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雅思写作突破Lesson5Jack写作过程审题：30seconds打腹稿：2minutes下笔如有神：17-37minutesTask2模板句拓展举例(fromShaw’sprefacetoMajorBarbara,pages43-44)GeorgeBernardShawTask2思路和模板Iam,andhavealwaysbeen,andshallnowalwaysbe,arevolutionarywriter,becauseourlawsmakelawimpossible;ourlibertiesdestroyallfreedom;ourpropertyisorganizedrobbery;ourmoralityisanimpudenthypocrisy;ourwisdomisadministeredbyinexperiencedormalexperienceddupes,ourpowerwieldedbycowardsandweaklings,andourhonorfalseinallitspoints.Iamanenemyoftheexistingorderforgoodreasons.开头段句型举例EXPRESSINGTHOUGHTSADNOPINIONSIthasbeenaroundfifteenyearssincetheinternetwasintroducedintoBritishhouseholds/butpeoplestillhavemixedviewson/whetheritisapositiveornegativeinfluenceonsociety.犀利地表示个人观点ItaketheviewthatIamoftheopinionthat...issue=problemcontentious/controversial/difficult/thornyissue有争论的问题；难题；棘手的问题raiseandsettleanissueRaisinganissueisonething;settlingitisanotherone.address/consider/dealwith/examine/exploreanissue解决/考虑/处理/调查/探究issueabout/concerning/relatingto…有关/涉及…的问题适合discussion问题的开头Theissue/discussion/topic/problemabout/ofsthisofgreatinterest/concern/importance/significanceamongthegeneralpublicrecently.1.Theissueof···isofgreatinterestto···e.g.Theissueofwhetherthepracticeofrequiringstudentstowearschooluniformswillaffecttheirpersonalityisofgreatinteresttomanypeople.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2.Thetopicof···isofgreatconcernfor···e.g.Thetopicofwhetheritisappropriateandeffectivetousecorporalpunishment(体罚)

onyoungchildrenisofgreatconcernformanypeople.CulturalpracticesAttitudetowardshowtoeducatetheirchildrenGooglecorporalpunishment3.Thediscussionabout···isofgreatsignificanceto···e.g.Thediscussionaboutthemosteffectivewaytoprovidefinancialandtechnologicalsupportstothird-worldcountriesisofgreatsignificancetobothindustrializedanddevelopingcountries.4.Theinquiryinto··hastriggered/sparkedanintensecontroversyintherealmof···e.g.Theinquiryintothemoralityofconductinganimalresearchhastriggeredanintensecontroversyintherealmofmedicalscience.适合agree/disagree的开头句1.Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthat···,thisisactuallynotthecase.e.g.Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthatincreasingthenumberofsportsfacilitiesisthebestwaytoimprovepublichealth,thisisactuallynotthecase.2.Althoughthereceivedopinionisthat···,theharshrealityusuallyturnsouttobeacompletelydifferentpicture.e.g.Althoughthereceivedopinionisthatschoolchildrengenerallybenefitfromwatchingtelevisionandusingotherhigh-techmediaintheirlearningprocess,theharshrealityusuallyturnsouttobeacompletelydifferentpicture.3.Althoughmanypeoplesubscribeto(agreewith/believein)thebeliefthat···,thisisinfactacommonmisconceptionthatweneedtoclearup.e.g.Althoughmanypeoplesubscribetothebeliefthatprovidingpubliclibraryfacilitiesandservicesisawasteoftaxpayer’smoney,thisisinfactacommonmisconceptionthatweneedtoclearup.4.Althoughmostindividualsareconvincedthat···,thisisactuallyapopularmyth(idea/beliefwhichisuntrue)thatmustbeexploded.e.g.Althoughmostindividualsareconvincedthattheirhappinessiscloselylinkedwiththeleveloftheirfinancialsuccess,thisisactuallyapopularmyththatmustbeexploded.表示趋势的开头句Therehasbeen…

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awidespread/popular/prevalentphenomenonthat···e.g.Therehasbeenawidespreadphenomenonthatstudentsfromruralareasfinditincreasinglydifficulttohaveaccesstocollegeoruniversityeducation.时间做主的开头句Recentdecadeshavewitnessedamajortransformationin···e.g.句子翻译：过去的十年见证了人们交流方式的革命性的转变Thepastdecadehaswitnessedarevolutionarychange/transformationinthewayofhumancommunication//inthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachotherinmoderncontext.另类开头段举例1IntheaftermathofthemassacreatSandyHookElementarySchool,lastDecember,therehasbeenmuchpublicdiscussionaboutthenecessityofgreatervigilanceregardingmental-healthissues.But,astheAmyBishopstorymakesclear,thiskindofearly-warningsystemisoftendifficulttoinstituteinpractice.另类开头段举例2Concernsabouttheairqualityonplanesarenothingnew,butarecentlawsuitreignitesadebateoverwhetheritcouldpotentiallybeharmful.BritishAirways(BA)defendeditssafetyprotocolsafteraposthumouscourtcasewasfiledonbehalfofoneoftwoformerpilotswhoclaimedthattheyhadbeenpoisonedbytoxiccabinfumes.ClichéHackneyedtopic/debate老生常谈的话题/讨论另类开头段举例3Aspoliticiansandpolicymakers/decisionmakersdigestterriblegrossdomesticdata,thedebateabouthowtoetheeurozonecrisishasbeenrekindled.当大城市的市民遭受着极其糟糕的空气污染之时，有关日益恶化的空气质量之潜在危害又成为公众热烈讨论之话题。Whileresidentsinsomebigcitiesaresufferingfromterribleairpollution,thedebateaboutthepotentialharmofdeteriorating/aggravationofairqualityhasbeenrekindled/reignited.结尾段句型1.Giventheaboveargument,itisfairly

reasonabletoconcludethat…e.g.Giventheaboveargument,itisreasonabletoconcludethatifeverymemberofthesocietyisawareoftherelationshipbetweenhumansandnatureandstopstheirdestructivebehavior,itisgoingtoalleviate/mitigatethepressureofecosystem/biosphere.2.Basedontheaboveargument,Iconcedethat…However,…e.g.Basedontheaboveargument,Iconcedethatusingairfreightcomeswithsomeunpleasantside-effects.However,ithasbroughtpeopleunprecedentedconveniencewithavarietyofunseasonalfruitsandvegetables.3.Accordingtothediscussionabove,Iamconvincedthat…e.g.Accordingtothediscussionabove,Iamconvincedthataslongaspeopleturnthemassmediatogoodaccount(turn/putsthtogoodaccount),theycanconstantlybenefitfromitsfavorablefunctions.4.Inconclusion,Iwouldliketorestate/reiteratemyviewpointthat…e.g.Inconclusion,IwouldliketorestatemyviewpointthatreadingcanbetterdevelopourimaginationandlanguageskillsratherthanwatchingTV.ROI投资回报率；productmix产品结构

G&Aexpense管理费用(generalandadministrativeexpense)ReportThesedays,manypeoplelivinginbigcitiesdonotgotomuseumswithobjectsofhistorical,artisticandculturalvalue.Whatarethecauses?Howisitimportanttosociety?(2012.12.15)(社会文化类)词汇multicuturalsociety多元文化社会corevalues核心价值观词汇assimilateintoanewculture融入新文化aclose-knitcommunity联系紧密的社区asenseofalienation疏离感asenseofbelongingness归属感审题+打腹稿题型:report原因？1.distractions:toomany2.toobusy(workers&schoolchildren)3.government(notfree&publicawareness)重要性？1.education2.preservation/protection3.localtourism开头段1.Thesedays,itseemsnotmonthatpeoplelivinginmanybigcitiesdonotpayavisittolocalmuseums.(versionA)1.Museum,onceapopulareducationalandentertainingtoolinhumansociety,seemstobelosingitsprevalenceinmanybigcities.(versionB)2.Inthefollowingessay,ananalysisofthepossiblecausesandthesignificanceofmuseumsinthesocietywillbegivenindetail.填空练习3.The_____forthis________aremany.4.The______oneisthat________,especiallyyoungpeople,are______bysomany______distractionslikesmartphonesoripadthattheyseldom______athoughtforpayingavisittolocalmuseums.主体段13.Thecausesforthisphenomenonaremany.4.Theprimaryoneisthatcitydwellers,especiallyyoungpeople,aresurroundedbysomanydigitaldistractionslikesmartphonesoripadthattheyseldomspareathoughtforpayingavisittolocalmuseums.4.Theprimaryoneisthatpeople’sentertainingactivitiesareingmorediversified/diversewithgallopingmoderntechnologysuchassmartphones,internet,socialmedia,etc.,whichexplainswhyanincreasingnumberofpeoplefindmuseumsnothingbutboringplaces.主体段15.Furthermore,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat

white-collarworkersinmodernsocietyarefacedwithenormousworkpressureinbigcities.Asaresult/consequently,theycanhardlysparesometimetoappreciatethewonderfuldisplays/exhibitsinthemuseum.主体段16.Anotherfactorcontributingtothisphenomenonisthatgovernmentauthoritiesfailtheirdutyinsomecasestoencouragecitizenstoenjoythosepublicfacilitiestothelargestextent.主体段17.Forexample,manymuseumsarenotfreeofcharge

(i.e.theyshouldbeopenforfreetothepublicatleastforsometimeduringtheyear);authoritieshavenotlaunchedenoughpubliccampaigns

atalargerscale,especiallyinmanydevelopingcountriestoraisepeople’sawarenessoftheirreplaceableroleofmuseums.Launchpad火箭发射架主体段28.Withregardtohowimportantmuseumsaretosociety,theyplayanessential/crucialroleinthesphere/domainofpubliceducationandpreservationofhumancivilization.9.Tobeginwith,nowherecanwefindaplacelikeamuseuminwhichartsandhistoryarepresentedinsuchavividandentertainingwayforthepurposeofcultivatingamorecivilizedpublicattitudeinmodernsociety.主体段210.Moreimportantly,amuseumservesasaprotectorforpreservinghumanhistory,cultureandarts/humancivilization.BythisImeanthatwecanensureculturalinheritancewithinacityorentiresocietyforfuturegenerations/ouroffsprings/posterity.11.tourism>economyentity结尾段11.Allthingsconsidered(通盘考虑起来),thecausesdiscussedaboveareseeminglyunderstandableyet

mirroranegativeorevenpathetictrendconsideringthetwoimportantfunctionsofmuseumsinmoderntimes.12.Hopefully,“tovisitornottovisit”willnotbethequestionwithcollaborationofcityresidentsandgovernmentauthoritiesintheforeseeablefuture.2012.11.8社会生活类Todaymorecouplesdecidetohaveababyatanolderage.Whatarethepossiblecausesforthis?Isitapositiveornegativetrendforfamiliesandsocietyasawhole?开头段Inrecentyears,thereseemstobeatrendthatanincreasingnumberofmenandwomenhavemadethechoiceofhavingababyatanolderage.Personally,Iregardthisasanegativetrendforbothfamiliesandsocietyatlarge.Thepossiblecausesofthisphenomenonwillbeprovidedinthefollowingessay.主体段1Therearethreemajorunderlyingcausesforthispopulartrend.Firstandforemost,thefinancialpressureofyoungcouplescontributesasthefundamentalfactorconsideringtheaverageeofyoungcouplesnowadays.Inadditiontothat,somewhite-collarworkersdevote/dedicatealltheirheartsandtimetotheircareer.Lastofall,theirresponsibilityofsomeyoungcouplestodayalsoexplainswhytheyhavemadethisdecision.主体段2Asfortheinfluenceofthistrend,peoplehavemixedviewsyetIamconvincedthatitisanegativeoneinthelongrun.Fromtheperspectiveofeugenics,itisnotphysiologicallysuitabletohaveababyatanolderageforbothparentsand

babyitself.Itisacommonlyacceptedfactthatitisbetterforcouplestohaveababybeforetheageofthirty.主体段2What'smore,itwillworsen/aggravatetheproblemofpopulationageing.Withdecliningfertilityandmortalityrate,theproportionofagedpeople//theold//seniorcitizenswillebiggercorrespondinglyataneverincreasingrate.This,inturn,givesmuchpressuretothelabourmarket(i.e.labourshortage)andthecreativityandvigorofsociety.Thegovernmentalsohasagreaterburdentobearinregardtopensionandhealthcare.结尾段Insummary,Iwouldliketorestatemyopinionthatthisphenomenonwillhavebothshort-termandlong-termnegativeinfluenceonfamiliesandthesocietyasawhole

thoughsomeofthecausesarequiteunderstandable.Thisissuecallsfor/demandsjointeffortsofgovernmentandyoungparentstogiveafeasiblesolutionconsideringthecurrentandunforeseeable/potentialhazardsintheyearstocome/ahead.GenderdiscriminationintheworkplaceSomepeoplebelieveeverykindofjobshouldhireequalnumberofmenandwomen.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?开头段Inthebusinessworld,thereseemstobemoremalebusinessleadersandmaleemployees.Thussomecriticsofthisphenomenonsuggestthathiringanequalnumberofemployeesshouldbetakenintoconsiderationtoavert(避免)thistrend.Formypart,however,thisproposalislikesomewhatadaydream－thoughitiswell-intentioned.让步段Supportersofhiringequalnumberofmaleandfemaleemployeeshavetheirownreasons.Itiswidelyknownthatgenderdiscriminationintheworkplaceisquiteprevalentnotonlyindevelopingcountries,butindevelopedworldaswell.Hencethisproposalisatleastabigstepforwardfortheendeavoroffightingforfeminism.