环球网大编译平台博览频道（2014.11-2015.3）编译实践报告

毕业实践报告题目：AReportontheNewsTransedtinginWeirdNewsChannelofTranseditingPlatformfromHuanqiuWeb(2014.11-2015.3)学院：外国语学院专业：翻译毕业年限：学生姓名：学号：指导教师：ContentsAbstracti摘要ii1.DescriptionoftheTranslationTask11.1SourceoftheTranslationTask11.2TaskDescription11.3RequirementsfortheNewsTranseditingProject11.4QualityAssurance22.PreparationfortheTranslationTask22.1TranslationSchedule22.2LiteratureReading32.3TextAnalysis32.4TranslationStrategiesandTechniques42.5Glossary53.ImplementationoftheTranslationTask74.CaseAnalysis74.1TranslationoftheHeadlineinWeirdNews74.2ConversionofDateandUnitNouns84.3DeletionofRedundantInformation94.4IntegrationofInformation104.5RewritinginNewsTransediting115.Conclusion12References15Appendix16AReportontheNewsTransedtinginWeirdNewsChannelofTransedtingPlatformfromHuanqiuWeb(2014.11-2015.3)环球网大编译平台博览频道（2014.11—2015.3）编译实践报告1.DescriptionoftheTranslationTask1.1SourceoftheTranslationTaskThetranseditingprojectistakenfromHuanqiuWeb,authorizedbyPeople’sDailyandStateCouncilInformationOffice.HuanqiuWebwasco-foundedbyandGlobleTimesandwaslaunchedinNovember2007.Withtheeditorialrights,itisaChinese-Englishnewswebsiteofferingall-fieldandmultiple-dimensionlatestglobalnews.ThroughparticipatinginthescreeningtestorganizedbyHuanqiuWeb,theauthorwasadmittedasamemberoftranseditingplatformandembarkedonthenewstranseditinginweirdnewschannel.Withvarioussubjectscoveredinweirdnewschannel,theauthorwasgiventhechancetotranseditthemostinterestingnews.UnderthemanagementofHuanqiuWeb,theauthortranslatedandeditednewsfromforeignnewswebsitessuchasUnitedPressInternational,HuffingtonPost,DailyMirrror,USAToday,theTimes,EconomistsandGoToAP,etc.1.2TaskDescriptionThemostdistinguishedfeatureofthetaskistheauthorhastoselectimportantnewsfromtheoriginalstoryandtranslateit,inotherwords,asamemberofthetranseditingplatform,theauthorneedstorewriteweirdnewsfromforeignwebsitesbasedontheoriginalnewsreportandeditthemintoChinesenews.Thenewscoveredawiderangeofsubjects,rangingfromweirdeventshappeningallovertheworldandamusinginventionsfromamateurscientiststonewconceptsexposedincertainexhibitions,likeanartisttakethehumanbodyasacanvasforbeautifulart,a

neighborhoodinYucaipa,CaliforniabandedtogethertosynchronizetheirChristmaslightssotheywouldallflashintimetogethertosongsincludingtheTrans-SiberianOrchestra’s“WizardsofWinter."1.3RequirementsfortheNewsTranseditingProjectAccordingtotheweirdnewschannelofHuanqiuWeb,theeditorshouldtranseditweirdnewsonthebasisofthefollowingrequirements:Firstly,theinformationintheoriginaltextshouldbetranslatedaccurately.Secondly,duringtheproject,literaltranslationshouldbeavoided,andrewritethenewsinthesameparagraphandsentenceorderoftheoriginalreportisnotadvised.Thirdly,theexpressionmustbesmooth,easytounderstandandinterestingtoread.Fourthly,thetargetnewsreportshouldbeaccordwiththecharactersofnewstexts.TheTop-to-Downstructureisthetypicalstructureofreportnews,sothe

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paragraphofthetargetreport.Fifthly,thetoppriorityintranseditingshouldbegiventothetargetgroupofthenewsreport,andthetargetnewstextsmustbeintasteforChinesereaders.Thelessimportantinformationinthenewsreportshouldbedeleted.Finally,thememberofthechannelmustfinishnolessthan48articles’transeditingwithinthreemonth.Atleast4piecesofnewsshouldbeaccomplishedeachweekandmorethan16piecesmustbepublishedwithinamonth.ThedetailedrequirementsfornewstranseditingfromtheweirdnewschannelinHuanqiuWebissampledintheAppendixofthereport.1.4QualityAssuranceThequalityofthetranslationandeditprojectisassuredmainlyintwoways:Inthefirstplace,theeditorhastocheckandrevisehisworksaftertransediting,thusminorerrorscouldbecorrected.Thesecondone,alsothemostimportant,istosubmitthenewsreporttoinstructorfromHuanqiuWeb,whowasassignedbythecommitteeofthetranseditingplatform.Theinstructorwouldrevisethetargettextscarefullyandprovideadviceforbetterwork.Thusthequalityofthetranseditingprojectisassured,andthenewsinChinesewouldbepublishedinthehomepageofHuanqiuWeb.2.PreparationfortheTranslationTask2.1TranslationScheduleThetranseditingprojectwaslaunchedinNovember2014andendedinMarch2015.Duringtheperiod,theauthortranslatedthereal-timenewsfromHuanqiuWebwithin5hoursandthensubmitedthemtotheeditorofHuanqiuWebtopublishinthewebsite.Nolessthan2piecesmustbeaccomplishedeveryday,andtheauthorusuallyworksfromeighto’clocktoeleveno’clockinthemorning.Atleastfourpiecescouldbefinishedeachweekandmorethan16pieceswouldbepublishedwithinamonth.2.2LiteratureReadingTheweirdnewscoveredawiderangeofsubjects.Tofinishthetranslationandedittaskbetterandimprovethetranslatingabilityonnewstexts,theauthorreferredtothefollowingbooks,magazines,papersandwebsites:ByreadingANewCoursebookonChinese-EnglishTranslation(《新编汉英翻译教程》),ABasicTextbookforTranslation(《英汉翻译基础》)andACourseinEnglish-Chinese(《英汉翻译教程》),theauthorgotabetterunderstandingonthebasictranslationskillsandstrategies.SelectedReadingsofContemporaryWesternTranslationTheory(《当代西方翻译理论选读》)gavetheauthoranoutlineoftranslationtheories,whichcanbetheguidelineinthetranslatingprocedure.BookslikeACoursebookonPragmaticTranslation(《英汉-汉英应用翻译综合教程》),InNewsTranslation(《怎样做新闻翻译》)andEnglish-ChineseNewsTranslation(《英汉新闻翻译》)providedmodelsfornewstranslationandedit.TheauthorlookedupdifficultwordsandphrasesinOxfordAdvancedLearner’sEnglish-ChineseDictionaryandcomprehendedsomecomplexsentencesbyreadingthebookANewEnglishGrammarCoursebook(《新编英语语法教程》).Consideringthatnumerousforeignnamesappearinweirdnews,theauthorcheckeditinwebsite/cn/gailan.do?cid=6.Theauthoralsoreferredto/forsometermsfrominventionsornewconcepts.2.3TextAnalysisTheweirdnewstextsconsistofthreedifferentpartstotally.Themostimportantpartinnewsistheheadline.AswithnewsinChinese,theheadlineofEnglishweirdnewsiseye-catching,providesasummaryonthecontentsofthenewsandgivesabriefintroductiontowhathappenedandwhere,whendiditoccurredandwhodidit.Thentheintroductiontothenewsshouldgiveamorespecificoutlineonwhatfollowed.Whatfollowedtheintroductionisthebodypart,inwhichdetailedinformationispresented.Inrespectoflinguisticsfeatures,shortwords,acronymsandabbreviationsarefrequentlyemployedinweirdnews.Intermsofrhetoricaldevices,Englishweirdnewsoftenusesalliteration,antithesisandmetaphortoattractreaders.Furthermore,discoursesareoftenquotedinweirdnews.Thesediscoursesareorientedtoofferthemostimportantinformationtothereadersatthebeginning,thenlessrelevantnewswillbefollowed.Forexample:Thesourcetext:“Itbringstogetherthediversecollectionsofdata,art,testimonyandobjectsofthosewhochallengedpreconceivedideasaboutsexandtellsthehumanstoriesbehindthechartingofsexualexperience.”Accordingtohistorians,thefirstrubberdildoswerebeingmade

asearlyas1850andwereusedinpornographicmovies

fromthe1930s...Inthesourcetext,themostimportantinformationabouttheexhibitionwaspresentedthroughthediscoursefromhistorians.Intermsofsyntax,pre-modification,appositive,pasttense,voiceandellipsisarewidelyusedinEnglishweirdnews.Forexample:Thesourcetext:TheRev.WilliamBarber,presidentoftheNorthCarolinaNAACP,whoattendedtherally,warnedCuomoagainst“usingyourpoliticalpower...tosettlescoresjustbecauseyou’remadsomebodycriticizedyou.”Inthesource,“presidentoftheNorthCarolinaNAACP”and“warnedCuomoagainst...”areappositivesofthesubjectWilliamBarber.Weirdnewsissuccinctbutveryinformative,interestingandattracting.Thenewstextischaracterizedbypopularity,conciseness,timelinessandobjectivity.Asthetargetgroupofweirdnewsisthepublic,thusthecontentisconcernedwiththepublicaffairs.What’smore,thetaskofweirdnewsistoamusethepublicandexpandtheirhorizon,whichmeanstheweirdnewsshouldbeeasytoreadandunderstand.2.4TranslationStrategiesandTechniquesThetargetreadersofEnglishoriginalnewstextsareChinese.Usuallytheweirdnewsdisplaysastoryoraneventinchronologicalorlogicalorder.Fromtheperspectivethereaders,theauthorhastodeleteredundantinformationofthenewsintranslationandedititinemployingbothchronologicalandlogicalorder.Mostnewsneithercouldbeliterallynorfreelytranslated.Thetaskforthetranslatorinnewstranseditingistofulfillthecommunicativefunctionofthesourcetext.AccordingtotheSkopostheoryputforwardbyVermeer,translationisapurposefultrans-culturalactivityandtheintendedpurposeofthetargettextdeterminesthetranslationstrategiesandmethodswhichthetranslatorshouldadoptsoastoproduce“afunctionallyadequateresult”.(MaHuijuan,2009:81)“Skopos”isthekeyconceptinthetheory.TheSkoposorpurposespecifiedbytheinitiatordeterminestheprocessoftranslationaswellasthechoiceoftranslationstrategies.Vermeerdistinguishesthreekindsofpurpose:firstly,thegeneralpurposeofthetranslatorinthetranslationprocess;secondly,thecommunicativepurposefocusonthetargettextinthetargetcircumstancesandthirdly,aparticularpurposedeterminedbytranslationstrategyorprocedure.(Nord,2001:28)Thepurposeofnewstranseditingmainlyistofulfillthecommunicativefunctionofthesourcetext.Theaimorfunctionofnewstranseditingistotransmittheinformationintheoriginaltexttothetargetreadersclearlyandfunny.Transmittinginformationisthetoppurposeofnewstransedting.Anotherpurposeofweirdnewsistoentertainthereader,thusthetargettextsshouldbeinterestinginlanguageandaccurateininformation.ThetranslatorissupposedtochoosepragmaticalwaystotreattheEnglishnewsandpresentthetargettexttoChinesereaders.Furthermore,thenewstranseditingshouldbeinaccordancewiththerulesoftheSkopostheory.Vermeerholdsthatoneshouldtranslateinawaythatenableshistexttofunctioninthesituationinwhichitisusedandwiththepeoplewhotouseitandpreciselyinthewayhewantittofunction.(Nord,2001:29)Twofurthergeneralrulesarethe“intratextualcoherence”and“intertexturalcoherence”.Theintratextualcoherencemeansthattranslationtextshouldbeacceptableandmeaningfulinthesensethatitiscoherentwiththecommunicativesituationandcultureinwhichitisreceived.(Nord,2001:32)Thatistosay,everytranslationshouldbedirectedatintendedreceiverswiththeirspecificknowledge,expectationsandcommunicativeneeds.Theintertexualcoherenceshowstherelationbetweenthesourcetextandtargettext,inotherwords,thetargettextshouldbeinaccordancewiththesourcetextinfunction.Amongthethreerules,theSkoposruleholdsthemostsignificantroleinnewstransediting.Duringtheprocess,sourcenewsreportservedasaninformationoffer.Inotherwords,thetranslatorshouldemployanypragmaticmethodsintranslationtotransmitthevaluableinformationinsourcenewstexttothetargetreaders.Thusthetranslatorcouldnotbeconfinedtothesourcetextandtranseditthenewsinthestandofthetargetculture.Thatistosay,thetranslatoroffersinformationaboutcertainaspectsofthereportundertheguideoftheSkopostheory.Theselectionofinformation,deletionofredundantinformationandrewritingintranseditingareallfinishedwiththetargetreadersbeenconsidered.ThusthetranslatorhavetotranslateandedittheweirdnewsinaccordancewiththepurposeofthetextandtransmitinformationclearlyandfunnytoChinesereaders,theyhavetofulfillthecommunicativeandentertainfunctionofweirdnewsreport.2.5GlossaryTermsinweirdnewsisdistinguishedbymanyforeignnamesandotherpropernouns.TheauthorreferredsometermsinYoudaoandBeingDictionary.Asforforeignnames,theauthorchoosestolookuptheminthewebsiteof/cn/gailan.do?cid=6.Inrespectofpropernouns,themostefficientwayistocheckthemin/and/wiki/Main_Page.PersonalNamesReneCarcamo雷内·卡卡牟ErnestLungaro欧内斯特·伦佳罗RichardNile理查德·尼罗JaneCooper简·库伯AnneWolter安妮·沃尔特SultanAlKetbi苏丹·阿尔凯比Jerry

Mitchell杰瑞·米切尔AmberCampbell安布尔·坎贝尔JohnArwood约翰·阿伍德EricOrford埃里克·奥福特PlacesBristolcity布里斯托尔市Brooklyn布鲁克林区Nassau

County拿骚县Florida佛罗里达州Plymouth普利茅斯Queensland昆士兰州Toowoonba图沃柏Oregon俄勒冈州Salem塞勒姆县Nebraska内布拉斯加州Buckinghamshire白金汉郡OtherTermsCCTV闭路电视监控系统RefugeeActionbusinesscentre难民事务中心BorderControl边境管制部门OrlandoSentinel《奥兰多哨兵报》SPCA动物保护协会HumaneLawEnforcementUnit维斯切斯特人道执法部门WorldToiletDay世界厕所日Sudokutoiletpaper数独卫生纸UNSecretary-General联合国秘书长CCTV闭路电视监控系统Halloween万圣节Shenkar’sCollegeofFashion申卡儿时装学院3.ImplementationoftheTranslationTaskAfterreceivingtranslationtaskfromtheeditorsofHuanqiuWeb,theauthorhastotransedititwithin5hoursandcheckitcarefullybeforebeingpublished.Generallyspeaking,theprocessoftranslationcanbedividedintothreesteps.Firstly,beforetranslationandedit,analyzingthegiventextandselectingtheeffectiveinformation.TheauthorhastoextractnecessaryinformationfromEnglishnewslikecharacters,place,time,causeandresult.Unnecessaryinformationshouldbedeleted.Secondly,duringtheprocedureoftranslatingandediting,theauthorhastorewritethewholestoryonthebasisofselectedinformationinaccordancewithChinesenewsreport.Thirdly,aftertranseditingtheweirdnews,theauthorneedstocheckandrevisethetargettext.Whentheworkisdone,itshouldbepresentedtotheeditorsofHuanqiuWebimmediately.4.CaseAnalysisThetargetreadersoftheweirdnewstranslationaremainlyChinese,whoaresoakedinChineseculture.Theyhavespecificcharactersinreadinghabit,expectationsandcommunicativeneeds.Newstransediting,asanactivitywithintendedpurposesandaims,isoperatedundertheinfluenceoftargetculture,nationalpolicy,targetreadersandpersonalpreferences.Inordertofulfillthecommunicativefunctionoftheoriginaltextsandinformreaderswithinformationtheyinterested,weshouldrewritethetargettextandmakenecessaryadjustmentsintransediting.GuidedbytheSkopostheory,thereportwillfocusondifficultiesintranseditingandspecificstrategiesinthefollowingparts.4.1TranslationoftheHeadlineinWeirdNewsAsthefirstpartinweirdnewstext,theheadlineservesforarisingreaders’attentionandinterests.Agoodheadlineisamustforaninterestingnewsreport.Inrewritingtheheadlineinweirdnews,redundantandunnecessarywordsmustbedeleted.Forexample:Thesourcetext:Thestuffofnightmaresorsweetdreams?Jawsfanaticmakessharkshapedcotfornewbornnephew.Thetargettext1:美新生婴儿遇上鲨鱼爱好者叔叔,躺在鲨鱼口中竟也美梦不断Thetargettext2:美新生婴儿躺“鲨鱼”小床美梦不断Thetargettext2isapparentlysuccinctthanthetargettext1andwouldbewelcomedbyChinesereaders.Anotherexample:Thesourcetext:ThievesreturntridentstolenfromCheltenham'sNeptunestatuewithanapologynoteThetargettext1:英奇葩醉汉偷走尼普顿海神塑像手中的三叉戟，酒醒后归还Thetargettext2:英奇葩醉汉偷走三叉戟,酒醒后归还赃物Theheadlineinnewsreportissupposedtoattractreadersintheirfirstsightandpresentthegeneralideaofthereport.TheSkopostheoryplaysaveryessentialpartintherewritingofweirdnewsheadline.Theheadlinewesummarizedshouldbeequaltotheoriginaloneintermsoffunction,whichmainlyincludingattractingreadersandpresentingthegeneralideaofthesourcereport.Firstly,asforattractingreaders,acertainheadlinemaybeattractiveforreadersinEnglishculture.YetifitistranslatedliterallyintoChinese,thetargetreaderswouldbeatafulllossbecausetheyhavenoideaaboutthetextatall.Thatistosay,theheadlineofweirdnewsreportshouldbenovel,yetliteraltranslationinweirdnewsheadlinereportmustbeavoided.Consideringfour-characteridiominChinese,parallelismisrecommendedinheadlinerewriting.Secondly,theheadlineofnewsreportisdesignedtopresentthegeneralideaofthetext.ItisaminiatureofthewholetextinnewsreportbothinChineseandEnglish.Theheadlineofcertainnewsreportisuntranslatablefortranslators.That’smeans,onemustunderstandthewholetextbeforehecansummarizeaheadlineforthereport.Thetranslatorshouldholdthegeneralideaofthetextandthengiveaconclusiveheadlineforhistargettext.4.2ConversionofDateandUnitNounsWesternsandChinesesharelittlecommonsintheunitnounslikelengthandweight.ChinesereadersmayhavedifficultyinacceptingunitnounstranslatedliterallyfromEnglish.TheEnglishwritersprefertousefoottorefertolengthandpoundsorpounds(lbs)toweightHowever,theChinesereadersmaynotbeaccustomedtoaccept“英尺”or“磅”whilethereading.Insuchcase,thetranslatorshouldcoverttheunitnounsintotheChineseway.Forexample:Thesourcetext1:WomanplungingSanDiegotoiletpullsup51/2-footsnake.Thetargettext1:惊悚！美圣迭戈市女子洗手间遇2米长蛇。Thesourcetext2:HowoneyoungWomanlost91lbswiththehelpofslimmingworld.Thetargettext2:英女孩减掉200斤赘肉成功做回窈窕自信女。Intransediting,thetranslatorshouldconvertthe“foot”inthesourcetext1into“meter”,“lbs”(pounds)inthesourcetext2into“kilogram”.Anothertypeofsubstitutionorconversioninvolvedinnewstranseditingisthetreatmentofdatainthereport.Generallyspeaking,theEnglishwritersoftenchoosetouseMonday,Tuesday...torefertodatainnewsreport.WhiletheChinesereadersprefertousespecificdatainsteadofMondayandsoon.ThusthetranslatorhastousespecificdatatosubstituteMondayorFridayinvolvedinthereport.Forexample:Thesourcetext:AdogthatwentmissingfromafamilyinWashingtonwasfoundover2,000milesacrossthecountrybeforereunitingwithownersFriday.Thetargettext:美居民走丢小狗辗转万里终与主人于1月Thedataof“Friday”inthesourcetextwassubstitutedby“1月4.3DeletionofRedundantInformationDeletionoromissionisaskillthatfrequentlyemployedinnewstransediting.Asnewsflashpublishedonwebsites,theweirdnewsreportshouldbeshortandbriefwiththemostimportantinformationconveyedtoreaders.AccordingtotheSkopostheory,thenewsreportissupposedtoinformthetargetreaderswiththemostimportantinformationinlimitedpassage.Thusthelessimportantnewsinformationshouldbedeleted.Actually,inselectinglessimportantinformation,theinterestsoftargetreadersisthemostimportantfactorthetranslatorshouldtakeintoconsideration.Thedecisioncanbemadeundertheconditionthatthetranslatorgotaperfectunderstandingontargetaudience,likewhattypeofinformationtheywouldinterestedin,whatistheessentialinformationforthem,etc.Forexample:Thesourcetext:Missingdogrecoveredafter6,000-miletripacrosscountryPenny,a7-month-oldVizsla,returnedtoherownersFridayafteratripacrossthecountryamountingtoroughly6,000miles.QUINCY,Wash.,Jan.3(UPI)--

AdogthatwentmissingfromafamilyinWashingtonwasfoundover2,000milesacrossthecountrybeforereunitingwithownersFriday.Penny,a7-month-oldfemaleVizsla,wentmissingjustovertwoweeksagoinQuincy,Wash.Inthattime,theBrownfamily,whoownedPenny,setupa

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titled"BringPennyHomeforChristmas"inordertospreadwordaboutthemissingcanine...Thetargettext:美居民走丢宠物狗辗转近万公里终与主人团聚据美国合众国际社1月4日报道，2014年12月中旬，美国华盛顿州昆西市布朗家7布朗一家说，小狗走丢后，他们在“脸谱”网上发布了寻狗启示。据坎德拉·布朗（KendraBrown）透露，最先遇到潘妮的是一名卡车司机，该司机声称本打算将潘妮交给派出所或宠物医院，但当时他并没有找到派出所和宠物医院，所以就带着小狗穿越了加利福利亚州和内布拉斯加州。但布朗说这名司机显然在说谎，因为他们在小狗身上留了电话号码，也许这名司机本想据潘妮为己有，后来又改变了主意，将它交给了宾夕法尼亚州匹兹堡市的一名兽医，该兽医发现潘妮身上的识别芯片后联系到了布朗一家。据报道，潘妮此次行程长达9600多公里，阿拉斯加航空公司也给潘妮提供了“顺风机”服务。IntheoriginalEnglishnewsreport,specificintroductionwasmadetothemissingdog,whilethepointofthenewsreportisgiveanarrationonhowthedogreunitedwithhisowners.Thustoomuchspecificdescriptiononthedogisunnecessaryandshouldbedeleted.Sothedescriptivepartofthedoginthenewsreportwasdeletedandsummarizedas“美国华盛顿州昆西市布朗家7个月大的维兹拉犬潘妮走丢”.4.4IntegrationofInformationComparedwithChineseweirdnewsreport,informationpresentedinEnglishweirdnewsistendtobescatteredandfragmented.Tointegratethesebitsofinformation,thetranslatorhastoanalyzethenewstextthoroughlyandsortoutinformationpresentedinthereport.Thenrelatedinformationshouldbeintegratedintoaparagraph.ThewholenewsreportinChineseshouldbenomorethanfiveparagraphs.Forexample:Thesourcetext:...At21st9lbs,SamAkermanalwaysfeltasthoughstrangerswerejudgingherandthatshewassecondbestcomparedtoslimmerwomen.Thecivilservant,29,fromHighWycombe,Buckinghamshire,alsofoundherselfthebuttofjokesabouthersize.Onanightoutbeforestartingherfitnessregime,dropping6st9lbto15stintwoyears,Samrevealsshewasmadealaughingstockbyamanwhowas‘onamissiontopullasmanyfattiesashecould’Thetargettext:英国白金汉郡威科姆区29岁的女公务员萨姆·阿克曼（SamAkerman）曾因体重过高饱受冷眼，因此狠下决心进行减肥，在此后的两年间减掉赘肉近100千克，成功找回了自信。萨姆表示，食物能给自己带来安全感，所以她喜欢烹制各类美食。以前她总是关注别人是如何对待自己的，走在路上总感觉别人在对着自己庞大的体型指指点点，她希望自己能得到正常人的待遇。两年下来，萨姆已成功减掉赘肉，做回了自信的自己，同时她的减肥经历也鼓舞了其他减肥人士。Inthesourcetext,thefirstparagraphaswellasthelastoneareallaboutherweightbeforeslimmingandtheprejudiceshesuffered.Intranslatingandediting,thetranslatorhastointegratetheseparatedtwoparagraphsintoone.Inshort,integrationofinformationisthekeyprocedureoftranslatingandediting.Theimportanceandcorrelationshouldtakeinaccountinintegratinginformation.Onthebasisofintegration,theinformationshouldberewriteaccordingtothestyleofthenewsreport.4.5RewritinginNewsTranseditingAftertheintegrationofrelatedinformation,thetranslatorhastorewriteorreorganizehistargettext.Inordertoimprovethereadabilityofthetargettext,necessaryadjustmentshouldbemadeatsyntacticalortextuallevel.Generallyspeaking,restructuringinvolvesthefollowingaspects:Fromtheperspectiveofthenewsstructure,thereareusuallyaheadline,theinstructionandbodypartsinEnglishweirdnews.Whileintargetreportwepreserveonlynewsworthyinformationandsummarizeanewheadlineaswellasaconclusiontothereport.What’smore,withnewintegratedinformation,thetranslatorneedtoreorganizetheinformationpresentedinthenewsreport.Thesequenceofparagraphsorsentencesshouldbeadjustedaccordingtothechronicle,spatialandlogicalorder.Generally,informationinEnglishweirdnewsislooselypresented,paragraphsarelesscorrelated.WhilenewsreportsinChinesetendtopresentinformationinacertainorder.Thusreorganizationofinformationorparagraphsisnecessaryinnewstransediting.Forexample:Thesourcetext:Motherstabssonfor‘lyingabouteatingfourpork

chops’Porkwasatthecentreofadomesticstabbingrecentlywhereamother,allegedlyangeredoverher15-year-oldsoneatingfourchops,

threwaseriesofkitchenknivesathisface.Accordingtohersister,YolandeVeasley,57,wasincensedby

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lyingovereatingthechopspreparedforthenextday.Herteenagesontoldthepoliceshehadbeendrinkingandfledtohisaunt’sflatbecause‘Ihadknivescomingatmyface.’The15-year-oldwastakentothehospitalbyhisauntwherehiscutrequiredstitches.WHIO

reportedthatVeasleytoldpoliceofficesthatshewasprovokedintheattackbybeingknockeddown.ThewomanfromDaytonOhio

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courthearing.Thetargettext:美酗酒母亲因儿子偷吃猪排朝儿子扔刀具据英国《都市日报》1月12日报道，在美国俄亥俄州代顿市，一名母亲因15岁的儿子偷吃了四根猪排而大动干戈，朝儿子动用“该母亲名叫约兰德·卫斯理（YolandeVeasley），她的妹妹表示，约兰德当时指责儿子偷吃猪排，被儿子推倒后大怒不已，因此朝儿子扔起厨房里的各类刀具，之后约兰德·卫斯理带着受伤的儿子去了医院。据警方消息，该母亲当天喝了酒，看到儿子脸部被刺伤之后跑到了妹妹家。现在该母亲将因严重暴力伤害人身罪而受审，即将被捕入狱。”Inthenewsreport,theinformationislooselypresented,thefirstpartisthefactthatthemotherstabbedherson,andthenisthestatementfromthesonandthemother’ssister.WhiletranseditingtheEnglishreportintoChinese,thetranslatorshouldpresentinformationinalogicalorder.Inthetargettext,theinstructionpartpresentedageneralideaaboutthefact.Inthebodypart,thereasonbehindthestabbingandthechargethatmotherfacesarepresented.Finally,theexpressioninnewsreportshouldbesmoothandclearandinaccordancewithChinesegrammar.InrewritingweirdnewsinChinese,oneshouldsnapoutoftheinfluencefromEnglish.AfterreadingtheoriginalEnglish,thetranslatorshouldimmediatelyshifthislanguagemodelintoChinese.ThemosteffectivemethodinproducingsmoothChinesenewsreportisrewriteinsteadoftranslating.ThusthetranslatorwouldsupposehimselfastheoriginalauthorofthenewsreportandwritethenewsinauthenticChinese.5.ConclusionSinceparticipatingintheweirdnewschannelofthetranseditingplatforminNovember,2014,theauthorhasfinishedthetranslationofnearlyfiftypiecesofnewsreport.It’sarewardingprojectastheauthormasteredthebasicskillintranseditingnewsreport.Beforethattheauthorjustknowsalittleaboutnewsreportthroughthecourseofpragmatictranslation.Theprojectgavetheauthorachancetorewriteherownnewsreportand,furthermore,theauthor’sworkscouldbepublishedonthehomepageofHuanqiuWeb.Throughouttheprocedureoftranse