2024届高考英语二轮专题复习与测试专题五应用文写作第一课写作模板与实战展示Ⅰ

专题五应用文写作一、题型解读1.应用文写作主要考查学生英语语言实际应用能力，测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息、表达观点的能力，题目侧重英语语言的交际性和实用性。2.文体包括书信（邮件）、新闻报道、日记、通知、发言（演讲）稿、倡议书、海报、说明书、网络发帖等。但近几年高考进一步拓展写作文体，更新试题呈现形式，设置更加贴近现实生活的英语交际任务情境，增强试题的开放性和灵活性。3.词数为80左右，满分15分。应用文通常给出提纲式要点，话题常与学生的校园生活息息相关。二、命题透视卷名体裁主题语境素养话题2023·全国甲卷征文稿人与社会用英语讲中国故事的征文活动投稿2023·全国乙卷征文稿人与自我描述自己学习一项新技能的体验和感受的投稿2023·新课标Ⅰ卷建议信人与自我对外教分组安排的意见和建议命题预测本题型的考查除了强调基础性外，还将进一步增强开放性和灵活性。1.融入中华文化、坚定“四个自信”。命题写作话题以文化类居多，通过讲述中国故事倡导传承中华优秀传统文化，引导学生坚定“四个自信”。2.落实五育并举、深化体美劳教育引导。命题形式以活动介绍为主，如农场活动、校园活动、跑步活动等，情景真实，贴近学生生活，加大对体育运动与健康意识、审美情趣和劳动精神等的考查。3.关注社会热点，与时俱进，传播正能量，倡导和谐人际关系和科学探索精神。4.借助英语的工具性，拓展国际视野，助推人类命运共同体建设和跨文化交流。三、赋分标准（一）应用文评分细则1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：（1）对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度与合理性。（2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定所属档次，然后以相应档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分注意事项。（1）词数少于60或多于100的，从总分中减去2分。（2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美不同的拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以至影响交际的，将分数降低一个档次。（二）各档次的给分范围和要求档次描述第五档（13～15分）——覆盖所有的内容要点，表达清楚，合理。——应用了丰富的语法结构和词汇，有少许错误，但完全不影响理解。——有效使用语句衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯，完全达到预期的写作目的第四档（9～12分）——覆盖所有内容要点，表达清晰。——应用了丰富的语法结构和词汇，有些许错误。——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑第三档（7～9分）——虽漏掉了一些内容，但覆盖了主要内容。——应用了一定的语法结构和词汇，有一些错误。——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯第二档（4～6分）——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。——应用了丰富的语法结构和词汇，有很多错误。——只使用了很少语句间的连接成分第一档（1～3分）——明显漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。——应用了无关的语法结构和词汇，有太多错误，严重影响理解。——没有衔接，全文意义松散，不连贯，完全未达到预期的写作目的零档（0分）——未作答或内容太少，或所写内容与题目要求完全无关一、案例现场“冤屈的”四档作文（得分9分）“体面的”五档作文（得分14分）DearTom，Iamverydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmayhelpyouknowmoreaboutit.Tobeginwith，anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup，andithasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover，withthestadiumsetup，manykindsofsportseventsareabletobeheld，ofwhichPingpong，footballandrunningcompetitionsareverypopular.Asforme，I'minterestedinbasketball.Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHuaDearTom，Iammorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschooland，Ithink，thefollowinginformationmayhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingofit.Tobeginwith，anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup，whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover，thestadiumsetup，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld，ofwhichPingpong，footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme，I'minterestedinbasketball.Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua专家点评1.左栏作文用词准确，分段合理，且使用了with复合结构和ofwhich引导的非限制性定语从句等，是一篇相当不错的作文。2.右栏升级后的作文，语言更地道、更自然流畅，可谓妙笔生花，技高一筹。（1）词汇的提升有五处，特别是haveabetterunderstandingof、awiderangeof及enjoygreatpopularity的使用会令阅卷老师赞叹作者深厚的语言功底，同时也提升了得分档次。（2）句式的提升有三处，插入语Ⅰthink，which引导的定语从句，以及独立主格thestadiumsetup的使用，都恰到好处，相对于左栏的作文有了大幅度的提升二、策略大营策略（一）“包装”让词汇高端起来1.用词无重复原则——求雅变异写作时，应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语。恰当地使用同义词（组）不仅可以体现雅致的文彩，还有利于增强段落的统一性和连贯性。例如：（1）oldpeople→theelderly/seniorcitizens老人（2）awaytodosth.→anapproachtodoingsth.做某事的方法（3）allkindsof→avarietyof/various/awiderangeof各种各样的（4）finish→accomplish完成（5）hard/difficult→tough/challenging困难的（6）different→various不同的（7）free→available有空的（8）sorry→upset难过的（9）glad→pleased/delighted/cheerful/joyful高兴的（10）inspire→spark激发，鼓舞（11）bebusywith→beabsorbedin/beoccupiedwith/beengagedin忙于[针对训练1]同义词替换。1.Inordertoenrichstudents'after­schoollife，anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool，whichinspiresagrowinglovefortraditionalart.→Inordertoenrichstudents'after­schoollife，anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool，whichagrowinglovefortraditionalart.（2021·浙江卷满分作文）2.DuetoCOVID­19，itisdifficultforfarmerstoselltheirproduce，makingthemveryhopeless.→DuetoCOVID­19，itisforfarmerstoselltheirproduce，makingthemveryhopeless.答案：1.sparks2.tough/challenging2.词义具体化原则——生动贴切写作中尽量避免使用意义广泛、模棱两可的词，而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。[针对训练2]补全句子。1.ListeningtosongsandwatchingmoviesaregoodforimprovingtheirspokenEnglish.→ListeningtosongsandwatchingmoviesimprovingtheirspokenEnglish.（2022·全国乙卷作文）2.Ialsogotadeeperimpressionfortherolethatplantsplayedinkeepingthebalanceofourecosystem.→Ialsofortherolethatplantsplayedinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem（2023·浙江卷）答案：1.arebeneficialto2.gainedagreaterappreciation3.高年级词汇优先原则——新颖高级为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应尽量使用高年级阶段学到的词汇，而不用低年级阶段学到的词汇。[针对训练3]同义词替换。1.Wearesupposedtoadoptaproperwaytoprotectusfromtheterriblevirus.→Wearesupposedtoadopt________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________usfromtheterriblevirus.2.ThereisallkindsoflocaloperasaroundChina，suchasBeijingOperaandKunOpera.→ThereislocaloperasaroundChina，suchasBeijingOperaandKunOpera.答案：1.anappropriateapproachtoprotecting2.awiderangeof4.短语优先原则——凑词增色用短语代替单词不仅会给文章增加亮点，而且用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。（1）形容词变短语的方法（of＋同根名词）。veryimportant/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful→ofvital/greatimportance/use/value/benefit/help（2）动词变短语的方法——替换升级。动词对应短语know/realizebeawareof/befamiliarwithunderstandfigureout/makesenseofshouldbesupposedtousemakeuseof/takeadvantageofconsidertake...intoaccount/considerationbecomingbeapproaching/bearoundthecornermasterhaveagoodcommandof动词对应短语thankexpressone'ssinceregratitudetorepresentonbehalfofsucceedmakeit/achieveone'sgoalshelpdosb.afavourvalueattachimportancetovisitpayavisittolikebefondof/beinterestedin/becrazyabout/beaddictedto（3）副词变短语的方法——同义短语替换。副词对应短语verymorethanproperlyinplacequicklywithoutdelayactuallyasamatteroffactpossiblywheneverpossible[针对训练4]词汇升级。1.ImasterEnglish，whichenablesmetocommunicatewithforeignfriendswell.→I________________________________________________________________________English，whichenablesmetocommunicatewithforeignfriendswell.2.So，itishightimethatwedidallwecantoaffectthesustainabledevelopmentofoceansgreatly.→So，itishightimethatwedidallwecantothesustainabledevelopmentofoceans.（2022·全国甲卷作文）3.IfallintolovewithEnglish.→I________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________English.（2023·新课标Ⅰ卷）1.haveagoodcommandof2.makeahugedifferenceto3.amfondof/aminterestedin/amcrazyabout/amaddictedto策略（二）“换装”让句子新颖起来换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。1.特殊句式，风景独好（1）运用强调句：强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为：①强调句型基本结构为“It＋is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”。②借助于助动词do/does/did对谓语动词进行强调。[针对训练5]对加黑部分进行强调。1.Inmymemory，Youthaccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文）2.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.IexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文）答案：1.Inmymemory，itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.2.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.3.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.（2）运用倒装句，以示强调。在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：①“only＋状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。②none、neither、nor、not、never、hardly、little、seldom等否定词以及atnotime、bynomeans等短语置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。③在so/such...that...结构中，当so/such...位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装。④as、though引起的倒装句。⑤表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时，句子用全部倒装。⑥notonly位于句首，后接句子时，要求采用部分倒装结构，即将该句中谓语的一部分如助动词或情态动词或系动词倒装至主语之前。[针对训练6]句型转换。1.Oceanpollutioncanbedramaticallyhighlightedwitheveryone'sinvolvement.（用only＋介词短语引起倒装）.→Onlywitheveryone'sinvolvement______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（2022·全国甲卷作文）2.Eachpaircanhaveagoodmatchandeffectivelycommunicatewitheachotherinthisway.→Onlyinthiswayagoodmatchandeffectivelycommunicatewitheachother.（2023·新课标Ⅰ卷）3.Moreover，itwillnotonlyimproveourEnglishcommunicationskills，butitwillalsobuildourconfidence.→Moreover，ourEnglishcommunicationskills，butitwillalsobuildourconfidence.（2023·新课标Ⅰ卷）4.AnoldtemplewhichdatesbacktoMingDynastystandsatthefootofthemountain.→Atthefootofthemountain________________________________________________________________________，whichdatesbacktoMingDynasty.5.Throughtheexhibition，youcannotonlyadmirewonderfulpictures，butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.→Throughtheexhibition，notonly，butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.（2021·浙江卷满分作文）答案：1.canoceanpollutionbedramaticallyhighlighted2.caneachpairhave3.notonlywillitimprove4.standsanoldtemple5.canyouadmirewonderfulpictures（3）运用省略句，避免不必要的重复。[针对训练7]句型转换。1.WhenIfeeldepressed，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.→________________________________________________________________________，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文）2.Ifitispossible，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls，Internetbarsandsoon.→，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls，Internetbarsandsoon.答案：1.Whenfeelingdepressed2.Ifpossible2.三大句式，编排巧妙（1）运用定语从句。[针对训练8]句型转换。1.WeallknowthatChinesefoodhasbecomeincreasinglypopulararoundtheworld.（用as进行转换）→________________________________________________________________________，Chinesefoodhasbecomeincreasinglypopulararoundtheworld.2.Withthefireheating，theboilingoilsuddenlysplashedoutofthehotpan，anditscaredmealot.→Withthefireheating，theboilingoilsuddenlysplashedoutofthehotpan，Ｗ.（2023·全国乙卷）答案：1.Asisknowntousall2.whichscaredmealot（2）运用名词性从句。[针对训练9]补全句子。1.________________________________________________________________________（令他吃惊的）isthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.2.Ihavejustfound________________________________________________________________________（我那天下午得参加一个重要会议）.3.Wordcame________________________________________________________________________（我们学校打算举行一次班会）whosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.（2021·全国甲卷满分作文）答案：1.Whatsurpriseshim2.thatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon3.thatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeeting（3）运用状语从句。[针对训练10]补全句子。1.Ifnot，pleaseletmeknow（以便我们做出调整）accordinglytosuityourschedule.（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）2.________________________________________________________________________（尽管我被拒绝了），Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement，whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷满分作文）答案：1.sothat/inorderthatwecanmakeadjustments2.Refusedas/thoughIwas/Although/Though/WhileIwasrefused3.活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。[针对训练11]句型转换。1.Astheoceanpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious，June8thisofficiallynamedbytheUnitedNationsastheWorldOceansDay，whichisaimedatraisingpeople'sawarenessofoceanconservation.→________________________________________________________________________，June8thisofficiallynamedbytheUnitedNationsastheWorldOceansDay，whichisaimedatraisingpeople'sawarenessofoceanconservation.（2022·全国甲卷作文）2.Lastweekend，Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activitythatwasorganisedbyourStudents'Union.（用非谓语动词短语转换）→Lastweekend，Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityＷ.（2023·浙江卷）3.WhenwearefacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse，whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（用非谓语动词短语转换）→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse，whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（2021·全国乙卷满分作文）4.Ontheotherhand，onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections，whichmakesitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.→Ontheotherhand，onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（2021·全国乙卷满分作文）答案：1.WiththeoceanpollutionbecomingmoreandmoreanisedbyourStudents'Union3.FacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet4.makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected4.适时感叹，必要强调[针对训练12]补全句子。________________________________________________________________________（我们玩得多么开心啊）！Notonlydiditgiveusrelaxation，butalsoitgotusclosertonature.答案：Whatawonderfultimewehad5.it句式表达技高一筹（1）Itis/was＋形容词/名词＋that...It'snecessary/important/naturalthatsb.（should）do....某人做……是必要的/重要的/自然的Itislikelythat...有可能……Itis（high/about）timethat＋主语＋did/shoulddo...该是……的时候了Itis/wasnosurprise/wonderthat...……不足为奇Itisapitythat...遗憾的是……（2）Itis/was＋过去分词＋that...Itiswidelybelieved/acknowledgedthat...人们普遍相信/认为……Itisknownthat...（＝Whatisknownisthat.../Asweallknow，...）众所周知……Itisstronglyrecommendedthat...强烈建议……Itisreported/said/hopedthat...据报道/据说/人们希望……Itisthought/consideredthat...……被认为……，大家认为……（3）It＋be＋名词＋（of/forsb）todosth.It'sagreathonourforsbtodosth.对某人来说做某事是一件非常荣幸的事情It'smygreatprivilegetodosth.做某事是我的莫大荣幸（4）动词＋it＋其他。I'dappreciateitif...如果……我将感激不尽sb.hate（s）/dislike（s）/love（s）/like（s）itwhen...某人讨厌/喜欢……（5）it的其他相关句型：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...毫无疑问/不言而喻……Ittakes（sb.）sometime/energytodosth.做某事花费了（某人）一些时间/精力Itisnouse/gooddoingsth.做某事没有用处/好处Whenitcomesto...当谈到……Assb.put（s）it...正如某人所说的那样……Ithasbeen＋时间段＋since...自从……有多长时间了eq\b\lc\\rc\}(\a\vs4\al\co1(Ithappens/happenedthat...,sb.happen（s）/happenedtodo...))eq\a\vs4\al(偶然……；,某人碰巧……)Itoccursto/hits/strikessb.that...某人突然想到……Itseems/appearsthat...看起来似乎……（6）主语＋think/believe/feel/make/find＋it＋形容词/名词＋（of/forsb.＋）todosth.[针对训练13]补全句子/句型转换。1.________________________________________________________________________（众所周知），morethantwo­thirdsoftheEarth'ssurfaceiscoveredbywater.（2022·全国甲卷作文）2.I________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________traditionalChineseculture.我认为这是进一步了解中国传统文化的一个很好的机会。3.Itisimportantthateveryone________________________________________________________________________inanewenvironment.在新的环境中学会和他人相处对每个人都是重要的。4.ItisknownthattheGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.→theGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.（主语从句）→，theGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.（非限制性定语从句）答案：1.Asweallknow2.consideritawonderfulopportunitytofurtherunderstand3.shouldlearntogetalongwellwithothers4.WhatisknownisthatAsweallknow策略（三）“改装”让细节丰满起来在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。1.增加同位语或定语从句[针对训练14]补全句子。1.I'mLiHua，________________________________________________________________________（一个参加交流项目的中国学生），andI'mstudyinginthisschool.2.Tobeginwith，thethemeoftheshowisEnvironmentProtection，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（这不仅有意义，而且有趣）.答案：1.aChinesestudentonanexchangeprogramme2.whichwillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting2.列举具体的实例来补充说明[针对训练15]补全句子。1.I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（和他们聊天，做一些家务）.2.Inthepasttwoweeks，wehavehadtheculturalcommunicationinmanyaspects，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（例如生活、学习、体育、文学、艺术等）。答案：1.chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework2.suchaslife，study，sports，literature，artsandsoon3.添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容[针对训练16]补全句子。1.Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（知道您对我们的“珍爱生命”活动感兴趣），Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.2.I'mplanningtotakeaparttimejobinaforeigncompany.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（为了获得一些实践经验），I'mplanningtotakeapart­timejobinaforeigncompany.答案：1.KnowingthatyouareinterestedinourCherishLifeactivity2.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience4.内容适当具体化[针对训练17]补全句子。1.I'mgoingtodosomeshoppinginthesupermarket.→I'mgoingtodosomeshopping________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（在超市里，直到下午5点才能回来）.2.TheactivitywillbeheldinClassroom501.→Theactivitywillbeheld________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（4月11日的上午9时至10时）inClassroom501.答案：1.inthesupermarketandwon'tbebackuntil5o'clockintheafternoon2.from9a.m.to10a.m.on11April5.表达感受、评价、愿望、倡议等[针对训练18]补全句子。1.Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（这肯定能帮助你了解更多的中国文化）.2.Wecansetoutearly________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（这样我们就可以有更多的时间来阅读和选择书了）.答案：1.whichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture2.sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks策略（四）“化装”让语篇靓丽起来根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体。1.表示“首先”的词语如first/firstly，firstofall，tobegin/startwith等。①Firstofall，wemustmakefulluseofevery45­minutelesson.②Tobeginwith，smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.2.表示“其次”的词语如second/secondly，besides，inaddition，what'smore，furthermore，moreover等。①Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.②What'smore，goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.③Inaddition，doctorsarehighlyrespectedinChinaandingreatdemand，especiallyhighlyqualifiedprofessionals.3.表示“最后”的词语如last/lastly，lastbutnotleast，mostimportantly等。①Lastbutnotleast，healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.②Mostimportantly，readingthosebooksopenedawindowformetoanotherworldandgavemeanewpointofview.4.表示“总之”的词语如inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral等。Inaword，successisimportant，andsoisfailure，becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.[针对训练19]补全句子。1.（首先），Ibroketheeggsandstirredthemevenlyundertheguidanceofmymother，andthenIwashedthetomatoesandslicedthem.（2023·全国乙卷）2.（而且），12%ofthestudentschoosetovisitEnglish­learningwebsiteswhenenhancingEnglishskill.（2022·全国乙卷作文）答案：1.Atfirst2.What'smore第一课写作模板与实战展示（Ⅰ）（活动介绍/新闻报道、演讲/发言稿、通知与倡议书）（一）万能内化模板1.活动介绍/新闻报道2.演讲（发言）稿ACross­CountryRunningRaceInorderto（目的），（事件）.（人物）participatedintherace，amongwhomthirtyweregirls.Participantssetout（时间、地点）.________________________________________________________________________（活动意义）________________________________________________________________________（注意事项）.Goodafternoon.Fellowstudents/Distinguishedguests/HonourableJudges！Mynameis，from（自我介绍）.Mytopictodayis（提出演讲主题）.Everybodyknowsthat（意义）.Unfortunately，mostpeople（反面）becauseit'seasilyto（原因分析）.Forexample，（事实或现象列举），inwhich（后果）.Besides，（进一步阐述理由）.Solet's（再次点题）.That'sall.Thankyouforyourlistening/attention.3.通知4.倡议书NoticeInorderto（目的），an（活动）willbeheld（地点和时间）.Theactivityis（详细信息），whichwillbeveryinteresting/meaningful/significant.Attheendoftheactivity，（人物）will（具体事例）.What'smore，you'resupposedto（要求）.Allthestudentsofourclassareexpectedtobepresentontime.（日期）（单位）（对象），It's（表示荣幸）andgivemyspeech.Mynameis（自我介绍）.Thetopicofmyspeechis（提出倡议主题）.Tobeginwith，manypeoplesuggestthat（倡议具体内容）.Firstly，Ｗ.Secondly，Ｗ.Thirdly，（话题或现象列举）.WhatIwanttostressisthat（重申主题）.Foronething，Ｗ.Foranother，Ｗ.Besides，（原因或重要性列举）.Inaword，（总结）.（二）四步解题示范[典例]你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片GrowingTogether，内容包括：1.短片内容：学校的发展；2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[写作示范]第一步：三审定题，列纲谋篇定题谋篇体裁书面通知第一段目的和主要内容人称第三人称第二段短片名字与内容；目的与意义；放映时间与地点；相关要求时态一般将来时第三段结束套语：提希望第二步：斟词酌句，锁住要点单词attention，interesting，outstanding，development，own，beloved，meaningful，confidence短语remember/note，opinion/comment，takepartin/joinin/participatein，heateddiscussion，giveacomment，haveagreattime，holdthebelief句型三大从句，非谓语动词第三步：词句升级，升华助篇词汇提升方法：普通→高级示例：interesting→someinformation→own→remember→opinion→believe→句子整合方法：简单→复杂，主动→被动示例：1.ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether.Itisaboutthedevelopmentofourownschool.→ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（用定语从句改写）2.Everybody，youwillbewelcometotakepartinit.Pleaseenjoythemovie.Thenyoushouldhaveaheateddiscussionandgiveyourownopinions.→Everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________afterwardsand________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（用动词­ing形式改写）答案：outstandingrelevantmenthave/holdthebeliefthat...1.whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool2.enjoyingthemovie，havingaheateddiscussiongivingyourowncomments第四步：衔接润色，完美成篇衔接词：tobeginwith，besides，what'smore，afterwards，hopefully________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：NoticeBoysandgirls，Recently，anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith，thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether，whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool.Besides，pleasenotethatitwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2：00to4：00p.m.on9June.What'smore，everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit，enjoyingthemovie，havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.Ihavethebeliefthatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.TheStudents'UnionWriting1（2023·湛江市普高二模）假定你是李华，请给你校外教Anna写一封邮件，邀请她主持下个月的英语演讲比赛，内容包括：1.比赛的地点、时间等；2.她需要做的事。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearAnna，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【参考答案】DearAnna，IamwritingthislettertoaskifyouarewillingtobethehostoftheEnglishspeechcontest.Thecontestisscheduledtobeheldintheschoollecturecentreonthesecondweekendofnextmonth.Youareexpectedtogivebothanopeningspeechandaclosingone，andmakesomebriefcommentsonthespeakers.Andofcourse，youneedtointroduceourjudgesbriefly.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishestoyou.Yours，LiHuaWriting2（2023·大湾区普高联考）五一劳动节快到了，学校开展了“我帮父母做家务”的活动。请你为校报英文专栏写一篇短文，介绍该活动的情况，要点包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.你的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。HelpingMyParentsDoHousework________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】HelpingMyparentsDoHouseworkWiththeapproachoftheMayDayInternationalLaborDay，ourschoollaunchedanactivityof“HelpingParentsDoHousework”，aimingtocultivateasenseofresponsibilityandgratitudeinstudents.Theactivityinvolvedstudentstakingonvariouschoressuchascleaning，cooking，andlaundry，thusgivingparentssomewell­deservedrest.Throughouttheweek，studentswereencouragedtosharetheirexperiencesandinsightsinclass，promotingdiscussionandreflection.Personally，Ifindthisactivitybotheducatio