高三英语一轮复习写作专题练习讲义

写作练习(满分15分)

你校上周举行了第十九届校运会(the19thSportsMeeting)。假定你是校英文报专栏“Besporty,behealthy”的主编李华。请你写一封征稿启事，向全校学生征集校运会相关的稿件。内容包括：

1.稿件要求；

2.投稿方式。注意：写作词数应为80左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Contributions

Wanted________________________________________________________________________________________SchoolEnglishNewspaper审题

既然是校英文报专栏征稿，而且内容已知为“向全校学生征集校运会相关的稿件”，故这个启示的重点要侧重稿件内容：

1）围绕刚刚过去的校运会而展开，可以写您对本届运动会的总体印象、可以写本次校运动会上涌现的体育之星，也可以写优秀集体或个人运动会上成功背后的励志故事、感人瞬间；

2）如果您所喜欢的集体或个人没有在运动会上取得骄人的比赛成绩，也可以写他们虽败犹荣的拼搏故事和积极参与竞技的精神。

总之征稿整体要求是写作内容有如下几个特点：真实、积极、创新、娱乐等。

征稿稿件的词数要求（限于校报篇幅，不宜过长）

提交时间要求（考虑到文章与新闻几乎等效的特性，故交稿时间最好是最近几天，不宜太后）

根据本题的写作内容提示的第二点要写投稿方式，可考虑直接以邮件发送到校英文报编辑邮箱（可自编）或直接把稿件送到校英文报办公室。

文章的格式：

第一段开门见山，面对所有校报读者征稿；

第二段具体要求和提交方式；

第三段再次期待大家踊跃投稿。

建议写作词数控制在80100最好。参考答案：ContributionsWanted

Asthe19thSportsMeetingwasheldlastweekinourschool,weareexcitedtoannouncethatourcolumnentitled"Besporty,behealthy”iscallingforyourthemerelatedarticles.

Yourcontributionsshouldcoveryouroryourclassmates'authenticexperiencesinthesportsmeetingandgenuinefeelingsyouwanttoareexpectedtobeoriginalaswellasinspirational.Wesetnolimitstothearticleswithin300yourwritingsbeforeDec.15thtoSchoolEnglishNewspaper@qq.

Writedownyourstoriesandkeepyourcherishedmemoriesforwardtoyourpositions!（85）SchoolEnglishNewspaper下水文：ContributionsWanted

The19thSchoolSportsMeetwassuccessfullyheldlastweek.Toletmorepeoplelovesportsanddosports,weareeagerlywaitingforyourcontributionsthemedonsportsandhealth.Allthemerelatedpieceswithin300wordsarewele,varyingfromtheoverallreflectionsonthesportsmeettothestoriesofyourfavoriteschoolsportsstarorcheeringteam.Makesureyourwritingsareinspiringandentertaining.PleasecontributeyourarticlestotheSchoolEnglishNewspaperOfficebeforeDec.4.

Lookingforwardtoyourcontributions!(87)

SchoolEnglishNewspaper

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

ToactwithintegritywasahabitwithSusanwhoalwaysfollowstheGoldenRule:"Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou."Butwhenshethoughtoverherpastconduct,ablushofshamecrepttohercheeks,asmanylittleactsofselfishnessandunkindnesscamebacktohermemory.Sheresolvedthatforthefuture,bothin

greatthingsandsmall,shewouldrememberandfollowtheGoldenRule.

Itwasnotlongafterthisthatanopportunityoccurred,whichtriedSusan'sprinciples.OneSaturdayeveningwhenshewent,asusual,toMr.Thompson'sinn,toreceivethemoneyofhermother'swashingforhim,whichamountedtofivedollars,shefoundMr.Thompsonapparentlyinaterribleragewith

somehorsedealerswithwhomhehadbeenbargaining.Heheldinhishandanopenpocketbook(钱袋子),fullofbillsandscarcelynoticingSusanasshemadeherrequest,excepttoswearatherfortroublinghimwhenhewasbusy,hehandedherabanknote.

Gladtoescapesoeasily,Susanhurriedoutofthegate.Pausingtoputthemoneysafelyinherpurse,shediscoveredthathehad

givenhertwobillsinsteadofone.Shelookedaround;nobodywasnearandherfirstimpulsewasjoyattheunexpectedprize.“Itisallmine,"shesaidtoherself.“Iwillbuymymotheranewcoatwithit,andshecangiveheroldonetomysisterMary,andthenMarycangototheSundayschoolwithmenextwinter.I

wonderifIcanbuyapairofshoesformybrotherTomtoo."

Atthatmomentsherememberedthathemusthavegivenittoherbymistake.ButagainthevoiceofthetempterwhisperedHegaveit,andhowdoyouknowthathedidnotintendtomakeyouapresentofit?Keepit!Hewillneverknowit,forhehadtoomanysuchbillsinthatgreatpocketbook.”注意：

1.

续写词数应为150左右；

2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.___________________________

“Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,”shehandedhimtheextranote.________________

审题：

本篇文章的主题是宣扬做人需要诚实、正直，不能因为贫穷、侥幸或奢望而而抛弃心中的执念或原则:“己所不欲，勿施于人”。分析了原文文本特别是开头二段后，聪明的作者就会知道要续写的段落必须提到theGoldenRule：Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou.正是因为故事中主角之一Susan笃信了这一黄金法则，后来才得到了别人的尊重，也获得了意外之喜。

故事中另一主角Mr.Thompson在文中显得好像是个家财万贯、气势汹汹的人物，其实，他应该有着人性重最善良单纯的一面。正是因为受到小女孩Susan的退钱的高尚举动的影响，从而引发了Mr.Thompson的退钱，也从而让他也一下子变得高尚起来，不但不接受错拿出去的钱，而且还让那些与他做马匹交易的生意人刮目相看，场景中的每个人想必都应感受到了做人“真诚”的重要性。故事中的大人们从最初的怒气冲天到后来的和谐美好，乃至Mr.Thompson对待周边人的态度用柔情万丈来形容都不为过。如果考生能看懂本文的深意在此，写作出来的意境就会更加的高大上，而这正是我们同学们要通过阅读和思考需要努力提升的素养。至于遣词造句等方面，注意自然、贴切、句式多变、长短句结合就行。

谨防写作跑题的二种情形：

1.第一段一直没提到Susan是因为想到了theGoldenRule而跑回Mr.Thompson的小酒馆；

2.第二段写成了Mr.

Thompson从Susan手里接过了那张多余的钞票，并说是他故意多给了Susan一张钞票以此来验证她是否诚实。

建议写作总词数控制在150180最好。参考答案：

Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.

Sherepeatedlybalancedthefortsthemoneywouldbuy

againsttheharmofwronging.

SuddenlytheGoldenRule

"Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodo

toyou.”soundedinherearslikeatrumpet.Turningroundasifflyingfromsomeunseendanger,thechildrushedalongtheroad

untilshefoundherselfonceagaininfrontoftheinn.“Whatdoyouwantnow?”askedthegruffoldstaredat

thechildashesawthetearsrollingdownhercheeks.（85）

“Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,"shehandedhimtheextranote.

“Twobills?DidI?Letmesee;well,soIdid.Youwantedtokeepit,Isuppose."Susanblushedandhungherseemedtouchedbyherhishandinhis

pocket,hedrewoutashilling(先令)andofferedittoher.“No,sir,thankyou,”sobbedshe.“Idonotwanttobepaidfordoing

right.”Susanreturnedtoherhumblehomewithalightenedheart,andthroughthecourseofalongandusefullifeshenever

forgotherfirsttryingoftheGoldenRule.（76）下水文：

Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.

Butitdidn’tlastlong.InherearsrangthevoiceoftheGoldenRule:“Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou.”Apersonwithintegrityissupposedtospeakthetruthanddotherighteousthing.Shebegantofeelashamedofhavingherselfishidea.Withouthesitation,SusanturnedroundandranbacktoMr