【中考英语写作备考】环境保护

环境保护【话题解读】环保是当今社会的一个热点话题，和我们每个人息息相关。它能考查学生对现实生活的关心程度、对事物的观察能力，而且能够培养学生的环保意识。考查形式通常是要求考生介绍一些保护环境的做法，或针对一些环境现象或环保措施发表自己的观点，也会要求考生写环保倡议书。【实例讲解】为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，某校开展了“绿色港城，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。主题绿色港城，健康生活做法骑车出行，减少空气污染；垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁；多种树木，保护自然环境。观点……(至少2条)注意：1)

词数90左右，短文开头己给出，不计入总词数；2)

不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife

AsacitizenofLianyungang,it'sourdutyto__________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】这是一篇命题作文，题目为“TheGreenCity,theHealthyLife”，写作时要紧紧围绕这个话题展开。根据文字提示，可分两段来写：第一段介绍一些环保的做法；第二段发表自己对这一主题的观点。在介绍环保的做法时要注意语言的条理性；在发表观点时可以从自己对环保的认识、环保对健康的影响等方面来阐述。基础篇TheGreenCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLianyungang,it'sourdutytohelpbuildagreencitysothatwecanliveahealthylife.Whatcanwedo?Wecanreduceairpollutionbytravelingaroundbybike.It'salsogoodforourhealth.It'snecessaryforustoputrubbishintotherubbishbin.Inthisway,wecankeepourcityclean.Andwe'dbetterplantmoretreestoprotectthenaturalenvironment.AsacitizenofLianyungang,I'lltrymybesttomakeourcitycleanerandmorebeautiful.Inmyopinion,everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference.提高篇TheGreenCity,theHealthyLifeAsacitizenofLianyungang,it'sourdutytohelpprotectourcity'senvironmentandmakeitagreenerplacetolive.Herearesomesmallthingsweallcandoandshoulddo:Firstofall,wecanridebicyclestoandfromschoolasmuchaspossibletoreduceairpollution.Secondly,whereverwego,weshouldthrowrubbishintorubbishbinstokeepourcitycleanandtidy.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldplantasmanytreesaspossibletoprotectourcity'snaturalenvironment.【高分揭秘】1.习作内容紧扣主题，段落层次清晰，语言准确地道；2.在介绍一些环保的做法时作者用了firstofall,secondly和lastbutnotleast，使得习作富有条理性；3.在表达观点时作者用了两个短语thekeyto和makeacontributionto，提升了习作的语言档次。4.在结尾部分作者用了一个Let's开头的祈使句来号召大家一起行动，为创建绿色家园而努力，语言简洁、生动、有力。【素材积累】1.词汇观点：inmyopinion,frommypointofview,asforme其他：climatechange,globalwarming,green,recycle,reusable2.句子★Ifwegoonpollutingtheearth,itwon'tbefitforustolivein.★That'saproblemweChinesemustpayspecialattentionto.★Thedevelopmentofprivatecarshasbroughtabout