大学英语四级写作评分实例及范文

大学英语四级写作评分实例题目1：PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSports 1、参加体育运动有许多好处 2、但也有副作用 3、你的体会【样卷1】得分：2分 Ilikesports.Ittakememoreprofit.Thefirstoneishealthaswellknown.Thesecondisrelaxion.Afterlearninginschool,Ilikemakesomemovement,justasrunning.Itcanrelaxmyself.Althoughtherehassomanyotherpositiveaspectsofsports.Therealsohassomanynegativeaspectsofsports.Itmakesomeonedamagours.Becauseyouwouldhurtinsport,justlikefootball.It’smostlikelytohappenbutitcouldn’tproventpeoplefromsports. Ithinkthatsportstakemoreprofitthandamaguostome.Ilikesports.【样卷2】得分：5分 Sportscanprovideusgoodhealthy.Especiallywhenweareinchildhood.Sportscanbebenefitofourgrowing.Itcanstrengthenourbody,brightenourbrain,widenourallkindsofinterestsandmakeyouencouragable.Asastudentstudyingincollegesportsisessentialandimportantforourstudy.Positivesportscanmakeyousucceedinallkindsofthings. Butitdoesn’tfollowthatsportshasnotanyshortcoming.Ifoccupyingallofyousparetime,sportwillinfluentotherhobbiesofyours.Ifyoudothatforalongtime,youwillbecomeahollow-brainman.Itisterribleforyourfuture.Ilikesportsverymuch.Becausesuitablesportsreallycanhelpmystudy.Anditmakemeconfident.Icansoluteanyquestiondependingonmyenergyandstoringbody.【样卷3】得分：8分 Therearealotofpositiveaspectsofsports.Peopletakespartinsportsandgamesfromtimetotimeislikelytohaveagoodbody.Whilehavingsports,peoplecanstrengthenhismuscles,fastenhisspeedofresponse,andincreasehisabilityofresistingdisease.Sportsarealsohelpfultotrainpeople’scharactorsanddetermianation. Butyoucanneverneglectthenegativeaspectsofsports.Peoplemayhurthimselforotherswhenhejoinsports,especiallythoseareviolent. Ontheend,havingsportshasmoreadvantagesthandisvantages.Ienjoyplayingbasketballandthishasbroughtmesuchexcitement.AndIhavemakesomegoodfriendswhenweplayedbasketballtogether.WealwayssticktotherulessothatIneverhurtothersorbehurted.【样卷4】得分：11分 Sportshavealotofgoodeffects.Itcanmakeyoustrongerandmoreintelligent.Propersportscanalsomakeyoufeelenergeticforwork.Forexample,ifyouplayfootball,yourmusclesexerciseandbecamestrongerandstronger.Ifyouplaychess,yourbrainmovesquickly.That’sgoodforthedevelopmentofyourintelligence. Ontheotherhand,sportshaveafewilleffects.Itmaymakeyoufeeltiredifyouexercisetoomuch.Andoldpeoplemaybehurtbyimpropersports.Furthermoresportsmayevenleadtosuddendeath. Iprefertoplayfootball.I’mamemberofcollegeteam.WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafterit,Ifeelrelaxed.That’stosay:it’sgoodformyhealth.【样卷5】得分：14分 Sportsbenefitusinmanyrespects.Whentakingpartinsports,wegetthechancetotrainalmostallpartsofourbodies.Thereisnodoubtthatpropersportsactivitieskeepourphysicalfitness.Furthermore,sportscanenrichourlifeandmaintainourpsychologicalhealth.Throughparticipation,everyonecanlearnthatontheplaygroundhenotonlystrugglesforhimselfbutalsofightsforhisteam.Sportsteachusaboutconsideration,cooperationandoptimismtofailure. Butsportscandosomeharmtothosepeoplewhocannotplantheiractivitiesproperly.Toohardtrainingmyhurttheirbodies,exhausttheirvigor,andevencausethemtobesick. Ingeneral,Ilovesports.Ienjoysports.IfeelthatInotonlygainawell-balancedlifethroughgoinginforsports,butalsogetmorechancestomoveclosertonature.SportsaddhappinesstomyeverydaylifewhenIperforminadecentway.解释说明型模板首段（描述现象）模板1①Nowadays,withthereformof（现象的背景）,（描述现象）.②Thisphenomenonhasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.模板2believethatthesituationwillbeimprovedinthenearfuture.问题解决型2000年1月大学英语四级作文题目及范文题目：HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation1.上大学的费用（tuitionandfees）可以通过多种渠道解决2.那种渠道适合于我（说明理由）[范文]Nowadays,tuitionandfeesforcollegeeducationaremuchhigherthaneverbefore.Howtofinancecollegeeducationhasbecomeamatterofconcernformanystudents.Differentpeoplehavedifferentwaystosolvethisproblem.Somegetallofthemoneyfromtheirparents.Someapplyforaloanespeciallysetupforcollegestudents.Someacquirethemoneycompletelybythemselves,doingafull-timejobinsummerorwinterholiday.Someotherstudentsmayasktheirparentsformostofitandearntherestintheirsparetimeincollege,bydoingapart-timejob.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ipreferthelastway.Havingacquiredmostofthetuitionandfeesfrommyparents,Ineedn’tworrytoomuchaboutthemoneyandcanconcentrateonmystudy;ontheotherhand,apart-timejobinmysparetimemakesmycampus-lifecolorful.Icanmakealotoffriends,improvemyabilitiesandlearnlotsofknowledge.So,Ichoosethiswaytocovermytuitionandfees.问题解决型模板首段（提出问题）

模板1①Nowadays,withtherapideconomicaldevelopmentandintensecompetition,peopleareattachingmoreandmoreimportanceto（提出问题）。②Soitisofgreatimportanceforusto（关注问题的要性）.③Ontheonehand,（问题后果一）.④Ontheotherhand,（问题的后果二）.⑤Asaresult,wemustsparenoeffortstotakesomemeasurestosolvethisproblem.模板2①Alongwiththeadvanceofthesocietymoreandmoreproblemsarebroughttoourattention,oneofwhichisthat（提出问题）。②Itisofgreatsignificancethat（解决问题很必要）.③Ontheonehand,（解决问题的必要性一）.④Ontheotherhand,（解决问题的必要性二）.⑤Accordingly,howtosolvetheproblembecomesthetoppriorityforus.中间段（解决问题的办法）模板1⑥Therearemanystepswhichcanbetakentoundothisproblem.⑦Firstofall,(途径一).⑧Inaddition,anotherwaycontributingtosuccessofthesolvingproblemis(途径二).模板2⑥Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisseriousproblem,butthefollowingonesmaybethemosteffective.⑦Firstofall,.⑧Anotherwaytosolvetheproblemis.⑨Finally,.⑩Thesearenotthebestandtheonlytwo/threemeasureswecantake,butitshouldbenotedthat______.本模版中第6句为主题句，第7、8和9句提供3个途径，第10句为结论。结尾段（总结+个人选择+前景展望） ⑾Infact,morethanthreewayscanbeadoptedtosolvetheproblemof(具体问题),⑿Asforme,Iwouldprefertosolvetheprobleminthisway,thatistosay,（方法）.⒀Anyway,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitinguswhenallofusmakejointefforttosolvethisproblem.观点对比型模板1、倾向型分析其中一种观点People’sopi