考作文感谢父母信件

假如你是李华，在你18岁生日时，你收到了父母送给你的生日卡和礼物。为了表示感谢，你给父母写一封信。内容包括：1.感谢父母的生日礼物及18年来的养育之恩；2.读生日卡后的感想；3.承诺高考后要为父母做一件事。注意：1．词数100左右，短文的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。书信体特点，简洁流畅，语气亲切，用词温馨Iamwritingtothankyouforthebirthdaycardandthegiftyousentmeonmy18thbirthday.I’dliketoexpressmygratitudetoyouforeverythingyouhavedoneformeinthepast18years.MumandDad,IpromiseIwillcookyouabigmealafterthecollegeentranceexaminationtoshowmydeeploveforyou.Opening:I’msohappytoreceivethebirthdaycardandthegift/presentyougavemeonmy18thbirthday.I’mwritingtoshowmygratitudetoyouforbringingmeupinthepast18years.para2Afterreadingthebirthdaycard,I’mdeeplymoved.Ican’thelpthinkingofthelove,care,devotion,encouragementandunconditionallovefromyou.I’msoluckytohavesuchcaringandunderstandingparentsasyou.Iwillliveuptoyourexpectationsandetheoneyouareproudof.endingMumandDad,inreturnforyourdeepestlove,Ipromisethatafterthecollegeentranceexamination,Iwillcookamealforyou/panyyoutothecinema/dohousework/takeyououtforatripwiththemoneythatIwillearnbydoingpart-timejobs.良好生活习惯的意义Itisofgreatimportancetokeepgoodhealthhabits.Goodhealthhabitscontributesto/leadstoahealthybody倡议内容Iappealto/callon

usstudentstodo…..从我做起Startfromourselves一起努力Worktogether评分标准1. 审题2.语言得体性3.语言准确性4.信息完善性5.字数、书写卷面作文自评要点1.卷面（A/B/C/D）2.字数是否符合要求3.要点是否齐全、顺序与要求一致：围绕主题“为了表示感谢，你给父母写一封信”展开 1)感谢父母的生日礼物及18年来的养育之恩 2)读生日卡后的感想（感受+联想） 3)承诺高考后要为父母做的一件事（具体可行、简述意义或原因）4.合理分段（2–3段）5.语法错误6.单词错误语法填空及填空题普遍问题：过度涂改，书写不清晰，动词变化错误多

写出下列动词的ing形式sit/fix/swim/run/putpermit/begin/offer/refer/forbidforget/suffer/occur/infer/preferThehat_____(hang)intheclosetwasboughtyesterday.If______(relate)tothecase,hewillberathernervous.Thelaststudent______(leave)tothelabwasaskedtolockthedoor.After_________(wake)bythealarmclock,hehadtogetup.Janepausedinfrontofacounter______someattractivetieswereondisplay.Thisisthesecondtimethatthey______(sing)thesonginEnglish.CF:Itisabouttimethatthey____________(begin)theirgame.Withmoremoney______(invest),theprojectwentonsmoothly.Thestorythat______(ba