评价。

2.语言表达：报道讲究客观性，开头和结尾句式要凝练概括，中间环节重逻辑。不可写成介绍类回信，演讲稿或电视新闻直播稿。

3.时态语态：全文用一般过去时,收获和感受可使用一般现在时。

4.人称：第三人称或第一人称ourclass/we/us（新闻报道谈活动感受代表全体同学应用we,不能局限于小我！）

【话题语料—实践活动主题】

具体目的：增长见识

enrichourextracurricularlife/broaden/widenourhorizons/openoureyestoawiderworld

提供平台/渠道/全新角度

offerusaplatform/achannelto;

renderusabrandnewdimensionto…

深入志愿服务/探索未知领域

probeintovoluntaryservice/todiginareasbeyondknowledge

深入了解deepen/promote/enhanceourunderstandingofalibrarian’sresponsibility

getadeeperinsightinto…/gain/obtain/enrichtheknowledgeaboutorganizingandpublicizing(宣传)

体验魅力

experience/appreciatethecharm/fascinationofjoininghandsinhelpingothers

培养劳动意识和奉献精神

cultivate/fosterstudents’senseoflaborandspiritofdedication

内容

具体劳动项目参与义务劳动

participatein/getinvolvedin/engageoneselfinvoluntarywork

彻底打扫图书馆

cleanupthelibraryfromtoptobottom

归置书本到书架

sortthebooksandlaythemoutontotheshelves

设计张贴海报

designandputupposters

感受收获反响

句型：

Throughthisactivity,notonlydidwe…,butalsowe…

十分认可Uponreflection,wereallyappreciatetheactivity,forit…

印象深刻Theexperiencewillstayinourminds/willbecarvedinourheartsforever.

大获成功/受欢迎...turnedouttobeagreatsuccess/hit/causedasensation/wasquitepopularwiththestudents

Byimmersingeveryoneinthecharmof..,theactivityenjoyedgreatpopularity/waswellreceivedamongstudents/receivedanimmediateandwarmwele/wonthunderousclaps/waswarmlyembraced.

高度评价：Theparticipantsallregarded/thoughtof/consideredthisasagoodwayof…

具体内容：

激发热情

fuel/stirup/ignite/kindleourpassion/enthusiasmforlaboringandvolunteeringarouse/trigger/spark/stimulateourinterestinservingthemunity/makingcontributionstothesociety

结识朋友befriendwithlikemindedpeople/strengthenthemutualtrust/understandingexchange/cementtheties/bondsofourfriendship有收获有意义atiringyetrewardingpractice/ameaningfulandfruitfulexperience参考范文1WorkingIsMostBeautifulOnWednesdayoflastweek,ourschoolorganizedavolunteerlaboractivityinGuangmingmunitywiththethemeof"Workismostbeautiful".Thepurposeofthisactivitywastoletusstudentsexperiencethejoyoflaborandunderstandtheimportanceofhardwork.Wegatheredattheschoolgateat8:00am.Afterbeingdividedintogroups,wewenttoGuangmingmunity.Someofuswereassignedtocleanthemunity,somewereresponsibleforplantingtreesandflowers,whileotherswereinchargeofpaintingthewalls.Witheveryoneworkinghard,themunitywassoonfilledwithasenseofvitality.

Thisactivitynotonlyallowedustounderstandthevalueoflabor,butalsohelpedusgainadeeperappreciationforthehardworkofothers.Weshouldlearntorespectthosewhoworkhardandunderstandthattheireffortsarewhatmakeourworldabetterplace.Inconclusion,workingismostbeautiful.Throughparticipatinginthisactivity,wehavelearnedthetruemeaningoflaborandwillcarrythislessonforwardinourlives.参考范文2LastWednesday,ourschoolorganizedavolunteerlaboractivityinGuangmingmunitywiththethemeof"Workismostbeautiful"Theactivityaimedtohelpusunderstandtheimportanceoflaborandfosteroursenseofresponsibilityandteamspirit.Wegatheredattheschoolgateat8:00a.m.sharp.Theteachersdividedusintoseveralgroupsandassignedeachgroupatask.Somewereaskedtocleanthemunity,whileotherswereresponsibleforplantingtrees.Ourgroupwasassignedtocleanthepark.Westartedworkingatonce.Someofusswepttheground,whileotherscleanedthebenchesandtrashbins.Everyonewassweatingbuthappy.Afterawhile,wefinishedourworkandmadeadifferencetothemunity.

Theactivitywasmeaningful.Throughourhardwork,wenotonlyhelpedimprovetheenvironmentofthemunitybutalsolearnedtheimportanceofteamworkandresponsibility.Wealsorealizedthatonlythroughhardworkcanweachievesuccessandhappiness.参考范文3

LastWednesday,ourschoolorganizedavoluntarylaboractivityinGuangmingmunity,aimingto"praisethosewholabor".Wegotupearlyinthemorningandwenttothemunitytoparticipateintheactivity.Weworkedtogethertocleanthemunity,planttrees,andpaintthewalls.Theactivitywasverymeaningful,notonlyhelpingthemunity,butalsoimprovingourabilityofcooperationandmunication.Throughthisactivity,welearnedthateveryonecanbethemostbeautifulintheworldthroughtheirownefforts.Weshouldrespectothers'effortsandhardwork,andalsostriveforourownfuture.

参考范文4WorkingIsMostBeautiful

Toadvocatethespiritofsocialserviceandvoluntarycontribution,ourschoolorganizedallthestudentstodovoluntaryworkinGuangmingmunitylastWednesday.

Eachclassworkedasagroupandundertookdifferenttaskssuchasweedingtheflowerbeds,paintingthewalls,andcleaningthewindowsintheneighborhoods.Besides,somestudentshelpedthedisableddosomerepairs,makingthemlivefor